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PostPosted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 7:48 pm


It has come to my attention that I have accidentally overlooked the description provided by Psioxy. That is regarding the Unbekannts’ Losung Klinge, originally Traummorder. I am hopeful that I can still correct this mistake of mine, and continue Psioxy’s legacy. sweatdrop

Back to work…

Losung Klinge -A weapon wielded by all Unbekkant’s. It is a large machete, its blade is enhanced with razor-sharp spikes and covered in a thick stain of blood. Each Unbekannt is given one by the Schrecklich and all are the same in appearance, provided that the Unbekannts can add customizations to it as they see fit. It is more often used in comparison to the Unbekannt’s Traummorder, because of the fact that the latter is only used against spirits who actually try and resist punishment, or on very rare occasions, spirits who trespass on Hell Society. The Losung Klinge is able to bypass any form of spiritual armor or resistance, but its power can only be used for execution.

Traummorder - A Zanpakuto is the form of a Shinigami’s spiritual power. A Resurrecion is the restoration of an Arrancar’s former Hollow powers. A Traummorder, is the vast assimilation, and condensation, of over a thousand wailing souls. Hell Society, like Soul Society, is filled to the brim with Spiritual Energy, but the source differs between the two. In Soul Society, they are thought to be made from the deaths of spiritual beings, In Hell Society, they are the vapors of a soul’s death-like pain and suffering. Spirits who experience near-death or great suffering often tend to develop spiritual powers, developing within them a source of newfound power. Hell Society utilizes this phenomenon, the countless souls that suffer in Hell Society awaken their instinct to fight, and try to develop a source of Spiritual Energy within themselves. But the heat of Feuerwelt, coupled with the sheer amount of malice and spite in the air, vaporizes their efforts. The Unbekannts then, being creatures of great power, are able to condense these fumes into a weapon-- Traummorder.

Auberst - A Traummorder’s release is a strange occurrence, because it is done out of the will of the Unbekannt. When in the midst of the very souls it was formed out of, when breathing the air that gave birth to it, a Traummorder is relatively calm, almost at home with the endless hate. But once a being, not stained by the blade of a Losung Klinge enters its area, it reveals itself-- Auberst. An Auberst can take on any form, be it a weapon of a creature, either way when an Auberst is a mindless beast, hellbent on exterminating the foreign spirit.

Ausgabe - Auberst is done unintentionally, but Ausgabe isn’t. When deemed powerful enough by the Unbekannt, enough that the spirit can not be dealt with using only Auberst-- it will kill itself, literally. The Unbekannt will take the Auberst and deal a fatal blow onto himself with it, naturally as the host begins to weaken, the power that binds that strains of spite inside the Auberst dissolves into the surrounding air. The Unbekannt as well begins to dissolve-- but has not been slain. What continues is a dark spectacle, since the Unbekannts were beings composed of a multitude of souls, somewhat like their Traummorders, they are able to simply reform, together with their weapon. What results is a grim rebirth, as the being begins to take on its previous form, the malice of its weapon interferes with the process and begins to alter the figure. This causes the Ausgabe to differ greatly from the Resurrecion of Arrancars, as they do not have limitations to their form. They can end up with the shape of a human, a dog, a temple and even still they can be a hybrid of these things.

Neither Auberst of Ausgabe requires a command phrase... as a millennia of rage can not be controlled.

Wall of text… difficult to read, difficult to write… feeling a bit dizzy… ugh… xd

Critiques are very much needed. 3nodding
PostPosted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 10:08 am


This is very well done, Dante. You amaze me each time you post a part of your ideas for the Hell Society. If only I had enough time to contribute to this, dammit. Stupid integration week in school. [It's the time of the year when all subjects give us projects all at once... with the same damn deadlines.] Straying from Prioxy's original ideas or not, I still think all of these are great. ^^

I'm kinda confused with Ausgabe and Auberst though, I kinda feel like they should be switched... or I'm just too sleepy to get what you're actually trying to say. I'll re-read this tomorrow.


Oh yeah, I'm gonna edit the first post with some of the stuff the posted here. ^^

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 12:32 pm


Thanks, the fact that Traummorder means Dream Slayer kind of bothers me though. I still can't think of an ability that seems both Hellish and is connected to dreams, so I had to sort of improvise. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 1:10 am


You did great though. You know, I got in touch with his brother the other day, he was Kisuke in Coral, remember him? He was online so I seny him a pm, no response yet though.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 2:14 am


Thanks, still working out a few bugs though.

Yeah I remember him, I had no idea he was Psioxy's brother. Hopefully he'll PM back. 3nodding
PostPosted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 7:51 am


Ushinawareta tsubasa wo sageshite...


Very few times have I ever been confused. This is one of them.
I think I lost the point to all this somewhere down the line...


...in search of lost wings.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 2:08 pm


Kitsune-tono
Ushinawareta tsubasa wo sageshite...


Very few times have I ever been confused. This is one of them.
I think I lost the point to all this somewhere down the line...


...in search of lost wings.


Okay? Perhaps reading the first post might help? This has and is still only an idea that Psioxy created sweatdrop
PostPosted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 6:47 pm


Kitsune-tono
Ushinawareta tsubasa wo sageshite...


Very few times have I ever been confused. This is one of them.
I think I lost the point to all this somewhere down the line...


...in search of lost wings.


I guess it gives me some degree of satisfaction to know that I was part of something that confused Kit, nonetheless...

I myself think the idea has merit, though I find it hard to add to something I have no knowledge about. sweatdrop

This idea can be implemented somewhere along the line, probably after the Vizards, but before that I think it should be edited and updated by the remaining crew.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 10:50 pm


I still have to read all of this sweatdrop
PostPosted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 2:53 am


Dante_Shadowolf
Kitsune-tono
Ushinawareta tsubasa wo sageshite...


Very few times have I ever been confused. This is one of them.
I think I lost the point to all this somewhere down the line...


...in search of lost wings.


I guess it gives me some degree of satisfaction to know that I was part of something that confused Kit, nonetheless...

I myself think the idea has merit, though I find it hard to add to something I have no knowledge about. sweatdrop

This idea can be implemented somewhere along the line, probably after the Vizards, but before that I think it should be edited and updated by the remaining crew.

If you want to learn more of the satanic aspects of the Nazi idea, I suggest you read the book " Wolfenstien. "
It is a classic and well made.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 4:52 am


Captain_Shinzo
Dante_Shadowolf
Kitsune-tono
Ushinawareta tsubasa wo sageshite...


Very few times have I ever been confused. This is one of them.
I think I lost the point to all this somewhere down the line...


...in search of lost wings.


I guess it gives me some degree of satisfaction to know that I was part of something that confused Kit, nonetheless...

I myself think the idea has merit, though I find it hard to add to something I have no knowledge about. sweatdrop

This idea can be implemented somewhere along the line, probably after the Vizards, but before that I think it should be edited and updated by the remaining crew.

If you want to learn more of the satanic aspects of the Nazi idea, I suggest you read the book " Wolfenstien. "
It is a classic and well made.


Hmm... was it written during or after WWII?
PostPosted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 2:29 pm


This is something new. I see a few things I'd like to suggest but I'll wait until you know people are aware of my existence (Not suggest on the hell society, that looks great, suggestions on the guild/crew forum ect)

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 5:16 pm


YAY GORO! lol
PostPosted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 12:57 am


Dante_Shadowolf
Captain_Shinzo
Dante_Shadowolf
Kitsune-tono
Ushinawareta tsubasa wo sageshite...


Very few times have I ever been confused. This is one of them.
I think I lost the point to all this somewhere down the line...


...in search of lost wings.


I guess it gives me some degree of satisfaction to know that I was part of something that confused Kit, nonetheless...

I myself think the idea has merit, though I find it hard to add to something I have no knowledge about. sweatdrop

This idea can be implemented somewhere along the line, probably after the Vizards, but before that I think it should be edited and updated by the remaining crew.

If you want to learn more of the satanic aspects of the Nazi idea, I suggest you read the book " Wolfenstien. "
It is a classic and well made.


Hmm... was it written during or after WWII?

After, of course.
If you check, their are possibly several books and several video games based on the novel.
Look it up and you should find it.
It is mostly the idea that Hitler was secretly creating biological weapons and creatures beyond the BRINK of our own knowledge.

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 3:13 am


Interesting, I'll look for a copy and integrate some of the ideas into this.

@Goro: Hey, um, do you know where Contra ran off to? I doubt she's the type to just pack up and leave.
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