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 Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 9:30 am
she winced from the pain and retracted her claws and nodded "indeed she is, poor scrap thought she was alone..." she closed her eyes and looked away "no more, I'm sorry to hurt you, I was blinded by my rage" she sighed "some of my wrongs may never be undone..."
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Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 9:33 am
[Shiningkit's white paw was covered in red. She leapt on top of Dawnfrost once more and dug her claws into her spine.] "Coward! You dare attack us and then you run away?" [but her voice had changed. Instead of her kit voice, it was now a deep tone, as if a grown cat was speaking.]
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Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 9:33 am
"Well Ravenstar might let you join"Blackflame said coughing,the shock had ade h blood come out faster now she was startingto feel a little light headed.Blackflame fell unconcious,she had no idea but now Blackflame asked her one question.Did all of my rage just gave me a path to death?
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Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 9:37 am
[Shiningkit watched Blackflame topple over. Her claws extended out even farther.] "Look what you've done!" [she screeched. She dug her claw into Dawnfrost's ear and made a hole. She pulled the claw up and now there was a deep V shape on her ear.]
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Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 9:37 am
she sung again lulling the kit to sleep as it dropped away she licked its paw "no more..." the blood from her ear dripped into her eye she looked at blackflame "What happend?" she picked up the kit and lifted blackflame What will the reaction be?when I bring two cats to their clan and after we've been in a fight against eachother?
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Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 9:40 am
[Shiningkit heard the song and her red eyes widened. Then they turned blue and she fell off Dawnfrost with a thud! in the dirt.]
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Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 9:44 am
silverkit ran into the clearing where she found dawnfrost "Y-Y-YOU!" she hissed "silverkit lis..." the cat began but her eyes lolled upwards as she fell down, silverkit ran over and sat by them "HELP!!!" she called out
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Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 9:45 am
Blackflame sleeped in this unconcious state seeing what she had done and what she should have done.A-A-am I dead!?Blackflame asked herself.Suddenly it stopped and everythig went back to black,Oh Starclan i'm so sorry!
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Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 9:48 am
silverkit watched blackflame's chest stop rising and falling "no" she ran over and put her head on her chest "nononononono"
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Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 9:49 am
[Moonflower was hiding in the warrior's den when suddenly fierce yowls and a call for help emerged from the forest. She pushed her way ouyt of the den.] "Ravenstar! Come with me!" [she called to the leader. She started to walk towrd the camp entrance.]
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Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 9:51 am
**cloud's dream**
everything was still black but cloud sensed trouble
"WAKE UP CLOUD, WAKE UP!" he screamed at himself.
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Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:00 am
Ravenstar ran after Moonflower,she called for Treepaw too they headed out Ravenstar following Moonflower.
(Blackflame is a girl and her breathing didn't stop.)
Blackflame started to breath very fast,I won't die I will surviveshe thought,her breathing slowed but her heart beat was normal still beating,i'm alive jut unconcious,Blackflame thought with a sigh.
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Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:06 am
((oh srry i just assumed XD))
Silverkit felt her breath again "yes" she cleared her throat again "HELP!!!" she was very tired and her leg was playing up no I wont give up now! she shouted again.
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Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:06 am
Moonflower ran to where she had heard the yowl. When she got there, a strange cat was looking at three bodies on the ground. They were Blackflame, Shiningkit and Silverkit. Moonflower growled and leapt at Dawnfrost.] "How dare you hurt my friend!"
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Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:09 am
Ravenstar arrived alonfg with Treepaw,when Treepaw saw his sister he shoted "Blackflame!"he ran over to her happy to hear her heart beat and see her breathing.
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