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 Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 8:24 am
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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 8:40 am
Never mind
problem solved
I talk to the captain and express myself
I wasn't upset they had it, just that they didn't ask
but they claim they will give our guild credit
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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 8:49 am
Dark - Do you still have the spear style on your PC
it was deleted from the guild it seems
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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 9:30 am
Doragon Yari-Dragon SpearFast, Piercing, Crystal Plot line~
In the land of knights there was a fierce warrior, one that could wield a spear better then anyone else. But this was not a knight of the male gender. It was a female knight, she was the kings greatest weapon. For not only did she had strength and skill on her side. She always had what most wished of, beauty. Not only in her body, but in her work. Her powerful jabs with her spear could piece the strongest armor, her slashes could cut through the best of chain mail. During one of her missions that the king sent her on. She was sent to battle a dragon, once coming upon the dragon, it shoot fire down on top of her. As the fire came rain down on top of her, she used her shield to try to block it, as she tried to block it, the shield was knocked out of the way. Dodging to the side she tried to stab the dragon, not making any affect on it, the dragon rained down fire once again, this time she tried to block it by spinning around her spear. Doing so created a gust of wind, which propelled the fire back. As the fire came back it blinded the dragon for a moment. As it was blinded, she moved to run at the dragon coming up along its body an stab it into the dragon throat. As the dragon died, it gave its life force to the warrior. With that power she was able to move her spear faster and stronger then anyone could believe. But then later on, the warrior trained many others, those others were her own children. Her children inherited this power, and from them, their kids too, and then their own. Until the last of the heir was alive, this heir, was still a master of this powerful spear moves. But instead, he taught his spear move to his student, his student was not of same decent. He gave the student the spear of dragon killer, Thanks to this spear the power of the dragon was passed on. By jewels that the dragon left over called Dragon Crystals, they are placed into spears. During the training the spear then looks and becomes like the first spear. This is the spear linage, this is the Dragon Spear lineage.
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Briefing~
You are given a spear, the spear is not of the original yet. The original, nobody gets, but jewels are taken out of the first spear. The first spear is always given to the master, but if there is no master then the next or to become master has a jewel of the actual spear in theirs. When then become master, their spear “Evolves” to show that it was the real spear the whole time. Then the others of the styles, the students, get a jewel that will be wrapped around their spear. At certain levels it will give power to the spear, hence make making them better and faster.
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Stages~
Stage 1~
At stage one, your not better then any other ninja with a weapon. Your movements are average, and slow. When you jab with your spear, its like poking with a knife. Its gonna cut and hurt a person if they stand there, but damage is not that strong or that much better then any other ninja trying to hit you with a spear.
Stabbing and slashing is rather slow, but sill hurts
Powers-
Nothing much right now, Your a novice.
Training.-
To train for his stage, meaning to become a stage one. Slash and stab your spear against a dummy, keep trying to make yourself use to your spear. Polish it, treat it with care, if you don't. Then when you really need it, it wouldn't help you. (Meaning, that you gonna bond with it, 15 posts training, 15 posts you know, taking care of it.)
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Stage 2~
Now with more training that will come from his stage you are able to move your spear a bit faster then anyone else with a spear. Your skills began to hone themselves. Your jabs and slashes with your spear are a bit stronger, you can now poke a tree and cut an inch into it.
Swing is a bit faster, but your still new to the style. Moving is still rather sluggish
Powers~
You are faster now, your spear has come to look like a spear that might be wielded in decent times with dragons and the master of the story.
Training~
This training involves going outside when its really windy, throwing your spear, meaning jabs and swings into the wind. Making it so when its not windy, your body moves faster now. And polishing your spear. (30 posts)
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Stage 3~
At stage there, you have become stronger, your spear is now coming off to look like the spear of the old master. Now with practice you are able to put charka into your spear, you are able to jump up into the air and release your charka once you come back to the ground and stab it. Releasing the charka for a short blast that reaches 3 feet out.
Powers~
The spear blast, the one that is talked about above, its an C-ranked jutsu. But no matter how much it upgrades. It stays that level.
Training~
You have to go underneath a waterfall, let your body become one with your spear. No jabbing practice. You have not become faster in this stage, but you and your spear are now able to preform a move. To train, you talk to your spear, (In your sub-conscious, Its the dragon Crystal that your talking to,30 posts)
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Stage 4~
Now your back to training your body, your faster, and your stabs and slashes are a lot stronger. Your body moves in a fluid motion. You are able to doing a number of stabs and slashes in a row without feeling fatigued. You spear jab is able to pierce a tree and go about a foot deep into it. Same with a slash, showing the powerful movement your able to do.
Powers~
Your Dragon Roar, (The charka move) Is now upgraded once again, giving for now at least 5 feet outward. But now a new move is coming. Thanks to the speed you just got, you are now able to spin your spear around to create a wind cyclone, where anything of projectiles is caught in it. Sending it straight back to the person. Either it be a kunai, a sword, a kunai with a exploding tag or a smoke bomb. This little move is a D-ranked move know as the Dragon's Whisper.
Training~
Nothing much in this one, just swing harder and faster then before. Put some weights on, or use a heavier spear so that you can swing it around. Either way just train using something to weigh you down. Practice your new jutsu too, have your spear glow, or the dragon crystal glow to have you first learn the move. (30 posts)
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Stage Five~
At stage Five, your fast, your stronger, and your spear is more in touched with you. Your charka as been infused into your spear, letting you and only you touch it. When your spear is out of reach by just a simple grab. You can use your hand to pull it towards you, this is called the Dragons Call. No level, just the name of the move. You do have to scream it when you use it though. But after training you do gain other move.
Powers~
Your dragon roar is upgraded once again. Giving the user able to let his blast go out to 7 ft radius. But during training you are able to use your charka to put into your spear. With that, you can release it to give off a series of very fast and wild stabs. Wild and unable to be tracked, this move is know as Dragon's Claw. Another C-ranked jutsu.
Training~
Training is almost done, you have this training and one more training until your master. To get to this level you must put on one more weights. Train with your spear, polish it, just keep infusing your charka into it. Let it know that your its master. (30 posts)
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Stage Six, Final Master Stage~
This is the last and final stage of being a master, after this last training you have become one of the masters. You are the dragon slayer, well the image of one. Your slashes are fast, your stabs are fierce. Your body is well toned and meant for fighting whatever comes your way. Two jutsu are revealed to you, your spear is that of the one that the old first warrior carried down.
Powers~
Your Dragon Roar is at its fullest, now able to go 12 feet radius around. Able to create large craters in the ground. But the first jutsu that is give is called the Dragon Wings. Giving you the ability to swing your spear around in in a circle, not just your spear your entire body. Creating a large tornado to send at an enemy infused with in it are slashes. That if catches an enemy, will large cuts along his body. (B-ranked) The Second one involves your crystal glowing, using your charka into your spear you then summon the crystal to preform a jutsu known as Dragon's Fierceness (A-ranked)
Training~
Your final training session, you have 20 posts to practice in a dojo, hitting multiple targets. If not clones, then dummies. Make this a challenge, not some easy wimpy training. After that training, you are to polish your sword, and speak to it. (Meaning you were polishing it while mediating and you began to speak to the dragon crystal. Asking for its strength and power.)
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~Jutsu
Note: Justu used in a lower stage can still be used in an upper stage.
Stage Three~
Dragon Roar. C-ranked(No matter how much its upgraded)
From different levels of training, this move gets more powerful and more powerful but the rank of it never changes. Its always gonna be a c-ranked move. What happens is that you charge up charka into your spear. Jump into the air and then come back down stabbing your spear into the ground. As it does so, it creates a wall of charka blast going to whatever the level you are on says.
Stage Four~
Dragon's Whisper -D-ranked.
As you swing your spear it creates a cyclone of wind from it. Able to catch and send back any object that was thrown. hanks to the speed you just got, you are now able to spin your spear around to create a wind cyclone, where anything of projectiles is caught in it. Sending it straight back to the person. Either it be a kunai, a sword, a kunai with a exploding tag or a smoke bomb.(No humans or pets or anything heavier.)
Stage Five~
Dragon's Claw C-ranked
You are able to use your charka to put into your spear. With that, you can release it to give off a series of very fast and wild stabs. Wild and unable to be tracked, the moves are fast and will pierce the strongest of armors or gates.
Dragons Call No-ranked
Its just a move to call your spear to you, no matter where it is. It comes into your hands, either by it moving through the air, or by it disappearing and reappearing in your hand in feathers or a light.
Stage Six
Dragon Wings. B-ranked
Giving you the ability to swing your spear around in in a circle, not just your spear your entire body. Creating a large tornado to send at an enemy infused with in it are slashes. That if catches an enemy, will large cuts along his body.
Dragon's Fierceness A-ranked
By putting charka into your spear you move your hand over the crystal. Once you have done this, your crystal then begins to glow. From your crystal comes out two blasts, this blasts of pure charka. They are off the dragon that was killed many many years ago. But instead of one dragon, two, two large dragons of pure charka. This move is strong and quite powerful but its not they do not lock onto a target. They are just strong blast at move in one direction and only one direction only.
(Created By Darkoolaid)
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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 9:41 am
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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 10:07 am
Haha how many styles did you guys come up with?
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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 10:09 am
Me I have come up with a lot. Not just for his guild, they use to be in others. But I had like over 8 styles.
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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 10:24 am
I have come up with the concept of 3
but only made one myself
As for bloodlines
I have made 3 total
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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 12:01 pm
Makin' custom jutsuuuu ^.^
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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 12:03 pm
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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 12:11 pm
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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 12:16 pm
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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 12:25 pm
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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 12:30 pm
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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 12:32 pm
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