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Blo0dD3M0N

PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 5:40 pm


"You fool. You shouldn't be living your life by the Shinobi Codes. Live your own damn life! You can use the Kekkei Genkai can't you? Just further yourself, Confidence, Training and Ability! If you don't, you will fall behind Doku fast! Now, if you want to become a Jounin, and also to prove to everyone else your a strong Shinobi, get off the ground and stop crying! I lived my life worse than yours! I grew up shunned, shunned by everyone around me! I was barely noticed! I had few people ever talk to me, and if anyone did, they would note how destructive and what a freak I was! And where am I now? I'm here, passing on advice to a Chunin. Follow my advice, and stop crying! Get off the ground and prove to everyone you can become a strong Shinobi! Prove to me, that you can actually stand a chance in this world. Face me, and say you CAN!"Saketsu said yelling at the crying Kuro.
PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 7:38 pm


The man in white, although covered in bandages, miraculously reacted to Saketsu's comment. He simply remembered when he himself was a boy a long time ago, however his physical reaction did not give this away.

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 8:14 pm


"sob...y-... your righ saketsu... i... I need to dry my tears, crying never did any good. I need to becom stronger..." Kuro slowly got to his feet. "But im going to need your help, and your secrecy. What im about to show you, you can never tell abybody, understand." Kuro slowly unwraped his right hand to reveal that it has been mutlated. The skin has been worn off of all 4 nucklebones. Scares and burnes cover his hand, and dark lines runover the hand where the chackra network should be. "I cant use chackra with my right hand. My chackra vaines have been destroyed by traning and fights. I need you to helpme controle my chackra. Since you use puppets, your chackra controle should be..." Kuro then noticed a hevily bandaged man leaning aganst a tree and recognized it as one of the forien shinobie. "Who... who is that?" Kuros eyes went wide as he quickly hid his hand.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 9:18 am


"A Friend. Don't mind him. Any secret he finds out about should be well kept, he's one of the most silent people I met in my entire life. Now, about your hands, I have seen this before. One boy back where I used to live made me upset one day, and then I lost control. I fueled my Elbow full of my Demonic Chakra, and got him in the hand. To my surprise it became just like yours. I have studied this, and I came to a conclusion. Most bodies don't react well to a Demonic, or new Chakra. Even a new kind of training can infect. If your training in a way that strains you to the point where you barely can move, that it what will happen. Luckily, I know how to reverse it. Your going to have to stop your training for maybe Two Weeks. It's harsh, but I know you can do it Kuro."Saketsu said watching him, waiting for his reaction, and also on his friend in white against the tree.

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 11:44 am


"...t-... TWO WEEKS!!! THATS IMPOSIBLE! If i stop traning for two weeks,ill be so far behind..." Kuro was agast that saketsu could even ask him to do such a thing. "Im sorry saketsu, but i cant do that."
PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 2:17 pm


"It's either that, or you can suffer damage to your hand. What if you try to channel Chakra through that hand? What if you need to do something that requires use of that very hand? Even if you fall behind, with another hand you will be able to come back up, two times as fast, and with that other hand you can properly use the Fireball Jutsu. Unless you learn how to do one-handed handsigns, your Shinobi life may come to an end...."Saketsu said sternly, trying to get him to reconsider. "But with Medical Treatment, it could take nearly three to five days. But with the Treatment, there's a good chance it could fail, but your hand would heal faster..."Saketsu said in thought.

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 3:14 pm


"You really dont know anything about me. Iv had this injury for 5 years... I can produce jutsu with one hand." Kuro mad a few handsigns. "All you have to do is channel enough chackra from theone hand you have and distribute it evenly. Mizu no Yaiba" Kuros left hand was then coverd in whater that formed into a sharp sword. "You see... I overcame an injury threw more traning...just another thing i have had to do to survive."
PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 5:33 pm


Saruwatari walked back and shouted
"HURRY UP! UN!"
And once again went back to his refuge.

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PetrossTH

PostPosted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 5:39 pm


Kuro smiled. "Well, hese difrent. I gues you betre go saketsu." Kuro sed as he re-wraped his hand. "Ill se you around." He then turned and walked off.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 10:20 am


Kira jumps from tree to tree as she looks around. "I'll have to become familiar with the terrain around here..." She said as she leapt farther into the forest. "I wonder if I can find a good..." Sees a wide open space down below and lands. "Perfect!" She then unsheathes her family's blade. "This is the perfect place to practice, it's far out so I won't have to worry about anyone getting hurt." She then brings the sword's blade to point out in front of her and rapidly practices by slicing some of the trees in the area.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 9:15 am


Pants hard as she sheathes her sword. "Huff huff. That took more blood, than I thought it would..." Kira says as examines her pale skin. "Too soon to take the blood pills. It'd be far too dangerous." She then sits down and rests against a tree. "I wonder what the others are up to. Hmm." Leans against a tree and slowly her eyes begin to close before she shook out of an almost drifting sleep. "Wha-What the!"

A sound comes from the forest and soon a giant snake appears into the huge clearing.

" eek What the hell?! It's enormous! scream " Kira says as she reaches her hand back towards the blade.

The gigantic snake then whaps it's huge tail right at Kira, sending her flying right into a couple of trees.

"Damn! This is not good... mad " Kira struggles to get to her feet. ~How in the world am I gonna defeat this thing at my level of power? Unless...but, it's too dangerous! It may be my only option thought...~ Kira then slowly reaches into her pocket and grabs a case. ~If I can just eat one, I may be able to defeat it...~ Kira slowly struggles to open the case and bring the blood pill close to her mouth...~Just a little closer, just a little closer...~
PostPosted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 5:23 pm


Kuro was walking threw the forest pondering about where Ken had goten to when he felt tremors in the earth. "What the heck was that?" Kuro then dropes to the ground and places his ear to the earth. "Big...scaly...Snake? AND THERS A PERSON THERE!" Kuro jumped up and ran as fast as he could to the small clearing made by the massiv snake. "THATS ENORMOUS!" He than saw the snake strike at her with its masiv mouth. "LEVEL ONE!" Kuro dashed forward as his curse make spred over the right half of his bodie. "MOVE!" Kuro dug his feet into the ground infront of kira and caught the snake's fange to stop it from eating the kunoichi. "MOVE! I CANT HOLD IT LONG!" I have to stay in level one, i cant risk a level 2 transformation.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 6:06 pm


"Kuro-senpai! Katsume-chan!" Upon entering the opening, Kazemaru flew outwards and catching the snake by suprise, Doku then jumped and barely scratched the snake with his claws.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 7:51 pm


Doku isn't strong enough to do any mojor damage. I gues i have no choice. Kuro thought as he closed his eyes and his spiral curse mark started to glow. "Level... two." The mark covered kuro's entire bodie and he became solid black. His hair turned long and white and 2 blue hornes sprouted out of his head. "Boom." Kuro and Kira then vanished to re-apear behind the snake. "Now stay put kira." Kuro steped forward and then vanished only to reapear on the head of the snake. "Time to die." He pulled out his one of his 3 swords with his left hand and thrust it down into the skull of the snake. "Dead... What?" The snake started thrashing around and sent kuro flying as he read up and hissed at the 3 shinobie. Kuro landed next to kira, shock etched on his face. "WHAT! I STABED IT! HOW IS IT STILL ALIVE!?"

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 9:44 pm


The man in bandages perked his head up in response to the dangers. He was caught in the middle of practicing the art of using single-hand seals which gives him the unique abilities of casting dual jutsu at the same time. He then shifts his mummy wrapped face towards one of the snakes, which he simply taps the forehead of the snake with his left index finger.

After striking the snake, he simply turns around and lies back against the tree; his previous position. As the snake begins to retailate it pauses for a second before suddenly collapsing with it's gaping mouth wide open. It was dead for certain, and a liquid of what appeared to be cranial fluid (brain juice) leaked out of the mouth.

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