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 Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 10:41 pm
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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 11:53 pm
-squee- poetry. Commented.
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Magical Mistress Sarai Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 12:37 am
Ok... I commented. You two above me just talk way too much... and coming from me that says something.
Nonetheless... such a lovely word... can't remember her started using it in here but I love it nonetheless ( whee )...
Triskal made me want to write a poem and so it is now in my journal. She at least owes me a comment! twisted
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 6:12 am
Bleh I hate time-zones when ever I'm on it seems everyone sleeping, feels like the forums move so slowly.
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 6:34 am
Wow!
Thanks, guys! I wasn't expecting so many good critiques. Thanks for the tips and such, everyone, I'll work on that today during my free time. I really, really appreciate it.
Star- You made a lot of sense and I didn't take it to heart at all.
Jesse--Thanks for the suggestion on the title. I'm pondering this. I think you're right, it does lead you to believe the poem is going to go further, maybe even deeper...Hrmm...
I can see merrit to a bit of everything everyone said so I'm gonna tweak it with the things I agreed with and then repost it later.
And Sarai, it wasn't about Dante you weirdo razz It was actually about a friend of mine in the states...
Which brings me to Honh-- I'm fine, bud. Just starting new.
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 4:35 pm
What can I say... I reserve the right to be weird when I so wish. *shrugs*
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Magical Mistress Sarai Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 8:01 pm
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 6:10 am
Bleh now I'm writting poetry >< talking about it made me want to.
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 6:11 am
Bwahahaha....My plan to overthrow the world via mind control is working perfectly...
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 9:18 am
When you are evil... there's an entirely new world of options that open up for you in the realm of copyrights. 3nodding So yeah... I took weird.
SOMEONE OTHER THAN TRISKAL IS MORE THAN WELCOMED TO COMMENT ON MY PIECE!
BTW Tris, deary thank you for your comment!! I'm glad that it actually made the point that I was trying for. whee
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Magical Mistress Sarai Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 11:26 am
Heheh, you're ever so welcome! I didn't really say anything aside from the fact that I liked it. sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 1:14 pm
hey... if you liked it... I'm happy and thrilled.
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Magical Mistress Sarai Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 2:34 pm
Maybe we should make a poetry thread. >>
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 5:24 pm
I'm all alone, and my stomach hurts...
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I tweaked that poem
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Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 1:17 pm
RagenFallon Holy crap, I can't believe I didn't catch that... And Cole, that proves how old you are... OR... that i used to watch a lot of TV. yeah, i'm old. sweatdrop
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