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Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 4:33 am
MOTHER PROMPT
Mare's Name: Jennet Mare's Temper: Humble Prompt Response:
Jennet dozed on a soft patch of green grass, feeling the blades tickle her nose and make her sneeze. Her eyelids fluttered, and every so often she would scrunch her eyes up and tremble. Sweat dripped down her forhead and pooled in the hollows above her nose, then slid down to the earth. Suddenly her head lifted up, and she looked wild eyed for her basket. She sank into uneasy relief as she saw it was still sitting by her side. Jennet was wary of this basket, it was like none other she had ever seen. The soft blue was nice, it reminded her of her own coat, but then those fearful bark roots intertwined through the wicker and curling all around make her very uneasy. This basket, aside from the color, looked nothing like her nor her mate.
Jennet gave the basket a soft nudge, and yelped as a splinter from one of the branches jabbed into her nose. She rubbed her nose on the ground, and the splinter came free. Her long locks of blue hair tumbled around her face, and trailed in the dust. Tears in her eyes, and her nose a little bloody, Jennet let out a wail. How could she be ready for parenthood? Especially with a basket as strange as this. She had never been a mother before, how would she know what to do?
Finally the tears subsided, and the wails into soft sniffling. Jennet looked at the basket again, and said, "My little one, you are the answer to our wishing, no matter how strange you might be, you are our child." She nuzzled the basket again, this time being sure to avoid the branches.
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Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 7:25 am
MOTHER PROMPT
Mare's Name: Emerie Mare's Temper: Aloof Prompt Response: “You wanted this, remember?” the new mother murmured to herself, a slimy knot of disgust in her stomach. Disgust at herself, at her repulsion of the creature that had infested her stomach for eleven months. Disgust at the thing she’d birthed, an alien.
Weren’t mothers supposed to love their children, even if they were born part demon? Even if they were missing a limb? Even if they could never, ever see you? Weren’t mothers the compassionate creatures who stood protectively over their baskets until hatched?
Was she not a mother?
Perhaps it was her fault. They’d tried, God knows they’d tried. And they failed. She couldn’t carry – the unborn child buried in the meadow last year, the one she’d sobbed over, was proof of that. Perhaps she’d prayed to one God too many…
She’d seen the unfathomable creature, lying wet in the crisp sunlight. And she’d seen the looks of horror and empathy on the Two-Legs’ faces as they lifted her child into the birch basket. The way they’d patted her muzzle, told her she’d done good, like she was some pureblood dog of theirs who’d thrown a litter of hairless mix breeds.
The afterbirth had had a prettier face…
Anger flared up to join the knot in her gut as she stared dejectedly down at the basket, white branches seeming to encase the little foal in an embrace that his mother couldn’t offer.
Then Emerie hid the basket away under a fern and left it.
She would learn to love it as she was his mother and that was what mothers did. It was just hard right now. She’d try again in a week. Besides, there would always be next time.
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Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 7:41 am
DEMON PROMPT
Demon's Name: Tsaligu (He will be forever known as "Tree" in Cherokee as he gave up his real name upon freedom as it reminds him of a life he is no longer a part of.) Demon's Temper: Bitter Prompt Response:
It hadn't always been this way. Life had been beautiful once. The stallion closed his eyes in an attempt to keep the pain at bay. Memories began to resurface and it was almost impossible to control the rage that soon followed. He had failed in his task but what choice had he back then? He had a lovely family. A beautiful mate and two wonderful foals. They lived in these very woods and kept him company as he took on the task of protecting it.
All it took was a pair of Skinwalkers to change all that. He would never forget them. The female had been white as snow and the male as black as night. He had a madness in his eyes that he had never seen before. His mate was held to the ground under sharp paws by the female Skinwalker and his two foals were in a similar situation with the male. Their request was simple enough. His family would be released if they could each have a wish.
Though it went against everything he believed he agreed. His family would be spared at the cost of a moral code he promised to adhere to. He couldn't even consider the alternative. His family came first.
The female wished for her kind to have the ability to transform into an animal. The male wished for one of the trees in the woods to open up to Hell itself, allowing his kind to travel back and forth at whim. At the cost of the lives of his family, he had brought destruction into the world.
With the wishes granted, the Skinwalkers took off. Any joy that might have been shared between the reunited family didn't last long. Within moments, the stallion was punished for what he had done. Branches shot out from a nearby tree and he became entangled within him. Both he and his mate tried to tear at them with their teeth but to not avail. As his children cried in fear, he pulled into the tree itself.
Imprisoned within the giant tree, he could not speak. However, he could see what was going on around him. This was further punishment for what he had done but he did not regret his decision.
His family never left him. They spoke to the tree as if they knew he could hear them. Over the years he watched his mate grow old and he was there when she fell beside the tree and accepted death. He was filled with such sorrow that he managed to shake the branches and cover his love in a blanket of leaves. More time would pass and his daughter would be the next to die of old age. Though she had lived a long life, she had never mated. She had sacrificed her chance at a life and family so that her father would not be alone. She had not been able to hear his pleas to be happy. To move on.
His son was the last to fall. He had been too old to protect himself from the wolves that attacked that night. He could do nothing but watch as his boy was ripped to shreds. He would never forget the wolves.. one as white as snow and the other as black as night. He knew it had been no coincidence.
He had failed at his task in an attempt to protect his family. He had failed to protect his family due to his punishment for failing to protect his task. During his imprisonment, he had only grown more bitter and resentful of his situation. He knew of little more than pain and anger. Though he was now free, his life was as forever changed as his body.
He would go back to his task. He would protect the woods and share the wishes but it would come at a price. The wishes were now as pain ridden as the body that carried it. Others would suffer as he and his family had suffered. There would be hell to pay for all that had been done, and he would not be picky on those called to pay the toll.
He would spread his seed much like the tree he was a part of for so long. This new foal was only the start. The foal would be unable to resist the calling of the trees...the whispers in the wind.
He would not start this journey alone.
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Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 9:48 am
DEMON PROMPT
Demonn's Name: Eryn Demon's Temper: tortured Prompt Response:
It had been an accident, or so the stallion told had himself. That was his method of coping in the dim, his light that gleamed so wonderfully. It could not have been him.
It was a lie, but Eryn nurtured his own misconception, and in his mind, it was true. He watched the forest grow, darkening with his unsuited rage. It was not dying, merely standing still, like its guardian. Cloyed and seeped to the core with rage. He could not howl in despair on his own, but the gruesome sound of wind whistling through the decaying trees came close.
He had replayed the situation so many times in his head that it had changed. If he closed his eyes he still saw creamy hair, pale and pearlescent. The mare had been glorious. Laurë was a living embodiment of the sunshine and warmth he did not often get to appreciate in the forest.
It was her, golden and pale and petite that had tempted Eryn. He was forbidden from letting his potion be used for or with any ill will. It had been one of the conditions of the otherwise strings free gift. But, the protector was arrogant. Why should the rules apply to him?
He was the forest guardian, the keeper, the wise man for acres around. He should be exempt. They were not made for him; the angeni, when giving Eryn the bottle, had only warned him that without a pure heart, the wishes would be twisted.
And his heart was pure, was it not? Longingly, the stallion would gaze longingly upon Laurë. But, she was always with others, usually other mares that she chatted amiably with. Eryn could not work his little charm on a mare that had constant company around, and she always seemed so happy already, surrounded by her friends and kin that she brought the beautiful forest.
One day, though, she came with a stallion, blushing lightly as her mellifluous voice made light conversation, and Eryn felt the roots of darkness twining around his heart. It grew, uncontrolled like a weed, tangling in the growing brambles around his hooves as Laurë brought the same stallion back, day after day.
After a fortnight, he’d had enough. In a reckless move, Eryn drained half his bottle, and harshly wished that the mare would be his and his alone. His wish was granted, the scarlet fluid bleeding out of his eyes, his pores and slunk away, like a demon in the night.
For that was exactly what the wish had become, purity defiled. Eryn could not see it, or would not, as jealousy and spite had wound its way around his heart. Laurë had never talked to the stallion, though she’d seen him out of the corner of her eye. She watched him, day after day.
He followed the wish’s embodiment, scarlet like sin, unaware of the fact that Laurë had brought the stallion to his forest to hopefully coax the beautiful stranger out of the shadows.
Eryn would never know that his secret infatuation was returned. The redness wound around her pale neck, cutting into her flesh. With cold eyes, he watched her blood mingle with the essence of the wish, and watched it pool around his hooves.
The corruption was instantaneous. Feeling the backlash of the wish, Eryn could only watch. His forest was soiled now, tainted with his deed of reckless anger. His body turned against him, freezing him in his place, gnarled branches and moss climbing up his body.
Blood burbled from Laurë’s wounds, and the mare breathed her last. That was the truth, but Eryn had twisted his memories to be something very different.
His eyes opened, and he glanced to her bony remains. “Do not worry,” the stallion rasped to her skeleton, grinning. “The foal will not just be my own.” Eryn tossed his head, uncaring of his newfound appearance. It was irrelevant to his plan. He had had his days of beauty, and little did they reap him.
“The child will be ours. We merely must be…patient.” The foal would be the essence of purity tainted by darkness. The same in theory, though details were different.
The forest guardian was convinced that some other stallion had killed his Laurë, his precious, his love. It could not have been him, no. The memory of his story was long gone, replaced with half truths and the blurred line between reality and dream.
He had a pure heart, after all.
The sound of laughter echoed in the forest, and it was not a pleasant sound.
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Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 12:04 pm
MOTHER PROMPT
Mare's Name: Kara Mare's Temper: Cautious Prompt Response:
Gnarled, rough blue skin...and eyes, eyes that were- were... was this child really… theirs? Was it possible? Creaking branches...leaves drifting gently in the breeze...an unnerving aura surrounded it. What was it? Was this child, this mutation really theirs? It didn't look anything like him...blue skin; it had to be hers...but his? It looked nothing like him...it was as if it was a small blue sapling akin to the forest that they lived by. A monster… Cloudy blue eyes drifted across the carefully woven basket that lay before her, tracing the silvery white branches that had crept its way out of the wicket and sealed it shut tight. Was it okay? Could it breathe through the sealed basket? Was it still living? She lowered her head to eye it over carefully, hoping that the little foal inside was okay, still alive. It… it had to be, just had to… please? Kara winced. No, it- it can't be! She was worrying over a monster; worrying over a monster that couldn't have any possibly relationship to her mate! Worrying over the monster that she just happened to give birth to. Birth… Unexplainable wrath suddenly burned inside of her. It was a monster; the first child that she had was a monster. It had nothing to do with them, absolutely nothing! It was a mistake, a total mistake. This child couldn't belong to them...not them; them that wished for a child for so long, and yet, in the end, received a demon. It was a demon that now rested in the basket before her… bearing her markings and not her mate's; seemingly more akin to the forest around them than to the parents. No, it could not be their child. This monster, demon, thing was not theirs. A flare of anger shot through her; her wrath, fury, rage now set loose. They could not raise what was not their own; not a monster. Mistakes had to be cleaned up. She had to clean this up. The mare lifted one of her hooves into the air; hovering above the basket before her. This was going to be the end... She was going to stamp the basket till it was crushed into a flat sheet! She was going to be a mother no longer. Kara stared hard at the thing before her. Why… why had her vision suddenly become so blurry? Why were hot droplets pouring down her tired face? Why was she quivering, quaking; hesitating? This had to be some joke. She was supposed to be strong. She was supposed to destroy this threat to herself and her mate. Why couldn't she do it? It wasn’t murder… She dropped her hoof resignedly back to the ground as she lowered her head towards the basket again, her blue mane hiding her features like a veil. Tears continuously splattered onto the basket like rain. …Why? An answer loamed into her mind before she could stop it. This was her child, hers. Could a mother hurt her own child? Their hearts were entwined; they belonged together. Kara was this child's, this mutation's, this monster's, this demon’s… mother. She couldn't stop loving; she couldn't hurt it. Kara contemplated her future. It didn't matter what this child was going to grow up into; she was its mother. She was going to love her foal no matter what it was. She was going to make her child happy, as happy as any foal could be. The foal was going to grow up into a happy adult and live a happy life. She smiled slightly, bitter tears drying while silly, joyful tears formed. Wow, how cheesy this all was. Her eyes still lingered on the basket; bright now. The foal inside there was going to grow up happily, and she was going to see to that. They were going to be happy. They finally had a child and were going to be happy. This… this was the first time she smiled since she had laid eyes on the creature, no beautiful child. It didn't matter what the child was, it didn't matter how it looked; it was their child. On Kara's tear streaked face spread a big grin, her heart almost bursting. That was how the world was going to be from now on; they were going to live happily here till the end of their days, filled with laughter and song. Smiles were beautiful; and they were a beautiful family. Dried leaves rustled in the deep shadows of the woods.
BASKET PROMPT
Basket's Name: Rishima Basket's Temper: Adrift Gender for Prompt: Female Prompt Response:
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Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 3:32 pm
DEMON PROMPT
Demon's Name: Zahir Demon's Temper: arrogant Prompt Response: Stiff, that’s the first thing he felt in his new form, he was so stiff. Zahir stretched examining his new body with displeasure, it was so... so gnarled and rotten looking. He turned to glance back at the rest of him and scowled, ugly, he was ugly… He faintly remembered what he used to look like, his silky mane and his brilliant blue eyes, the mares that were also swooning over him, the other horses that didn’t recoil in fear and horror. If they saw him now… if they saw him now they would surely flee, but was that really a bad thing? He couldn’t remember due to a stray thought entering his mind.
“what about her?” he thought worriedly almost as if it was a whine. Her, he frowned shifting with an irritated look on his face, “this predicament was all her fault… all her fault… “ the thought trailed off suddenly becoming something more dangerous, more violent, more furious then it had been before. She had flirted, flickered, and danced before him, she had caused him so much anguish that at times it had nearly brought tears to his eyes as he had fought the pain, but no more… she was surely dead, that is if he remembered that last night correctly, that last sight of her, her body broken and bloody, injuries inflicted by his own hooves.
He took a careful step forward, unsure if his body would cooperate, much to his pleasure it did even if it was ugly. No doubt if she had seen him she would of looked at him horrified, that much he knew was true.
He had loved her, loved her as much as he knew how, and he thought she loved him too, but he was wrong, so incredibly wrong. The only reason she spoke to him that fateful night they met was for the potion that hung around his neck, she already had someone in mind and that definitely wasn’t him. He was used and then merely thrown away once she got what she wanted, and that was that arrogant stallion. He was foolish, not even realizing it until he realized she was pregnant. It was then that he had asked her what she had wished for when he let her have a sip of the potion and she answered, a happy smile on her face, “for him to love me.”
He remembered looking at her horrified before it finally sunk in, before he was overcome by a terrible wrath, a terrible lust for blood. “so your happy with him?” he had asked, voice shaking with anger. She had nodded and then it was over, everything was over, the world dyed a crimson red by his hatred and betrayal. He remembered watching her run to him, the filth who had stolen her from his graceful form, he remembered biting, his limbs flailing about wildly in all directions coming back covered in red. He had killed the stallion, its body looking limp and weak beneath his triumphant feet, and then he had turned to her. She, who in all her beauty, had made his world perfect, less lonely. She had betrayed him, she had crushed his hopes and dreams, crumbled the perfect little world he had imagined… now he would crumble hers. His eyes had narrowed into a glare and she had backed away sobbing hysterically about “please don’t hurt me and my baby” and how she was so “sorry” he had snorted, as if that could ever fix his broken heart. Then he had killed her, he had killed her and her unborn child and enjoyed it.
The memory faded and zahir wracked his mind for what had happened next, but strangely he came up with nothing, nothing until he was released from his curse by some foolish stallion, who he had granted a wish in exchange for his first born. It was the perfect revenge, though there was always the chance that the foal would fix his heart, but that was unlikely. It was, however, much more likely that by having the foal he could lead the life she had wanted, make her soul, wherever it had been sent, jealous and feel hatred towards him too. It seemed like the perfect plan and he knew that the foal would be drawn to him, no matter whether it was by being tired of being alienated or because of the bond of the stallions promise, it did not matter…
You always knew you were different. After all, how many other soquili grew branches and leaves? Perhaps it wouldn't have mattered so much if your parents didn't make it so obvious, whether in action or words. Despite your simple life with your parents, you find yourself apt to wandering. There is, of course, nothing more tempting than a forbidden area. The large forest that borders the grazing land looks dangerous enough for an excursion alone. Your father had explicitly told you never to go there. Next thing you know you're lost in the woods. You'd have great camoflauge if only you weren't such bright colors. It's pretty boring all in all, except that you've been hearing creaking that seems to be getting closer, and it's unlike anything you've ever heard. The longer you spend wandering the forest, the closer it gets. Soon, out of the corner of your eye, you could swear there is one tree that is... moving. Following. Smiling. Your father was right about this place! How do you react to this threatening soquili? Do you stand your ground or run away? Will you threaten it, or beg for mercy? You cannot godmod the forest demon in this prompt, so consider what the foal is thinking before it acts - and if it acts ON the demon, create a cliffhanger. BASKET PROMPT
Basket's Name: Celyn Basket's Temper: apathetic Gender for Prompt: male Prompt Response: Paranoid, they were so paranoid, nothing to worry about at all, nothing to see but trees. It was rather uneventful, the trees all looked the same as well as everything else.
That’s what Celyn had thought at first when he’d had run into the forest fearless and bold, but now it was growing dark and there was that strange noise….
“creak.. creak…” he frowned glancing around his ears swiveling, there seemed to be something there through the trees a ways off and suddenly the foal was filled with fear. Fear, he relished it, his parents were far too overprotective of him and he had grown relatively emotionless but now he was filled with fear. He tried to savor the moment, the adrenaline rush as his legs tensed before his instincts to bolt finally overcame him and he dashed through the trees.
The bushes and trees zoomed by as he leaped past them, his branches shaking as he dashed. Branches? Oh yes Celyn had branches which was probably the reason he was so sheltered, his parents didn’t want him to feel bad for being different. Boy did they suck at that, especially his father, he never once saw love in his eyes just fear, and his mother always looked sad as she gazed upon him wondering what had gone wrong. It was they, they who made him disgusted with his appearance. No wonder he liked to run away so much….
He glanced back wondering if the “thing” was following, it didn’t seem to be, but he wasn’t altogether sure, heck for all he knew he was just saw another tree and had mistaken it for something more. He pondered for a moment turning an idea over in his mind, “like a tree…” he glanced at his leafy body with a grin. The idea was intriguing as well as pleasing, perhaps the next time he escaped from his parents he would go check it out again, now the problem was figuring out his way back.
He glanced around completely lost in this unknown forest.
“Celyn! Celyn!” he had the frantic call of his mother not far off and ran towards it rolling his eyes, of course she would act like she was worried now, though he was sure she would have been relieved if he had simply disappeared.
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Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 5:10 pm
DEMON PROMPT
Demon's Name: Ashnard Demon's Temper: Deranged Prompt Response:
'These Soquili are defiled.' the trees whispered softly. 'As our guardian, you must do something about them...'
And just for carrying out their wish, he was cursed.
"If you're so loyal to the trees, then you should be a tree yourself." the elders harshly retorted.
Thus he was doomed. Doomed to be a tree until the end of time.
But it was broken. By that foolish stallion.
Ashnard's gnarled lips drew back in a snarling grin enjoying his freedom. This stallion was to be rewarded. He would grant the stallion any wish he wanted using the remains of the potion.
He felt the potion around his neck tremor from his defiled heart. He remembered when the potion had been pure. So pure a soft light emitted from it.
When Ashnard realized the trees could speak to him, that was when the potion had changed.
It had warped. Warped into something so evil that all beings that partook in it would be cursed.
No matter how powerful the potion was, it was still easily influenced by evil. It was easily influenced by Ashnard's heart. It turned redder by the day as Ashnard was enchanted by the trees. The day the trees had commanded the guardian to kill, the potion tremored violently in its bottle churning about and morphing into the darkest shade of red possible.
Ah yes...the potion trembled yet again shaking Ashnard out of this thoughts.
He almost forgot about the stallion standing there. Expectant. Waiting. He almost laughed aloud looking at the desperate eyes of the stallion. It felt good to be revered again.
In exchange for the wish, he needed something in return, did he not? He was giving away what remained of the potion. The demon wanted his child. He saw the horror etched across the stallion's face.
A deal was a deal. And he happened to make a deal with the wrong soquili.
The potion...the prize that Angeni had given him. It was now gone in his attempts of wreaking revenge upon the soquili. A gamble he was willing to take. 'With that child...I can finally get my revenge on those who have imprisoned me...' he remembered the many that he had killed. Their brilliant, warm blood spilling onto the forest floor. The blood and flesh splattered onto the trees. He shivered with pleasure remembering their shrieks of pain and mercy. The mares pleading for their lives. The stallions attempting to fight back. The foals crying for their parents.
He had killed them all, because the trees had commanded him to.
After that, the trees never spoke again.
He wondered what wrong he had committed to the trees. After all, he did carry out their wishes.
Even though the curse was broken, Ashnard was disgusted at what remained of the broken curse. He wasn't the beautiful and powerful guardian he had once been. Being encased in a tree for a long time had put great strain on his body. His once muscular physique was gone. Replaced with the bark of trees, he looked thin; unhealthy. His silky long mane was now the dark thick vines. His beautiful skin was the rough bark of the trees. His limbs felt like dry branches. Even though he was grotesque, he realized it would be useful to spy on intruders that ventured into his forest undetected.
This child would come to him. It would undoubtedly be a male. Females had no place in his mind. Their only role was to reproduce. He would come to the forest, enchanted. Ashnard would then appear before him and persuade the foal to join him. To be his eternal slave. To be the one to carry out his revenge. To punish those who have opposed him.
To have the trees whisper into the breeze again.
There was to be nothing in his way. He would win this fight.
He trembled with anticipation.
But for now, all he could do was wait and bide his time...
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:50 pm
DEMON PROMPT
Demon's Name: Azazel Crow's name: Raum Demon's Temper: Vengeful Prompt Response: The stallion stood, grotesque body wreathed in the thick shadows of his forest. The gnarled branches of his brother trees reaching out, entwining their twig-fingers with his own. Hatred burned within him, belying the complete lack of movement that his demonic body possessed. The hunger for vengeance scorched along his veins with renewed fury The time would soon be upon him. The time to take action against those that had betrayed him, betrayed the one who had been his everything.
Ancient hatred filled the demon, and had done so since that time, long ago. It drove him, in a way nothing else could have, drove him to ignore the agony of his new existence, focused him on a single, all encompassing goal that staved off the madness that had threatened to steal his mind. The loss of his beauty had all but broken him and it was the burning rage that filled every rough and twisted limb, that kept the stallion in one piece.
Once, a long time ago, he had been a creature of purity and goodness. He had guarded the forest with his life, protecting the magic that existed within, the magic of life. He had been alone, yet he had not been envious of those he occasionally met, wandering in pairs or with their families, along the edge of his forest. No, he had instead, rejoiced for them. Given them his blessings and wished them long and happy lives together. He had never thought he would find his own love, his own precious jewel in the depths of the forest. But such a miracle had found him. She had been lovely, graceful and dainty, like the tiny bluebells that had flowered each year at the onset of winter. She had become his heart, her happiness had ment everything to him. Nothing was too difficult for him to overcome with his sapphire dream at his side.
But it had been ripped away from him! Stolen by the very soquili he had welcomed to his forest. It had been a demon, a kalona, that had entered his forest with lies and deceit in its heart. That stallion had pretended to be a friend, pretended to wish to learn about the wondrous forest. Three days… three days she had lain in the cave, slowly dying. Her beautiful blue hide ripped apart, eyes dull and sightless. The third day he had finally found her, frantic with worry after the endless hours of searching. Her life had been stolen from the world, her beautiful smile and joyful spirit.. ripped from him by the greed and jealousy of a single soquili.
He had tried to save her, his precious love. Stealing the forbidden gifts of the forest in his efforts. But nothing had worked and she had died in agony, blind and alone. Soul-sick and lost without his beloved mate, he had almost welcomed the curse the forest cast upon him for stealing its most treasured gifts. A coldness has overtaken his body, his limbs entangled with that of the demon tree, and yet his heart had still burned. Instead of the bliss of death he had hoped for, he was forced to remain aware, awake both day and night, watching the forest grow and age around him, with him. Every hour, every day, every year that passed only saw the hate within him burn hotter. The lust for vengeance simmered, distilling into a madness that was focused solely on revenge. Revenge against the entirety of the soquili lands. Long had the cause of his torment been forgotten, all that remained was the destructive hatred burning forever in his breast.
Now, at last, he was free! His body released from its prison to finally unleash his hatred on the world. The foal.. the first born he had required in payment for some petty wish, was the first step in his revenge, and the start of his own redemption. The fact that he would be breaking apart a family almost as soon as he had found his freedom only made his coming retribution all the sweeter. The foal, cursed to be the same as he, living under his wing and taught to hate with all its heart, would carry his hatred and loathing out into the world, destroying those just as he had once been destroyed. Soon the land would be ablaze with the fires of hate, the screams of the shattered souls as sweet music on the stage of his vengeance.
(His plot that I have in mind would bring him and the mother together. She looks painfully like his lost mate, and through her he would eventually regain his lost self, and live the rest of his life seeking redemption for his past actions.)
MOTHER PROMPT
Mare's Name: Laelia Mare's Temper: Devoted Prompt Response: Sighing softly she stretched out her neck, elegant head resting upon the ground. Gentle blue eyes regarded the basket, cradled within the warmth of her body, with a mother’s love and parental protectiveness. Yet worry was alight within the usually friendly gaze.
Something was wrong with her child.
She had seen the way the basket had sealed itself as if forming a cocoon around her foal as soon as it was placed within. And she had seen that pale, gnarled body and strange eyes. There was none of her mate’s colouring on the basket. It was pale blue and white, though it was possible that his colours had been entirely skipped, it wasn’t too likely. And increasingly, she had found herself wondering if he was the father.
Of course she hadn’t been unfaithful! She loved her mate, despite his unusual behaviour recently. And yet…. something drew her to the forest, the forest that they had lived alongside for many seasons after she had left her family to be with Asb'el. Another sigh escaped her, laced with worry for her child and for her mate. Suddenly a cold chill travailed up her spine, making her lift her slender head sharply. Pale blue eyes swept the edge of the forest anxiously.
Why was it stalking her? It had begun the day she had discovered that she was expecting their long-awaited child. Some hours after her mate had returned, and oddly seemed a little reserved in his celebrations of their miracle, she had felt the very first ‘chill’. The sensation had vanished soon after and she had forgotten about it. But as the days passed, and her belly had swollen with new life, she had felt that same coldness ride over her. Often she would be alone, basking in the sunshine, or grazing on the tender new shoots. Each time her mate was away, wandering as had become his habit during their seasons of childlessness, she had felt that coldness, and on several occasions, had caught a strange movement on the edge of the forest.
Gradually, as the weeks had passed, she had become convinced that something.. no, someone was in there, and was following her. Yet she wasn’t scared, as such. It made her nervous, and anxious for her child, but the aura she felt from that shadow hadn’t been one that wanted her or her child’s death. As time passed, and after the basket had arrived, she had felt the cold shiver more and more, until it had been every day, and then several times a day. When ever her mate was absent, the shadow would be there, as if watching over her.
It was puzzling. And yet she had come to a most startling conclusion…. that shadow, had some kind of connection to her child. The forest itself, seemed to reach for her when ever she got close, as if wanting her to join it, to take her child that looked so much like one of those trees made living..
And each day the temptation to answer that call was becoming stronger.
BASKET PROMPT
Basket's Name: Ceres (Roman myth name of the goddess of agriculture, meaning "to grow.") Basket's Temper: Cursed Gender for Prompt: Female Prompt Response: Glancing round she eyed the open space behind her. In front was the forest, full of things that her parents called trees, but that looked so much like her. Behind, the wide open plain that her parents had made their home, and where she stuck out like a sore thumb.
She had seen her mother vanishing into this forest recently, when she thought her daughter was asleep, and her mate was away. She would be gone for an hour or so, then slip back and settle as if she had never moved. Ceres was curious, she wanted to now where her mother went, and why. What was in the forest that was so important? And why did she herself look so much like the army of silent sentinels?
It was these questions, and the distinct feeling of not belonging in the sunlit world of the open grasslands, that finally prodded the young filly forwards, into the shadows of the trees.
For a time she walked, at first following a faint trail but it petered out before she realised and soon enough she found herself lost. But more than being afraid of never finding her way back, she found herself amazed by the plants surrounding her. The trees seemed to reach out, caressing her gnarled hide with gentle fingers, their leaves brushing through her vine-entangled mane.
Here, she felt a sense of peace, of belonging… something she had never felt out in the sunlight. With the dappled shadows drifting over her body, her blue and white coat faded to a pale grey in the half-light, she felt… welcome.
Suddenly something creaked loudly behind her, causing her to flinch and spin round. The sight that greeted her wide eyes was something that should have been fearful, made her run for her life. The creature was indeed imposing, and her heart thudded with fear. But more than that, the sight of the gnarled and twisting branches, the rough barked body and leaf-strewn branches… here was one who was like her! Maybe he could answer her questions, explain to her the purpose of her existence, and reassure her that she was normal.. not some freak of nature.
Ears flat against her head, nostrils wide with panicked breath, she slowly stepped forward.
“… hello…”
FATHER PROMPT
Stallion's Name: Asb'el Stallion's Temper: Undone Prompt Response: Courage.. that was your wish. The courage to protect your beautiful mate, the courage to love her enough to let her go. For if she was to have the children she so desperately longed for, then he had to let her go, let her find another who could provide her with the foals she needed, no, that she deserved to bring into this world.
So it had been courage that he had wished for, certain that he would have to let her leave him, no, that he would have to drive her away. Break her tender heart in order to give her back the life he stolen when she fell in love with him so many moons ago. He knew his own heart would shatter, lost forever to the blackest despair, but it was something he had to do. So when the demon had asked for his first born, he had agreed. For surely there was no chance of his mate conceiving after so long, and soon he would be alone… a broken spirit left to wander aimlessly until the end of his days. And if the gods had mercy, it wouldn’t be too long before a kalona or skinwalker discovered him.
The news that she had been so thrilled to tell him had felt like ice in his heart. He had betrayed her, betrayed the foal that should have been theirs. A fool he had been! To think that the fates would be so kind as to give him what he most desired. No.. they were vengeful spirits, punishing his mate for his own selfishness. If only he hadn’t made that promise.. if only he had possessed the courage needed to refuse the demon.
He was doomed, and he had just doomed his beloved mate and their only child. No wickeder beast walked upon this earth, of that he was certain.
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 2:10 pm
BASKET PROMPT
Basket's Name: Diriel Basket's Temper: Bitter Gender for Prompt: Male Prompt Response:
He hadn't asked to be born. He certainly hadn't asked to be rejected. Though young, Diriel could see in his mother's eyes the thinly veiled unease she felt whenever she glanced at him. It was the roots and leaves sprouting from his body that made her nervous, and he knew it. He'd asked why neither she, nor his father had any sign of the strange growths on their bodies only to receive a backlash of tension that had sent him into bewildered silence. Surprisingly, it had been his father that had reacted the worse. Sometimes, Diriel swore he could still see the stallion watching him as though he was little better than something that had slithered out from the forests. He didn't understand it. What was wrong with him? Why didn't he feel like they loved him?
It was the plants burrowed deep under his skin. He knew it. Sometimes when he was by himself, he'd turn on them in savage fury, trying to rip them off his body with tiny teeth and only hurting himself that much more. The more he thought about it, the angrier he grew. He was a monster, a freak—so filthy that not even his parents could bring themselves to care. He found himself acting out more and more, growing curt and cruel whenever he was prompted to speak, and secluding himself in brooding silence otherwise. It was one of the reasons he found himself longing for the forests. Rebellion itched through his veins as tenaciously as the plant life that gripped him, and the fact that his father had forbade him from straying too far only worsened the need. Why should he listen? They didn't care.
Despite himself, he felt his heart thump a little faster in his chest as he stole out from under his mother's half-hearted gaze, trying to unsuccessfully blend in with nearby towering trees. Diriel waited for several breaths from his hiding place, ears pricking as though to catch the sound of hurrying hoof beats and worried calls of his name. The peaceful silence was the only thing that greeted him, mingled with the gentle creak of the ancient trees. He felt the disappointment seep through his body before he gave an indignant snort, arching his neck and setting off. He was trying to sneak off by himself anyway--what did he want them to come looking for him for?
So lost in his thoughts, the colt hardly realized that he was straying deeper and deeper into the embrace of the forest. The sun could no longer penetrate the menacing shroud of thickened branches and leaves, and even the amicable sounds of animals faded into an eerie silence. Only the groan of the trees followed him now. He brought himself to a jerky halt, glancing around slowly as though suddenly struck with the idea that he had no idea where he was, but the moans of the forest were there to keep him company.
It unnerved him, being alone in the dark, endless forest. The trees seemed to shift and dance, lamenting in their low voices while closing in slowly, slowly on the awestruck foal. Something shifted in his periphery and he spun, all gangly legs and raw fear, to catch sight of his silent observer, but there was nothing but the forest. Or so he thought. There, shifting, emerged a stallion from the trees. Or was he a tree wearing the mask of a stallion? A crooked grin was set upon its hardened, twisted maw, and Diriel momentarily forgot how to breathe.
The forests had come to take him, then. It was always the forests. The forest had made him a monster, made his mother and father ashamed to see him. And now it wanted to claim him all for its own. Unbidden, his rage began to slowly boil through his veins again as he stared at the approaching demon, trembles quaking through him. Lips curling back in what was meant to be a menacing display, Diriel screamed a challenge at the approaching other, all rational lost in the face of fact; here was his curse, given solid form. He thought nothing more as he lunged forward with his teeth bared, blinded by hate and overwhelming desperation to end it all.
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 2:53 pm
((Editing later. gotta eat)
MOTHER PROMPT
Mare's Name: Evania (Means Tranquil) Mare's Temper: Tranquil Prompt Response: Evania smiled happily as she thought of her dear basket. She planned on walking around with her dear foal and mate as soon as it came out of the basket. Evania had not yet seen the basket due to being to tired. Evania walked to the little clearing in the village where he basket laid. Her eyes wide open with terror, the baskets markings looked nothing like her mate.. And there were branches all over it
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:25 pm
MOTHER PROMPT
Mare's Name: Floriana Mare's Temper: Anxious Prompt Response:
It was a monster.
She'd wanted nothing but children for such a long time, and now she wanted this little... this little b*****d out of her sight, out of her responsibility, out of her LIFE! How cruel was fate, to finally give her what she'd wished to have for so terribly long, only instead of receiving a darling child, be given this half-formed spawn!
Pacing back and forth, the blue mare would pause intermittently to stare down at the basket, sometimes with looks of horror, sometimes with looks of disgust. At first, she had wondered why there was such a commotion among the two-leggers when they placed her offspring into its basket. It hadn't taken long for her to figure out why, though, and the notion continued to plague her as to why she even dared to look in the first place.
Whispers had spread like wildfire among the other Soquili of news of Floriana's deformed baby. It had been bad enough when she'd chosen a half kalona as a mate, but she’d managed to brush aside and ignore the names and insults directed her way. But now...now those insults were coming back to haunt her. Had choosing him as her mate really affected the results of their offspring? Floriana had never known of another mixed couple before, but surely the results didn’t always end up this… horrifying?
He had been distant since the moment he returned from the forest and she announced her expectancy. Perhaps, in his silence, he’d actually known of the consequences? Or perhaps somewhere in his family tree was an unspoken branch… a link to his own bloodline that was too humiliating and embarrassing to mention. Could that be the cause of what happened to their child? After all, she knew none of her family bloodline bore anything CLOSE to branches or gnarled bark. No, it must be a kalona trait, and damn him for not having said anything before!
She gritted her teeth, anger and resentment bearing down upon the atrocious wicker basket. She’d just wanted to live a normal life, and now her world was falling apart. She’d fallen in love with what she thought was a wonderful stallion (despite his partial heritage, of course), and they were going to lead a normal, everyday life like every other couple. They would have shelter, food, and beautiful children to adore on and raise like everyday, normal, respectable parents did.
Shadows beckoned dark thoughts to enter her mind. If this was indeed a horrible breeding fluke, she and her lover could always try again. After, of course, the original mistake was disposed of. Drowning. Poisoning. Kalona fodder. There were so many simple and easy ways for a foal to meet their demise, and each one played out into Floriana’s mind. Would she really be willing to kill her own child? Granted, it was more than obviously deformed, so… putting it out of its misery would probably be a GOOD thing, for their sake, right? Not to mention spare her and her mate the embarrassment of having to raise and provide for a creature who would bring shame upon both of their families.
Her eyes narrowed, and she moved to lay down beside the gnarled basket, her legs growing tired from the constant pacing. She kept her distance, however, less the disease or curse or whatever it was that had been wrought upon her child spread to her own delicate features. Her child would not die today, not by her hooves. Deep down inside, she knew a mother should not bear such ill feelings towards her own kin, however deformed or twisted they may be. So the sense of duty, of obligation, kept her by the side of her basket. But there would be much to discuss with her mate, once they were reunited. She’d put up with enough of his silence, but she needed at least SOME answers to calm her anxious mind.
Her head moved to rest against the cool grass, blue eyes glaring accusingly at the child who’s blood was mixed with her own. Something… something was going to have to be done to rectify this situation.
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 6:59 pm
DEMON PROMPT
Demon's Name: Mephistopheles Demon's Temper: Irredeemable Prompt Response: It took him a moment to remember how to use his legs after the stallion had fled, the wish whispering through him, rustling branches and mossy dreads as an answering current flushed out his nascent body. Sap lined his lungs, and termites scuttled blind in his now-defined belly; but thinking no longer took eons, running from branch to roots in vain. It was easier, even if he felt vaguely claustrophobic, awareness pressing in from all sides as he dwelled beneath the canopy rather than stretching above it.
Perhaps the curse had lingered to keep him from perishing instantly at the change, but he hardly cared to muse over such a double-edged blessing, not when he felt the way his face was pulled back by a mask of wood grain, the roots that still clutched onto him with and burrowed down into muddy flesh. He was a tree no longer, but he remained burdened with a grove of his own to carry, compensating for an ancient crime.
Years ago, decades or centuries for all he'd known in his imprisoned state, the forest had intended for a sapling mare to be his bride. The roots had shaped her out of clay, and nodding stems gave petals that coated her wet exterior. Dandelion seeds were planted to form eyelashes and hair, while the river sectioned off of its own accord to color her stare and burble a lively voice into existence. The final ingredient for animation had been stolen from him, blood from his many protective skirmishes spilled and leeched into the ground, all of it collected until it could be transferred to the final creation. There had been no warning before she'd appeared, bedecked in garlands of springtime, and her breath – as she announced herself his – had been sweet as any perfumed nectar. But companionship had never been something of interest to him, and the solitude of his duties coupled by the pilfering of his castoff drops of life enraged him.
Mephistopheles had spoken roughly to the beautiful creature, the diatribe bordering on cruel when she stared at him with wounded confusion. He did not want her, would never want her. If she had simply accepted it and moved on, it wouldn’t have mattered. But the tears struck a chord, and his disgust only increased when she’d requested a wish from the bottle around his neck, if she was to be so spurned by love.
She bowed her head to take the brew, her wish going unsaid save to the fine-spun glass and its contents. But his own feelings had influenced the potion held close to his heart, and the sip meant that she took into herself his own sense of violation and anger. Newly birthed and fragile, the emotions had spilled down her throat, turning the waters to steam, baking the clay to a hard consistency, and scorching the delicate flowers. She had crumpled at his feet, a victim of whim on both sides as she'd broken down to base materials.
The spirits had tried to remake her, but he denied even the single drop of blood by which she might have been revived, made stubborn by what he perceived as treachery. And so he had been condemned, rendered a bloodless, but still-living gravestone to the mare he'd murdered. The howling resentment had stayed with him, building up until he was free again. And the stallion, the boy with Kalona-whiff that he could smell from miles off, had been the reason.
The scheme had coalesced quickly when he spoke wistfully of his mate and their troubles, the garnet solution presented as salvation. They would never again have trouble conceiving; their family tree would span out as great as his branches before his deliverance had. Just the first of their children, the one he had implanted, was to be his, and that would be the only price. Agreement struck, he felt the first stirrings of contentment in his lignified gut. The foal would come to him already full of hate and despair for its appearance. It would think him as sympathetic as the idiot halfblood had, would turn to him for answers. He would destroy his child next to the invisible corpse of his intended, and the sacrifice would mean that the blood no longer coursing through him would be spilled once more, his refusal erased, sins cleansed.
The creaky stallion's head was heavy and his heart was light, one weighed by contemplation and gnarled wood, while the other floated above consequence.
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 11:28 pm
MOTHER PROMPT
Mare's Name: Akahi (Hawaiin for "for the first time" or "never before".) Mare's Temper: Divided Prompt Response:
I've always wanted a baby, a child of my own to love and cherish. I can't begin to tell you how happy I was when I realised that I was with child and couldn't wait to tell my mate the good news. Oh, we'd tried so hard before! I was so close to giving up, but the spirits in Heaven deemed it was time; and thus, I was impregnated with my love's baby.
Since the pregnancy and my foal being placed in it's basket as is customary I've been feeling more and more anxious about our foal. After being so startled by the strange, no terrifying, basket the two-leggers had put my precious child into I felt more and more convinced that it was all a mistake. Why would they put my beautiful son or daughter into such a horrific looking basket? That was where I made my first mistake. The foolish blunder of sneaking a peek into the basket.
I'd had lingering memories of a deformed foal from when I'd given birth, but surely nothing the gods would gift me would be so hideous so I'd pushed the images away as post-birth dillerium.
I'd been so wrong.
My child is indeed ugly and twisted. Surely it must be something from my mate's side, as I've never met his family, and my own heritage is too just and faithful to the spirits to have anything so demonic tainting our blood. I just know it's my stallion's fault. I just know it. I attempted to confront him about it, just once, but he refused to talk to me. He even went so far as to not even look at me for several days!
What scares me the most is all the confusion I'm feeling. All the divided thoughts and feelings that haunt me in my dreams and during the day. I don't think I've done anything wrong that this could be my fault, but why does my mate act like it is? Why won't he speak to me? Why won't he just tell me what he did?
What did I do to deserve this?
I can't even look at the basket anymore. At first I'd tried, despite my terror of the creature inside of it. Now though, I can't even do that. The most I can do is watch around the basket to be sure no harm comes to it, and even that is starting to become a chore. The more I'm around the monstrous thing, the more I can feel it's soul calling out to me. Searching for something innocent and pure to latch onto. To draw the life from. It's all starting to be too much.
All I've ever wanted was a baby, a child of my own to love and cherish. Instead I was given a monster.
DEMON PROMPT
Demonn's Name: Silas (Latin for "Of the forest".) Demon's Temper: Penitent Prompt Response:
Old bones and hardened skin creaked as a lone stallion moved about the forest, a small round bottle swinging from his neck as he lumbered about the darkened woods. He never moved anymore like he used to he mused bitterly to himself. Not like the times when he'd once been blessed to live in such magnificent and natural splendor. Even though he still knew in his heart that the landscape that made up his home was beautiful it was also a prison.
"My very own leaf-gilded cage," Silas said aloud to no-one in particular. He knew as he continued his daily pacing that there was nothing about within earshot of his sad old voice. He'd been lucky once, just once, to be found by a troubled wind stallion. That'd been all he'd needed at the time, but as he became increasingly aware of what his life would be now he wasn't entirely sure it had been luck afterall.
Poor, poor Silas. He liked to believe that the growing life around him was whispering that in his ear as the wind blew. Afterall, what else would understand his longing to be free more than the very plants he resembled? Sure, he could move about feely enough; he could probably even leave the forest if he felt inclined to actually show himself to the world. He wasn't worried about physical freedom so much of the shame he felt everytime a stray bird landed on him, mistaking him for a tree. Or the feelings he felt when he caught his own reflection in a pool of water.
At first he'd been angry. Livid. Those violent emotions were what spurred him into making the deal with the troubled wind to begin with. It'd have been the perfect plan, even. Take the child, mold him into the perfect vengeance machine, and starting with it's own family take down everything beautiful in the world. Alright, it wasn't perfect, but the idea had made Silas feel good inside.
As he'd had more time to think about it though, the 'Forest Demon' wasn't feeling it as much anymore. If at all. He knew now that what had happened to him was his fault, even if he'd repressed the specifics, and he knew that his emotional prison was one of his own making. As he thought harder about it he knew that what he wanted most was a second chance. A way to turn the forest into a beautiful place again, to draw his fellow soquili in with a smile. Maybe, just maybe he could still use his child to do that; and definitely it's mother as well. The selfish stallion that was to play at "Father" with Silas' own spawn didn't need to have anything to do with it, and if anything the idiot would just be an unnecessary distraction. He'd have to be done away with, if only because he knew what Silas had been.
The demon of the deep forest could never himself be beautiful again, but his home could be. One family at a time.
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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 12:52 pm
Please save the well-wishing for the main thread - if I get a bunch of posts like that INSIDE the contest thread I will have a harder time finding specific entries sad
I'm sure everyone appreciates it but I don't want to see a chain reaction XD;;
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