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 Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2008 5:31 pm
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....SO ADORABLE!!! AIEEEEE~!!! <3 I love it... they're so cute together x]
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 10:18 am
O.o ZOMG it's the kiss of life!....
*hides under her book, face beat red* redface
Byne this is well written! Very good detail and depection of expression and actions. You got Tyue bang on! 3nodding
She's the voice of confidence and reason in the midst of panic.
I'm glad you caught that.
Kyle so sneeky! *shakes fist* xp
...I wonder what I taste like.... tea perhaps? whee
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AldrickZearse Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 1:49 am
((Wow, yay for muses coming back. Yes, I actually CAN do that position, but can't do the split, though I'd think I'd be able to thanks to my class and fighting more)) 9. Drive Rae had been scurrying around the train, trying to keep herself amused during one of their few moments of peace. For riding a magic train on an amazing, legendary journey, it was SO BORING... She had seen Kyla and Maggie talking about boys(mostly Maggie doing the talking and Kyla blushing as she drew in her sketchbook), Kyle and Zexion discussing the subject of reality and the human(and nobody) perception of it, Zell and Silver working in the engine room, and Jenny practicing her flute. She had even seen Kuja doing a little bit of extra primping, making himself go from beautiful to gorgeous. Sighing, she hopped off the train. Aldrick and Bobbi had run off out here for some reason. Maybe they were doing something fun. "Hold still." "I am holding still." "You're talking, that's not holding still." "Will you just shoot the arrow already?" "Do you want me to hit you?" Rae heard the male sigh, and walked a short distance down a small hill, getting a better look at what the fighter and archer were doing. Bobbi, bow at the ready and an arrow notched, had her weapon pointed at the blonde male, who had stuck his staff in the ground and hung off of it upside down in a seemingly awkward position with his head barely off the ground. She just barely managed to notice the kiwi that balanced perfectly on the tip of the boot of Aldrick's free leg. "I thought so. Now shush." After a second, Bobbi let the arrow fly, and Rae watched the Kiwi disappear, being replaced by empty space as the arrow carried it off. "Wow!" Rae burst out. The two fighters looked over at the white mage, Bobbi bowing down and saying "Thank you, thank you. I'm here for...however long we're here." as Aldrick brought his free leg down, let it touch the ground(doing a nice split), then brought the other down to stand upright. "How long have you guys been practicing that?" The two fighters looked at each other, before Al shrugged. "Dunno. a week or two?" "Sounds about right." Rae nodded then, and looked down at Bobbi's feet, noticing the numerous fruits that piled there. Most had arrows already through them, others were in numerous pieces, and maybe three or four were still whole. Aldrick, watching the white mage, sighed as he leaned against his staff. She looked at him, cocking her head in curiosity. "What?" "Tired from hanging like that, but it helps me work on my balance more." "But I thought you already had good balance?" Aldrick looked over at Bobbi, grinning, while the archer grinned back at him. They had had this conversation before, too. "Well, all I really am is a fighter, so I need to keep improving that, keep getting better. Make sure I'm capable of actually pulling off certain moves and defending myself and others. So I train." "And I found him doing it, and realized he had a good point, so every so often, we both take some time to train together. It's always fun to shoot at someone, too." Bobbi added, smiling devilishly. Rae shook her head, smiling. Then laughing, mainly at the image of Al dodging arrows. She trusted Bobbi too much to think she'd hit him. "You know, you could always join us every so often, work on your boomerang skills and what not." Al said, with Bobbi nodding. Rae thought about it for a second, then nodded right when the whistle for the train blew, signaling that they were headed off again. Pulling his staff of the ground, Rae started heading off towards the train with the two fighters, munching on the pear, from the fruit pile, Bobbi decided to toss her way, while Bobbi ate a mango and Al a banana, laughing along the way at bad puns and training mishaps. ((Not as...er...OBVIOUS as my other ones, but still, Al, Bobbi, and now Rae, all have the drive to do better, be better fighters...so...yeah o.o))
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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 9:51 am
I like it Al! Haha the whole image about you dodging arrows made me think of that one scene in Mulan with the I'll Make A Man Out Of You... and the dodging fire arrow-ness...
Oh man... I feel like singing now...
BACK ON TOPIC! I really liked it! You get character personality right on! =D
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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 1:44 pm
BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHA THAT IS EXACTLY WHAT ZEX AND I WOULD DO XDDDDD
Also, very nicely written. I was thinking of pulling something like that eventually, though probably not to that extent of... flexibility xDDD So much for a PG-RP. *cackles*
Also, on the fic before that, very nice *cackles* Honestly, I would probably make a dirty joke like that, but I try my damnedest to keep my dirty mind out of the RP.
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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 6:30 pm
Al, it shocks me how well you get me down. oO Am I really that obvious?! gonk
Just kidding. n_n I'm about as transparent as glass and dense as a brick. ^o^
This is awesome, I love the way you write. Do more, do more!
And I know I read Breathe Again, why didn't I comment on it!? crying I LURVES!!! KyKy is my fave pairing!!! And you put so much feeling into the fic!!!!! If posts had a "favorite" button...
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phoenixianCrystallist Crew
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AldrickZearse Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 3:27 pm
((I'm sure most of you are aware of the ballet The Nutcracker. This is kinda a HA!version of it. Actually this entire story pretty much came from Rae's head. o.o I'm just writing it out. Also, it's not really from the beginning, more like...middle/end to end...)) 61. Fairy Tale Rae, the beautiful sugar plum princess danced around on top of the tower of books like her life depended on it. Actually, it kind of did, considering she had been taken captive by the rats who forced her to dance. She squeezed her eyes shut at the dirty leers and suggestive chuckles. Soon, her knight would come to rescue her...her Nutcracker. "You will unhand the princess as of right now, mangy rats!" Aldrick, the Nutcracker, after climbing on top of the books, drew his saber and pointed it at the nearest rat. The rat that had the blade pointed at him laughed. "And what do you expect to do with that puny blade?" In a blur of motion, the Nutcracker had rushed past the rat, swinging his saber only once. Stopping, the warrior swung his blade in the air once, flinging the small amount of blood off of it, as the rat fell over, dead. "Unhand the princess." Then the rats attacked, and the Nutcracker fought them off, his saber swinging almost wildly, before he noticed Rae still dancing, her eyes shut, towards the end of the books. If she kept dancing, she'd fall off not only the books, but the table as well...! Breaking away from the rats, Aldrick rushed towards the princess, but stopped as something very large and very black suddenly blocked his path. It was at least five times the Nutcracker's size...and furry... "EEEEEKKKKK!!" "Rae!" The beast turned, revealing that it was a very large rat wearing a crown, and in it's large paw it held the sugar plum princess. "...The Rat King." The large rat nodded, smirking...or what looked like a smirk(hard to tell with a muzzle and not a face. Aldrick, in another blur of motion, stabbed the Rat King in his foot, quickly withdrawing after that, hoping the pain would cause the beast to drop the princess... WHACK! The Nutcracker was flung away as he was slammed with the Rat King's tail. "Al!" Rae screamed, suddenly forgetting her own predicament and focusing on the Nutcracker, till she felt the Rat King staring at her. Looking at him, she saw how he was staring at her, and she immediately wanted to cover herself entirely with something...maybe a lead wall... "WHAT ARE YOU DOING?" the Rat King roared, using his free hand to try and reach his back. Curious, Rae leaned as much as she could, and saw Al climbing up the beast's back. "Go, Al!" Aldrick climbed, avoiding the giant paw with the large claws that just barely missed him, and once he got to the head, he raised his saber, and brought the hilt down on the creature's head. The Rat King stopped moving, before starting to fall backwards, off the books, off the table. Aldrick moved quickly, onto the shoulder, down the arm, and grabbing Rae out of the now relaxed paw, leaped down onto the books, barely managing to avoid the fall of the Rat King(Two meanings in one! ^_^ ). "My hero!" Rae cried out, giving the Nutcracker a small peck on the cheek before hugging him. Aldrick embraced the princess, glad that she was finally safe.
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Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2008 5:25 pm
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phoenixianCrystallist Crew
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Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 5:39 pm
DAAAAAAAAARARARARARARARAHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAIAIAIAIAIAIAAAAAAIIIIII!!
Cute. o_o heart
I really do love this one, but I'm such a ballet nerd. xd Nutcracker especially...
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Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 11:10 pm
ALDRICK, YOU SHOULD WRITE THAT FIC AND ANTHONY SHOULD BE THE LION.
(Dun worry, Al knows what this means. xd )
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AldrickZearse Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jan 04, 2009 4:09 pm
I should write that fic...but I actually drew something o.o And am putting it up!  Well, I figured(thanks to Kyou and KA) that if Al would get with Balthier, he'd need a sky pirate outfit. This is it(though, kinda makes me think of a gay prostitute with the chaps for pants and all, and the groin being covered with Lulu-esque belts...). Yeah, didn't draw the body(can't draw a body for some reason o.o At least a male one...), but I don't remember where I got it from...but everything else I drew! though...most was just kinda tracing over the outline...whatever.
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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 1:12 pm
46. Family
"Al, you don't have to do that."
"I know."
"No, really, you've been doing so much lately."
"Don't worry so much, Bobbi. Cooking isn't that hard."
Aldrick stirred the giant pot, the smell of homemade chicken soup filling the dining car. The earthlings needed food, and while grateful of Zell usually doing the cooking...everyone was getting tired of hot dogs. Hence, chicken soup, just like how Aldrick's grandmother made it, except a little less salt and a little more pepper.
Bobbi, ever the worrier of her friends, was obviously worried about Al. He cleaned, helped with people training, let people talk to him and tell him their problems...he was attempting to take care of everyone. And no one was taking care of him...
"Al, at least let me help, then."
Aldrick stared at the soup for a second, as if zoning out,b efore raising his head and smiling. "Okay, sure. We need something to go with the soup. Maybe some pasta noodles. Would you mind getting those ready?"
Bobbi, nodded. Finally, she could help take some of his workload. She headed over to the pantry, and as if the train knew what she wanted, there was a few large boxes of noodles, a large pot, and a large spoon to stir it with.
Bobbi worked at getting the pot filled and set on the stove, next to the soup, and let it start to boil, humming slightly as she read the instructions on the boxes. It wasn't hard to boil noodles, but better safe than sorry, yes?
Clatter
Bobbi looked over. Al had just dropped the spoon for the soup on the floor. He had a hand placed on the counter, and he just stood there.
"Al? You okay?"
"Hm? What?" He looked up at her, almost like he had forgotten she was there, or hadn't been really paying attention.
"You're scaring me, now..."
Aldrick shrugged. "Sorry, I was thinking what my grandmother did to make the soup perfect, but I think I got everything. Now, that spoon...oh, crap. Floor...I'll have to get another one."
The archer watched the fighter go over to the utensils, his face shiny like it was wet. "Are you sweating?"
Aldrick nodded. "Yeah, it's hot. I don't do well with heat."
Bobbi frowned. It wasn't that hot, even with the cooking foods...then she saw Al waver, standing still but rocking from side to side. "...Al...?"
Thud!
"AL!!!" The girl rushed over to the now collapsed male, rolling him over onto his back. His face was red, and slick with sweat. Feeling his forehead, she felt just how hot he was. "Oh god, Al!"
"...s...s..."
"What?"
"...soup....gotta finish..."
Bobbi had had enough, now.
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Aldrick opened his eyes slowly. Wow, his head was hurting...and wet...why was it wet?
The male started to sit up, only to feel a hand on his chest push him back down. "The hell...?"
"Oh, no. I don't think so."
"Bobbi?" Aldrick turned his head, looking at the archer, and a damp rag fell off his forehead.
The archer was glaring at him, and he sank into his pillow a bit.
"You've worked yourself sick. You are SO not getting up till you're better. Now, lie down."
"But--"
"Shut up and eat your damn soup." There was a hint of a smile on her lips as she handed the male a bowl of his soup, noodles on the bottom. It smelled so good.
Sitting up, the teen started eating, blowing on the bits of chicken and carrots and celery to cool them down. After five bites, he frowned.
"What? I thought it was pretty good...you aren't going to be sick, are you?"
Aldrick shook his head, continuing to talk as he ate. "No, it's just that I kinda hoped it would be perfect, just like my grandmother's..."
Bobbi flicked his forehead, and Aldrick looked at her. "That was for...?"
The archer sighed. "Geez, you always this slow when you're sick?"
Aldrick shrugged. "Sometimes. Now, what was the flick for?"
Bobbi sat down, pulling out another bowl from seemingly nowhere from Al's point of view. "One of the main reasons is that you worked yourself to being sick. The other is that you sat there and just got all emo on me."
The teen looked down at his bowl, mumbling. "Sorry...Ow!" Another flick.
"What'd I just say?"
"Jeez! What are you, my big sister?"
Bobbi smiled as she lifted her spoon towards her mouth. "Might as well be...Mmmm, this soup is good."
The two looked at each other, and started laughing, like some unknown joke had passed between just the two of them.
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..........Loosly related to family...mainly cause Al is so the momma of the group, but he and Bobbi are kinda like brother and sister...so does that make Bobbi the favorite aunt?
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AldrickZearse Vice Captain
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phoenixianCrystallist Crew
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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 2:48 pm
HOW THE HELL DO YOU DO IT?!??!!??! xd Again, you got me down perfectly! It's no fair! I can't do that with other people in fics!! rofl
This wasn't stemmed from that PM convo we had, was it? ^o^
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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 11:45 pm
I love it Al! x3 It was so sweet and so true! You are the like the mom!! x3 Wants a hug now =(
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 1:21 pm
Lol, team moms ftw.
Don't put Kyle in the kitchen. He'd start throwing all sorts of things into the soup- to add flavor, of course. I am from Louisiana, after all xDDD. But see, he/I don't realize that people outside of Louisiana think most of our more mild seasonings are still a bit too much for them. xDDD Then again, I got a Canadian hooked on our food...
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