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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 12:28 pm
[[Well, there's always the ignoring thing, but that doesn't make people too happy. Oh, the OOC thread is up! It's on the first page under the intro.]]
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 12:37 pm
((I suppose I should wait for RayneTree and Pen to post again.))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 12:39 pm
((I will kindly stay out of this fight. Proceed without me. My character doesn't like to interfere unless needed, and seeing how Ryn isn't laying down in the fetal position with 0 health points, I think he is capable of fighting on his own lol.))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 12:41 pm
[[But... he just picked you up.]]
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 12:48 pm
((Damnit, ok. I'll post in a second))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 12:53 pm
((And he's taking off. I'm not interested in continuing the fight, it was more in self-defense.))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 12:57 pm
Nendir winced. Everything had happened so fast, and for once he was actually caught off guard. Who the hell was that thing anyway. He wrapped his hand around the one Ryn was using to hold onto him. "You don't want to fight? What about my car?" At the second question he looked detached. It was rather rude for someone, regardless of whom, or what they were to destroy someone else's property without abandon. If this is going to be the only way of getting around, we are surely s**t up the creek without a paddle.
He took heed to Ryns commands about hanging onto him more securely. But although they were seemingly away from danger, Nendir still found himself in an agitated state of mind, so he kept quiet when Ryn asked where they should head next, and honestly, even if he had put some thought into an answer, it would of been a plum dumb one.
Sitting securely with his bottom on Ryns over-sized claw of a foot Nendir found balance. He closed his eyes and sat there as still as an undisturbed pond. He had detached himself. The last two days had been filled with ups, downs and everything in between.
A deep sigh escaped his lips, and he watched as the thing, the man, and his car disappeared in the distance. The wind licked at his neck, sweeping his hair across his face messily. But it was soothing and very welcomed, and Nendir made no motion to right his appearance. Maybe he was getting a taste of how Izzy had been feeling, and he didn't like it one bit.
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 1:02 pm
As soon as Ryn had started to push off the groud Izzy had squeezed her eyes shut and had a fairly good grip on Ryn's wrist. After a few seconds she peeked at how high they had gotten, but quickly regreted that she had. "oh! my! god!" She imediatly closed her eyes again. "I'm ok, I'm not gonna fall. I'm not gonna fall." she kept mouthing those words, in an attempt to comfort herself. Izzy and heights? They don't mix. Izzy's worst fear? Falling to her death.
((I hadn't put the fear of falling to her death in my character profile, cause I didn't think I would have to. but it's the one thing all my characters have in common.))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 1:06 pm
Despite his strength, Ryn was tired, having flown so far in one night, and he knew he couldn't keep it up forever. Nonetheless he continued flying, roughly north, waiting for a response from one of the two as to where they should head. When neither responded to his question, he said, calmly," Ok since you two don't know where you want to go, we are heading to Canada, as I've found the people there to be rather understanding. Its going to be a long flight though, so if either of you need a stop, I would gladly do so."
His large wings beat slowly, keeping them aloft, but he knew he would need to land within the next three hours or they would not make it to where he wished to go.
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 1:12 pm
Mark deftly walked over to the car and put a fresh dent in the hood with his forehead. Disappointed with the lack of pain, he kicked one of the tires a little and sat down on top of the vehicle.
That went stunningly well.
He'd estranged the natives, leaving himself high and dry. Any sort of communications they had (inspecting the vehicle and judging their tech level, he doubted it would be amazing) would be inoperable thanks to his lack of knowledge and lack of a friend. He hadn't even gotten an attempt to speak their own language to them, and by now it was too late. He could follow, but they'd see that as an offensive maneuver. He couldn't afford to look any more hostile than he did already.
He could follow them silently.
Granted, a few systems were still a little banged up from the landing, but he could most definately keep up, if he started now. They'd disappeared an approximated due north, and he'd hopefully be able to track them thermally from a good distance, allowing for the inaccuracies of normal beings.
Maybe that wasn't such a great idea.
((Now, I suppose that you're the only people in my general vicinity, correct? If so, I am going to follow you.))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 1:15 pm
[[Well, you could always go into you're own subplot and meet up with a human, thus making you like them. He/She can even teach you to speack and then you can meet up with them later.]]
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 1:20 pm
((I LIKES it. But then... who in the name of all that is good and holy do I RP with? Or do I do it all in one giga-post?))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 1:22 pm
Nendir had been silent the entire length of the trip they had taken, except for the occasional yes, no and I have to use the lavatory. He knew Ryn was tired, who wouldn't be after carrying two adults such a ways with only the strength of his wings. "Stop here, we...you should rest. I always carry a bit of money just in case things like this happen, so we will be able to rent a hotel room, even if we don't use it fr the entire night. I have the feeling staying in one place for more than a few hours would be, hazardous to our health."
He had instructed Ryn to land in an alley way next to a building large enough to mask their arrival. "I think we are somewhere in Wisconsin...no wonder you were able to catch up to Izzy and I so fast." He gave his ally a pat on the shoulder before helping Izzy up. She looked like death, maybe flying didn't sit to well with her.
"Why don't you take this.." he pushed some money into her hand. "You two find a hotel, Izzy, make sure you get a room with a balcony, so if need be we can make a quick escape. I'll buy some food for all of us and follow your scent back to the right hotel. Any requests?" He didn't know what either of them liked to eat, or if they were at all hungry, they had went practically all day with hardly a bite of food between them. Water, apple and an orange, what a feast for for a king.
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 1:27 pm
[[AHH!!! Go to OOC! We're taking up space!]]
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 1:35 pm
Izzy pried her eyes open as soon as they landed. "I don't realy care as long as it's edible." Her voice was shaky, but that was expected. She pushed themoney given to her in her pocket.
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