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Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 8:16 pm
Damn that was a long time ago. xp
I still look back at my posts then and shutter. I need to start practicing now to get my detailing back up to par with the other elites. Ive been gone for too long and I got some glory to restore. If we had Ice here it would be like old times. The three of us kicking arse if we werent attempting to kick each others. Paul and Ori as well. I still talk to Ori every now and again and he might even attempt to become a member of this team. At anyrate i need to take my leave. I have to get up early for work in the morning. We will continue this tomorow if possible or at least begin discussing our profiles and possible combination attacks.
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Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 8:23 pm
I would really like to be on the team your on if possible. Rather be on one I know people rather then some random other team. And... after all, the three whom have spoken are all fire users, so the things that could explode....
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Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 1:44 pm
Ignore this post as i am leaving it for my brother elade. If anyone does read it please leave feed back, but i cant leave to much discription as I haven't completely figured my character out yet.
Jhen rushed at his oppenent with his amazing speed from the fighting style he learned from back in his homeland. His sword in his left hand was stretched across his chest because of his elbow being bent all the way to a 90 degree angle. In his right hand he held the sheath to his sword tightly but hanging to his side. His black hair bounced back and forth with each step he took. His piercing blue eyes were locked on to his opponent. Watching every move he made and readying his own body to dodge or counter whatever attack his enemy made against him. As he reached a distance of about 3 feet of his opponent he extended his elbow swiping across the enemies chest. As soon as the swipe happened the sheath instantly turned a light brown as if it were the ground underneath him. Those who knew of his fighting style would know that this would mean that his ability to add the power of earth to his attacks was now activated.
(Oppenent responds he blocks the attack with whatever he has not noticing the sheath. Blah blah blah)
Just as planned the fool had blocked the attack with both hands and was leaning his weight into the attack. The enemy would have a slower reaction time this way and gave him all the time he needed to finish him. With his right hand which still held the sheath which was still at his side he quickly brought the sheath up and crossed it with his sword which was still clashed with his opponents. As the sheath touched the sword the brown color would transfer into the into the sword and the words, "Rocky Beast" would be uttered from his mouth. As it was said the ground under his oppenent would break apart and rise throwing him off balance also romoving his sword from the clash. While his opponent barely made it off the ground Jhen would charge forward with his swords dull side pressed into his shoulder. Those who were spectating would swear they had seen a lion appear knocking the strange man away with a force they had never seen before without some kind of magic. The opponent would be hit with the sword slicing him in half, but if by some kind of spell or armor would stop him from being cut the amazing force would have blown his opponent across the battlefield into the giant wall behind him. With his opponent flying the rocks that had come of off the ground would have been sent right after him with the force that had been used on his foe himself.
Tell me what you think as this is my first actual post on gaia like this ever
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Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 10:40 am
I have already talked to him IRL about his post so does anyone have anything to say about his post? Even if its possibly the same thing I have said thats fine. It makes it more believable.
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Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:16 pm
Jhen: To be completely brusque. . . .I liked it. ^^ I'm not exactly sure how you may hold up against an opponent in a fight, but that post was well rounded to say the least. Your tactic seemed well thought out (though I'm not at all sure whether that is the way of your character) and the major specifics (position of weapon, targeted area of attack, etc.) seemed to be covered in your post.
I'm not sure whether you are aware of this or not, but just to be safe as opposed to sorry, make sure not to predict the effect of the attack on your opponent. Once again, with the post you have there, what you have typed up is perfectly fine since there wasn't an actual person you were up against, but be sure to keep that in mind.
As a slight reiteration, you have talent. Work on it. Be observant. Realize who also has talent in RP fighting (your own blood being one of the best to choose from) and learn from them however you may see fit, if convenient.
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Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:23 pm
My main problem with his post was the actual effects of his post as well. The way I see it there would be no way for the earth to force itself forward before the energy shot out. I spoke to him about this as well as his grammer but he will learn in time. His character is actually an original creation that also takes some things from Tales of the Abyss.
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Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:27 pm
I was going to mention the grammar but I am pretty sure that won't take much to fix so I figured it'd be best to leave it out. But yeah, as I said, it was pretty well rounded. He should end up fine in the Gaia fighting realm as long as he is under your guidance and he commits to it.
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Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:31 pm
Hes a lazy SOJ (Son of a jamacan). I donno how hard or easy will be.
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Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:37 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:40 pm
I suppose. He read your post and didnt fully understand it. Hiru and Vilpax should be coming too. Man this is gonna be big.
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Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:46 pm
Heh. Is it going to be a free for all?
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Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:52 pm
Um... No. It will be team vs team. Im not too sure how the preliminaries are gonna work though. Im trying to read it all and get a good understanding but they were very detailed. sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:53 pm
Well, do we even have teams yet?
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Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:55 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:56 pm
We are gonna wait a bit to see whos skills fit better with the other. In this tournament we will be allowed combination assualts. So far we have a number of people who will be here and appropriated to a team once we finish our initial scouting and test spars.
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