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 Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 6:43 pm
Masamune 5.0 Akuyoko Masamune 5.0 @ Akuyoko: I'm going to go ahead and say yes. The story doesn't take place so far in the future where the Gorons have disappeared. @ Betman: Thanks. I really think that this is one of the better written chapters. And also, this is only part one of Chapter Nineteen. Let's just say the second half is more "action-y". I just said that because no one mentioned the gorons when they mentioned Death Mountain. They're technically there, but they don't really go deep into the crater and stuff. Anymore, atleast. Ok
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Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 4:47 pm
Because I want to read the rest of your chapter. (I am about to start chapter one tonight or tomorrow)
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Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 6:36 pm
Chapter Ninteen: The Stone Collector is now completely finished. The chapter introduces new characters and new mysteries. Comment! Critisize! Discuss! domokun
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Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 6:44 pm
HUZZAH! Great work Mune! I really loved that chapter. The leek and the letter were both nice touches!~
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Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 7:16 pm
Epic. The part with the leek was awesome xD
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Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 12:19 pm
I'm glad you both liked it.
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 10:27 pm
DAMN! I still haven't read this...
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 10:33 pm
I've read it twice.
but I don't get it...
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Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2007 10:44 am
Betman I've read it twice.
but I don't get it...
Huh?
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Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2007 3:17 pm
Wow, nice action-y chapter. It was worth the wait. Good job with FS's character, he's awesome. I IZ JELUS xd
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Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 4:52 pm
I put up a little preview into the next chapter because I felt like it. Anyway, there you go.
@ Demonix: Thanks!
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Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 5:46 pm
VICTORY Someone better be writing. D<
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Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 6:02 pm
Oh, Betman, what didn't you get about Chapter Nineteen? You never answered that.
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Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 5:53 pm
This is Masamune informing you all to go check out Zen Rider's awesome art. So take a look at his character art of The Lifeless Fox and Betman characters.
As for the story, itself: I will get around to it. Probably. ninja
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