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 Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 2:05 pm
Everything was a blur. Him falling from the sky landing in someones arms. He heard a voice telling him he was okay now. Confused and tired he closed his eyes and passed out.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 2:57 pm
Her bangs cascades across her left eye covering a vast majority of it. She reached up towards her shirt only to smooth it out, picking off any traces of lint. The young girl looked up to nothing in particular as she brought her left leg up, so that her foot can rest against the wall. Her mid-thigh length red skirt flared up a little bit in the process. Crossing her arms over her chest she then began to look for another way out, “This is hopeless, what’s the point of continuing on if I can’t even find my way out of here?”
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 3:17 pm
zaku walked throught the forest to find a good place to think.
"zaku...zaku...zaku" taunted his blade as he found a nice quiet place but was inturpted by the someone's yelling.
"what now" he thought as he walked to find some angles fighting amongst echother. "this should prove interesting" zaku thought as he sat down.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 3:23 pm
Cathal spread his six wings and took off into the sky. The young angel still lay in his arms. Soaring over the forest, Cathal sighed.
I can't believe this younger generation. Always so angsty.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 3:35 pm
Aaron felt wind in his face. He slowly opened his eyes. His surroundings slowly materialized. He was flying in the sky in the hands of another angel. This angel looked very powerful but different then most. He had 6 wings instead of two.
"W-w-who are you?" He asked
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 3:35 pm
"hmm missed it oh better get back might be an assignment i need to take care of" he thought as he got up and walked back to demonlia.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 3:39 pm
Cathal looked upon the angel in his arms.
"I am Cathal Xantiel, Seraphim of Angeliona."
He flapped his wings a few times.
"Who might you be?"
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 3:47 pm
Sighing heavily, she pushed off the tree with her foot that was propped up against the rough bark. Heading back into the woods once more, trying to find her way out. She looked up into the sky, seeing another angel fly by. Tilting her head to the side, Mika brought her gaze back to the ground practically tripping over a few tree roots, "God, damnit!" She yelled to her self. Sitting still on the ground, feeling a light sting of pain through her ankle; she twisted it wrong. Keeping her leg out infront of her, moving her foot every which way to make the pain go away.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:02 pm
Solomon Marquis Cathal looked upon the angel in his arms.
"I am Cathal Xantiel, Seraphim of Angeliona."
He flapped his wings a few times.
"Who might you be?" "I'm Aaron Selini of angelonia other than that I dont know who I am" He couldnt say much for it was true he did not know who his parents were he didnt know anything just his name and were he started life.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:09 pm
Cathal shrugged a bit.
"Hmm... that's too bad. We could always have a look at the archives once we get back to Angeliona."
He could see the city. It wasn't very far away and he grinned at its sight.
"I haven't been here in years."
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:38 pm
He looked at where they were headed a huge city built of white marble with one beautiful white marble castle. ANGELONIA! No I cant I have to get back. He started flialing his arms he could not go back he couldnt
"No you cant take me here you dont know what happenes every time I come here please no" He said struggling
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:45 pm
Cathal uprighted himself, hovering in mid air. He raised an eyebrow.
"What are you talking about? This is Angeliona, not Angelius"
He quietly awaited an answer.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:49 pm
((coughthatswhatImeantcough))
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:53 pm
Cathal sighed and shook his head.
"Why are you afraid to return? What has you so scared? You're an angel... I assume you were in that war. I thought you would be tougher than this."
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:57 pm
Solomon Marquis Cathal sighed and shook his head.
"Why are you afraid to return? What has you so scared? You're an angel... I assume you were in that war. I thought you would be tougher than this." He couldnt tell him about the trance. It always happened at Angeliona. He couldnt control himself and people would get hurt. But he had to tell him or else he would take him "Because things happen when I go there. People get hurt. I cant tell you any more just take me back" He said with a sigh.
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