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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 1:32 pm
Maddy awoke and looked over at Dark. "OH SHNAP!! Dark, you ok?" She crawled over an began poking him.
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 1:33 pm
Cody0827 Psychotech Mission: Positive Reaction Any Team Aqua Member is asked to catch a Plusle. Plusle are commonly found along Route 110, but have been seen in Mr. Backlot's Trophy Garden on occasion. Pokemon: Plusle Funds upon completion: 500 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
How about that! Your first mission... I think... Anyways, very nice. One thing I wanted to point out, instead of using Berg, Berg, Berg all the time, try something to give it more spice. Throw in words like "the trainer", or "the boy", or even something as simple as "he". Also, something I was kind of hoping for was something like Mr. Backlot appearing and giving you the "Well, doesn't tat make you envious." speech like he does in the games. I'm not deducting points for it, I'm just saying it would've been a nice addition. Keep the Plusle and the 500 PD. I look forward to reading more of your missions. Berg nodded, "Thanks a lot, really. That was actually my second mission, but who's counting right? Haha. I'll keep working on it."He looked down at his companion and laughed. This is proving to be pretty fun...
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 1:34 pm
MaddyMage Maddy awoke and looked over at Dark. "OH SHNAP!! Dark, you ok?" She crawled over an began poking him. "I.... hate my... Pokemon....and gravity." He mutters, not picking his face off the ceiling.
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 1:35 pm
Memo walked over to Cody. "Say Cody how'd Mr.Bangi end up on the...celing?" The boy asked with a blank stare and a sweat drop on his face.
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 1:36 pm
x-cupids arrow-x Sammy nodded. "Isn't it greeeeat?~" she chimed to Mr. Cody's observation. "Just out of curiosity, am I really your 'hun'?" she asked, raising an eye brow. Cody smiled and nodded back. "It is pretty great. I love it when Aqua is active like this. It shows dedication." Hearing her next statement, he blushed, putting an arm behind his head. "Uh... Do you want to be?"
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 1:36 pm
"Alright guys, I think I'm gunna turn in early. Two missions so quickly have tired me out. I'll be back later for sure."
Berg walked to the teleporter in hopes of finding a nice napping spot somewhere in Hoenn.
((Off to work. For the second time today...))
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 1:37 pm
Maddy waved at Memo. "I can control the gravitational pull between things." She told him.
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 1:38 pm
Sammy waved bye to Berg, then looked at Mr. Cody, for the first time, her cheeks obviously turning a bright red. "I-I dunno... bakka..." she muttered, folding her arms. The easiest way out of an awkward situation was always to call someone stupid. That's how she saw it.
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 1:40 pm
"Wow, thats awesome Ms.Maddy." Memo said as he looked up at Mr.Bangi. The boy's face then turned a bit worried. "Sayyyyy, is he gonna be OK?" He asked already looking for a can of oil and some tools.
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 1:42 pm
Maddy gradually reduced the gravitational pull between Dark and the ceiling so he was gently floated down to the floor. "Yeah, he should be ok. Anyone else wanna come up here with me?" She asked.
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 1:42 pm
"Well, I mean... It's up to you..." Cody replied, completely forgetting the meaning of bakka. Uxie interrupted with a small, "Awww"
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 1:43 pm
MaddyMage Maddy gradually reduced the gravitational pull between Dark and the ceiling so he was gently floated down to the floor. "Yeah, he should be ok. Anyone else wanna come up here with me?" She asked. The moment Bangira touches the ground he's quickly on his feet. He runs down to his lab and the sound of something heavy smashing against the ceiling is heard. Along with the crashes the sound of a Rhyperior yelling in pain can be heard.
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 1:44 pm
Memo decided to walk away from Sammy and Cody as he let out a quiet, "Awwww<3" The boy then looked up at Ms.Maddy and gave a peace sign. "Uhh would you mid if i tried hehe."
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 1:45 pm
Sammy was about to reply to Mr. Cody when she heard a loud yell. "Eh?!" she asked, knowing that was Destroyer. She then realized. "Ooooh. I get it; payback~" she snickered.
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 1:47 pm
"Up you all come!!" Maddy snapped her fingers and instead of pulling only Memo onto the ceiling, she pulled Cody and Sammy along as well. "Yay!!"
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