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Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 5:32 pm
Shenco BONA Face Killah Shenco BONA Face Killah Vote goes to Brilliance, the last two bars were crack. Shenco may have got it... if it weren't for all the explanation parts confusing the hell outta me. Brill = Ill EDIT: But yah... try to say their name so it's specific... or at least some sort of way to identify who ur dissin. I never said he was ill. I said him being a transvestite with balls is disgusting. That's usually the meaning of the word ill, other than somebody being nice on the mic, but whatever.... i wasnt talking about that. I meant the s**t he spit was ill. I understood what u meant, but all the explanations could have been held off for later so not to ******** the flow of the rap. EDIT: That or actually apply them into the rap, like some rappers will do. umm, I think he did the same thing as me? Yeah... but he put what he was rapping in bold. You kept all of yours in green and bold... making it kinda hard to know what is what... saying if they accidentally look over the parenthesis like i kept doing. stare
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Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 6:08 pm
BONA Face Killah Shenco BONA Face Killah Shenco BONA Face Killah Vote goes to Brilliance, the last two bars were crack. Shenco may have got it... if it weren't for all the explanation parts confusing the hell outta me. Brill = Ill EDIT: But yah... try to say their name so it's specific... or at least some sort of way to identify who ur dissin. I never said he was ill. I said him being a transvestite with balls is disgusting. That's usually the meaning of the word ill, other than somebody being nice on the mic, but whatever.... i wasnt talking about that. I meant the s**t he spit was ill. I understood what u meant, but all the explanations could have been held off for later so not to ******** the flow of the rap. EDIT: That or actually apply them into the rap, like some rappers will do. umm, I think he did the same thing as me? Yeah... but he put what he was rapping in bold. You kept all of yours in green and bold... making it kinda hard to know what is what... saying if they accidentally look over the parenthesis like i kept doing. stare and that affects the lyrics how?
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Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 7:07 pm
Shenco Okay I have to stop procrastinatin... like seriously sweatdrop I might start doing what I used to do to get in rhythym for this one
I'm exposing him for what he really is, a-tranny-with-balls ill gonk This ain't the E',but I'm bout to strip you down to ya-panties-and-bra wwe, bra and panties match
I go hard on all faggots that stay disrespectin-me why do they even bother And cut they pussies out like a hysterectomy ouch
I got the ak on my back ready to shower-ya-dome needs no explanation Sir brilliance equals p***y and I'm bout to devour-ya-whole neither does this
Why would they really pit me up against Jai's test hater? Jai beat him, little tastes of hate in his mouth wink He's like soulja boy at wal-mart, this kids a payless player that's sad sad
Yea your rhymes are good,but they always seem so trite though trite-common,overused You couldn't save ya career even if it was insured by geico I just saved 10% on my auto insurance come to think of it biggrin Hm... i don't know. How about you read it the way i did. =/
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Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 10:57 am
-looks for one more vote for him or two more for shenco- PWEASE VOTE! crying
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Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 4:11 pm
Sir Brilliance -looks for one more vote for him or two more for shenco- PWEASE VOTE! crying Actually you have 3 votes and I have two which meANS THAT THIS WILL HAVE TO GO TO WHO GETS 5 VOTES FIRST (SORRY FOR ALL CAPS JUST DIDN'T FEEL LIKED PRESSING CAPS LOCK)
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Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 4:12 pm
BONA Face Killah Shenco Okay I have to stop procrastinatin... like seriously sweatdrop I might start doing what I used to do to get in rhythym for this one
I'm exposing him for what he really is, a-tranny-with-balls ill gonk This ain't the E',but I'm bout to strip you down to ya-panties-and-bra wwe, bra and panties match
I go hard on all faggots that stay disrespectin-me why do they even bother And cut they pussies out like a hysterectomy ouch
I got the ak on my back ready to shower-ya-dome needs no explanation Sir brilliance equals p***y and I'm bout to devour-ya-whole neither does this
Why would they really pit me up against Jai's test hater? Jai beat him, little tastes of hate in his mouth wink He's like soulja boy at wal-mart, this kids a payless player that's sad sad
Yea your rhymes are good,but they always seem so trite though trite-common,overused You couldn't save ya career even if it was insured by geico I just saved 10% on my auto insurance come to think of it biggrin Hm... i don't know. How about you read it the way i did. =/ wELL USUALLY WHEN i DO THAT PEOPLE ARE AWARE ENOUGH TO SEE THE PARENTEHESIS
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Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 5:07 pm
Shenco BONA Face Killah Shenco Okay I have to stop procrastinatin... like seriously sweatdrop I might start doing what I used to do to get in rhythym for this one
I'm exposing him for what he really is, a-tranny-with-balls ill gonk This ain't the E',but I'm bout to strip you down to ya-panties-and-bra wwe, bra and panties match
I go hard on all faggots that stay disrespectin-me why do they even bother And cut they pussies out like a hysterectomy ouch
I got the ak on my back ready to shower-ya-dome needs no explanation Sir brilliance equals p***y and I'm bout to devour-ya-whole neither does this
Why would they really pit me up against Jai's test hater? Jai beat him, little tastes of hate in his mouth wink He's like soulja boy at wal-mart, this kids a payless player that's sad sad
Yea your rhymes are good,but they always seem so trite though trite-common,overused You couldn't save ya career even if it was insured by geico I just saved 10% on my auto insurance come to think of it biggrin Hm... i don't know. How about you read it the way i did. =/ wELL USUALLY WHEN i DO THAT PEOPLE ARE AWARE ENOUGH TO SEE THE PARENTEHESISyah... but as i said, they still trip up the flow. Anyways, it was tight a** rap... i just felt Brill's last 2 bars punched harder. Not like it really matters if u lose, u have more wins on ur belt than Brill, right?
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Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 6:22 pm
BONA Face Killah Shenco BONA Face Killah Shenco Okay I have to stop procrastinatin... like seriously sweatdrop I might start doing what I used to do to get in rhythym for this one
I'm exposing him for what he really is, a-tranny-with-balls ill gonk This ain't the E',but I'm bout to strip you down to ya-panties-and-bra wwe, bra and panties match
I go hard on all faggots that stay disrespectin-me why do they even bother And cut they pussies out like a hysterectomy ouch
I got the ak on my back ready to shower-ya-dome needs no explanation Sir brilliance equals p***y and I'm bout to devour-ya-whole neither does this
Why would they really pit me up against Jai's test hater? Jai beat him, little tastes of hate in his mouth wink He's like soulja boy at wal-mart, this kids a payless player that's sad sad
Yea your rhymes are good,but they always seem so trite though trite-common,overused You couldn't save ya career even if it was insured by geico I just saved 10% on my auto insurance come to think of it biggrin Hm... i don't know. How about you read it the way i did. =/ wELL USUALLY WHEN i DO THAT PEOPLE ARE AWARE ENOUGH TO SEE THE PARENTEHESISyah... but as i said, they still trip up the flow. Anyways, it was tight a** rap... i just felt Brill's last 2 bars punched harder. Not like it really matters if u lose, u have more wins on ur belt than Brill, right? How can something that's not even part of the rap trip up the flow? I don't mind losing,but losing because somebody couldn't see the parentheses and know that anything in parentheses is either to explain something or write a little comment about your line, thats when it matters a whole lot
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Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 6:31 pm
Shenco Sir Brilliance -looks for one more vote for him or two more for shenco- PWEASE VOTE! crying Actually you have 3 votes and I have two which meANS THAT THIS WILL HAVE TO GO TO WHO GETS 5 VOTES FIRST (SORRY FOR ALL CAPS JUST DIDN'T FEEL LIKED PRESSING CAPS LOCK)eh wuteva as lone as mofo's funckin vote
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Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 6:36 pm
Damn do anybody wanna vote on this one?
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Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 6:39 pm
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Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 7:19 pm
Shenco BONA Face Killah Shenco BONA Face Killah Shenco Okay I have to stop procrastinatin... like seriously sweatdrop I might start doing what I used to do to get in rhythym for this one
I'm exposing him for what he really is, a-tranny-with-balls ill gonk This ain't the E',but I'm bout to strip you down to ya-panties-and-bra wwe, bra and panties match
I go hard on all faggots that stay disrespectin-me why do they even bother And cut they pussies out like a hysterectomy ouch
I got the ak on my back ready to shower-ya-dome needs no explanation Sir brilliance equals p***y and I'm bout to devour-ya-whole neither does this
Why would they really pit me up against Jai's test hater? Jai beat him, little tastes of hate in his mouth wink He's like soulja boy at wal-mart, this kids a payless player that's sad sad
Yea your rhymes are good,but they always seem so trite though trite-common,overused You couldn't save ya career even if it was insured by geico I just saved 10% on my auto insurance come to think of it biggrin Hm... i don't know. How about you read it the way i did. =/ wELL USUALLY WHEN i DO THAT PEOPLE ARE AWARE ENOUGH TO SEE THE PARENTEHESISyah... but as i said, they still trip up the flow. Anyways, it was tight a** rap... i just felt Brill's last 2 bars punched harder. Not like it really matters if u lose, u have more wins on ur belt than Brill, right? How can something that's not even part of the rap trip up the flow? I don't mind losing,but losing because somebody couldn't see the parentheses and know that anything in parentheses is either to explain something or write a little comment about your line, thats when it matters a whole lotim not saying that's what lost it for u tho... i went back and read it so I wasnt ******** it up w/ the parenthesis. i said it earlier... i just felt Brill threw a big punch w/ those last two bars. ((and i don't think enough ppl come here anymore to really get the votes we need... people are being lazy. lol
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Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 5:53 pm
BONA Face Killah Shenco BONA Face Killah Shenco BONA Face Killah Shenco Okay I have to stop procrastinatin... like seriously sweatdrop I might start doing what I used to do to get in rhythym for this one
I'm exposing him for what he really is, a-tranny-with-balls ill gonk This ain't the E',but I'm bout to strip you down to ya-panties-and-bra wwe, bra and panties match
I go hard on all faggots that stay disrespectin-me why do they even bother And cut they pussies out like a hysterectomy ouch
I got the ak on my back ready to shower-ya-dome needs no explanation Sir brilliance equals p***y and I'm bout to devour-ya-whole neither does this
Why would they really pit me up against Jai's test hater? Jai beat him, little tastes of hate in his mouth wink He's like soulja boy at wal-mart, this kids a payless player that's sad sad
Yea your rhymes are good,but they always seem so trite though trite-common,overused You couldn't save ya career even if it was insured by geico I just saved 10% on my auto insurance come to think of it biggrin Hm... i don't know. How about you read it the way i did. =/ wELL USUALLY WHEN i DO THAT PEOPLE ARE AWARE ENOUGH TO SEE THE PARENTEHESISyah... but as i said, they still trip up the flow. Anyways, it was tight a** rap... i just felt Brill's last 2 bars punched harder. Not like it really matters if u lose, u have more wins on ur belt than Brill, right? How can something that's not even part of the rap trip up the flow? I don't mind losing,but losing because somebody couldn't see the parentheses and know that anything in parentheses is either to explain something or write a little comment about your line, thats when it matters a whole lotim not saying that's what lost it for u tho... i went back and read it so I wasnt ******** it up w/ the parenthesis. i said it earlier... i just felt Brill threw a big punch w/ those last two bars. ((and i don't think enough ppl come here anymore to really get the votes we need... people are being lazy. lol cool,see I thought you were just voting for him because you missed the parentheses, but if you thought his last two lines were what won it for him then that's cool
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Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 6:08 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 6:38 pm
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