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carry on wayward daughter Vice Captain
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 Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 9:43 pm
Inactive Notices sent out.
Those that recieved one has a week (maybe a few days more, depending on whether or not I forget) to become post.
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 2:58 pm
Sorry it took me so long to post for Lily, I wanted to read the rest of the Hogwarts Express thread so I knew what had been going on.
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carry on wayward daughter Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 7:00 pm
That's fine. You hadn't been approved for long enough to be considered 'inactive'. :}
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Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 2:30 pm
Ok, good. I'm having fun playing Lily though!
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carry on wayward daughter Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 7:58 pm
*lets out an un-modlike squee*
I can't wait until this subforum is hustling and bustling!
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 5:39 am
I can't wait either. If you, or anyone else, have any constructive criticism about how I could play Lily better (if I should start showing that I like James, or if I should keep playing along like I don't- or pretending like she's 'in denial'), it's welcomed!
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carry on wayward daughter Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 4:14 pm
Well, we're playing as sixth years (I think), and it was in sixth year that the levicorpus snape incident happened...
Lily - according to canon, of course - didn't like him, yet. So, go ahead and play that fiery redhead how you feel you should.
In any case, the only constructive criticism that I have is always check your grammar. I'm aiming this at no one in particular, as you all are pretty much doing a decent job, but I must stress it. So, here's a reminder to everyone:
arrow Please write in complete sentences.
Subject with verb and description, always.
Unless you're writing with a type of prose.
arrow Always use third person.
For example
Sirius looked at James. *or* He looked at James.
I looked at James.
Looks at James.
arrow Always use "quotes" around dialog, even if it is a different color. The RP should read like a story.
Well, those are the only common mistakes that I can think of. I'm sorry if I seem a**l about this, but you really should write as if it was part of a story.
I hope I don't chase anyone off by posting this.
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Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 2:21 pm
This post has nothing to do with the RP yay!! I am feeling lonely in two places! Over in my forum (1984-1991), there's me, Tor Petty, and pirate.with.a.guitar It makes me SAD! Secondly, I know that Tor Petty is aware of my station at harrypotterfanfiction.com, so I just wanted to toot my own horn by saying I AM A TRUSTED AUTHOR YAY! I have updated all but 1 of my stories, and would very much appreciate if you stopped by to check them out! [Link]
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carry on wayward daughter Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 4:02 pm
K crying onguetied This post has nothing to do with the RP yay!! I am feeling lonely in two places! Over in my forum (1984-1991), there's me, Tor Petty, and pirate.with.a.guitar It makes me SAD! Secondly, I know that Tor Petty is aware of my station at harrypotterfanfiction.com, so I just wanted to toot my own horn by saying I AM A TRUSTED AUTHOR YAY! I have updated all but 1 of my stories, and would very much appreciate if you stopped by to check them out! [Link]I read the replies to my reviews I wrote last night. And I'm rolling on the ground with laughter. In any case, the Remus-Harry birds & bees talk seems like a GREAT idea! I bet it would turn out funny! You should write it as a one-shot spoof or something, who knows. If you don't mind, I'm going to email you my latest story. It's only 4 chappies long, but I want to see if you have any suggestions.
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Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 9:51 pm
One-shot, hm?? *ponders*
...
Amanda, you are a GOD.
*plans to write one shot at first convenience*
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carry on wayward daughter Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 10:06 pm
I'm a God? Yay!
Oh, and SCORE! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ IT!
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Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 11:39 am
Yo! I totally found SIRIUS's HANDWRITING FONT online!!!!!
I have yet to find any of the other marauders' fonts, but this will become my sole goal in life! Yikes! I'm so happy~!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh, and beware. I was looking for his font for a reason, you'll soon see.
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carry on wayward daughter Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 2:22 pm
Hey, Iggy, you're being a goon! Using fanfiction-ness to intermingle with RP-ness! It took me up to a monite ago to figure out who was writing the fanfiction that also, coincidentally, included Sirius tutoring Lily in Transfiguration...
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Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 2:56 pm
Yeah, I know it's in my story [the idea of it actually came from the RP]. But, for the life of me, I thought it was canon.
Doesn't it say in the books somewhere that Lily was no good at Transfiguration? I mean, it's not canon that Sirius tutored her, but it is canon that Transfiguration was something Sirius accelled at. Right?
Right?
Gawrsh. Now, I'm confused. I thought I was being clever, putting two and two together.
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carry on wayward daughter Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 3:24 pm
I didn't mean it like that! go ahead and put em together if you'd like! I was just confused because I was reading your fic and another Messr.fic at the same time, so I was wondering why the same thing was happening in an RP and the the fic I'm reading in another guild. THEN I remembered
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