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Chapter 6

Chaos stood and dropped the card back down to Valice and walked around behind the couch. She snatched the card out of the air and picked up the rest of the cards and put them into one pile again. Chaos leaned over the couch and his eyes wandered back to the door to the room.
"What's in there?" He asked her.
"Nothing." Said Valice quickly as she put her cards back in their box.
"Then why can't I go in?" He whined
"Because I said so ok!" Valice said standing to go put her cards away.
A soft creak went through the house and Valice turned to the couch, but Chaos wasn't there. She spun around and saw the door to Donavan’s room standing open.
"WHAT THE?!" She yelled.
Valice sprinted to the room wondering how Chaos had gone from behind the couch to her brother's room in the blink of an eye! She came to a stop in the door frame.
"There's not nothing in here!" Chaos said as he jerked his head around the room, trying to see everything at once.
Valice was amazed at her brother's room. When he was alive he didn't believe in cleaning his room so ever sense his death she always assumed that it would be a pigsty. But his room was completely spotless. He's queen size water bed was made and the sheets pulled so tight that you could bounce a quarter off them, his closet stood half open and his three pairs of shoes stood in a straight line and his pants were hung neatly on the rack. His tall dresser was dusted and neat, his sunglasses and car keys still sitting right were he left them.
"I like this room." Chaos said with a smile.
He stuck his clawed finger thought the blinds and peered out the window with a normally wonderful view of the street and hills off in the distance. Valice was at a loss for words. Memories flooded her mind of her brother as everything seemed to jump out at her to reminded her of him. Chaos's sheets rustled as he strode over to the dresser to inspect it as well. He tugged on one of the drawers and it slid open for him. Shirts lay folded nice, neat piles and Chaos’s eyes seem to light up. He grabbed a shirt and held the top of it in his claw. The shirt unfolded it's self to revile some kind of company’s logo on the front. With a careless shrug he tossed it over his shoulder on to the neat floor and started digging around inside the drawer, completely messing up the neat piles.
"HEY! What do you think your doing?!" Valice said as she snatched the shirt out of Chaos's claw and stuffed in back in the drawer. Chaos frowned and then waved his hand as if the shirt was of no great importance.
"It was too scratchy anyway." He said as he turned and flung open the fool to the closet.
"HEY!" Valice shouted again as he began tossing pants out of the closet.
Chaos giggled as Valice scooped up the pants and tried to fold them after Chaos was done flinging them around. He then went for the shoes. The first one was a pair of running shoes that he pulled the laces out of one of them and entertained himself with the string for a moment, but he grew board quickly and tossed the string over his shoulder as well. The next pair was some regular shoes the he tossed quickly, and he hit Valice in the head with one of them as well. The next pair however truly caught his fancy.
"Oooooooooh!" He said as he walked from the closet holding the shoes.
They were boots acutely. Big, black, leather boots that came up to mid calf and buckled down the front with big sliver latches. They even had straps of leather running around the boot in between the latches to give them a very punk look.
"I like these." He said looking over the boots.
"That's nice!" Valice said still rubbing her head where the shoe had hit her. "Now but them back!"
"NO!" Chaos said as he put the boots on his hands. "I want them!"
"You can't have them! Their my brother's and!...."
"WHAT'S THIS?!" Chaos shouted over her as he dropped the boots and jumped on the bed.
There was a big "whoush" as Chaos landed on all fours and the water bed swished back and forth quickly. Valice turned around quickly and blushed as red as Chaos's eyes ringing the pair of pants in her hands. Chaos's sheet had fallen completely off.
"WEEE!!" Chaos squealed as he jumped around the moving bed, completely unaware of his nakedness.
"Would you mind putting on some clothes please!" Valice said harshly but incredibility embarrassed.
"Why?" Asked Chaos as he lay on the bed that was still flowing back and forth.
"Because you can't go running around naked!" She said squeezing her eyes shut.
Chaos sat up cross legged with his hands propping him up and his head tilted back with an aloof look on his face. He gently came to a stop as the water ceased to move beneath him.
"Is that not accepted here?" He asked.
"Of course it's not!" Valice said as she began to see little blue and purple stars from squeezing her eyes. "You can't just go outside with nothing on your body! You'd start a riot!"
"Hmm..." He said to himself. "What do you wear on a body like this?"
Valice tilted her head and arched her eyebrows, what do you wear on a body like this? She asked herself hoping she had missed something.
"What kind of question is that?" She asked Chaos.
"I've never had a body like this." He said casually as he rolled over and pushed himself off the bed.
Valice opened and closed her mouth a few times like she was gong to say something, but she didn't know how to answer, or question him. She really didn't know what to do or say at all, she really did pick up a psycho!
"What is your species called?" Chaos asked as he walked around to Valice.
"I'm a human!" She said very much wanting to open her eyes.
Chaos tilted his head and slowly made a circle around her, looking her up and down with his bloody eyes.
"I've never seen something like you." He said calmly. "I've only seen one kind that comes close, but they are much prettier."
Valice's eyes flew open and a counter argument leapt into her throat, but that was as far as it got. The words froze where they were as she found herself face to handsome face with Chaos. His piercing eyes roamed all over her face and she felt her heartbeat began to race when his eyes looked into hers, up close they didn't seem so shallow.
"But you are very close to them." He said softly.
"PUT THESE ON!" Valice said as she blushed, turned away and shoved the pants into Chaos's chest.
Chaos grunted as Valice punched him in the chest while holding some funny looking piece of black cloth. Chaos looked at them and touched them with a clawed finger.
"What are these?" He asked looking at the cloth now instead of Valice.
"Their called pants! You wear them!" Valice said louder then necessary.
"How?" He asked holding them in both hands now.
Valice shoved Chaos back out of the room with her eyes closed again. Chaos didn't understand but he let the strange female push him into another, smaller room.
"NOW PUT THOSE ON!" She said as she closed the door.
Chaos whipped around and his eyes grew wide.
"I DON'T LIKE IT IN HERE!" He shouted as the walls seemed to press in around him.
Chaos wildly banged on the closed door with his fists.
"LET ME OUT!" He screamed as he pounded the door again.
Instantly the door flew open as he raised his hands to strike the door again. The female was standing there looking quite red but the door was open.
"What?" She asked looking quite bewildered.
"No doors!!" He said he's eyes still wide. "No doors!"
"Ok, Ok." Valice said trying to keep her eyes above his chest. "I won't close the door, but put those pants on ok." She said backing up into Donavan’s room.
Ten minutes later Chaos came back into the room wearing the pants. His bare feet made no noise on the carpet and Valice didn't hear him come in at first.
"Like this?" He asked.
Valice thought her skin would become permanently red. The black pants were snug and rested low on his hips and didn't leave much to Valice’s now wild imagination. His long black hair was pulled back behind him, but still tangled. His chest was completely bear however and his lean body a most deathly white.
"Yes, you got them on right." She said shyly. "Now we need to get you a shirt."

ok my gues is that no one reads this so..... I'll stop posting it

ok... BUT ONLY FOR YOU!!!

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wow i just read it from first page to last and it is awesome. i especially love your way of introducing the fact that her family is dead. also constructive critcism: the three girls (i forgot their names) are to perfect. they are the typical bitchy, popular, suck-up group that every story with characters in highschool has. i dunno how big a part they will play (im guessing they are pretty minor) but it just bugged me. You're doing awesome! keep posting, ill keep reading!





hi rebecca ninja

^ ^" their sapost to be annying and unreal. I want you to hate them... because I liek hateing them!! and I'm almost done!! but be warned... if you dont' like boys kissing boys...you better not read the last parighraph

wow. that was awesome. your writing gets better and better, it really flows. i loved the foreshadowing about the shadow, by the way. i am officially hooked xd