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 Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 3:34 pm
Daypaw ♦ ♣ ♥ ♠
Rates for Daypaw?
I like to know what I can fix :3
♦ ♣ ♥ ♠ Well first off lets remove a few things. That cat on the bottom adds pink to the avatar. It is not needed. You can add white at the bottom in other ways. Also the cat on your head adds too much white to the head. A hair pink would add the right amount of white I believe. Also try the chess items from the cash shop a while back. They had a white equipment mode that I think you would love. Also that thing in your hand-I can't make out what item it is and you disable view items. Also there seems to be a grey item on the opposite side. Remove that stuff and you got yourself a very sexy avatar. Also invest in one of the chess items ;].
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 3:45 pm
Kiwi Popsicle Rate this tektek please? (Would it be alright to get a rate from both of you? hehe)  [It was better until I found out most of it didn't layer on gaia. . . arggg. gonk ] I well first of all I think this avatar has much potential. You do need to tweak a few things. I think you need to add black to the feet. I can't think of an item off hand but you have tektek ;]. Now the arms are screaming,"Put cardshark bands on me please!" Also if you could remove the angelic pendant. First of all it is glaring and doesn't match. If it shows gold on the bow then just find a different pink item for the neck ;]. Or just don't. The Gaia on the shirt should suffice. Next I would like you to add a touch of black around the waist. If you can.
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 3:48 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 3:52 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:05 pm
First off lose the wings. I dislike them for their bulkyness. Your greens don't really match all that well. and the shoes you have on are off from all the other golds. Like I feel like a jerk but I am not finding this avatar to match the way I like it. So it is clearly your taste and not mine. Please don't be mad at me-pouts-
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:06 pm
Defenestrate Windows Daypaw ♦ ♣ ♥ ♠
Rates for Daypaw?
I like to know what I can fix :3
♦ ♣ ♥ ♠ Well first off lets remove a few things. That cat on the bottom adds pink to the avatar. It is not needed. You can add white at the bottom in other ways. Also the cat on your head adds too much white to the head. A hair pink would add the right amount of white I believe. Also try the chess items from the cash shop a while back. They had a white equipment mode that I think you would love. Also that thing in your hand-I can't make out what item it is and you disable view items. Also there seems to be a grey item on the opposite side. Remove that stuff and you got yourself a very sexy avatar. Also invest in one of the chess items ;]. I know Day has a soft spot for furries. I love that hair o>o its so pwetty
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:11 pm
Defenestrate Windows Kiwi Popsicle Rate this tektek please? (Would it be alright to get a rate from both of you? hehe) [It was better until I found out most of it didn't layer on gaia. . . arggg. gonk ] I well first of all I think this avatar has much potential. You do need to tweak a few things. I think you need to add black to the feet. I can't think of an item off hand but you have tektek ;]. Now the arms are screaming,"Put cardshark bands on me please!" Also if you could remove the angelic pendant. First of all it is glaring and doesn't match. If it shows gold on the bow then just find a different pink item for the neck ;]. Or just don't. The Gaia on the shirt should suffice. Next I would like you to add a touch of black around the waist. If you can. I <3 this avi Under the bow is a really dark sharp pink and its worse than the pendant so I say keep the pendant or loose both cardshark bands and a tad of black on the feet like defe said wouldn't hurt :]
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:13 pm
Defenestrate Windows First off lose the wings. I dislike them for their bulkyness. Your greens don't really match all that well. and the shoes you have on are off from all the other golds. Like I feel like a jerk but I am not finding this avatar to match the way I like it. So it is clearly your taste and not mine. Please don't be mad at me-pouts- I'll have to dissagree with you here defe This is one of my favorite avi's and the shoes match the Egyptian bands fine
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:27 pm
Well this doesn't really match very well. You need some of that orangey gold on your head and the feet. Also that hair matches nothing. The white is distributed okly. Just balance and more of some colors is needed.
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:29 pm
Defenestrate Windows Well this doesn't really match very well. You need some of that orangey gold on your head and the feet. Also that hair matches nothing. The white is distributed okly. Just balance and more of some colors is needed. It's cute though. I like the tiny hint of redish orange.
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 5:10 pm
k.k.razy Defenestrate Windows First off lose the wings. I dislike them for their bulkyness. Your greens don't really match all that well. and the shoes you have on are off from all the other golds. Like I feel like a jerk but I am not finding this avatar to match the way I like it. So it is clearly your taste and not mine. Please don't be mad at me-pouts- I'll have to dissagree with you here defe This is one of my favorite avi's and the shoes match the Egyptian bands fine
P.S. thanks Raz. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 5:52 pm
bibblesBunn k.k.razy Defenestrate Windows First off lose the wings. I dislike them for their bulkyness. Your greens don't really match all that well. and the shoes you have on are off from all the other golds. Like I feel like a jerk but I am not finding this avatar to match the way I like it. So it is clearly your taste and not mine. Please don't be mad at me-pouts- I'll have to dissagree with you here defe This is one of my favorite avi's and the shoes match the Egyptian bands fine
P.S. thanks Raz. 3nodding It does match your boob! I'm surprised defe didn't comment on the white on the sash cause theres no other white
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 8:48 pm
Rate my current avatar. ;3
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 1:06 pm
k.k.razy bibblesBunn k.k.razy Defenestrate Windows First off lose the wings. I dislike them for their bulkyness. Your greens don't really match all that well. and the shoes you have on are off from all the other golds. Like I feel like a jerk but I am not finding this avatar to match the way I like it. So it is clearly your taste and not mine. Please don't be mad at me-pouts- I'll have to dissagree with you here defe This is one of my favorite avi's and the shoes match the Egyptian bands fine
P.S. thanks Raz. 3nodding It does match your boob! I'm surprised defe didn't comment on the white on the sash cause theres no other white
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 3:18 pm
*Breathes deeply*
Rate me? :'3
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