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White Water Lilly
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 1:55 pm


Haruko nodded, "Now that you've both told me something about yourselves, I guess its only fair to tell you a bit about myself before we move on. Wouldn't want you two to feel as if you're being taught by strangers now would we? Haruko walked back to the teacher's desk and using her hands to grip onto the desk, she leaned back on them before speaking, "Well, first of all, my name's Haruko Tsubame and I come form the Tsubame clan. It's a clan specializing in medical/healing techniques. Our signature summoning is the sparrow and I'm also one of the few members of our clan to become a ninja. Hm, I guess that's about it. You're turn, Kenji-san." She turned her head to look at Kenji.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 1:56 pm


(Alright i will be gone)

Hiro bows then quickly leaves.

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baltic hero

PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 1:57 pm


"Whats next sensei?", Akuma said. Patiently waiting for the next task.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 2:01 pm


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((Note to Baltic : In your profile, You mention this, "At age 9, he began training to be the Washi Kage, The Eagle Shadow. The Eagle Shadow is equalivant to that of the Konoha's Ambu squad. His training was tough but he was able to achieve it."

...spelling errors aside. (which you should eventually fix) This sentence makes it sound like you've already "ACHIEVE" your goal of becoming a Kage. This is obviously not correct. could you please re-word all of this so that your history is a bit more clear to the reader? thanks!

...also, in terms of your abilities, did you receive approval from Death-sensei to use ALL of the elements?...AND shadow techniques?))

Cobra_X

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White Water Lilly
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 2:01 pm


Haruko turned back to face her students, "Well, first of all, we wait for Kenji-san to introduce himself and then, we can move on to the next lesson."
PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 2:05 pm


((I was just trying to bulid a unique character. I can remove it. Also I was using Kage because it means shadow. Not that meaning Kage as in the leader of a clan or village. I don't aspire to be a Kage. I will change my element and I guess change my name too to remove any confusion))

baltic hero


White Water Lilly
Crew

PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 2:08 pm


{Um, if it's too much work. I guess it'll be alright with you to just post a note regarding the Kage part. But yeah, I kinda agree with Cobra about having all five elements. I know that you were trying to make an unique character but wouldn't having all five elements give your character too much of an advantage? Anyways it might be best to wait and see what Death has to say about his bio.}
PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 2:09 pm


"Hmmm...", Kenji said, still looking down at the profiles, "Oh, of course, my history. Well, my name is actually Soryuu Kenji, though you may just refer to me as Kenji. My story is somewhat unique, as I come from a place no one is allowed to enter except for my clan. My people are guardians of nature, we serve the forests, protecting them from danger and assisting them where they have need. We have been their protectors for thousands upon thousands of years. In my lifetime, I have never heard of anyone leaving the village, so I guess I was the first. sufficed to say, I had disagreements with the elders as to how to best serve and protect the forests and I left, intent on learning a greater truth of the world, and of my clan."

..."and now I'm here! I have been training to increase my skills and learn more of what the world has to offer outside of my clan's homeland, in hopes of one day returning to enlighten them with knowledge of the outside world which would serve to better protect the forests."


Kenji then quickly returned to reading their profiles.

Cobra_X

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baltic hero

PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 2:09 pm


((Don't worry I changed it.))
PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 2:13 pm


baltic hero
((I was just trying to bulid a unique character. I can remove it. Also I was using Kage because it means shadow. Not that meaning Kage as in the leader of a clan or village. I don't aspire to be a Kage. I will change my element and I guess change my name too to remove any confusion))

((Nonono...don't go destroying your character. Just simply re-write things to make them clearer. that's all. And about the elements, if that's your bloodline trait, that's fine, but controlling ALL elements will have to have bounds of reason. This is something to discuss with Death-sensei though.))

Cobra_X

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baltic hero

PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 2:16 pm


((Its fine. Having all the elements does kinda takes the fun out of having weaknesses and strengths. I do want to keep my name as Akuma Kage though. It pays tribute to his past teacher and first friend.))
PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 2:20 pm


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((Note to Rashir : About your profile, could you please flesh your profile out a bit? Your back-story could use a lot more detail as I'm sure you have a character concept in your head, but it does us no good if it's just in your head. You also make no mention of any abilities, or to what element you use. all of these are critical factors in understanding who your character is, and more importantly, keeping you accountable in an RP sense. If you don't say anything about your character or your abilities, you can just make anything up and use whatever you feel like, which is generally frowned upon in all RPs.

If you need help, reference other people's profiles, and feel free to ask for help via PM's. For instance, take a look at Haruko's or mine. Now it doesn;t HAVE to be that long or detailed, but in general, the more information you can give us, the better the RP experience will be for all involved.))

Cobra_X

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White Water Lilly
Crew

PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 2:22 pm


{Okay than, sorry about the late notice. I know that you've already began rping in some areas.}

Haruko smiled, "Alright then, while Kenji-san continues to look over your profiles, lets move on to the next lesson." Haruko walks over to the chalkboards aligned against the front wall and picks up a piece of chalk. She then proceeded to write something on two different boards.

On one board it said 'Akuma had just finished training at the training grounds for the day and had decided to go for a walk. He exited out to the wilderness and suddenly found himself being followed.'

And on the one next to it, 'Rashir was taking a stroll towards the barrier river when up ahead he heard a voice calling for help. "Help! My brother fell into the river and I can't get him out! Please help me! He can't swim, if he stays there any longer, he'll drown!"

Haruko places down the chalk and turned to face her students, "Alright, come up, grab a piece of chalk and write down your reply to the situation I've written up for you. For this lesson, I'll be testing you two on your response and writing styles."

{Remember that this guild is a semi-literate to full literate rp guild when coming up with your response. Good luck! smile }
PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 3:14 pm


Akuma gets an eerie feeling. Like he was being followed. Akuma walks a little faster, the feeling gets stronger. He looks behind him and sees nothing. Was his mind playing tricks on him. "This is why I hate forests, spooky and creepy like. I better hurry home fast. The sun will be setting soon", Akuma said, his hands shaking and his heart racing. In the distance, the giant wall that surrounds the village can be seen. Akuma is filled with happiness for many reasons, one reason definitely being that he won't be in this creepy forest for much too longer. Akuma sprints toward home, then something jumps out in front of him. He falls backwards, onto his butt. Akuma looks at the figure and fear washes over Akuma. He begins to grow pale and faints. Akuma wakes up in the hospital, a man is at his side. The man says, "I'm sorry for startling you. I was lost in the forest and I needed directions. I am very sorry for causing you to faint. My name is Shino Saga. You rest now. I will see you again, Godai Washi."

baltic hero


White Water Lilly
Crew

PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 3:28 pm


Haruko walked up to Akuma's board and looked over his answer, she nodded her head in approval. "Good work Akuma-san, very detailed and descriptive. I like how you used quotations and a different color to seperate your dialogue. Good job."
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