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 Posted: Thu May 25, 2006 10:27 am
I don't like to write, I'm a lazy person, and my hand writing is very bad.
1/2 strike: Thursday, 25 May 2006
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Posted: Thu May 25, 2006 2:54 pm
My definition of good would be where they don't critisize every single thing in my writing. It generally just makes me want to throw it away and quit. When I read some of them myself, in my mind it's just something about it that I don't like.
Yeah, I guess my writing hasn't almost made anyone from losing their eyesight. I'm fine with grammar and spelling, it's just something about the stories that are quite stupid.
I know I have to work on my openings, I'm not too strong on that part as the rest. I also know I can't be perfect, but I want my writing to be as perfect as it's possible for me.
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Posted: Thu May 25, 2006 4:56 pm
Well, if you ever send me any of your writing, I'll be sure to criticize constructively.
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Posted: Tue May 30, 2006 9:16 pm
Okay. ^-^
I will if I can ever get enough of it done.
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Posted: Tue May 30, 2006 9:25 pm
True, I haven't put much work into my short story. Instead, I've been idling around on Ragnarok Online when I could have been working on it.
And it looks as if I'm doing homework when you look at my computer screen from afar, 'cause of all the text. Fools my parents, methinks.
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Posted: Tue May 30, 2006 9:27 pm
I have the ideas in my head for my story, I just can't seem to get them on the paper how I want. x_x
Hehe. Nice. ^-^
How easily our parents are fooled these days. XD
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Posted: Tue May 30, 2006 9:44 pm
I use to write a lot of poetry. My recent one being released in a local press book at school.
ESCAPE
Tonight we're the sea and the salty breeze
The sounds of desire
Pouring like waves from your lips
The music we share is the smell
Of the salty wind
The smell of your skin like the sweetest milk
Our love is the only thing we need
Painted with the tan and vanilla
Of the sun heated sand...
The replication of brown sugar
Tonight you're my sea and the salty breeze
Your sweat the water against my
Lips...
Tonight you're the waves that keep me free
The feel of your heart against my hand...
Tonight we're the sea and the salty breeze
A getaway from a polluted land...
A lot of kids liked it but my English teacher didn't because it implied intercourse. All my poems involve the bonding between flesh, it's a romantic symbol to me even though I don't indulge in it.
I really would like to be a writer but if I can't I'd like to major in English and Religious Philosophy. <3
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Posted: Tue May 30, 2006 9:48 pm
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Posted: Tue May 30, 2006 9:52 pm
That's very well rhymed.. I suck at rhyming but free verse is wonderful. You're great. <3
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Posted: Tue May 30, 2006 9:54 pm
Leiko likes them both. They are very good. <3
Leiko can't write poems, they end up horrible.
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Posted: Wed May 31, 2006 1:05 am
I didn't realize that poem was so long, Xumbra. I remember when ya wrote it though...yush.
...I should memorize that.
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Posted: Wed May 31, 2006 1:03 pm
I don't think that one would be too hard to memorize.
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Posted: Wed May 31, 2006 3:42 pm
And it'd be fun to recite.
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Posted: Wed May 31, 2006 3:47 pm
I'm not a very good writer, but I like to read other people's writing. It helps improve my own.
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Posted: Wed May 31, 2006 3:54 pm
Same here. I like to read other people's writing. It makes me want to practice my own writing, but when I actually pull out a sheet of paper and a pen, I lose my vision and get writer's block.
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