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 Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 10:03 am
Clarification please: what's interesting, the storyline or the character? Most likely its the character, but I have to be sure...
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 10:14 pm
I was actually saying that I felt interesting sweatdrop
Though I think that the story does sound interesting. Especially since you've recognised that it does sound kind of Mary-Sue-ish so you'll be trying to improve it ^^
I, personally, can't stand it if the author doesn't look at their own story and recognise its weaknesses and try to improve on them. Possibly why I've been accused of writing flames every now and again sweatdrop
It's a pet peeve.
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 8:45 am
Oh. oops.
The problem I have right now is that the fanfic was based on a dream I had that one night. All the events in it are a portrayal of real life, hence the characters are, too. The only events not real are the Beyblade tournaments and such; those came from the dream. So... how do I make my character un-Mary Sue-ish yet keep her close to the real-life me - since all other characters are true to their real-life selves - and how not to deviate too far from the dream? I could eliminate all possibility of more than a friendly relationship between Kai and said OC, but other than that, I don't know where else to go.
Heheh... we all do that at some point. 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 1:15 am
*salutes* Gonna leave that one to you ^^ I've never written a story that has any resemblance to real life (Except maybe a few character portrayals) SO I'm not the person to help you.
Sorry sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 10:44 am
No big, panda. I'm just glad no one from my high school has read it yet; most of the characters are sooooo obvious! sweatdrop I'll figure something out... as soon as I finish this beast of an essay...
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Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 12:34 am
^^ I'm sooo glad I'm on my september holidays.
It's only two weeks but it's two weeks of NO assignments
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Posted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 4:49 am
RAAKII da yo~ *muuu~* (Lucky... *pout*)
Err...yes, I break out in Japanese at random moments, especially now that I've started reading original manga on a daily basis.
Ah, well, I finished the essay...and I have two more to do. gonk Looks like my fanfics will have to wait...
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Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 4:39 am
*points out that 'Rakii' is Lucky pronounced with a crippling Japanese accent* XD
Oo... Fanfics... yes...
I finially finished another chapter of my on-going fanfic. Now I have to work up the motivation to type it out ^^
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Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 5:30 am
In therms of family my dad sucks.
Terms of storyline and characters: I say the storyline but better if both.
I put a lot or someone what recognizable real life experience if you know me or you are involved. Since I haven't shown anyone yet they don't know how I really feel but somewhat stretched but true.
Fanfiction or story is an impossible dream. What development that happens to my characters is not true to me.
ps. It may be a possibility that because I have still to learn and I am not finished therefore none of it is finished. 'SIGN' An artist appreciated after death
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Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 5:48 am
...whut?
Sorry sweatdrop having a blonde day. so I didn't understand any of that. ^^;
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Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 1:43 am
pandapjays ...whut? Sorry sweatdrop having a blonde day. so I didn't understand any of that. ^^;
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Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 11:01 pm
Hey you...
Fantasy Beyblade moment:
Kai suavely walking away from a crucial victory, only to
uncharacteristicly trip over Joe-Scarf and faceplant on asphalt.
lol I get the warm-fuzzies just thinking about it.
...BAM! BAM! BAM!
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NeferiouslyNotoriousWolfy
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Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 5:41 am
ILU.
When I can't sleep at night I will pull out that image and immediately feel warm inside
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Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 6:47 am
Hey you...
It's such a comforting image, isn't it? For all it's
OOCness, it just seems like the right thing.
Beyblade needs bloopers, the more warm fuzzies
the world can get, the better. . . . unless it's hot
mold, nobody wants that. Ew, grosss. D:>
ILU2! <33
...BAM! BAM! BAM!
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NeferiouslyNotoriousWolfy
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Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 6:16 am
...Kai walking on a Catwalk is warm and fuzzy?
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