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"Darn it." Ginji yelled out loud as he sulked off to the corner with a red pen in hand. Unless someone else had a red pen in hand and was ready to grade the mission before him.

I'm going to have to yell at Thard for his rewording of the missions, as it caused you to break one of the rules. While it was a great mission with awesome story and everything, you failed to complete the primary objective, "Catch a Fire Pokemon"

And the rule that you broke is right here.
2. All Pokemon must be caught in a mission or RP.
I tried doing that once with my first Aqua mission and it didn't go so well. I had to submit that thing like 7 times at least.

My suggestion: Resubmit with an extra paragraph or two where you get the right to fight and capture the Growlithe, and have someone heal your Pokemon.

"well, if noone wants to go, ill be on the beach, training. can you tell me who know anything about fire manipulation? send me a message on the TADS. see ya!" said tommy as he walked through the teleporter on to the beach.

I'm going to have to yell at Thard for his rewording of the missions, as it caused you to break one of the rules. While it was a great mission with awesome story and everything, you failed to complete the primary objective, "Catch a Fire Pokemon"

And the rule that you broke is right here.
2. All Pokemon must be caught in a mission or RP.
I tried doing that once with my first Aqua mission and it didn't go so well. I had to submit that thing like 7 times at least.

My suggestion: Resubmit with an extra paragraph or two where you get the right to fight and capture the Growlithe, and have someone heal your Pokemon.

Kisumi looked apologetic as she took the report back. "Sorry, I didn't know.."she replied, embarrassed. "Crap. I gotta go do something first. I'll edit through it, and then turn it in when i get back...Sorry about the mistake!" she said, hurriedly stuffing the paper into her bag and rushing out the door of HQ.

"Maddy, but she got her's from the Shaids Virus a few months back. So I doubt she'd actually be able to teach you anything." Ginji laughed as he thought about the explosives that she was good at. "Well, I know about fire, but I'm not sure if I can manipulate it." Ginji laughed half-heartedly.

"well, i guess ill have to be a first. heh. can you teach me about fire and stuff. unless its like common knowledge and stuff. scratch that, tell me anyways." tommy urged ginji. he was serious about this.

Ginji yawned. "Okay. Fire. Fire is the rapid oxidation of a combustible material releasing heat, light, and various reaction products such as carbon dioxide and water. Oxygen is highly burnable and helps the combustion reach its maximun potential." Ginji explained a she released Arcanine. The fire-type roared as it released a flame.

"Flame is more less the physical embodiment of emotion. Lose your temper, the flame gets more powerful but out of control, and it can harm those around you. Being calm releases a weaker flame, but it's more deadly as it's more precise." Ginji explained, this was his first time manipulating fire in awhile.

Arcanine launched a Flamethrower at the boy, taking a deep breath, he moved his hands to intercept it, and redirected it up to the sky. "Got it all?"

"Good thing I brought some Burn Heal with us. I don't expect you to get this on your first try." Ginji smiled as he pointed dramatically at Tommy. "Good thing you're ready. Arcanine! Ember!" he ordered as the Pokemon launched a weak flame move at Tommy.