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 Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 10:06 pm
There is nothing I would change about that picture. O___O
And if you could color it, that would be beyond epic. For srs. Just remember that, besides the materia, the color scheme should be kind of reminiscent of Yuffie- you know, dark green, khaki, brown, etc... Basically no blues or reds. But really, whatever you think is more epic.
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Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 3:42 pm
*bow* Thankyou, I'll see what I can do ^^
It'll be a while til I get round to coloring though, I have 2 comics to do first biggrin
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Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 5:40 pm
I agree. That is epic. ^^
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Posted: Mon Nov 24, 2008 9:46 pm
39. Dreams Hollow slumber, empty dreams
Passing time til sunlit beams
Flood the windows, alert my eyes
The sun has dawned, a new day arrives
But morning came far too soon;
I begged, I prayed, return the moon!
The vivid mirage that filled my night
Give it back, damn the light!
Beauty unrivaled, no angel compares
The siren, she kept me, so unawares
Perfection in form, human no less,
Waking returned me to reality's mess
Please, sweet angel, visit once more
You left me wounded, heart now tore,
That state, divine, your alluring grace
Please, sweet angel, allow me your face...
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Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 10:29 pm
#??
Hollow callings, desperate heart
Separation, worlds apart
Lead me not into temptation
Bring be home from my damnation
Help my sorrows, help my tears
Abolish all these dreadful fears
Save my soul, my blood, my mind
Shatter this eternal bind
Love that’s lost, or never gained
Lonely life, preordained
Silence fills the empty void
Emotionally paranoid
Crying true from night to night
Like a bird denied its flight
Misery won’t leave me be
It seems I’m stuck, eternally.
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Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2009 4:22 pm
i really like both of them, especially about the dreams. These are really talented pieces, I mean ive read poems but neither really stuck out that much the way yours do, Sory. Top stuff! ^^
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Posted: Sun Jan 04, 2009 8:56 pm
Really cool. I love them. Esspectually the last one. It looks like some sort of summoning or something lol.
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Posted: Tue Jan 20, 2009 12:19 am
Beginning of the End Deathly song, hollow tune
Gracious pain, under the moon
A requiem of genocide
Souls released, horrified
But angel's grace is present yet
For Death still has to pay his debt
The job, though done, is only part;
The Afterlife, here, will start
Guided towards the Golden Gates
The parted stall to hear their Fates
The Book of Life, recording all;
Will you rise, or will you fall?
Ordered line, how will they be?
The judge's choice, his sound decree;
Silent doors, their chosen paths
One, true peace, One, fear'd wrath.
So shall the dead find their way
The Judge foretells, to his dismay
While some may feel immortal fires,
Others get their true desires.
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Posted: Tue Jan 20, 2009 3:19 pm
Wow O.O.
Sory-nii-chan, you are, like, one of the best poets EVAH. You can rhyme, keep a beat, yet your pieces are actually understandable and interesting, unlike the stuff they make us study in school ._.
Dude, you make me so green with envy. BUT I'M STILL HAPPY FOR YOOOOOOOOU mrgreen
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Posted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 9:46 am
That last one... you should get published. eek
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Posted: Fri May 08, 2009 8:47 pm
22. Love
Flutt’ring heart, an angel’s face
Glanced on me, my low disgrace,
Her voice, a tender melody,
How can she stand the sight of me?
Blinding beauty, fragile form
Truly far beyond the norm
Eyes, divine, shine on me still
I am hypnotized by her will
Inhuman grace, she comes my way
A brighter star than light of day
My mortal coil cannot compare
I am not worth her wasted air
Humble Angel, how can you smile?
In no way am I worth your while
But if my living brings you glee
Then forever shall I live for thee.
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Posted: Sat May 09, 2009 3:23 pm
Some people have a hard time how to write love into words but you've did it flawlessly. I really love this poem because of its sincerity, its got alot of heart too it. <3 Well done!
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Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 11:11 am
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Posted: Thu May 21, 2009 10:44 am
Time Heals All
Nearest sins on hallowed ground,
Followed darkly by the sound;
Dragged by pain, Shallow feeling,
Now I shall commence the healing
Crimson life source flowing free,
The tears I shed of agony,
They tell my story, page for page.
Still I lie within my cage.
A bird has wings, joyous flight;
Yet here I'm bound, my dreaded blight.
The blood continues pouring out,
But life goes on, a sorrowed shout.
Clot the wounds, stop this bleed,
Time, the aid, will heal this deed.
Scars run deep, and mem'ries clear;
Shed this pain, no need to fear.
The sun is risen, new day begins,
Time cares not for petty sins.
As sure as the dusk follows the dawn,
I shall forgive, and shall move on.
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 11:55 pm
Surrender
Change unnerving, casting away
All these thoughts, End the day
I shed this skin, this dying shell
One more step, descent to hell
Twisting gales, torrential heart
Tear me down, tear me apart
No more you, no more me
Varying lives of misery
Loves so true, yet running dry
Lasting forever, traitor's ******** the world, serpent's head
Strikes me with a heart of lead
Pesky mem'ries bog me down
Waste of time, my sorrowed frown
What's the point in cycled pain?
Yet here I stand, thanking the rain.
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