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Gaia Name: ElladanKenet
Character Name: Judas Airet, aka Darth Judacrus
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Race: Human
Character Description: Pale, but not as white as most Sith. Fairly tall, and slim. Wears the traditional black robes and tunic, and has fierce yellow-green eyes.

Home Planet: Korriban
Starting Planet: Korriban
Relations: none known
Character History He was born and raised at the Sith temple, and then became an initiate as soon as his powers were discovered. He has just become a Sith Knight only a week ago. The only real oddity is that he has a higher than average midichlorian count, and with each battle he wins using the Dark Side, his midichlorian count grows, making him stronger.

Alignment: Sith
Occupation Sith Knight/Dark Jedi Knight
Skills: Force Choke, Force Speed
Lightsaber Style: Proficient at Form V- Djem So and Shien; Learning Form VII- Juyo and Vaapad

Weapons: A single, red bladed lightsaber, with curved tips slightily smaller than the one used by Sephiroth, and completely black.
Ship none
Personal Belongings: His lightsaber and clothes

Roleplay Sample Judas looked around the dimly lit Sith Temple's archives, as he researched. As usual, he was interested in the old Sith Wars eons ago, and he poured over the lightsaber techniques and styles. He even read up to the fairly recent Galactic Civil War, and favored the saber-style used by Jedi Knight Anakin Skywalker before he became Lord Vader.
Anakin's style was unique. Instead of leaning into one technique or another, like Kenobi's Soresu, Windu's Vaapad, or Yoda's Ataro, Skywalker blended the styles into a complex series of thrust, parries, slashes, and spins, that more often than other severed limbs and decapitated heads.
As Lord Vader, his style changed dramatically. Due to his now massive weight and bulk, and slow overall movement, the Dark Lord relied on power and strength. He was already faster than any normal person, but for a Jedi who prooved too quick, Vader just grabbed them, and inpaled with his lightsaber.
Judas found it all so interesting. Always had. His own saber was made in an attempt to mimik Vader's, although the only difference were the three prongs used to focus the blade.
Judas picked up the holodisc, and hauled it up to his quarters. Instead of putting it back in however, he returned to his bed to meditate.

I am one with the Darkside
I feel my anger
I feel my pain
I control both
They are weapons; tools
Allies; slaves; my only friends
Where there is light, there is always shadow
as long as a Jedi survives, we linger
as long as we exist, we hunt the Jedi
I am one with the Darkside...

He began repeating the same thing for hours...

Little more history would be nice but, what the heck we need more Sith. Accepted ~ Guilyn

Gaia Name: Kalcos
Character Name: Travanor ((Later known as Darth Travanor))
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Race: Male
Character Description: Brown hair, brown eyes. Very tall.

Home Planet: None, him and his parents lived anywhere.
Starting Planet: Tatooine
Relations: None right now
Character History: Very dark. Hates the jedi. They hunted down and killed many of his family. Some were bounty hunters while others were with the sith. When they killed his grandfather who was a powerfull sith, and a great influence on him he felt hatred. Next came his parents. After that he agreed to never side with the jedi or the republic. He left on his own at 15 after his parents were killed. He also had his granfathers lightsaber. He ran away to Tatooine. He made relations with a smuggler. The smuggler thought he was cool and funny. He agreed to help him get from Braxis to Tatooine at the time. He always carries his grandfathers red lightsaber and his blaster pistol that the smuggler gave him. He never learned how to use it though. He also lives on Tatooine. He is slightly force sensetive.

Alignment: Sith, Imperials
Occupation: Bartender
Skills: Athletic, good piloting skills, good mechanic skills

Weapons: Grandfather's lightsaber, a blaster pistol and a datapad
Ship:
Ship's Weapons:
Modified Blaster
Homing Missiles

The ship also can go into hyperspace.

Personal Belongings: Grandfather's red lightsaber and a blaster pistol

Roleplay Sample

"Hey kiddo! You ready?," a smuggler said to Travanor

"Almost!," Travanor said loading up his stuff on cold Braxis.

"Well don't be in a hurry.," the smuggler said.

"I'm not!," Travanor yelled.

After Travanor packed everything, they both got into the smuggler's ship. They lifted off the ground and Travanor sat and tried to relax. It was hard because of what happened to his parents.

"Get ready for the jump to hyperspace.," the smuggler said.

Travanor noded. He was not ready to start a new life on his own. He was only 15. He would have to get used to it. He pulled out his grandfather's saber and stared at it.

"What do you have there kid?," the smuggler asked.

"My grandfathers lightsaber.," Travanor said.

"What are you doing with one of them?," the smuggler asked.

"Like I said, I keep it because it was my grandfathers.," he said.

The ship made its jump to hyperspace. Travanor tried to get some rest on the way to Tatooine.

Good RP sample. I feel a little picky today blaugh . Character history needs to be a little more clear. Remember, the History is what makes your character who that are, without that they arn't really a person. Just try to make it a little longer and go into more detail why he hates the jedi so much. ~Guilyn

Is it ok now? I put in what made him really not side with the jedi or the republic. I also put that he is force sensetive.

I'm not a fan of the whole "Jadi Parents" or "Grandparents" thing. But it does make more sence now. Accepted ~Guilyn

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Gaia Name: Yatsuhiko Kirara
Character Name: Yatsuhiko/Yamatseru Kirara
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Race: Human
Character Description: Yamatseru is an eight foot tall Homo Sapient. His eyes are a pale grey-blue, always observing, and sharp to spot something amiss. His hair, black as the darkest night on Tatooine nearly reaches his chin, and surrounds his face in a blanket of silky thin hair. His skin is pale, just like his eyes, and sometimes he even resembles a ghost with his mostly colorless features. A well muscled man, he could win a fist fight with a human, but he stays away from wookies, and the other stronger races. He wears a black cloak that is volumous and conceals almost every bit of his skin, the collar of the cloak masses his mouth and obscures half of his nose from view. The cloak is made of a heavy duty, but soft fabric that is produced in the Hapan Cluster. Under his cloak, he wears a tight vest of leather, with straps that can either loosen for comfort, or tighten for battles. Under his cloak his shoulders and upper arms are bare, but he wears two sleeve-like cloths that extent from his elbow’s to his wrist’s almost like cloth bracers. On his lower body he wears a dark pair of comfortable fitting pants, that seem to loosen when he wants to be comfortable, and cling when he needs to be stealthy, or when in battle. Yatsuhiko is the other “personality” of Yamatseru and looks completely different. Yatsuhiko has light brown eyes, but in the right light they almost seem orange. His hair is a golden blonde, is usually unkept, and a bit shorter than Yamatseru’s hair. Yatsuhiko usually carries a smile on his face wherever he is, even if he is in a serious fight. His clothes are well fitting silken clothing, all a deep cerulean. He shows off his royal heritage, but is not gaudy of haughty about it, only wanting to impress the girls, and walk about in comfort.

Home Planet: Hapes
Starting Planet: Coruscant
Relations: Yatsuhiko was the son of a Monarch that lived on Hapes, he would look up to his sister, who became the Matriarch of Hapes after sometime, and she became very cold hearted and vicious which led to Yatsuhiko's leaving of the Hapan Cluster, never to be seen again. Twenty years later, Yamatseru became part of a plan to unite his family with Yatsuhiko’s sister and become the Monarch of the Hapan Cluster, but he failed, and even though he loved Yatsuhiko’s sister very much, persuaded himself to leave, he too was never seen after that point.
Character History Yatsuhiko was born into the royal family of Hapes, his father was the monarch of the Hapan Cluster at one point, so Yatsuhiko was the heir to the Cluster and was spoiled about the time he was eight. Given practically everything he wanted the one thing he really adored was his older sister... Since his father's wish be that he, not his sister was heir, his sister's other side of the family was quite angry. Yatsuhiko's father died before his time, and his will also changed, all his wealth would be left to Yatsuhiko, but the heir to the thrown would be his sister. After this Yatsuhiko tried his best to show his sister how smart, and how strong he was, but she never really paid attention, as if she were protecting him from something. One day Yatsuhiko learned that his sister was being controlled by her grandmother, and that if she didn't do what her grandmother wanted then she would send assassins after Kirara. Yatsuhiko did not want to burden his sister, so he left the Hapan Cluster, and fled to deep space.

Yamatseru was born into another family on Hapes about the same time as Yatsuhiko, and it was Yatsuhiko's grandmother who tried to arrange the marriage of Yamatseru and Yatsuhiko's sister. Yamatseru came to love the beautiful woman, but what the grandmother wanted him to do, he could not bring himself to take the action. One day he just disappeared without a trace, leaving Yatsuhiko's grandmother to fume in hatred.

Twelve years later, the two coincidently ended up running into a remainder of Imperial bases located on space stations out in the outer rim. Both, having nothing to go back to signed up for a test that the Imperials told them "would make the universe better. " After blood tests and many other sophisticated physical tests, the Imperials thought of a way of bonding the two minds together, because of how similar the genes of the two human's were. After one experament though, something went wrong, and one of the men disappeared, they could not find the younger of the two Yatsuhiko anywhere they looked. They almost gave up before, right in front of them, Yamatseru changed from the dark haired man, to the light featured Yatsuhiko. The Imperials celebrated their new success, but the "twins" felt horrible, they barely escaped with their lives, and now live as oucasts trying to find a better way to live.

Alignment: Evil/Good
Occupation Neutral Jedi, unsure which path will give him the best benefit.
Skills: With Yatsuhiko’s training as a boy, he is very regal and loyal, along with skilled in political discussions and the makings of love. Yamatseru is a darker figure, with more weapons background. Both, after reappearing were seemingly talented in both the art of wielding a saber, and using minor force powers.

Weapons: Two lightsabers that are very different, one is ornately carved and made out of a white ivory-like substance, while the other is rather plain and made out of an obsidian-like substance, the black saber has a silver blade, and the white saber has a black blade.
BlasTech DLT-19, E-11 blaster rifle, T-21 rifle, Two old style DC-17 pistols, Hapan Gun of Command, a couple of concussion and thermal grenades, and some remote mines.
( Note, not all of this is carried on his person… )


Ship(s) Modified Nubian Scurrg H-6 Prototype Bomber/Midknight Daggar:
Six forward facing laser cannons, arranged three to a wing. Fire linked to allow all three to fire at a single target. Extremely powerful rotation laser cannon turret is mounted atop of the bomber. During firefights, the turret can coordinate with the other laser cannons or cover the bomber's rear and flank. Bomblet generator produces devastating energy bombs, which are released via two bomb chutes. The bomblet generator provides a continuous supply of explosives. Each bomb chute can hold up to five bombs, but the generator draws power from the main generator to replenish the energy supply over time. Upgraded weapons, devastation missiles, explosive proximity mines, and ionized cluster missiles that can tear through enemy shields are another part of the ships armament. Weapon system with independent targeting computer. Two astromechs housed inside the fighter provide additional support. Two modified Novaldex J-77 " Event Horizon " engines. Thrust vectoring allows great maneuvering along with tight turns. These engines allow the Dagger to attain a speed of 1200 KPH in the atmosphere. The starship can reach sublight speeds up to 3000g in space. The hyperdrive core is a class .7 good enough for the ship, but certainly not the best. The ship is twenty-two meters long and has a black color scheme, mixed with chrome silver tribal symbols, the tribal symbols are decorational as well as meaningful to Kirara. They are mostly words and sayings that haunt his mind. They remind him and all who see the ship that he is an outcast, exiled man, and a loner. The symbols inspire fear in those around him, giving them a second thought before they open fire on his ship. Very little battle scars mark the surface of the Midnight Daggar, because of the awesome skill at which Kirara pilots all his ships, and because of the armor. Midnight...not expendable by Kirara's standards was equipped with a triple layer of deflector shields, in exchange for a better hyperdrive. The armor was also replaced with an experimental quantum armor that was mixed with a bioorganism to produce an almost living metal able to repair small damage and battle scarring over long periods of time. The Daggar was configured to let Kirara either sleep in peace in a pretty large living quarters. Or pilot in the cockpit, which had seats for five. It was a small fighter with only a very limited storage area, the bedchamber, and the cockpit.
Midknight Daggar

MandalMotors Starviper- Class Stealth Attack Platform/Deathe Vipor

A pair of Taim and Bak Ht-12 double heavy laser cannons, each mounted on a forward extending arm with a 180-degree field of fire. Two forward facing Borstel proton torpedo launchers complete the weapons package. MandalMotors created a new and extraordinary advanced targeting computer coupled with an experimental laser sighting system. The targeting system allows the Deathe Vipor's weapons to perform far beyond their manufacture specifications. The engines and maneuverability can rival that of a Tie Interceptor. MandalMotors provided the starship with four adjustable wings, each capped with two microthrusters. Both thrust nacelles and wings constantly move during flight, creating the illusion that the Vipor is a bizarre, living creature. To achieve top speeds or travel in the atmosphere, the Vipor's wings folded closed behind the cockpit, in combat the four wings expanded for unmatched maneuverability. The ship could achieve a speed of 1000 KPH in the atmosphere, and sublight speeds up to 4240g. Because it was a short-range starfighter...Kirara only equipped it with a hyperdrive class-1. It was unspeakably quiet, and could literally fly not twenty feet above a man and still be quiet enough to make no noise only create a breeze. The wings and the craft were heavily armored in Kirara's famous, well sought, and extraordinary quantum armor. Each wing also contained one of the Vipor's four separate power generators, along with reserve fuel tanks for long-distance journeys. The Deathe Vipor is also equipped with a state-of-the-art deflector shield, that automatically transmits more coverage where it senses the blast coming from while still covering the rest of the craft in a full protective barrier. It can fend off up to twelve different laser blasts without weakening the shields. Inside the small starfighter there is little but the controls and a small compartment behind the pilot seat, not wanting to reduce the speed or maneuverability of the craft caused MandalMotors to only make room for one man and maybe some meager belongings.
Deathe Vipor

Modified Coreillian Action VI Transport/Dragons Claw

The modified freighter has four retractable turbolasers, all suitable for battling capital ship as well as three retractable double heavy laser cannons to ward off smaller starships, two retractable ion cannons, and one proton torpedo launcher than can be fit with other destructive missiles. Even though all these weapons adorn the ship the Claw was not meant for battle, and those weapons were only precaution against larger more dangerous ships. Its carrying capacity is what drew Kirara to it, it could hold 90,000 metric tons of cargo. Kirara with two more starships needed a freighter of some sort, and the Dragons Claw was just what he was looking for. The hull is covered in reinforced armor...the same experimental quantum armor that Kirara uses on all of his starships. Deflector shields with almost the same properties as the Deathe Vipor's have also been installed, with a dedicated power generator. Kirara has many friends throughout the galaxy even though he seems to be wanted everywhere as well. His friends and contacts in many places around the galaxy can send him steady streams of data about what he needs to know. Especially since he is looking for his lost loved one. To support the data being transmitted to him, a sophisticated hyperraddio array grants Kirara instant access to his friends, spies, and contacts while HoloNet transceivers monitor countless broadcasts from around the galaxy. The sensor system includes a masking device that conceals the Dragons Claw from casual scans and sends false transponder information regarding the ships cargo. Alterations in the cargo hold include life support systems for transporting passengers or animals. Kirara carries Midnight Daggar, Deathe Vipor, and a Mobquet Flare-S Swoop Bike. A small docking bay and extendable force tube allows the Dragons Claw to " Grip " or link to small ships while in space. The medical bay can treat nearly any humanoid species, while the droid hold contains assorted astromechs and GNK power druids. There is also a hold in which coffin like prison holds are used for prisoners which can include force users if Kirara wishes it. Of course the Dragons Claw is decorated with the usual black paint scheme with the almost threatening designs. The freighter has large living quarters that can be used to sustain up to four people for months at a time. Kirara customized the engines and upgraded them a bit, making the highest sublight speed 3000g about the speed of the Millennium Falcon, its atmospheric speed can rarely exceed 1000 KPH however making the shields and armor of the Dragon the most important fail safe. The hyperdrive core is a class .5 the best out of all of his starships.
Dragon's Claw

Personal Belongings: Kirara carries around his neck an emblem of the royal family of Hapes, which is not his, it is his lovers who seemed to disappear, who he has cloned and now is a fourteen year old girl, which he cares for and loves for like a father.

Roleplay Sample
A freighter came out of hyperspace, a black and customized Corellian Action VI Transport slowly making its way towards the planet, its surface black and red, filled the view ports. The pilot though instead of turning and heading home with the sight of the dark planet, adjusted the sublight engines and headed into the atmosphere of the planet, he came out of the atmosphere...the Dragon Claw's hull sizzled with the heat, the pilot engaged the atmospheric engines, and pulled up, on the controls, his ship flying fifty meters above the surface of the planet. He spotted a large palace like structure, and set the coordinates, letting the ship do the work as is landed softly on a large patch of black lava rock. Repulserlifts went off about the ship stabilizing it and releasing hot steam. The pilot set the ship into a shutdown cycle, and decided to set the controls to standby in case the people on this planet didn’t want any visitors. The pilot walked out of the cockpit and down a hallway, pressing a button on the wall that made a door slide up and out of view, the landing ramp moving slowly to the ground in front of him, he walked down the ramp onto the black lava rock. He walked slowly and rhythmically, his footsteps making less sound than that of the wind outside. Upon his head, a large hood, that cascaded down enough to shade his eyes. A mask, glinting silver as the light from the lightning lit the surface, black designs, symbolic over the silver surface of the mask, the black hard to determine where the designs ended and the shadows began. A long gash across the forehead of the mask, showing that he was an outcast, loner, and hunted man. Two long slits in the mask were the eyeholes, and as he walked out of the lighted parts of the ship, a glow of silver as bright as lightning, shone through. The huge black cloak that adorned his shoulders was nothing hard to miss. The high collar of the cloak rose about his face and neck in a circle, hiding from where his neck met his shoulders to half way up the mask. The cloak had a seam that ran down from the collar to the bottom of the cloak, behind the seam, buttons held the cloak about his figure. The huge sleeves of the cloak covered his arms, hands, and fingers, as they hung loosely at his side. The sleeves came down a good foot from his fingers, swallowing up his arms and making his arms invisible within the folds of cloth. His midnight black cloak camouflaged him well in the darkness, though the silver glowing clouds on his cloak made him stand out. There were silver clouds spaced about his cloak, which glowed in the darkness as if made from molten metal, they also shifted slowly across his cloak like moonlit clouds across the night sky. The cloak's bottom hovered only a few centimeters from the ground, moving itself over obstacles as he walked. His long bangs hung lower than the hood covered, the silver tips glinted in the light as if they had been dipped in silver. His head within the large hood turned to look up at the large palace in front of him, behind his mask of black and silver, no emotions played on his face. He stepped forward, towards the towering structure, and the landing ramp of his ship rose, the paint scheme on the ship mimicking the black and silver of his mask, and was hard to spot as it was camouflaged in this wasteland of a planet. Kirara had made his entrance...



:: Modified ::
You should send more time about the character history instead of what he has with him. Also, any speach should be a different color to make it easy to find. The size is also hard to read so make it bigger. Finaly, Lightsabers ONLY a Jedi or Sith can have them. So when those things are fixed I will look again. ~Guilyn

I can not tell if this is an application for 1 person or 3. Also, why would anyone want to bond two people's minds? Alright I will accept it under these conditions, you CAN NOT use a lightsaber unless you are trained, which you are not. You like everyone else starts at the bottom. Finaly if I read any "sense" of the other person in trouble or anything like that, I will delete it. That is concidered God-Moding and it is not allowed. Accepted ~Guilyn

Gaia Name:_lain0
Character Name:Ibuki
Gender:Male
Age:19
Race:Human
Character Description: Standing at about 5 foot 10 inches, with long brown hair that is worn long over his face and very short at the back. Has light blue eyes, agaisnt pale skin. Average build.

Home Planet:Korriban
Starting Planet:Korriban
Relations:Disowned by his family at 11
Character HistoryBorn on Korriban into a simple merchant family. His father ran a starport store, supplying all the trade ships coming through with basic supplies. His mother stayed home and raised him and his older brother, who was 2 years older than he was.

Since he had spent all his life on the Sith world of Korriban, he had an understandable interest in the ways of the Sith and Dark Jedi. However the presence of the Sith hadn't been strong in the years after the Imperial's defeat, Ibuki was still able to seek them out on their home world.

One afternoon soon after his 11th birthday, he encountered a cloaked Dark Jedi in the market square. Interested in his dark robes, which stood out to the creamy and brown colours of those around the square, Ibuki followed the Dark Jedi down a long narrow side alley. The Dark Jedi asked why he was being followed, to which Ibuki blunty answered with "Are you a Dark Jedi?". This must had sparked the Dark Jedi's interest, for soon he took him to the secret enclave and purposed him for training.

Upon his acceptace into the enclave for training, he didnt tell his parents what laid before him, but simply left early one morning with his belongings and left. It wasn't until 3 years after he had began his training with the Dark Jedi he had met that afternoon that he encountered his father near the old store he ran. In a rage, his father attacked him upon learning his son had turned his back on his family and had embraced the Dark Side, to which Ibuki drew his lightsaber and struck down his father with little effort. This was his final step towards the dark path, his teacher's very happy upon hearing this news.



Alignment:Imperial
OccupationDark Jedi
Skills:Force. Force Lighting.

Weapons:Single hilt lightsaber. Red
ShipStandard Sith Fighter
Personal Belongings:Lightsaber

Roleplay Sample Ibuki looked up and saw the face of his old Master. Kal-Kun's face looked like it had been drained of all colour. Straining, the old man pulled himself to his feet.

"I was not expecting a betrayal so soon Ibuki. I am rather pleased your skills are far beyond that to which I believed," he said, confident.

"If that were true, you would not belittle me so in front of you master's...master. Constantly you undermine my abilities...but it is now time for you to pay for your disbelief in me," Ibuki said, raising his lightsaber to attack.

He lunged forward, swinging his blade with all his weight. With a crackle the two blade's met, what followed was a fantastic array of flashing red, swirling and twirling through the air. Thundering sounds of crackling, electric buzzing, one could tell the intensity of each blow by the sound of each crashing of lightsaber agaisnt lightsaber. Ibuki had trained for this day, for it was the way of the Sith. That one day, the Master by be struck down by the pupil, a harsh philsophy, but it had worked for the Sith for thousands of year's. He had to prevail in this duel, for he didn't, the punishement for failure was stripping of one's force powers, a harsh and cruel process. The thought of what laid ahead of him if he lost was enough to spure him forward with great strength. Quickly seizing an opening in Kal-Kun's stance, he cut up his master's saberarm, giving him the chance to jab his saber right through his Master's torso. Gasping, Kal-Kun fell heavily to the floor. Finally he had rid himself of his belitting Master.

Korribian is deserted, there is nothing there but the Sith temple. There are no real city on the planet, so how could you live there as a salesman? So basicly change your home planet. Also in skills, which is stated in the RULES on page one, do not put force powers for skill, just put force sencitive. Finaly, put speach of a character in a different color, it helps when people are reading it. Fix those things and I will look over it again. ~Guilyn

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Gaia Name:Cpl. Church
Character Name:Private Dimitri Petrov.
Gender:Male
Age:19
Race:human
Character Description:
Below the armour lies a man with black hair, blue eyes, and near pale skin.

Home Planet:Tatooine
oStarting Planet:Talus
Relations: he only has a father and mother, as well and grandmother and grandfather, he's not married yet. Thus meaning he has no Children.
Character History
Dimitri Petrov, an average man until he decided to join the Republic reserves, he joined mainly fo the expirience, Dimitri liked to stand out, so he wanted to be the first one from his family to be one. He persuaded others to allow him to train. Most did not trust him. Although he got off at a bad start, he soon became a great tactician, as well as an ideal sniper. His unit seldom brings a commander, because Petrov is there. his family is very proud of him, and is wanting him to return soon. Soon afterwards he was finally attached to a division, the 869, and was given his first rank, Private. He is trying to become better overall in order for him to reach his dream of being colonel.
Alignment: Republic
OccupationSniper/tactician for the 869
Skills:sniping. startegically advanced.

Weapons:Sniper rifle, blaster pistol, thermal detonator, and recon droid.
Shipa KotOR Sith Fighter
Personal Belongings:most belongings are back in tatooine. But one he brought along was a necklace of his father, which he wears during battle.

Roleplay SampleThe new sniper was in charge of scouting enemy territory, he had no idea of what he was up against.

"Private Petrov. I need you to tell your men to charge."commanded his commanding officer back on the ship.

"But thats suicidal! I cannot do that to my comrades."

"See Petrov. this is why I didn't want you on this mission, you have emotions. They dont care, they'll die for the Republic. just tell them to attack!"

"I will find another way sir. trust me."

"aye kid. you'll never get to colonel status at this rate..."

"well one trooper can change the tides of war. one of these men could be that trooper."

"just do your assignment!"

"yes sir!"

the young trooper, who was shorter than the other soldiers, commanded his unit silently, but effectivly, he was outflanking the enemy without them knowing, following his tactic, other commanders began flanking. Petrov took out his pistol and shot at an enemy unit, emmidiently most hostiles aimed for him, as soon as this happened, Petrov commanded his men to begin attacking. from an attack by all sides, the larger group of enemies was surrounded by a smaller group of troopers. with only a few casualties the mission went smoothly.

Once the entire battalion returned Dimitri was not given a promotion for not following orders. Still, he was proud of returning most of his men back in one piece. Even if it meant stayng Private.

This is 100 years AFTER return of the jedi. there are NO clone troops left. you can be in the army just not a clone. So fix that. ~ Guilyn

Ok, I fixed it. And since im Private in this, how do I know when I increase rank? I only read the one about jedi and such, but I cant find anything about trooper ranks and such. Also, can I get speederbike? Also, can I keep that armour? and how many other troopers are there?

((Here is the app for my new character))

Gaia Name: SwordMasterZero

Character Name: Ryukai Korr

Gender: Male

Age: 14

Race: Human

Character Description: A boy standing 4'9 with natural white hair barely touching shoulder length and A slim body with light blue eyes. His casual wear is black boots that stretch over half his shin with white jedi student garbs. under his garbs is a black shirt that has a krayt dragon symbol depicted on the front.

Home Planet: Tatooine

Starting Planet: Tatooine

Character History: Born without a name and into slavery to the hutts on Tatooine and raised in a local cantina, selling drinks and being looked down upon because he was little and A human. Everyday he would come home alone. His parents were killed in front of the young child a few years after he was born. He lived alone in an alien infested cesspool of a town, but he grew used to it. He began to have a fascination in swords at the age of 9, so he started practicing swordsmanship.

His skills were gradually improving, but he always felt he was destined for something much greater than what he was living now. One day, he ran into Jaken Korr in the cantina. Jaken was a human as well and told the young boy all about his only son, Zeth. He came there everyday to talk to the child so much, that he called him 'father' on accident, which made Jaken laugh. Jaken was a very wealthy man for his business, that he bought the boy from slavery and made him part of the family

When the boy was 10, the old care-taker of the Korrs came to show him his new home on the outskirts. What he saw was terrible to the young child. The house of his adoptive parents was burning and in the fires with a vibro-blade in hand was his older brother, Zeth, the boy that he had heard so much about had slaughterd his own family and destroyed his home. This shock sent the boy into A comma for two years. The caretaker took the child and hid him from Zeth. Over time, he had been told that a strange feeling was around this boy while he dreamed. Since the boy had no name, The old man gave him A name: Ryukai

When he awoke at the age of 12, he was in a hospital, but something had happend to him. He would not speak to anyone and he would not smile or cry. The only thing on his mind was his training and the image of his brother killing his parents. He stayed in that place for another two years until he saw the face of his brother, Zeth. He wanted to face him in combat, but all he could do was shed his first tears in a long time. He wanted to say something, but he still could not speak. He is now being tested in the facility on Tatooine

Alignment: The Republic

Occupation: Force Student, Swordsman

Skills: For a child his age, his sword skills are above average. His skills with a blade has and always will be his greatest asset and his greatest weakness. The weakness part is that he is using the same tyoe of weapon that killed his parents. When he looks at a sword, he feels a strong emotional feeling that overcomes him and could possibly cry from it. His Force sensitivity is one that is weak, but it has the potential to be noticed by other Force users

Weapons: A Vibro-Sword

Ship: Dosen't fly

Personal belongings: The only thing he has are the clothes on his back and his sword

Roleplay Sample: The cantina was buzzing with business as usual everyday. Whether they watched their favorite games, gambled on certain teams, or to just have a drink, crowds stacked into the cantina everyday. At the counter was a 9 year old boy and a man in his early 30s, talking and smiling. The adult was talking about his son and saying how much it would be nice if he had a brother

"Wow.....I wish I had a brother too"

"Who knows.....maybe you will someday."

"What is his name, mister?"

"Please, call me Jaken and my son's name is Zeth. He's a little older than you, but he's a great kid. He has this certain feeling around other people, like he can tell whos bad and whos good.....I've never been able to figure out how he does that"

"Zeth sounds like an awsome guy......I really want to meet him"

"Well, this bar dosen't let kids inside unless they work here..."

".........."

"Oh.....I'm sorry, I forgot"

"It's okay....I'm used to it now"

The smile on the boys face did not falter as Jaken's frown grew back into a smile. Jaken left the bill on the table with a nice tip for the boy and gave him a pat on the head. He then made his way out of the cantina. As Jaken left, the boy was called back to work whilethe other customers barked and spat on him tho get their orders. He rushed to the back, still having the smile on his face when he thought of how good it would be to have a family

"Jaken and Zeth......It would be a dream come true if I could call them Father and Brother...."

Very good. Just take out the "The oldman then assumed that the boy had the potential to be A Jedi." and you are fine. There isn't any way that some normaly man would know he could be a Jedi. Accepted ~Guilyn

Sorry, I was tired and couldn't think straight. I fixed it