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 Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 6:16 pm
Aqua Fall 12 Aqua Fall 12 Aqua Fall 12 Bloodline: Enjin Clan (Monkey's Bond)
Why do you want it: Because it's fairly unique and isn't over-powered
What will you do with it: Augment the abilities of my fighting style. Being a medical ninja, people wouldn't expect it.
What you know about it: I know that it was deprived from monkeys and junk.
RP Sample:
Cory quickly bounded through the trees, the steel plate with the mist insignia placed upon his hat.
"Wow!" he exclaimed, looking at the sky through the various rifts in in the trees. Suddenly, he stopped, hiding in the thick covering of leaves as he spied on a small caravan of shinobi from the cloud village.
"Time to have some fun!" he whispered to himself childishly. Jumping out of the trees, he landed on one of the shinobi's shoulders like a cat pouncing on it's prey. The shinobi toppled easily under Cory's weight and momentum, Cory slapping his face three times before lithely stealing a scroll from the victim's pocket. Another enemy shinobi tried to slash at Cory with a nodachi vertically, Cory jumping back with such speed that it looked like he just dissappeared. The nodachi came down on the shinobi Cory had knocked over previously, right on the stomach. His stomach bled, and Cory wanted to help gravely, but that was out of the question for the moment. His new assailant went in for another strike with the nodachi, Cory taking out a weapon of his own: A kodachi. He parried the strike, jumping back again while performing handsigns.
"Primal Scream!" he announced, chakra leaving his lungs to create a blast of sound which blew the shinobi backwards. Using the opprotunity, Cory fled the scene.((I got lazy)) Come on!!
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Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 6:24 pm
since you waited awhile cory ill let you off on the short pragraph so it's approved^_^
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Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 6:25 pm
little mintchan since you waited awhile cory ill let you off on the short pragraph so it's approved^_^ I was feeling lazy that day. But thanks. wink
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Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 6:35 pm
Bloodline: Enjin
Why do you want it: The monkey traits of the Enjin bloodline will work greatly with my Medical-nin RPC its enhancement in the field of Taijutsu will be very helpful.
What will you do with it: Its increase in speed will help my troublemaking Genin in his mischevious acts and in battle it will help him fight more efficiently against enemies considering he is a medical-nin having speed and agility would be beneficial.
What you know about it: This bloodline increases Speed Agility and Dexterity a tail and fangs (Monkey appearance) is grown and Genjutsu cannot be performed, The Enjin clan can be found in the Mist or Sound country.
RP Sample:
Tuanji ran swiftly through the thick bamboo woods unable to see two feet ahead thanks to the thick mist but still jumping and running through the forest nothing stopping him he jumped off of bamboo tree, cut through ones he could not dodge quickly enough and eventually made it to the clearing where the mist wasn’t as menacing and waited a few minutes before a figure appeared “Oh-hoho, Can we start our spar now?” Tuanji asked the figure in a chipper tone as the figure nodded Tuanji flashed his sharpened teeth then jumped into the air towards the figure soaring down at a rapid speed he attempted to punch the figure dead on, this feeble attempt was obviously blocked but the second part of his attack did not fail as Tuanji’s tail wrapped itself around the Fuma Shuriken on his back and hurled it at the figure cutting deeply into the figures leg the figure pushed Tuanji back “I thought we agreed no weapons” the figure spoke deeply as Tuanji laughed “Oh poor baby, Don’t worry I’ll heal it right now if you’d like, then we can continue” he smiled revealing his teeth once again as the spar came to an end.
((My RPC has already been created but i was wondering if editing him would be reasonable?))
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Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 11:44 am
Bloodline: Uchiha/Sharingan
Why do you want it: because I am a beast with it
What will you do with it: Make havoc across the guild MWUHAHAHA
What do you know about it: Well I much as a person who is reading the Manga Can.
RP Sample:
A Flame up and in it appeared Cody Uchiha. He was looking for the 1 tailed demon. He smiled as he walked up to a sand ninja. Before he asked him about the Demon he actived his Sharingan just to be safe. "Excuse me sir but do you happen to know where the one tailed Demon host is" he said. The ninja turned and seen he was an Akatsuki member and the ninja formed a few hand signs and placed a Genjutsu on Cody. Cody luckly was able to make eye contact with the ninja as he casted the genjutsu he turned it on the ninja. "Tell me were he is at" he said as the Ninja had just noticed he was in his own genjutsu. He could not move at all. "H-He is at the training grounds training with his Teacher.' he ninja said as he studder due to the fact that he was scared. Cody did not want anyone to find out the akatsuki was here to he grabbed a Kuani and cut his neck keeping him from talking.
Cody turned and walked away going to the Training grounds in Suna. He walked up to the One tailed demon host. "Why hello" he said as he still had his Sharingan actived. The Jounin teacher was not seen at first, but Cody could feel his chakra above him. He looked up and moved to the left and the jounin fell to the ground getting his head stuck in the sand. "This is a Jounin Pittaful" he said as he turned to the genin once more. "Ok then Ether you come quietly or I will have to knock you out." The genin then started to run. Cody luaghed as he disappeared and reappeared infrount of the genin. "It is no use running I am fast then you will ever be." he said with an Evil luagh. At the secound he pulled out a katana and Knocked the butt of the sword on the genins head. knocking him out. He then picked up the genin and took the katana and stabbed him in the neck to paralysis him from the neck down.
As he started to walk out of the sand village the Kazekage appeared. "Where are you going with him" he asked cody. Cody put the body down "Well I have paralysised him and Knocked him out what do you think" he said as he held his Katana in his hand with his sharingan still active. He kazekage then did some hand signs and said "Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique" the kazekage made 10 clones all of the clone and the real one charged Cody. He smiled as he held the katana tightly and swing it at the clone taking them out one by one after a few secound all the clones were gone and Cody was standing behind the Kazekage. "You are to slow" he said as he swung at the Kazekages Head. he then heard a Poof. He turned around to see a log not a dead body and the Kazekage came down from above him and landed a punch on his face.
Cody flew back into the wall. "Well I guess I should try fighting you." he said as he walked forward to his katana and grabbed his as he took off his Akaktsuki Cloak. Cody smiled as he formed hand signs and said "Great Fireball technique" he then shot a fire ball into the sky. "Ha you missed" The Kazekage said as he laugh. "Oh did I" he said as he held his hand up in the air."Kirin" He said as a natural lighting bolt came down and hit the kazekage becuase it was to fast no normal ninja could dodge it. "Well then off to the Base" he said as he grabbed the body and walked off to the Akatsuki base.
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Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 11:52 am
Hmm well I didn't really see too much about the Sharingan, other than the reversal of a genjutsu...use the Sharingan more and I'll check again.
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 2:12 pm
Remade RP Sample:
A Flame up and in it appeared Cody Uchiha. He was looking for the 1 tailed demon. He smiled as he walked up to a sand ninja. Before he asked him about the Demon he actived his Sharingan just to be safe. "Excuse me sir but do you happen to know where the one tailed Demon host is" he said. The ninja turned and seen he was an Akatsuki member and the ninja formed a few hand signs and placed a Genjutsu on Cody. Cody luckly was able to make eye contact with the ninja as he casted the genjutsu he turned it on the ninja. "Tell me were he is at" he said as the Ninja had just noticed he was in his own genjutsu. He could not move at all. "H-He is at the training grounds training with his Teacher.' he ninja said as he studder due to the fact that he was scared. Cody did not want anyone to find out the akatsuki was here to he grabbed a Kuani and cut his neck keeping him from talking.
Cody turned and walked away going to the Training grounds in Suna. He walked up to the One tailed demon host. "Why hello" he said as he still had his Sharingan actived. The Jounin teacher was not seen at first, but Cody could feel his chakra above him. He looked up and moved to the left and the jounin fell to the ground getting his head stuck in the sand. "This is a Jounin Pittaful" he said as he turned to the genin once more. "Ok then Ether you come quietly or I will have to knock you out." The genin then started to run. Cody luaghed as he disappeared and reappeared infrount of the genin. "It is no use running I am fast then you will ever be." he said with an Evil luagh. At the secound he pulled out a katana and Knocked the butt of the sword on the genins head. knocking him out. He then picked up the genin and took the katana and stabbed him in the neck to paralysis him from the neck down.
As he started to walk out of the sand village the Kazekage appeared. "Where are you going with him" he asked cody. Cody put the body down "Well I have paralysised him and Knocked him out what do you think" he said as he held his Katana in his hand with his sharingan still active. He kazekage then did some hand signs and said "Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique" the kazekage made 10 clones all of the clone and the real one charged Cody. He smiled as he held the katana tightly and swing it at the clone taking them out one by one after a few secound all the clones were gone and Cody was standing behind the Kazekage. "You are to slow" he said as he swung at the Kazekages Head. he then heard a Poof. He turned around to see a log not a dead body and the Kazekage came down from above him and landed a punch on his face.
Cody flew back into the wall. "Well I guess I should try fighting you." he said as he walked forward to his katana and grabbed his as he took off his Akaktsuki Cloak. Cody smiled as he formed hand signs and said "Great Fireball technique" he then shot a fire ball into the sky. "Ha you missed" The Kazekage said as he laugh. "Oh did I" he said as he held his hand up in the air."Kirin" He said as a natural lighting bolt came down and hit the kazekage becuase it was to fast no normal ninja could dodge it. "Well then off to the Base" he said as he grabbed the body and walked off to the Akatsuki base deactiviting his sharingan.
As Cody came to the gate he seen a ninja standing there waitting for him. "Well well they do have one more person waitting for me." he said as he smiled and put the body done once more. The ninja said nothing as he pulled out a Kuani and threw it at Cody. He seen the kuani coming and qucikly moved to the left a bit but it still cut him. The kunai had charka infused in it. He smiled as he closed his eyes and reopened them to have actived his sharingan. Useing the sharingan he locked eyes with the ninja and smiled as he said nothing and happened to cast a genjutsu on the person. He was using the nomral Uchiha genjutsu allowing the Clan member to make the illusion what ever he wanted. Since they ninja still thought it was real he attacked with a Rasegan. As Cody just stood there the ninja charged. The ninja thought he had landed a hit on Cody but it turns out he missed and Cody pu a Chidori thought his arm making it fall off.
Cody got ready to kill him when he ninja started forming hand signs with the one hand he had left. He turned out to be a Mist ninja one of the Hyouton Clan. He made the Demnoic Ice Mirriors to trap Cody but with his Sharingan active he could see where he was going come come from. The ninja was jumping from Mirrior to Mirrior. Cody formed a hand sign and the Mirrior they ninja was about to go into burst into Black flames. Cody smiled as all the mirriors slowly were ingulfed in the black flames. He ninja was forced to stop the jutsu due to he could not move or he would be burned. Cody smiled as he made a few hand signs "Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique" he made 5 clone. All the clone started running around the ninja in a circle as fast as they could. The real Cody would step out of the circle and be standing behind the ninja as the clones were running around him and the ninja was busy trying to kill them Cody with the last bit of chakra he could use released the black fire on the ninja. The ninja sreamed in pain as he was burned alive by the black flames. Cody grabbed the Demon host's body and walked to the back.
Better I added like 2 or 3 paragraphs. >.>
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Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 2:47 pm
Well its not about length, rather about how you use the Sharingan. Like how you see the chakra, how you can distinguish between clones, how you can see fast movements such as hand signs and what not
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 2:49 pm
i_Eats_Spammers Bloodline: Enjin Why do you want it: The monkey traits of the Enjin bloodline will work greatly with my Medical-nin RPC its enhancement in the field of Taijutsu will be very helpful. What will you do with it: Its increase in speed will help my troublemaking Genin in his mischevious acts and in battle it will help him fight more efficiently against enemies considering he is a medical-nin having speed and agility would be beneficial. What you know about it: This bloodline increases Speed Agility and Dexterity a tail and fangs (Monkey appearance) is grown and Genjutsu cannot be performed, The Enjin clan can be found in the Mist or Sound country. RP Sample: Tuanji ran swiftly through the thick bamboo woods unable to see two feet ahead thanks to the thick mist but still jumping and running through the forest nothing stopping him he jumped off of bamboo tree, cut through ones he could not dodge quickly enough and eventually made it to the clearing where the mist wasn’t as menacing and waited a few minutes before a figure appeared “Oh-hoho, Can we start our spar now?” Tuanji asked the figure in a chipper tone as the figure nodded Tuanji flashed his sharpened teeth then jumped into the air towards the figure soaring down at a rapid speed he attempted to punch the figure dead on, this feeble attempt was obviously blocked but the second part of his attack did not fail as Tuanji’s tail wrapped itself around the Fuma Shuriken on his back and hurled it at the figure cutting deeply into the figures leg the figure pushed Tuanji back “I thought we agreed no weapons” the figure spoke deeply as Tuanji laughed “Oh poor baby, Don’t worry I’ll heal it right now if you’d like, then we can continue” he smiled revealing his teeth once again as the spar came to an end. ((My RPC has already been created but i was wondering if editing him would be reasonable?)) It would be reasonable. It's the Enjin CLAN. But the bloodline is Monkey's Bond.
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Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 8:52 pm
Bloodline: Rinnegan
Why do you want it: Plainly because its my favorite of all the bloodline I've seen in Naruto, second would be Hyouton.
What will you do with it: It will help me accomplish whatever purpose I'm given, good or bad.
What you know about it: Just that it can allow someone who isn't trained beat a stronger foe if the user is enraged. It also allows to use a jutsu that can revive everyone the user killed in exchange for his/her own life. Beside that, whats written on the Kekkai Genkai thread.
RP Sample:
Rita rubbed her forehead in frustration. Why? Because of how long this mission was taking. She had been hired to kidnap a "princess" for some greedy noble who had been rejected by the very same person. Sounded easy, until she found out how protective the villagers was of this princess. It wasn't hard ridding herself of these pests as she watched some get blown by her Asura Realm body, or Asura Rita for short, missiles. She even had her Animal and The Hell Realm, or Animal Rita and Hell Rita, brought here to deal with the insects as well, Animal Rita's summon having a bloody feast while Hell Rita was taking away the villagers' souls from their bodies. What was taking so long was that the princess was hiding and not even the villagers knew where. She already had her Human Realm, or Human Rita, read some of the villagers' mind to see if they knew. So far it had been a waste of time. Deva Rita had been scouting around the village while the three Ritas that were fighting kept the villagers busy. Some did spot her and attacked, but Deva Rita had repelled their attempts, either knocking them by slamming them into the houses hard, or killing them by sending any thrown weapons back at them. Rita walked back and forth in her hiding spot, watching the events happening where each of her bodies was. Thats when she saw the princess through Hell Rita's eyes. Seemed that the princess couldn't stand watching her people die for her. She walked up to Hell Rita, tears seemed to be falling from her eyes as she surrendered herself in exchange for the rest of the villager that survived to be left alone. Rita agreed and had Hell Rita lead her to where the disgusting noble was hiding and waiting. The other Ritas left the village as well, Human and Animal Rita returning to her while Deva and Asura accompany Hell to deliver the princess and get their payment. Having been paid, they returned to her and seemed to have went to sleep, as well as the others. Rita sighed as she began doing handsigns and rain started to downpour in the large area she was, to help detect any intruders. She sighed as she took the money to make sure she was paid the exact amount and with real money.
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Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 10:04 pm
Bloodline:
Motarasu Hana
Why do you want it:
-points to jade- cause ill be the first member in it and able to help heal akatsuki members
What will you do with it:
i have no clue....yet
What you know about it:
it's a medical clan strong agaisnt genjustu and able to fall in love easily and make other fall in love easily
RP Sample:
Kai sat outside of the base of Akatsuki, She was on guard duty for the leader while they rested themselves from getting the shukaku the one tailed demon. Kai was the akatsuki's 'healer' or 'medic' to tend to them after each demon especially the male one called Sai. She closed her eyes for a sec only to feel a shuriken pass nearly centimters from her cheek. Kai got up and looked around seeing who did that only to be hit with the water jet justu from her oppenents mouth as she slid back her arms in a defense stance[crossed]. "ew......" she said. Kai hand signaled for a justu of her clan, The Motarasu Hana clan. "Ibarauchimasu no Jutsu {Thorn Whip Jutsu}!" she said as a sorta 'whip' of thorns appeared, sharp, and chakura infused. She ran at the oppenent with the whip behind her. When kai got close anough she pulled the whip forward as it wrapped around the oppenents ankel cutting it or puncturing it with the thorns on the whip. The oppenent did a scream at the pain and cut the thorn whip. he jumped back the man was from sand as his hood fell back the headband was shown easily on his head. She blushed at him finally realizing she is fighting quite a cute boy. short black hair, and blue eyes a little side affect from her clan to fall in love so easily. She made the thorn whip disappear. The guy closed his crystal blue eyes and opened them to show the sharigun trying to put her in a genjustu of some sort. She hand signaled "Zenkai Hana!(cure flower)" a flower bloomed infront of her as she was put intot he genjustu and the guy's realm. the flower released a kinda perfume into the air snapping her outa of it quickly. the flower went away. Ibarauchimasu no Jutsu {Thorn Whip Jutsu} - The user creates a whip covered in thorns. It can be used to ensnare objects as well. The vines and thorns are coated with chakra, making them extremely durable and sharp Rank - C Zenkai Hana {Cure Flower} - This is mainly used for Genjutsu, but is also the cure for the Flower Charmer technique. A certain flower will release a pheromone, snapping the user/victim out of the trance they were placed in. Rank - C
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Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 7:19 pm
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 7:20 pm
i have trouble finishing stuff sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 7:28 pm
Well, then, denied? Try incorporating the genjutsu blocker thing, or more of the jutsu, and the attraction to the opposite sex
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 7:29 pm
fine.. heart genjustu blocker?.....
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