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Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 3:50 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 3:59 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 12:40 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 1:18 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 1:22 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 1:34 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 1:58 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:29 pm
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SporkMaster5000 NayrVentess Cool, cool, cool. I'm looking forward to seeing these characters smile here's one: Kelren Lightstep, The greatest show on earth.
Just done an audit
- Your Melee and Ranged Attack bonuses are wrong as you haven't added half-level. - Your passive perception should be 17 not 14. - Not sure if you have any gold left but if you do you haven't stated it. - And you haven't put a Deity although I guess that is by choice.
Are you going to do a background?
Other than that, good!
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:45 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 3:49 pm
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NayrVentess SporkMaster5000 NayrVentess Cool, cool, cool. I'm looking forward to seeing these characters smile here's one: Kelren Lightstep, The greatest show on earth. Just done an audit - Your Melee and Ranged Attack bonuses are wrong as you haven't added half-level. - Your passive perception should be 17 not 14. - Not sure if you have any gold left but if you do you haven't stated it. - And you haven't put a Deity although I guess that is by choice. Are you going to do a background? Other than that, good! fixed the first two, the last two were intentional, but i put the 0 gold down.
i'll write up a more detailed background than the proof of concept i ran past you, but that's going to be the gist of it.
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 4:05 pm
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NayrVentess Arc Vembris DawnLongtooth Shifter Warden, might of the bbarbarian clans Audit time! -Your Reflex should be 19 not 17. -Your Passive Perception and passive Insight should both be one higher. -And you haven't put your XP in but thats fine. You know one thing I've noticed about doing Audits? I only ever make the PC's better! I shouldn't do them! ^^ Other than that, fine Arc smile
added XP and fixed passives. I'm not seeing where you're getting the two more for reflex. I might add a few more expendables to round out my gear.
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 5:17 pm
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Arc Vembris NayrVentess Arc Vembris DawnLongtooth Shifter Warden, might of the bbarbarian clans Audit time! -Your Reflex should be 19 not 17. -Your Passive Perception and passive Insight should both be one higher. -And you haven't put your XP in but thats fine. You know one thing I've noticed about doing Audits? I only ever make the PC's better! I shouldn't do them! ^^ Other than that, fine Arc smile added XP and fixed passives. I'm not seeing where you're getting the two more for reflex. I might add a few more expendables to round out my gear.
Lol, Reflex = You've written it down yourself. You have (10) + 2 for shield, 1 for ability, 4 for half level and 2 for enhancement... equals 19
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