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 Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 1:37 pm
Shruikan Tenshi Sakoyoshi Daianohara Shruikan Tenshi Aqua Fall 12 Your large words make me feel special... check jutsu customs....^^ I have officially been ignored...... no, did you get the style approved? Actually I talked to Cory already. He said that everything was already approved.
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Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 3:29 pm
Shruikan Tenshi Bloodthirsty, Inhumane, Vampire! Banpaia
HistoryThe Banpaia clan, like its opposing clan Hitokui, has been around since the dawn of life. It all began with a war for other lands, when a lone soldier was on the battlefields and was a dying breed. He became vengeful and made a deal with his very soul. On the bloody battlefield, on the verge of death, he drank the blood of his own brethern and brother in arms, transforming him into a inhuman creature. The existance of this being became known, and were feared but used at the same time, much opposite of the Hitokui clan. The members of the clan strive for the blood of their victims, which by doing so it gives them the victim's memories, and power. The blood they drain gives them their youth, strength and healthy. The Banpaia clan and the Hitokui Clan are similar, yet are rivals. Yet occasionally love is found between many clan members for they are alike in many ways. A war waged between the two once, but ended when it was found the royal families' son and the other's daughter had fallen in love. Rules• You cannot drink the blood of some random npc, it must be another rpc. • Any abilities in each stage are kept and sometimes powered up as the user progresses through the stages • The clan members are naturally very beautiful or handsome, has an alluring sense about them that can attract the opposite gender with ease Weakness• Beginners find it difficult to keep their bloodlust in check • Stage one (beginners) first taste of blood run the biggest risk of going into a frienzy Stage One: The Newborn DescriptionThe first stepstone of Banpaia. The user tastes his or her's first drop of blood. They have fangs and their eyes are the color of red. Their physical strength is stronger then the average human, but its difficult to stop feeding once started. Often, the results is a frenzy. Rules• Sense of smell, sight, hearing, taste and touch are increased slightly. • Strength and speed is higher then normal slightly • To obtain, one must taste blood. Being new to it they are getting use to their own being. Sometimes one will be in denail • Can survive normally fatal blows, though only one time (unless head decapatation) • No special technique is avalible Stage Two: Midevil DescriptionIn this stage the user has accepted who and what they are, used to the taste of blood flowing down their throats. They usually carry blood packets with them in case if they get hungry, but they are now better able to control their blood thirst, and can go a bit longer without blood then the previous stage. They now can learn things from drinking the blood of thier victims, such as memories or even jutsu. Rules • Must have tasted the blood of five different rpcs to achieve this stage • Strength and Speed increases by a rank • Can jump higher then the average shinobi • Five sense increases more • If gone a long time without blood, user will break into a frenzy of blood thirst, endangering allies and enemies alike • Can now regenerate quicker then the average shinobi • Can now drain chakra from opponents similar to how they drain blood • Drinking the blood of one will allow the user to learn one of their techniques that is the same element as themselves. (can be done only once per day) //Techniques Avalible// Jutsu Name: Saku Tetsu Sukin (Sharpened Iron Skin) Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: None DescriptionThis technique allows the user's skin density to increase to where its as hard as steel increasing the defense, but also sharper, meaing if one was to chop at a person, their hand would cut through them like a sword would. This can be released anytime, but cannot be held longer then three posts. Jutsu Name: Koumori Bunshin (Bat Clone) Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: None DescriptionBanpaia clan is also refered to as the Vampire Clan. The user can create clones out of bats, which act very much like an elemental clone. When defeated with a strong single hit, the clone bursts into a flurry of bats. Jutsu Name: Ijin Tsume (Devil's Arm) Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: None DescriptionThe user can manipulate thier arm(s) into a shadowy claw, which that arm's strength increases twice of that the user's original strength. The claw can tear through steels easily and shatter bones and boulders alike Jutsu Name: Kyuuketsuki's Houkou (Vampire's Roar) Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: none DescriptionThe user channels chakra into their throats and then bellows out, releasing a powerful shockwave that is created from the vocal cords. The shockwave is strong enough to knock back any oncoming projectiles and weak ninjutsu (C or lower). Anyone caught in the way would be knocked back 10ft. Stage Three: Dark Awakening DescriptionThe final stage, when one has tasted so much blood that they have literally become a monster in their own way. Their eyes become an amber color which has a faint glow when against the dark. They are able to shape shift and move an alarming speed. These are where people have created the name, Vampire. The ones who are attacked by these people and drained of blood will allow the clan members to gain their memories and information. Rules• Strength and Speed increases dramatically (another rank) • Must have tasted the blood of 10 individuals • Can regenerate faster and survive fatal blows easier • Can go longer then normal without blood, but becomes more aggressive then normal. If gone too long without it, can result in a massacre • Are capable of shape shifting and hold the form but only up to 15 posts. The form is recognizable if in a animal like form, for the body is black spectral like and has red glowing eyes • Are able to make a complete regeneration of the body if lost, but only once per fight //Techniques Avaliable// Jutsu Name: Mesmeric Me (Mesmerizing Eye) Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: None DescriptionThe user has to make eye contact in order for this to work. The user's eye begins glowing and those who look in them become mesmerized, like a frog staring into the eyes of the snake. They then become compelled to obey the user's commands and will not resist anything the user does to them. However, the health of the victim determines if they can break the 'spell'. The healthier they are, the harder it is to control them, the weaker the easier. Jutsu Name: Ude o Makai (Arms of Hell) Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: None DescriptionThe user manipulates his or her chakra and it turns blackish red. Then the user can create multiple arms from his or her body to extend and tear the target to pieces. They can even extend his or her own arm and cover it in this chakra, protecting it and making it a lethal weapon. The length it can go is at max 10ft Jutsu Name: Summoning: Koumori Yori Makai (Summoning: Bats from Hell) Rank: A Type: Summoning Element: none Description The user draws their own blood and draws a circle on the ground. They then make a sign and this summons a large amount of bats from hell. The bats look similar to that of vampire bats and have razor sharp teeth. They will attempt to attack and drain the target of both blood and chakra.
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Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 3:35 pm
like branching off? that can work ^^
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 10:51 am
 Shinigami's bond-- The Deal with Death
HistoryThis Bloodline has no particular clan, instead, it is a forbidden contract with the god of death himself. In the latest great shinobi war, the leaf village had no Jinchuriki, and so, to make up for a lack of Jinchuriki, the village elder Danzo made a contract with the ghastly god: Give a child the powers of a Shinigami, and take the soul of its mother. And so, the contract was signed, and mothers were chosen. Unable to become a shinobi, the daughter of Sandaime Sarutobi, the greiving wife of Hyuga Hizashi, and several other women volunteered to aid their village. Danzo did not tell them of the horrid double-edge that this contract had. And after each child was born, the souls of the mothers were taken. Sandaime Sarutobi had figured out too late; his daughter had died. Danzo was removed from his esteemed position as Village Elder, but had achieved what he wanted: children posessing the abilities of a shinigami. However, still fuming over this outrage, Sandaime Sarutobi had the children taken far from the village, and placed in families that would care for them. However, each child was wracked by terrible nightmares, and fearsome daydreams. Their emotions were dreadful, and their will to live: small. Depression claimed all but five children, and these are the unlucky children of the shinigami. Rules ~ There can only be five members ~ The members must have a clan name hailing from Konoha ~ The members are insomniactic, due to their nightmares ~ The members are either rogues or mercenaries, to join a village, you must request the Kage ~ A member can only die if they are killed by another member, or after their shinigami soul has been removed (by the technique Infuuin Shikifuujin: Reaper Death Sealing) Weakness ~ Attention/ reflexes are dimmed due to insomnia ~ Suffer from Daydreams that seem like frightening hallucenations ~ Inability to feel attachment other than a family connection (only brother, sister, mother, father, and pet.) Stage one: The Victims Description First Stage of The Deal with Death, members have silvery hair and pale green, bright yellow, or blood red eyes. Rules ~ unable to learn genjutsu, yet are immune to kekkei genkai genjutsu (ex. Kurama clan, tsukiyomi, sharingan) ~ unable to use food pills or performance enhancers, but immune to all poisons (neurotoxins only work if the distrubutor wants to capture a member) ~ the user carries a seppuku knife with them everywhere they go, it is large, however, and is about the size of an anbu's sword, it can cut the chakra network and muscle/ nerve connectors without piercing flesh Techniques Pre-Immortality Rank: A Type: forbidden element: none Descriprtion: the user finds the potential to only be killed if their soul is taken out and body destroyed, or to be killed by the technique of another member. Despite the rank, it is the first jutsu to be learned, and it is always active. Hari Kiri Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: none Description: This technique is the very same as Hidan's technique, and incidentally, Hidan was a member of this pact. The user must first ingest the blood of the victim, and draw a diagram of a triangle enclosed in a circle made from their own blood, and once all preperations are complete, the user can inflict pain on his/ herself, and the victim will feel it as well. A fatal blow can be achieved, and the user can still be alive. The user must have unlocked the ability of pre-immortality before, or they will DIE. Instant Hari Kiri Rank: C Type: weapon/ taijutsu Element: none Description: The user takes their Seppuku Knife and strikes at the foe. If the technique deals a flesh wound, than the user can stab him/ herself with the blade, and deals a fatal blow that would kill them, except for this: the victim dies in their place. Note: this technique can only be used with the Seppuku knife, if the member uses a different knife, they will stab themself, and only look like idiots.
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 6:54 pm
Anaboko Clan History
The Anaboko Clan, who's crest is a midnight-blue flame, originated from an unknown village by the name of Kanshagakure (Village Hidden in the Sugar-Canes). The members of this clan were bred to become mindless, killing machines that would stop at nothing to achieve anything their Kage desired. Then, when the Shinobi Wars started, the Anaboko were used to gain the upper-hand. Kanshagakure won, but at the cost of all Anabokos present within their walls.
Rules/Abilities
- Only members of this clan can learn the special taijutsu
- Members of this clan MUST be Weapon Class
- Members of this clan can learn all of the techniques in the Anaboko's Taijutsu, regardless of limits
- There are different branches for each weapon, and each branch must be created by the first one to use the weapon of the Anaboko.~Normal Branch~(These can be learned by anyone)
Name: Anaboko Shuriken Surooingu Gi (Hollow Shuriken Throwing Skill)
Range: As far as any shuriken
Rank: D
Orientation: Offensive/Supplementary
Function: Augmenting the abilities of throwing shuriken
Description: Using a special throwing technique used by the Anaboko Clan, the user will twist their wrist as they are throwing in such a way that the shuriken will curve. This is useful if you need to flush opponents out from behind a wall, or attack moving targets. The angle limit at which it curves can go up to 90 degrees.~Sword Branch~Stage I
Name: Ukeru-Furiiku (Parry-Flick)
Range: N/A
Rank: D
Orientation: Defensive
Function: Defending
Description: While the opponent is attacking, the user of this technique will raise their sword to block the attack with the flat of the blade. After making contact with the blade, the user will move the sword and redirect the limb or weapon of the attacker, which should leave enough time for an opening attack.
Name: Anaboko Higi: Ichi (Hollow Secret Technique: One)
Range: Melee (Weapon)
Rank: D
Orientation: Offensive
Function: Harm
Description: By using their already swordsman-toned muscles, the user will stab with their sword twice in rapid succession. The speed is great for a genin-level technique, but the power is still lacking for it to be considered a higher level.
Stage II
The user has no began to aptly use their sword in battle, becoming a formidable opponent. They can quickly utilize techniques from before, and have no moved onto different techniques.
Name: Feinto Dageki (Feint Strike)
Range: Melee (Weapon)
Rank: C
Orientation: Offensive
Function: Harm
Description: The user will lunge forward suddenly, while the target begins to block, the user will instantly recoil their arm and strike from a different angle.
Name: Chimei Bakken (Fatal Draw)
Range: Melee (Weapon)
Rank: B
Orientation: Offensive/Defensive
Function: Countering[?]
Description: A move inspired by the Twilight Princess edition of the Legend of Zelda franchise, the user will have their sword inside of it's scabbard before the attack actually takes place. When the opponent is in range, the user will twist around, taking their sword out of their scabbard to slash at the opponent. This attack surprises the enemy, and is very quick, making it very fatal.
Name: Anaboko Higi: Ni (Hollow Secret Technique: Two)
Range: Melee (Weapon)
Rank: B
Orientation: Offensive
Function: Harm
Description: A strengthened version of the original Anaboko Higi, the user will stab at the opponent four times in rapid succession. It's odd however, seeing as how it takes the exact same time to do this technique as the original Anaboko Higi.
Stage III
Name: Anaake Gi (Drilling Technique)
Range: Melee (Weapon)
Rank: B
Orientation: Offensive
Function: Harm
Description: The user focuses chakra into their hand, making the skin almost frictionless as they spin their sword while grasping it. The out-come is a crude drill, and can cause quite a bit of damage. This technique can break through walls and barriers B-ranked and below, as well at pierce armor, break weapons, and the like.
Name: Han'i Bureedo Giryou (Range Blade Skill)
Range: Melee (Weapon)
Rank: A
Orientation: Offensive/Supplementary
Function: Harm
Description: By this stage, the user has become so adept at swordplay that they can actually judge the distant to targets extremely well. This helps when throwing projectiles, and during melee matches. Since the judgement is so acute, the user is able to attack with the very tip of the blade accurately, and expose themselves to minimal danger.
Name: Anaboko Higi: San (Hollow Secret Technique: Three)
Range: Melee (Weapon)
Rank: S
Orientation: Offensive
Function: Harm
Description: An improvement upon perfection, the user of the sword branch has reached such a caliber that they are able to perfectly execute the clan's sword-branch signature attack: Anaboko Higi. By focusing a small amount of chakra into their elbows, the user is able to stab at the opponent quickly eight times in rapid succession. This is a very hard move to block, and is usually instead evaded. But because of the small toll it places on the user's body, the technique cannot be used more than thrice.
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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 8:21 pm
Aqua Fall 12 Anaboko ClanHistory
The Anaboko Clan, who's crest is a midnight-blue flame, originated from an unknown village by the name of Kanshagakure (Village Hidden in the Sugar-Canes). The members of this clan were bred to become mindless, killing machines that would stop at nothing to achieve anything their Kage desired. Then, when the Shinobi Wars started, the Anaboko were used to gain the upper-hand. Kanshagakure won, but at the cost of all Anabokos present within their walls.
Rules/Abilities
- Only members of this clan can learn the special taijutsu
- Members of this clan MUST be Weapon Class
- Members of this clan can learn all of the techniques in the Anaboko's Taijutsu, regardless of limits
- There are different branches for each weapon, and each branch must be created by the first one to use the weapon of the Anaboko.~Normal Branch~(These can be learned by anyone)
Name: Anaboko Shuriken Surooingu Gi (Hollow Shuriken Throwing Skill)
Range: As far as any shuriken
Rank: D
Orientation: Offensive/Supplementary
Function: Augmenting the abilities of throwing shuriken
Description: Using a special throwing technique used by the Anaboko Clan, the user will twist their wrist as they are throwing in such a way that the shuriken will curve. This is useful if you need to flush opponents out from behind a wall, or attack moving targets. The angle limit at which it curves can go up to 90 degrees.~Sword Branch~Stage I
Name: Ukeru-Furiiku (Parry-Flick)
Range: N/A
Rank: D
Orientation: Defensive
Function: Defending
Description: While the opponent is attacking, the user of this technique will raise their sword to block the attack with the flat of the blade. After making contact with the blade, the user will move the sword and redirect the limb or weapon of the attacker, which should leave enough time for an opening attack.
Name: Anaboko Higi: Ichi (Hollow Secret Technique: One)
Range: Melee (Weapon)
Rank: D
Orientation: Offensive
Function: Harm
Description: By using their already swordsman-toned muscles, the user will stab with their sword twice in rapid succession. The speed is great for a genin-level technique, but the power is still lacking for it to be considered a higher level.
Stage II
The user has no began to aptly use their sword in battle, becoming a formidable opponent. They can quickly utilize techniques from before, and have no moved onto different techniques.
Name: Feinto Dageki (Feint Strike)
Range: Melee (Weapon)
Rank: C
Orientation: Offensive
Function: Harm
Description: The user will lunge forward suddenly, while the target begins to block, the user will instantly recoil their arm and strike from a different angle.
Name: Chimei Bakken (Fatal Draw)
Range: Melee (Weapon)
Rank: B
Orientation: Offensive/Defensive
Function: Countering[?]
Description: A move inspired by the Twilight Princess edition of the Legend of Zelda franchise, the user will have their sword inside of it's scabbard before the attack actually takes place. When the opponent is in range, the user will twist around, taking their sword out of their scabbard to slash at the opponent. This attack surprises the enemy, and is very quick, making it very fatal.
Name: Anaboko Higi: Ni (Hollow Secret Technique: Two)
Range: Melee (Weapon)
Rank: B
Orientation: Offensive
Function: Harm
Description: A strengthened version of the original Anaboko Higi, the user will stab at the opponent four times in rapid succession. It's odd however, seeing as how it takes the exact same time to do this technique as the original Anaboko Higi.
Stage III
Name: Anaake Gi (Drilling Technique)
Range: Melee (Weapon)
Rank: B
Orientation: Offensive
Function: Harm
Description: The user focuses chakra into their hand, making the skin almost frictionless as they spin their sword while grasping it. The out-come is a crude drill, and can cause quite a bit of damage. This technique can break through walls and barriers B-ranked and below, as well at pierce armor, break weapons, and the like.
Name: Han'i Bureedo Giryou (Range Blade Skill)
Range: Melee (Weapon)
Rank: A
Orientation: Offensive/Supplementary
Function: Harm
Description: By this stage, the user has become so adept at swordplay that they can actually judge the distant to targets extremely well. This helps when throwing projectiles, and during melee matches. Since the judgement is so acute, the user is able to attack with the very tip of the blade accurately, and expose themselves to minimal danger.
Name: Anaboko Higi: San (Hollow Secret Technique: Three)
Range: Melee (Weapon)
Rank: S
Orientation: Offensive
Function: Harm
Description: An improvement upon perfection, the user of the sword branch has reached such a caliber that they are able to perfectly execute the clan's sword-branch signature attack: Anaboko Higi. By focusing a small amount of chakra into their elbows, the user is able to stab at the opponent quickly eight times in rapid succession. This is a very hard move to block, and is usually instead evaded. But because of the small toll it places on the user's body, the technique cannot be used more than thrice.
It's finally done. It's not my best peice of work, but I thought that the weapon-class was severely limited. Now, I can sleep peacefully tonight.
NOTE: The Anaboko Clan is always growing, as there is a different style for each weapon conceivable, and are created by other members. Members are able to learn all of the styles, but only if they train with the weapon to learn them.
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Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 8:05 pm
Why are there two posts?
...Im not sure which one I should be approving left or right.
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Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 9:00 pm
Cobra_X Why are there two posts?
...Im not sure which one I should be approving left or right. Either one you want. *Pick me!* *No! Me!*
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 3:25 pm
Crystal Release
Beautiful, Crystal, Destructive
History:
In a long dead town there were people that mined crystal out of caves to make a living. The Crystal Release was created by a clan of shinobi that specialized in Doton Elemental Jutsu. They learned to manipulate the earth and crystals that were in the caves and began to learn they're structure so that they could create crystal particles from the earth, chakra, and moisture in the air. When another village learned of their crystal mines they sent a group of shinobi to take over the mines, but they were defeated easily by the Crystal Shinobi. When the leader of their village learned of this, he sent a much larger force to kill everyone in the village. When they attacked the village many people died, including those of the Crystal Release users and the village was burned to the ground. Only a small group of people in the village managed to escape and spread to the corners of every nation. Only a small handful of Crystal users escaped and each of them went their separate ways to find a place to live. Many settled in small woodland areas and shorelines and a small few hid in the other villages such as Leaf and Sand.
Abilities: The Crystal Release is a specialized field of Ninjutsu that can create crystal as well as manipulate already-existing crystals and crystalline structures.
Rules For Kekkei Genkai/Clan:
- Doton must be your main element
- Ninjutsu class only
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Weakness:
- Cannot crystallize either raw energy or chakra as they have no physical mass to crystallize. (Wind, Fire, Lightning)
- Susceptible to high frequency sound waves
- Weak against Raiton elemental jutsu
Strengths:
- Earth, Water, and Wood Release techniques are practically useless against it.
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Stage One
At stage one the user is able to manipulate crystal to a degree but is not able to perform the more complex jutsu. At the moment they cannot crystalize wood or water and are only capable of creating crystals from the earth.
Jutsu List
Jutsu Name: Shōton: Suishō Kyō (Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Mirror)
Rank: E
Elemental Ethnicity: Crystal
Description: The user forms a large mirror in the shape of a snowflake, which they can then use to perform the Jade Crystal Clone Jutsu.
Jutsu Name: Shōton: Suishō Bunshin no Jutsu (Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Clone Technique)
Rank: E
Elemental Ethnicity: Crystal
Description: After the user performs the Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Mirror jutsu, they can make multiple clones of them self emerge from the mirror. These clones are made of crystal, and crumble into many crystals after they are destroyed. Clones made by this jutsu are also able to deceive Byakugan users.
Jutsu Name: Shōton: Suishō Tō (Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Blade)
Rank: D
Elemental Ethnicity: Crystal
Description: The user can quickly form a blade made of crystal on their arm, and use it almost similar to how a ninja would use a Tanto. Blades can be formed on both arms if needed.
Jutsu Name: Kesshō no Yoroi (Crystal Armor)
Rank: D
Elemental Ethnicity: Crystal
Description: This jutsu allows the user to become encased in a thin sheet of crystal to protect her from blunt force trauma. This armor can also aid the user in performing stronger physical attacks. The crystal is transparent and can only be noticed by light reflecting off it.
Jutsu Name: Suishō Rō no Jutsu (Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Prison)
Rank: C
Elemental Ethnicity: Crystal
Description: This technique is where the user completely encases an opponent in crystal.
Jutsu Name: Kesshō: Rokkaku Shuriken: Ranbu (Crystal Release: Crystal: Hexagonal Shuriken: Wild Dance)
Rank: C
Elemental Ethnicity: Crystal
Description: The user throws a vast amount of crystal shuriken to her opponent. They can use a much advanced form of the attack where crystal particles surround her and condense into numerous shuriken.
Jutsu Name: Shōton: Kesshō Senbon (Crystal Release: Crystal Needles)
Rank: C
Elemental Ethnicity: Crystal
Description: The user creates long, sharp, and pointed bright pink and white crystals that shoot at the target at extremely high speeds.
Jutsu Name: Shōton: Kurenai no Kajitsu (Crystal Release: Crimson Fruit)
Rank : C
Elemental Ethnicity: Crystal
Description: The user can create a dome of crystal to surround a target. It is highly durable from both external and internal attacks. Unlike the Suishō Rō no Jutsu (Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Prison) it does not crystallize the target.
Members Of This Stage
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Stage Two
At this stage the user is able to manipulate and create crystal particles and crystalize even wood and water.
Rules:
- To reach this stage you must kill someone at your rank or higher using a crystal Release technique.
- You must train for 10 posts on how to crystalize wood and water.
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Jutsu Name: Shōton: Shuriken Ranbu (Crystal Release: Shuriken Wild Dance)
Rank: C
Elemental Ethnicity: Crystal
Description: The user surrounds them self in crystal particles and then condenses them all into numerous shuriken which are then launched at the opponent.
Jutsu Name: Shōton: Rokkaku Shuriken (Crystal Release: Hexagonal Shuriken)
Rank: C
Elemental Ethnicity: Crystal
Description: The user creates shuriken with six sides with spikes at the sides of each blade, as they resemble snowflakes.
Jutsu Name: Shōton: Kyodai Rokkaku Shuriken (Crystal Release: Giant Hexagonal Shuriken)
Rank: C
Elemental Ethnicity: Crystal
Description: The user creates a giant crystal shuriken, resembling a snowflake, and throws it at the enemy.
Jutsu Name: Shōton: Kesshō Gokakurō (Crystal Release: Crystal Pentagonal Prison)
Rank: B
Elemental Ethnicity: Crystal
Description: The user completely encases her opponents in crystal. When the crystal is shattered, the bodies of the victims disintegrate along with the crystal particles.
Jutsu Name: Shōton: Kesshō Keikyoku Hayashi (Crystal Release: Crystal Thorn Grove)
Rank: B
Elemental Ethnicity: Crystal
Description: The user creates growing thorn-like crystals that follows the opponent wherever they're going.
Jutsu Name: Shōton: Hashō Kōryū (Crystal Release: Tearing Crystal Falling Dragon)
Rank: B
Elemental Ethnicity: Crystal
Description: The user crystallizes a material in the area, and then turns it into a dragon. It can be used as a means to travel or to attack a target. Several dragons can also be made and manipulated at once.
Jutsu Name: Shōton: Suishōheki Hachi no Jin (Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Wall Eighth Formation)
Rank: B
Elemental Ethnicity: Crystal
Description: This jutsu will crystallize a large area and everything within it. This jutsu is capable of holding someone with a demon for a short time. (2 posts)
Jutsu Name: Shōton: Omiwatari no Jutsu (Crystal Release: The God’s Crossings Technique)
Rank: B
Elemental Ethnicity: Crystal
Description: This jutsu will create a long stream of sharp crystals to bind or pierce a target.
Members Of This Stage
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Stage Three
At the third and final stage the user is able to create an enormous amount of crystal particles.
Rules:
- You must kill someone with the crystal release that is at a higher rank than you to achieve this stage
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Jutsu Name: (Crystal Release: Crystal Encampment Wall)
Rank: A
Elemental Ethnicity: Crystal
Description: The user creates a wave of chakra which then turns into an almost impenetrable wall which also mends itself.
Jutsu Name: (Crystal Release: Giant Crystal Dart)
Rank: A
Elemental Ethnicity: Crystal
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a large sharp rod attached to their wrist which they can used to impale a target. It resembles the Dance of the Clematis: Flower.
Jutsu Name: Shōton: Suishō Meikyū no Jutsu (Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Labyrinth)
Rank: S
Elemental Ethnicity: Crystal
Description: First the user creates a number of crystal flowers. Then they grows these flowers into a gigantic labyrinth consisting of red crystals, confusing all enemies inside of it. The enemies will mostly be lost because of the fact that the red crystals reflect their personal image as well as generate mirror images of the routes, paths, and details within the labyrinth, confusing and intimidating them. It is even capable of confusing the Byakugan.
Because of the crystal's stable molecular structure, a simple attack focused at one point is rendered useless, as its wide surface will evenly disperse the force of the attack, reducing the attacks effectiveness. To overcome this technique, an attack that’s impact force is already both wide and powerful is required to smash through it.
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Levels of Kekkei Genkai: 3
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 7:05 am
Hey Xion,
Well, seeing as this is directly from Naruto, it will be an approved bloodline, along with most of the available techniques, but more work will have to be done with the specifics of the abilities and their requirements to make them balanced.
What I need from you is more of a description of what is required of a user to reach the various stages. Based on the jutsu ranks of the techniques, we know what is available to a user within each tier of the bloodline, but how we get from one tier to the next is my question.
Luckily, the Narutopedia has outlined the techniques of this jutsu quite well, so it shouldn't be too bad.
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Shruikan Tenshi Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 7:53 pm
Wangetsu Lunar Clan (Crescent Moon Clan) Healing, Mysterious, Moon-fighters
History
The lunar clan is one of the very few clans that existed within the moon country. They were well known for their incredible skill and knowledge of the medical arts. Not only did they excel in medical skills, but as well as advance chakra control. The clan members are recognizable for their unique eye design. The females have a green eye color while males have a blue eye color, a misty fix in them and touched with a soft glow. The pupil resembles that of a crescent moon. Though the clan is medical dominant, they have been seen utalizing offensive medical techniques of their own, making up those medics who stood at the sidelines. Manipulating water was another trait seen in the clan, though not too much was seen in the techniques passed down. Their combat skills however, are remarkable, using medical techniques as offensive techniques and even jutsu that are otherwise unseen before. This branch of medic nin are truely one to be feared.
Rules
• Clan members must be of the medical class
• Learns medical jutsu -1 posts ; Uses them -1 rank
• Must have suiton (water) as main elment
• Learns suiton jutsu - 1 post
• Capable of seeing the life force in others, similar to byakugan. (ex. if your looking for the life force, you can see the heart beating, eletrical pulses through the body from the brain or the heart etc Range is up to 25yrds)
• Has silver chakra aka moon chakra
• Clan members all have silver or white hair
• All techniques of the bloodline are increased by 1.5x in power and medical properties when in presence of the moon or during the night.
// Kekki Genkai Techniques //
Name: Houi o ranpi (Encirclement of light)
Rank: D
Type: Medical
Element: n/a
Description: After a series of handsigns, the user spreads his or her chakra around them in a circle thats about 5ft in diameter. Once completed the circle becomes like a barrier, deflecting any projectiles thrown and any weak jutsu that is of the same rank or lower then this jutsu. During the time spent in the circle which is only one post, the user is healed of any minor cuts, bruises, and any other minor injuries. When the user reaches the level of a jonin, the rank of this jutsu increases to B, and its healing capabilities increase along with it.
Name: Lunar's Chiyu Tacchi (Lunar's healing touch)
Rank: D
Type: Medical
Element: n/a
Description: The user surrounds their hands in chakra and applies them to themselves or another. They pump chakra through their hands into the patient, healing them of any minor injuries and even refuels the muscles that have exhausted itself of its food. However, if its severed or damaged in such way it will not be healed, only if exhausted it'll prevent any damage from occuring.
Name: Tsuki Shushin (Moon Flicker)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: moonlight?
Description: A technique similar to the body flicker technique, the user moves to another location within range (the area your in) at such high speed all the opponent would see is a flash of moonlight, or a silvery white light flash. This can only be used once every three posts
Name: Tsukiranpi Supuraisur (Moonlight Splicer)
Rank: C
Type: Medical
Element: Chakra
Description: An offensive technique used by the clan members, the user channels chakra along the side of their arms, extending a long blade of chakra from their forearms about from 3 inches to 2ft, giving off a faint pale glowing white color. The blades themselves are only a threat to anything organic, for if used against a living thing it'll slice through it, while against an inorganic thing it'll not penetrate it. Great for medical uses and combat, the damage is unseen from the outside, but the inside one would see the outer skin is the only thing holding it together (Meaning if I cut through your arm, the skin wouldn't be touched, but the flesh and bone inside would be. Similar to what Kabuto's technique, leaves no outside injury but inside tells the story)
Name: Lunar Tenkou (Moon Spotlight)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Chakra/Light
Description: A technique that is used often when searching or keeping watch. The user channels chakra through their arms and emits it out of their hands, the chakra becoming a beam of light. The user can control the light's width and brightness. If its narrowed and focused, the light can become a weapon like a magnifying glass in the sun. With higher levels of shinobi, one can use this by merely using the tip of their finger.
Name: Tsuki's Gin Kiri Waza (Moon's Silver Mist Technique)
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton/Chakra
Description: A technique involving the manipulation of suiton and the silver chakra all lunar clan members possess. Its similar to the hidden mist technique known throughout kirigakure. By manipulating the chakra and the water moisture in the area, the user creates a thick silvery mist that blankets the area. The sky darkens from the technique and the silver chakra makes a strong glow from the sky in the thick fog, making it appear to be a dim-litted crescent moon. Visibility is severed in half and only the clan members can see through this mist, though those with the mist vision skill also can. The technique lasts up to four posts, though at Jonin or higher it lasts six post instead.
Name: Tsuki's Meimu - Gin Moya (Moon's Illusion - Silver Haze)
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: n/a
Description:
A technique that is best used in conjunction with the hidden mist or hidden moon technique, or anywhere with smoke/mist/steam/fog. Its a powerful genjutsu, it goes unnoticed until its too late. It targets the opponent's five senses of the brain, smell, taste, hearing, touch, vision. During the fight, the opponent wouldn't realize the technique is affecting them until their third sense is lost. After combat, the victim is best advised to seek medical attention so they can regain their senses.
1st post - Target loses their sense of smell
2nd post - Target loses their sense of taste
3rd post - Target loses their sense of hearing (this is when the target notices their in a genjutsu)
4th post - Target loses their sense of touch
5th post - Target loses their sense of sight
Name: Oneki of za Tsuki Megami (Blessing of the moon goddess)
Rank: B
Type: Medical
Element: n/a
Description: A unique technique which the user can use this on either themselves or others within the area. After weaving the proper handsigns the user sends chakra into the air, which collects then a faint ray of silvery white light falls onto the target that they choose. The light appears as if it came from the moon, and the silver chakra of the clan member's heal injuries the target may of suffered, such as minor cuts to torn muscles and broken bones. Even obliterating poisons. However, this technique cannot be used more then two times per fight, due to the amount of chakra and the amount of damage healed. This technique is best saved when the user or the user's selective target is near death from injury. However, this technique cannot regenerate lost limbs.
Name: Tsuki Sougon Kibou (Moon Gravity Trick)
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Gravity
Description: A technique which involves the effects of the moon, only the chakra acts as it. The user must be precise when using this technique, for targeting the wrong thing can be their own demise. When using this technique the user targets a specific area on the target, be their limbs, or a weapon their holding, and moves their chakra around it. Suddenly that area targeted becomes either incredibly heavy or incredibly light, intended to throw off the target's balance or speed, motions in combat. Even make them sick if one knows how to target and change the weight. However, the effects last a total of three posts and cannot be altered once done. The recharge is roughly five posts. This can only be performed three times per fight. If the limit is exceeded, the user becomes paraylzed from overusage of chakra, making the ability to move incapacitated. (or in better terms, the part of your brain that lets you move is stuck since this technique requires chakra and mind power)
Name: Dansu o za Wangetsu Tsuki (Dance of the Crescent Moon)
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Silver Chakra
Description: A unique technique yet a signature move at that. The user creates a large crescent moon by channeling silver chakra out of their body and condensing and molding it in the air. Once the chakra crescent moon is made, its so condensed and hot from the compressed chakra being by it is miserable for the enemy. The user then launches it towards the target but before it strikes them it splits into three smaller crescent moons, which then homes in on the target. Following their chakra signature, the chakra crescent moons will attempt to strike down the target in a three post time period. If contact is made, the crescent moons will slice through the body, burning it as it moves through as a result of the concentration of the chaka its made from. The moons can be avoided, though difficult and can be stopped via other chakra techniques stronger or equal in level. (ex. Lightning, Earth, explosion related techniques or a chakra attack same rank or higher)
Name: Kyuusho Tsuki: Tsukikage Ryou (Hidden Moon: Moonlight Dragon)
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Silver Chakra
Description: After completing a series of handsigns, the user manipulates their chakra and creates a large silver spectral like dragon. It looks similar to a water dragon, it fires out blasts of silvery white chakra blasts that burns upon contact.
Name: Sejin o za Tsuki (Sage of the Moon)
Rank: A
Type: Medical
Element: n/a
Description: The user settles down for a moment and channels silver chakra throughout their body. This relaxes the muscles of all tenseness and stress, allowing it to be strong and flexible to a great degree. As a result, the user's speed and strength and stamina is increased for a period of time (5 posts) in exchange for one post of meditation. The user is surrounded by silvery white chakra. During this time period however the user cannot perform ninjutsu due to the exchange of great power and speed.
Name: Tsukikage Nami o YinYang
Rank: A/S
Type: Medical
Element: n/a
Description: This technique is one of a very odd type. But such a powerful technique the user can only use this move twice per fight, no exceptions. The user builds up a mass amount of chakra within themselves for one post, concentrating the chakra into the core of their being, which their body begins to glow hotly with silvery chakra. During the second post the user makes a seal and suddenly their body emits a very bright flash of light as all the stored chakra is released, launching a powerful wave of silvery white light. However, the wave looks partially dark and paritally light. This technique has been called yin and yang because it bares two seperate properties of medical chakra. The shinobi who are on the same side as of the user when struck will be healed of nearly all injuries, save for the missing limbs (max number of people is 3, your not included nor affected. The opponents however will be the opposite, their skin and flesh will be burned, their nervous system would be shocked and confused as eletrical impulses would be confused for up to three posts. The wave moves outwards from the user in a 360* area, however after using it the use is incapable of moving for one post, leaving him or her vurnable. A heavy price to pay to cause such damage and yet blessings. The wave is as tall as the yougan tsunami technique (doton tsunami is same height so that can be used as reference)
Name: Tsukikage Megami's Doki - Harumagedon Dageki (Moonlight Goddess's Wrath - Armageddon Strike)
Rank: S
Type: Kinjutsu
Element: Chakra
Description: The most deadliest offensive technique of the Wangetsu Lunar Clan. It can only be used once per fight due to its intensity and the massive destruction it creates. This is truely the signature move of an expert clan member. The user concentrates a mass amount of chakra into their own being, their eyes glowing so hotly only the pupils glow from the concentration, which appears as crescent moons indicating the technique is being used. The concentration is so powerful the user floats into the sky, and is surrounded in a sphere of blinding white chakra. It takes one post to charge up. While in the sphere the user is immune to practically any attacks, being guarded by the massive sphere which strikes a resemblence to a full moon. On the second post the user ascends a little higher and the orb of chakra rises, just above the user as he or she grabs the sphere, and then hurls it towards the ground, it taking the shape of a bullet as it collides into the ground. It has a wide range destruction rate, exterminating everything in its path. The aftermath is quite devestating, from bird's eye view the majority of the area is destroyed, and a huge flaming white mark shaped like a crescent moon is left behind. This technique can easily cause a large amount of damage to a village
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 9:20 am
Very nice work here Tenshi!... I can see you tried hard to make things nicely balanced, but I have one or two notes to add for your perusal:
(Note however, just so you know... I would use this Bloodline in a heartbeat if I were medical.)
1. The -2 to medical jutsu learning needs to specify that it does not stack with the Medial class' proficiency to learn them with 1 less post. (Some people might interpret that with this bloodline, they can learn techniques in 3 fewer posts, but it should be only 2 fewer.)
2. When you say they are capable of seeing people's life source, there should be some kind of description to that. Something akin to a Byakugan's or Sharingan's ability to see people's chakra. The user's eyes should light up after a bit of focus and allow them to scan people's life signs.
3. This is a concept I thought of, where jutsu performed at night, gain some kind of added effect, say a heightened effect [1.5x better] to healing as the moon is more prevalent at night. I love the concept of moonlight as a healing factor, so I think this would be an interesting concept to develop for the jutsu. (The heightened effect would not be added to offensive techniques, only healing effects)
4. Clan users should have a fixed look in my opinion... something along the concept of elves... aloof, silver/white hair, slender bodied. I think that might be cool (totally your call though)
5. Moonlight Splicer - needs a bit more description. this is a powerful thing to be able to do... to attack the inside without going through the outside defense. How large is this blade that is created? what is it's range of the hand/arm?... and can it pass through bone?
6. Dance of the Crescent Moon - You can avoid the moons I'm guessing, but they will keep coming at you after overshooting and re-routing I'm guessing? Otherwise, a heat-sinking 3-missile technique is pretty strong. What does it take to destroy or negate the blades?... or can it be done/
7. Yin and yang - Needs some actual numbers in there. Don't make people reference some other technique in another thread... put the real numbers in there. Also, the duration of the enemy's nervous system confusion needs to have a post duration.
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Shruikan Tenshi Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 12:50 pm
Thanks!!!! ^^
1) Yeah, this is true, the bonus will be lowered to -1 so its not rediculously easy.
2) Life force similar to that of ranmaru's, I will say like byakugans, seeing the heart beat as if you were looking directly at the heart, eletrical pulses from the brain and the heart so on and so forth. Thats good?
3) Yes, I actually meant to add that concept in, hencing the technique that makes it appear night will increase the techniques capabilities and give a home field advantage for a period of time.
4) A fixed look is the eyes, the pupils are like that, the glowing is the activation I would assume....but i love the concept with the silver/white hair, ties in with the moon theme!
5) Moon splicer, indeed, they are.....like for example say I slashed your arm, the blade going through. The skin will show no damage, bones within the body and the flesh would be sliced though where the blade went. Kinda like.....flesh splicing. Bad way to say it, but meant to be anything organic it can touch, however bones for example kaguya bones on the outside, it wouldn't damage it, being dead hencing the name dead bone pulse. But passing through....I would probably say yes since it was from the body itself. But if you make a simple earth wall, it cannot pass through it.
6) You can avoid them, though it may be tricky if played correctly. The blades can be defeated by a chakra filled technique of the same rank as it or higher, though it would pass through wind and water and flames that are not explosion related. Lightning and earth though would pretty much stop it, or an explosive.
7) Yeah....there will be numbers. As for the time period....how about 3 posts? Being an A rank or possibly S.
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 1:27 pm
2. Well, I meant seeing the life force in terms of using it as a medical diagnostic tool... so yeah, biological functions and some degree of chakra flow within the user, but not as precise as the Byakugan's ability to see the points or long distances. (max range, maybe 25 yards?)
5. That seems a bit powerful if you ask me, but I guess a sword could do it too if it was sharp enough. My only problem is that as its written there's no way it would be used in a medical capacity. It would be too large to be used as part of an operation.
6. I would argue that chakra infused air would also be capable of stopping them. Something like Akki Boufuu should be able to at least negate it.
7. Well then yeah, put the numbers in, and 3 posts sounds good.
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Shruikan Tenshi Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 1:45 pm
2) yes thats good enough
5) Well, I should of said extendable, its more for offense then medical, but in a way still medical. I'll through in the extendable part so it goes from inches to two feet.
6) That too, as long as its chakra filled and equal or higher rank then it
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