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Your Rank: Saanin
Name of Jutsu: Kage Buyou (Shadow Dance)
Rank of Jutsu: Chuunin
Range of Jutsu:taijutsu
Jutsu's Element:N/A
Description: The original jutsu (by the same name) is a gennin ranked jutsu which allows for a 'flash step' which puts them behind the enemy in mid air. This jutsu is only being created so that I have the ability to do a 'blink'. Coren moves fast enough to break the sound barrier for a split second, setting him up for an attack. He disappears from his position and appears next to the enemy readied for attack. He must slow his speed and come out of the 'blink' before striking, otherwise he'd probably end up breaking some bones or losing an arm. Any strike is still block-able or dodge-able, if the enemy could block or dodge; though the strike is delivered with such speed that the fist or foot hitting will time with the sound barrier break reaching the ear of the enemy.


Name of Jutsu: Sage Mode
Rank of Jutsu: Saanin
Range of Jutsu:Self
Jutsu's Element:Katon/Doton
Description: Using the summoning contract he has with his lifelong friend Jonma, Coren can summon Jonma and Jima to fuse to his shoulders and allowing Coren to enter an imperfect Sage mode. Coren's tail becomes longer and unkempt, his face becomes covered in a ruddy beard along with his arms and legs. His eyes change, having a grey pupil and a black cornea. Coren strength, speed, stamina increase as well as his taijutsu abilities (if that were possible). Coren gains the ability to use senjutsu styles jutsus while in Sage Mode.

A new fighting style is open to Coren while Sage Mode is active: Monkey Kata. The natural energy which flows around Coren (and cannot be seen by any but another Monkey sage) may be used to extend his attack. A blow which seems to have missed may send his attacking flying and even dodging becomes iffy while fighting this sage.

( I don't have any Sage arts thought up at the moment, nor do I have any idea what would be a good length of time to be able to keep this up. Because my repertoire of senjutsu would be very low for a good long time, because each jutsu would take upwards of 20 posts to learn, that Coren should be able to use normal jutsu while in Sage Mode. BUT! When Sage Mode ends, the jutsu (if chakra need be supplied to it continuously ) ends.)


Name of Jutsu: Myabaku (Pulse Bomb)
Rank of Jutsu: Senjutsu
Range of Jutsu:Taijutsu
Jutsu's Element:N/A
Description: Coren's first Senjutsu and the basis of other jutsu (acting to him much in the way Naruto uses the Rasengan). Coren uses Shape Transformation to cause his chakra to form in his hand and become stagnant. Chakra naturally wants to spin in one direction and by keeping his chakra from rotating, Coren builds up alot of potential energy. This chakra build up is shown as a white flame which surrounds Coren's hand (usually his right hand) and a small white orb in his palm from where all the flames leak. Coren rushes forward at unbelievable speeds, easily breaking the sound barrier to strike his foe, causing major physical damage. When the enemy is struck by the Myabaku there is a small delay before Coren releases his hold on the chakra and causes it to expand rapidly. This explosion can easily kill with a chest hit, and arms and legs may be lost. At this point in time, Coren could only use the Myabaku once as he would be forced from Sage Mode.

(Might change the way it looks. It's 5 am... dunno if I'll like it during normal hours!)

Rp Sample

Coren panted heavily as he stared down his assailants. He wasn't sure as to who they were, but they were some of the best he had ever fought. The three shinobi each stood confidant as the worthless Saanin's breath was heavy in his lungs. They each thought killing him would be easy, and the pay would hardly be worth wiping this man out. One of the shinobi made several hands signs, causing faintly glowing spears of wind to rush toward Coren. He jumped above one, legs in splints as the spear passed under him. He twisted his body as the second rushed toward him. The spear was almost too fast for him, but Coren used the weight of his tail to rotate himself face to the sky, watching as the hardly visible weapon brushed his hair. He landed on his hands, spinning himself as he kicked at the jaw of a nin. His foot connected and Coren could feel the cheek bones snapping against his toes. The Saanin righted himself as he continued his spin, fists out to strike the other two. The others were smart enough not to get hit by Coren's devastating fists, instead jumping back to gain much needed ground. They knew if they fought him close, they were dead. One of the retreating shinobi felt something over his shoulder, almost seeming to hover. He felt it before he saw it: Coren's fist striking his back as a loud crack echoed through the valley. Coren followed up his first strike by several others in quick succession. He felt each snap and splintering of those bones; 4 ribs, his scapula and 5 vertebra. This shinobi was done for. Coren reach into his holster as he spun around to face the next opponent. He felt the blood gush over his hand as he plunged the kunai into the broken man behind him as a new enemy charged at him, sword drawn. Coren flipped the kunai in his finger, tossing it a the shinobi who blocked it without a second thought. Coren then readied himself, planting his feet as the sword was swung. Coren's Iron Brew Fist allowed him to grab the sword as it was brought down diagonally to his chest. The shinobi jumped back as the one with a broken jaw lunged from Coren's right. The shinobi from the Clouds droped his right shoulder, rolling into his enemy's punch and taking the blow. He bounced back, pulling the enemy with him and rolling him down to the ground as Coren knelt on his chest. With one swift punch the opponent was down and with only one left, Coren was home free!

The shinobi readied his sword and charged Coren, who just stood there. If the missing nin didn't know better, it looked like Coren was makign a hand sign, but he knew that Coren couldn't preform jutsu so he didn't bother and continued his rush. Coren's signs ended in that of the monkey and with a small pop, two monkeys appeared on Coren's shoulders. His cheeks grew covered in ruddy fur as his eyes changed colour. He smirked as the charging shinobi realized how foolish he was for thinking this would be easy. He was a Saanin for a reason. Coren's right hand began to flicker with a white flame as he readied his attack. The nin sent to kill Coren dropped his sword upon the ground and turned tail. That just pissed Coren off to see a shinobi act so cowardly. The pseudo-flame erupted in Coren's palm as the shinobi shot forward after his attacker turned prey. With a cry, Coren forced his palm into the nin's lower back, flame now gone from his palm. Coren smiled as the shinobi looked over his shoulder into Coren's eyes.

With a resounding crack like a bomb, the shinobi exploded into nice little fleshy bits, coating Coren's front in blood and bots. His face winced as he changed back to normal and his little monkey friends disappeared. That was the worst part of Myabaku; the clean up. He'd be cleaning bits of old shinobi out of his hair for weeks! Coren skulked off towards a lake to bathe the failed assassination from his fur.


(I'm not using the Taijutsu only RPC so while the bits about inability to use jutsu are N/A at this point. So I must edit the jutsu before acception matters)

Kage Buyou: Um, I guess just come up with a different name or make it like Taibu Kage Buyou(Great Shadow Dance) just so there is no confusion, and I think you should make it so that this technique has like a cooldown of like four posts. Moving that fast would be incredibly taxing so the ninja would need some time to recover before using the technique again. Mostly I just don't want to see this move spammed so that it's like "nah, nah, nah, nah, nah you can't catch me!" you know? so yeah just do that for me and it will be good

Sage mode/ Myabaku: I'm not really sure what we're doing with the whole sage mode thing, I think you should talk to blue about that

Oh and keep in mind that you do not auto learn custom abilities you create, you still have to take the time to learn them

Alright My only problem with this jutsu is that you don't explain any weakness of the jutsu, and every jutsu has to have some weakness, simply because nothings perfect. So yeah, come up with a legitimate weakness(like a strong level katon technique could counter it by heating the air back to normal temperatures)

well if it's like hyoton ice, which considering the fact that you have to be a hyoton user seems likely, then regular fire does nothing, you need to make the weakness specific, I would say that any jounin+ jutsu should negate the jutsu

ok, just make it so that any jounin+ ranked Katon jutsu negates the affect and I think it'll be fine

kk, just post your edited jutsu and ill approve

k, APPROVED, be sure to make a customs thread for any customs that you have created