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 Posted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 5:15 pm
Well I pretty much know that it gives you the power to turn your body to smoke so weapons have no effect towards you and you can use toxic like smoke to your advantage, and that its weak to Suiton because you would be unable to disperse into smoke, and Futon because it could push the smoke particles away from eachother, just the basic stuff that is on the bloodline page.
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Posted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 8:06 pm
and that's pretty much all i need to make sure you know, also keep in mind that it is weak to katon because the gas is highly combustible
APPROVED!!! just make sure to send 1000g to bluewolfofmibu(the guild captain) and then you can use the bloodline
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Posted: Wed Dec 23, 2009 1:24 pm
Rpc Name: Tensaijin Hanzo
Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Sannin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Kurama Clan
What you know about the clan/bl:
The Kurama Clan are masters of illusions, capable of implanting their chakra into the victim and taking control of one of their senses with ease. Their illusions are frighteningly real, known for leaving ninja comatose with a shred of their remaining conscious experiencing horrible events over an over again. Their special Doujutsu, the Nevidigan is the epitome of genjutsu capable of taking control of a victims mind and seeming to warp reality around them with a simple look. However the Kurama are always struggling to contain their own inner demons and must be kept calm and sane in order to control their power.
Rp Sample (2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan):
A body crashed into the feudal lords party, garbed in the black of his personal shinobi bodyguards. The shinobi was screaming and writhing on the floor hands bloodied from clawing out his eyes. Blood streamed down his tortured face and guttural cries were spewed from his lips. The party came to a juttering halt as the guests screamed in terror and the feudals lords guards rushed to protect him.
As the guards moved toward the feudal lord once put a reassuring hand on his shoulders and patiently asked him to look into the guards eyes. The feudal lord complied and suddenly he was falling into an abyss, darkness welling up around him. He hit the ground hard and the pain of the fall brought a gasp from the lord mouth. He hurriefly got to his feet but found his legs were chained to the ground by thick metal chains. He began to scream but string split his lips and sewed them together. Shaking violently and trying to free his lips the feudal lord felt something long and scaly slide up his legs and met the eyes of a large four headed snake. Transfixed by its glowing gaze he barely flinched when more started to form around him. He only felt fear again when one slithered from his mouth, others crawling into his ears. Soon tehy were biting, sinking venomous fangs into his flesh and innards until his body was alight with pain. Pain. That was all he knew until thankfully something cold washed over his form and his vision blurred. In his dying seconds he saw the reteating form of the guard...no the assassin, leaving the party. His true bodyguards clustered around him and some attempted to run after the assassin, only to be met with a roaring wave of water.
The last thought that graced the feudal lords mind was a single name..Tensaijin Kanja, Sage of the Heavenly Riches, Sannin of Kirigakure, and ultimately...his killer.
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Posted: Wed Dec 23, 2009 1:53 pm
I like your rp sample, it was very well written, but while it shows me that you know what it can do, but now i need you to tell me what it can't do, give me a brief description of it's weaknesses and how it could be countered, it doesn't have to be an rp sample, but you should at least be able to give me a couple sentences
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Posted: Wed Dec 23, 2009 3:22 pm
Rpc Name: Akira Nara
Village: (pending)
Rank: (Pending)
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Nara Clan, and Byakugan
What you know about the clan/bl:
Nara Clan: Everything. The art of shadow mulipulation. Range of 90% of the attacks vary depending on Night/Day and the number of shadows in the area and the size of those shadows. The rank of the user tells how strong the jutsu is when preformed. I say it like that for the strong will problem that arises in most guilds. Most people try to escape the Shadow bind technique by saying they have a stronger will than the user, but it truely relies on the chakra usuage of the jutsu. Being that it is Supplemary, meaning it stands on the bridge between Ninjutsu and genijutsu. If a target can expell more chakra then the chakra used by the user to trap him, then and only then is the target's probability of escape is ensured. Other attacks, created by Shikamaru, have extended the boundries of the Clan, from a simple capture and disable to a full on assualt.
Hyuuga: Now Byakugan, on the other hand, is something I am in the Middle of knowingness. Byakugan his taijutsu based doujutsu Bloodline that uses there ability to see the chakra points of the human body and target those points forcing chakra into their opponents body to cause the points to stop circulation of chakra to main section of the body. The vision extent of the Bloodline is a 359 degree view of around the user seeing everything, execpt that of dead center of the back of their neck. They use a taijutsu fightning style known as the gentle fist that allows them to make sufficient taijutsu attacks to there opponent in a attempt to seal of their chakra usuage.
Rp Sample (2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan):
Nara Clan:
Akira stood in the Leaf village Meadow as the wind picked up blowing his Anbu Black Cloak in the wind. "The dark winds blowing." He said with a smirk at Asaku, who stood across from him. "Shall we begin....?" They charge at each other. Akira pulls out his Trench knives with a tag hanging from each of them as Asaku pulls out his katana. They collide in battle as the weapons clashed with each wave of the hand. "Time to upgrade." Akira smirked as he land a distance away for his opponent as he formed some handsigns, "Kage Bushin no Jutsu (Shadow Clone Jutsu)", summoning two clones. They all charge at different angles. Asaku grabbed three kunai out of his back pocket. He toss them at each Akira, two hit while one Akira disappeared. He appeared behind Asaku "What?!" Asaku said as he attempted to form a handsign as Akira stabbed into his shadow.
Asaku, now being trapped, was unable to move let alone speak. Akira formed some handsigns, "Kage Mane no Jutsu - Shadow Bind Technique ", shooting out his shadow into Asaku's shadow. He quickly switched handsigns, "Ninpou Kage Kubi Shibari no jutsu - Shadow Strangulation Technique", as Akira shadow reached up to Asaku's neck and start to squeeze Asaku began to scream in pain as he poofed away revealing a log lefted in Akira presence. Asaku appeared above Akira "Now I got you!!" Asaku said as he went to swing his Katana. Akira smirked as he slammed his hands on the ground with force sending chakra to his finger tips "Kage Nui - Ninja Art: Shadow Endgame" 10 Shadowy tendrills shot forth out from underneath his hands. Two went and block the Katana while four others went and grabbed Asaku by the arms and legs. They slamed him to the ground with a force of a speeding bus causing Asaku to become unconcusious, then tossed him High into the air. The tendrills subtracted Akira stood up. He then made some handsigns, "Kage Mane no jutsu (Shadow Bind)", his shadow shot forth, then by again switching handsigns, "Ninpou Kage Nui (Ninja Art: Shadow Skewing)", the shadow lifted of the ground and tuned into shadowdy spikes Skewing him killing him instantly.
Byakugan sad pending)
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Posted: Wed Dec 23, 2009 3:34 pm
First off you cannot have both a clan and a bloodline, you'll have to pick one or the other.
Also in the rp sample how did you suddenly appear behind the ooponent? i ask because without a good reason that stuff isn't going to fly in the rp. Another thing i saw was not actually your character's doing but still, how would someone be able to log out of a shadow bind strangulation when they have already been caught by the shadow bind technique? I suppose I could be mistaken, but I'm fairly certain that the substitution jutsu doesn't really work that way, I appreciate that you were trying to show how the nara clan jutsus can be foiled, but I don't think that would be a legitimate way in-game.
other than those few things i liked what you did, feel free to edit and i'll take another look
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Posted: Wed Dec 23, 2009 4:00 pm
Okay Lance, add Sine Amore to the Mind's eye of the Kagura or whatever
Brileone Paid
Defined to Crystals
Ayame for whatever she applied for
Death Soldier goes for Mangekyo Sharingan since I approved him of it myelf (He's the akatsuki leader and I have to make him strong enough)
Sakoyoshi Dainahora for 3 tomoe Sharingan (He's the Raikage so I let him have up to 3 tomoe)
Grandmaster Ginger's Hyoton
Link to your destiny
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Posted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 7:49 am
Rpc Name: Katsumi Uchiha
Village: Iwagakure
Rank: Jounin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: The Uchiha Clan and The Sharingon
What you know about the clan/bl: The Uchiha Clan is the only clan able to use the Sharingon. The Uchiha Clan sybol is a Red and White fan. The clan is known for using Fire jutsu. / The Sharingon is limited to the Uchiha clan. It can only copy elemental jutsu. It can't copy another clan's jutsu.
Rp Sample:
Katsumi was walking in her herbal garden, minding her own buisness and gathering some herbs for a new medicine she was trying to make when a strange man with a mask over his face came out of no where and began to pick some of her rare herbs. She threw poison senbon at the man and drew her sword from its sheath. "Who do you think you are, trying to steal my herbs? Leave my garden or face the concequences..." Katsumi smirked while activating her Sharingon and unsheathing her Katana, pointing it at her opponent.
"Your only a child!," the man laughed, dodging her senbon with ease."What can you possibly do to stop me?" He went back to picking the herbs and Katsumi disappeared in mid air and charged the man from behind, slashing his arm off and making him drop the delicate herbs.
"AGH! Brat! How dare you attack me!" the man screamed in agony while grabbing what remained of his arm. This made Katsumi laugh. "Grab that sword of yours and fight me for the herbs! If you kill me, you can take all the herbs you want...." Katsumi's face got serious as she watched him with her Sharingon. "But if i kill you, well, that just means i kill you and i keep my herbs."
"Don't negotiate with me little girl!" he said, unsheathing his sword with his good arm and charging at Katsumi. "Lightining Style: Black Flash!" he yelled as the sky grew darker and bolts of lightning were falling from the sky.
Katsumi sees where the bolts are landing with her Sharingon and dodges them and puts her Katana away and back-flips away from the man. She then runs away from the herbs. *If i want to use my elemental attacks, I need to keep away from the herbs. So I'll take him to the front yard and fight him there!* Katsumi thought to herself while dodging the lightning jutsu attack he tried to hit her with.
"Why so shy? You said you wanted to fight me! So fight!" the man laughed and chased after Katsumi and catching up with her in the front yard.
"With pleasure! Katon: Yojin Bunshin no Jutsu" Katsumi stated, breathing fire from her mouth which made her clone appear. It then helps her throw wired kunai at the man at unbelievable speed, wrapping around the man with no time for him to dodge. He tried to use his sword to cut the wires, but they were metal. He dropped his sword. He was unable to move due to the chakra in the wires.
"What the?......Let me go!" the man yelled at Katsumi while trying to escape her kunai. But it was useless.
"Katon: Shuriken no Jutsu!" She stated plainfully, flames bursting from her mouth onto the wires and slowly burns the man severly.
"AGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! STOP!!!!!!!!!! IT BURNS!!!!!!!!!!" the man shrieked in pain, falling to the ground in defeat.
Katsumi drew the man closer by pulling on the kunai and releasing him from her grasp. "......I win....." Katsumi said emotionlessly, unsheathing her katana slowly and raising it above her head.
But before she was able to slash his head off, he stabbed who he thought was Katsumi with a poison kunai. She saw his movements with her Sharingon before hand and made her clone accept the attack for her. The clone turned to flames, which in turn, burned him to death as soon as they touched him. "....Like I told you before.....I win....." Katsumi said while putting her Katana back in its sheath and walking back to her herbal garden.
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Posted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 8:25 am
I'm sorry but it's a no for the sharingan, I'm not sure if you can still be an uchiha or not, take that up with Blue, but you cannot have the sharingan. You haven't shown that you know it's limitations, and you don't seem to have a clear understanding of how it works.
Feel free to app again, but I'm going to need to see a much better rp sample
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Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 1:02 pm
Rpc Name :: Joseph Uchiha.
Village :: Iwagakure.
Rank :: Genin.
Bloodline or Clan applied for :: Sharingan Stage One. [One Tomoe.]
What you know about the clan/BL :: I know what you guys wrote in the Bloodline description; That my main element must be katon, I can't copy Jutsu till' I gain the second tomoe, that using the Sharingan consumes chakra, etc. I also know everything about the Sharingan that has been discussed in the Anime.
Rp Sample (2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan)
Joe felt something cold, and solid at his throat. A drop of sweat rolled down the side of his face. The boy tilted his head back slightly, and lifted his gaze. He found a masked man restraining him, and holding a kunai to his neck. The mask was familiar... One of the Anbu of Konoha? Were they attacking Iwa? Whatever their reason for being here, it wasn't good. Joe's eyes shut tightly, and he swallowed. Joe turned to the left slightly, extending his right arm, pushing away the Anbu's, along with the kunai that had been pressed upon Joe's throat. The boy leaped forward, turning one-eighty degrees. He opened his tightly closed eyes, and to the Anbu's surprise, they were a bloody red. One comma looking mark swirled around the boys black pupil. Joe had acquired his clans doujutsu, the Sharingan.
The Anbu, a bit shocked, backed up a step or two, before shaking his head rapidly. "No matter. You will still die, along with your home!" He stated, drawing the blade that rested in it's sheath upon his back. His movements seemed so slow to Joe... Was it because of the Sharingan? The boy ran towards the Konohagakure Shinobi in a zig zag pattern, trying to throw him off a bit. Once he closed in, the Anbu tried to bring down his blade on Joe's head. His attack failed. In Joe's eyes, it was too easy to dodge. He side-stepped the attack, and twirled, appearing behind the Anbu. He dipped his hand into a pouch attached to his hip, pulling out a kunai, and lunged all in one swift movement.
It was over. Joseph Uchiha had taken down his first Anbu level Shinobi. He ran out of his shack, and toward the central areas of the Village, to defend against any other attackers.
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Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 4:37 pm
You seem to have a decent understanding of the sharingan, but you haven't really shown that you understand the weaknesses of the sharingan, and what it will not allow you to do
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Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 9:43 pm
Would you like me to try again?
It's fine if you do. ^_^
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Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 9:54 pm
Lance Fulgurant I like your rp sample, it was very well written, but while it shows me that you know what it can do, but now i need you to tell me what it can't do, give me a brief description of it's weaknesses and how it could be countered, it doesn't have to be an rp sample, but you should at least be able to give me a couple sentences The Kurama clan's doujutsu is limited to eye contact in order for them to manipulate the senses of their opponent. Their Taijutsu will most likely be underdeveloped and the constantly run the risk of being overtaken by an 'evil side'. Their mentality is often shaky due to the horrific visions they inflict upon their enemies, making their pyche vunerable to psychological attacks or other Genjutsu.
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Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 12:29 pm
Rpc Name: Kio Anabe Kaguya
Village: Rock Village
Rank: Genin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Kaguya
What you know about the clan/bl: People gifted with this bloodline are able to fully control the cells responsible for the bones structure. They are able to create bones and manipulate them as their weapon. They are extinct or at least it is what is thought.
Rp Sample (2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan):
Kio was heading towards his home. His village was under attack and his parents here in danger. He knew he wasn’t very strong but he had to, at least, try and protect them since neither his father nor his mother were shinobis. He arrived his home was burning and his parents were outside with two shinobis maybe at chunin level. Kio went and appeared in front of them. They made the first move: the tallest guy went towards him trying to cut Kio with his kunai but quickly a bone exited Kio’s shoulder and protected him. Not only protected but also grew and stabbed this guy right on his heart. The other guy, smaller in high but maybe physically stronger than the other stayed there, maybe thinking how did a genin killed his partner. After some time Kio noticed why the other guy wasn’t moving. He was using gengutsu. He made serious damage on Kio but fortunately his bloodline helped him with it since he could regenerate faster but if his teacher hadn’t showed up and killed the b*****d probably Kio had died right there. He was grateful both his parents where alright and his teacher congratulated him for his bravura but also said he needed more training before another real battle. He agreed and he started training to become stronger.
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Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 1:53 pm
Rpc Name: Kai Hana
Village: Iwagakure
Rank: Genin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Nara clan
What you know about the clan/bl: They are shadow minuplutars, extremely lazy and the men int he clan always want to find toa women relax and have a simple life while the women can be bossy at times when married but the clan is also very very! smart in strategies but lack in taijustu and are good in ninjustu don't know bout genjustu yet
Rp Sample (2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan):
Kai jutted behind a rock as another exploding kunai flew past her proximity, exploding the base of a tree, falling down towards her.
"Kid...you might as well give up. You know that you can't beat me." she yelled towards the man...he had been doing a good job of only alerting her opponent to just his general proximity, not to exact location. This open clearing in the middle of the forest was a good place to fight because of the shadow from the trees. I got to get to him..."Kagemane no Justu..." she whispered as her shadow stretches out...catching on to each other shadow along the way from the forestry. Turning around she made sure that she could see what was going on from behind a set of treeline, eventually his justu attaching onto one of his opponents's subordinants who was furthest away from him. Kai always wore his weapons in weird places for this perticular reason. Covering her own mouth with one hand, the subordinate immitated; then he pulled a kunai from the subordinate's weapons pouch and walked over to the other subordinates, slicing each's throat. Her opponent, too bothered with trying to find his target did not notice his own person killings his comrads. Eventually Kai jumped into the air, using both hands to stab the man into the oppents back, then releasing them. The man ripped his own comrad off his back...vicously smashing him into the ground. Nows my chance..."Kage Nui no Justu"... she said a loud...knowing she had him. Tendrels of black shadow shot forth stabbing into three of his four limbs. Fighting back vigilantly he grabbed one and kept ahold of it. "This is not the end for me!!!" he yelled just before the three other tendrels streched around the back of him, stabbing into the place in his chest where his heart lyed. "No it is...your time is up...Time to head back to the village" Kai whispered now heading back into the village after stopping the ninjas from entering her beloved village
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