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Hedoro Koutai

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PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 11:42 am


pawntakesknight
hedoro: i actually like your technique. it might be a tad powerful... but even if it was depowered slightly it would still be a formidable technique.
im still working on mine. i kinda hope they seem minorly interesting besides the name of the technique haha.


Yeah, it's kind of hard to water down a real disease, and the only reason I used rabies was because it used to be called Hydrophobia. I'm sticking to a rather obvious theme with my made-ups, after all. (Aqua Vitae, Aqua Mirabilis, Hydrophobia, and my next one might be Water Displacement)
PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 11:43 am


Hedoro Koutai
pawntakesknight
i like gummi....or taffy. either one works haha


How about gummies that eat you? Hedoro is getting revenge for all the millions of gummy bears who've been devoured!

Komen, how about:

Chakra Spike Connection. This move requires both the Chakra Spike Armor and the Chakra Conenction technique. As the spikes form, they are connected to Komen via chakra strings, where he can lash them out and pull them back at will.
That's the basics, I could explain it in greater detail if needed.
wahhh that'd be awesome. hmmmm let me see if I can make it deadlier ^^;;;;

Komenusai


Hedoro Koutai

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PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 11:47 am


Komenusai
Hedoro Koutai
pawntakesknight
i like gummi....or taffy. either one works haha


How about gummies that eat you? Hedoro is getting revenge for all the millions of gummy bears who've been devoured!

Komen, how about:

Chakra Spike Connection. This move requires both the Chakra Spike Armor and the Chakra Conenction technique. As the spikes form, they are connected to Komen via chakra strings, where he can lash them out and pull them back at will.
That's the basics, I could explain it in greater detail if needed.
wahhh that'd be awesome. hmmmm let me see if I can make it deadlier ^^;;;;


Maybe add something that if a spike enters your opponent, if pulled out it tears a chunk out of them, like a serrated arrowhead? Either physical wound or chakra bleeding?
PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 11:52 am


Chakra Spike Connection - This move requires both the Chakra Spike Armor and the Chakra Conenction technique. As the spikes form, they are connected to Komen via chakra strings, where he can lash them out and pull them back at will causing serious physical damage. The range of these whip like spikes extend 3 meters every 10k of chakra the user possesses.

With this technique, A Hyuuga User is able to strike at Tenketsu points from a distance rather then with their fingers to stop the tenketsu point from working. Deadly accuracy and contact with vital organ tenketsu's (heart, brain, kidney etc) Will cause that organ to stop functioning for the rest of the battle. Causing serious internal injuries throughout the entire battle.

((think this is too much ^^;;; ))

Komenusai


Hedoro Koutai

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PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 11:56 am


Komenusai
Chakra Spike Connection - This move requires both the Chakra Spike Armor and the Chakra Conenction technique. As the spikes form, they are connected to Komen via chakra strings, where he can lash them out and pull them back at will causing serious physical damage. The range of these whip like spikes extend 3 meters every 10k of chakra the user possesses.

With this technique, A Hyuuga User is able to strike at Tenketsu points from a distance rather then with their fingers to stop the tenketsu point from working. Deadly accuracy and contact with vital organ tenketsu's (heart, brain, kidney etc) Will cause that organ to stop functioning for the rest of the battle. Causing serious internal injuries throughout the entire battle.

((think this is too much ^^;;; ))


No, maybe give it just a little drawback or modifier, like a range limit (within your mandala, perhaps?) or something to that effect? Other than that I don't see it being too strong. Are the spikes visible?
PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 12:02 pm


Hedoro Koutai
Komenusai
Chakra Spike Connection - This move requires both the Chakra Spike Armor and the Chakra Conenction technique. As the spikes form, they are connected to Komen via chakra strings, where he can lash them out and pull them back at will causing serious physical damage. The range of these whip like spikes extend 3 meters every 10k of chakra the user possesses.

With this technique, A Hyuuga User is able to strike at Tenketsu points from a distance rather then with their fingers to stop the tenketsu point from working. Deadly accuracy and contact with vital organ tenketsu's (heart, brain, kidney etc) Will cause that organ to stop functioning for the rest of the battle. Causing serious internal injuries throughout the entire battle.

((think this is too much ^^;;; ))


No, maybe give it just a little drawback or modifier, like a range limit (within your mandala, perhaps?) or something to that effect? Other than that I don't see it being too strong. Are the spikes visible?
yup yup. Like Neji's heavenly spin is visible. The range is stated so I think that should be ok. 3 meters of movements and reach for every 10k of SP the user possesses. hmmm you think I should make it so my entire body (all my tenketsu points) would be able to project these spiked tendrils? or just a select few spots (arms, legs, torso, etc)

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Hedoro Koutai

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PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 12:03 pm


Komenusai
Hedoro Koutai
Komenusai
Chakra Spike Connection - This move requires both the Chakra Spike Armor and the Chakra Conenction technique. As the spikes form, they are connected to Komen via chakra strings, where he can lash them out and pull them back at will causing serious physical damage. The range of these whip like spikes extend 3 meters every 10k of chakra the user possesses.

With this technique, A Hyuuga User is able to strike at Tenketsu points from a distance rather then with their fingers to stop the tenketsu point from working. Deadly accuracy and contact with vital organ tenketsu's (heart, brain, kidney etc) Will cause that organ to stop functioning for the rest of the battle. Causing serious internal injuries throughout the entire battle.

((think this is too much ^^;;; ))


No, maybe give it just a little drawback or modifier, like a range limit (within your mandala, perhaps?) or something to that effect? Other than that I don't see it being too strong. Are the spikes visible?
yup yup. Like Neji's heavenly spin is visible. The range is stated so I think that should be ok. 3 meters of movements and reach for every 10k of SP the user possesses. hmmm you think I should make it so my entire body (all my tenketsu points) would be able to project these spiked tendrils? or just a select few spots (arms, legs, torso, etc)


Hmm, considering the Gentle Fist style can emit chakra from the entire body, I don't see why not your entire body.
PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 12:05 pm


Hedoro Koutai
Komenusai
Hedoro Koutai
Komenusai
Chakra Spike Connection - This move requires both the Chakra Spike Armor and the Chakra Conenction technique. As the spikes form, they are connected to Komen via chakra strings, where he can lash them out and pull them back at will causing serious physical damage. The range of these whip like spikes extend 3 meters every 10k of chakra the user possesses.

With this technique, A Hyuuga User is able to strike at Tenketsu points from a distance rather then with their fingers to stop the tenketsu point from working. Deadly accuracy and contact with vital organ tenketsu's (heart, brain, kidney etc) Will cause that organ to stop functioning for the rest of the battle. Causing serious internal injuries throughout the entire battle.

((think this is too much ^^;;; ))


No, maybe give it just a little drawback or modifier, like a range limit (within your mandala, perhaps?) or something to that effect? Other than that I don't see it being too strong. Are the spikes visible?
yup yup. Like Neji's heavenly spin is visible. The range is stated so I think that should be ok. 3 meters of movements and reach for every 10k of SP the user possesses. hmmm you think I should make it so my entire body (all my tenketsu points) would be able to project these spiked tendrils? or just a select few spots (arms, legs, torso, etc)


Hmm, considering the Gentle Fist style can emit chakra from the entire body, I don't see why not your entire body.
cool ^_^ now then let me check up on your made-up. I don't know if I can but I think I can approve your made-ups ^^;;;; since I am a mod. Bone did it alot when he was here. Just contraversial ones like instant kills I can't touch.

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Hedoro Koutai

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PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 12:08 pm


Komenusai
Hedoro Koutai
Komenusai
Hedoro Koutai
Komenusai
Chakra Spike Connection - This move requires both the Chakra Spike Armor and the Chakra Conenction technique. As the spikes form, they are connected to Komen via chakra strings, where he can lash them out and pull them back at will causing serious physical damage. The range of these whip like spikes extend 3 meters every 10k of chakra the user possesses.

With this technique, A Hyuuga User is able to strike at Tenketsu points from a distance rather then with their fingers to stop the tenketsu point from working. Deadly accuracy and contact with vital organ tenketsu's (heart, brain, kidney etc) Will cause that organ to stop functioning for the rest of the battle. Causing serious internal injuries throughout the entire battle.

((think this is too much ^^;;; ))


No, maybe give it just a little drawback or modifier, like a range limit (within your mandala, perhaps?) or something to that effect? Other than that I don't see it being too strong. Are the spikes visible?
yup yup. Like Neji's heavenly spin is visible. The range is stated so I think that should be ok. 3 meters of movements and reach for every 10k of SP the user possesses. hmmm you think I should make it so my entire body (all my tenketsu points) would be able to project these spiked tendrils? or just a select few spots (arms, legs, torso, etc)


Hmm, considering the Gentle Fist style can emit chakra from the entire body, I don't see why not your entire body.
cool ^_^ now then let me check up on your made-up. I don't know if I can but I think I can approve your made-ups ^^;;;; since I am a mod. Bone did it alot when he was here. Just contraversial ones like instant kills I can't touch.


Cool. It's a bit iffy, though, so you might want to check with another mod just to make sure.
PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 12:14 pm


Hedoro Koutai
Komenusai
Hedoro Koutai
Komenusai
Hedoro Koutai
Komenusai
Chakra Spike Connection - This move requires both the Chakra Spike Armor and the Chakra Conenction technique. As the spikes form, they are connected to Komen via chakra strings, where he can lash them out and pull them back at will causing serious physical damage. The range of these whip like spikes extend 3 meters every 10k of chakra the user possesses.

With this technique, A Hyuuga User is able to strike at Tenketsu points from a distance rather then with their fingers to stop the tenketsu point from working. Deadly accuracy and contact with vital organ tenketsu's (heart, brain, kidney etc) Will cause that organ to stop functioning for the rest of the battle. Causing serious internal injuries throughout the entire battle.

((think this is too much ^^;;; ))


No, maybe give it just a little drawback or modifier, like a range limit (within your mandala, perhaps?) or something to that effect? Other than that I don't see it being too strong. Are the spikes visible?
yup yup. Like Neji's heavenly spin is visible. The range is stated so I think that should be ok. 3 meters of movements and reach for every 10k of SP the user possesses. hmmm you think I should make it so my entire body (all my tenketsu points) would be able to project these spiked tendrils? or just a select few spots (arms, legs, torso, etc)


Hmm, considering the Gentle Fist style can emit chakra from the entire body, I don't see why not your entire body.
cool ^_^ now then let me check up on your made-up. I don't know if I can but I think I can approve your made-ups ^^;;;; since I am a mod. Bone did it alot when he was here. Just contraversial ones like instant kills I can't touch.


Cool. It's a bit iffy, though, so you might want to check with another mod just to make sure.
ehhh I think it's ok. A multi symptom attack should be within the rules of this guild. Plus it has enough drawbacks on it where it is avoidable.

Komenusai


el cabong

PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 12:30 pm


YUS! my ipod list is done....which sucks cause i only had 2 gigs of memory and 11 gigs of songs...i wish i could get my 30 gig back from my theiving cousin.... stressed
PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 12:36 pm


Komenusai
Hedoro Koutai
Komenusai
Hedoro Koutai
Komenusai
yup yup. Like Neji's heavenly spin is visible. The range is stated so I think that should be ok. 3 meters of movements and reach for every 10k of SP the user possesses. hmmm you think I should make it so my entire body (all my tenketsu points) would be able to project these spiked tendrils? or just a select few spots (arms, legs, torso, etc)


Hmm, considering the Gentle Fist style can emit chakra from the entire body, I don't see why not your entire body.
cool ^_^ now then let me check up on your made-up. I don't know if I can but I think I can approve your made-ups ^^;;;; since I am a mod. Bone did it alot when he was here. Just contraversial ones like instant kills I can't touch.


Cool. It's a bit iffy, though, so you might want to check with another mod just to make sure.
ehhh I think it's ok. A multi symptom attack should be within the rules of this guild. Plus it has enough drawbacks on it where it is avoidable.


Well I suppose I'll find out soon enough. My next one should probably be a little easier to decide on, I was thinking of rverting the Soul Edge to something closer to what Drago had planned, save the ability for a made-up.
That's cool, Pawn. I usually put the telly on music for when I'm on computer. Mostly stuff from the 90s. (Right now, it's 'The Freshman' by The Verve Pipe.)

Hedoro Koutai

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el cabong

PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 12:38 pm


thats such a good song....i gotta remember to download it XP

i forgot i have 2 of my demos on here and a live cd of my own stuff....god im horrible haha XP
right now im listening to: huh...interesting. Denvemolorado - Atmosphere (i have my itunes on shuffle. so i never quite figure out what im listening to.)
PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 12:39 pm


hurdy13
ace, I belive it's called Imeem. Oh yeah, And I am still going to kill you lol... twisted
you can try i still have faith to beat you if i began to lose your gonna die with me

Ace Zero


CircaNineOne

PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 12:45 pm


What sucks the most is that I can't post cuz I'm inside a little pink cocoon. Just kill me already jeez.... BORED!!! Also, I'm buying a new mask to make my avi look freaky.
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