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 Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 1:08 pm
Van Norde Name: Yutaka Shinwha Village: None yet. Roleplaying Example: He wanders through a deserted forest. The moonlight reflects on his face through the green leaves of the high tree's that shelter him. A cold breeze comes up out of nowhere and the leaves start to blow off the trees slowly, falling on the ground. He shivers as the breeze blows against his back, making him realize that he is determined to find a way out of the forest. He takes out an old, golden watch that is hanging beneath his t-shirt and opens it. Staring at the picture of his mother and father. 'Why did you send me here? What is the purpose? You could've atleast gave me some food or something to drink....' He mumbles in himself. He puts the golden watch beneath his t-shirt again and continues walking. Pass. Very nice.
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 1:09 pm
_maikeru_6_ Name: Kohagaru, Maik. Maik is the first name. Village: None yet. Roleplaying example: Maik wakes up after sleeping like 6 hours. "Today is the day" Maik thinks. He jumps out of his bed, still feeling sleepy. He stretches his arms and feels his muscles in his back making a little snap. Maik yawned. He slowly walks up to his shower, putting it on 38 degrees, unstripping him out of his sleeping clothes. He walked in to the shower. Maik feels the water covering his face and washes himself. Maik then stops the shower and dry's himself. He then put on his special kimono he only wears on special days. Maik walks to the front door and smiles his just awakened mother goodbye. He opens the door and feels the sun blinding his eyes. He then make his way outside with a good feeling. I redid it. I hope it is good this time smile You're still writing in present tense. Just wanted to point that out. >_> Because it doesn't really matter whether you write in present or past tense. Just as long as you use third person. So pass.
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 1:12 pm
shizuka_kage Van Norde Name: Yutaka Shinwha Village: None yet. Roleplaying Example: He wanders through a deserted forest. The moonlight reflects on his face through the green leaves of the high tree's that shelter him. A cold breeze comes up out of nowhere and the leaves start to blow off the trees slowly, falling on the ground. He shivers as the breeze blows against his back, making him realize that he is determined to find a way out of the forest. He takes out an old, golden watch that is hanging beneath his t-shirt and opens it. Staring at the picture of his mother and father. 'Why did you send me here? What is the purpose? You could've atleast gave me some food or something to drink....' He mumbles in himself. He puts the golden watch beneath his t-shirt again and continues walking. Pass. Very nice. Thank you ^.^
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 1:22 pm
i have one question, how do you role the dice, or do the random number thing.
Rp example
Hitaku got up from under the tree. Looking around the training grounds he decides he had better start his training with a nice brisk run through the forest. He starts off at a good pase on the dirt trail. Suddenly he sprints as fast as he can and jumps into a tree. As he was running through the tree tops, he gets to a clearing in the forest and decides to take a quick breather and start up again later.
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 1:49 pm
Hitaku5 i have one question, how do you role the dice, or do the random number thing. Rp exampleHitaku got up from under the tree. Looking around the training grounds he decides he had better start his training with a nice brisk run through the forest. He starts off at a good pase on the dirt trail. Suddenly he sprints as fast as he can and jumps into a tree. As he was running through the tree tops, he gets to a clearing in the forest and decides to take a quick breather and start up again later. Look for the Post Action button just above the box you're typing in. You change that to roll dice or random number.
Your example is very simplistic. Try changing it up a little bit with more detail. This is just a list of action. We want what he's feeling, thinking, experiencing.
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 4:12 pm
Alls well that ends well.
Hurino got up from his chair, a devilish smile stroke across his face, his sharp teeth fitting in leaving no gap. A skalpol in hand he walkes across the hall he ignored the moans and groans from the various rooms branching from his very path. He got the teh final door, the kind of door one would find in a morgue. He opens the door, chuckling with an insane look on his face. He looks at his victim and un-verbaly defines to her than he has a skalpon and she wont be of the living world any longer. "Lets have a blood bath." He practicaly jumped forward, and she screams. She sudenly woke from her sleep, sweating, breathing heavily and her pupils tiny. "Damn, that is the fifth one this week." A tear streemed down her face as she reflects on the past week, a few of her friends had been murdered in the same way, everyone knew that anyone could be next.
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 9:08 pm
RP Example:
Nashi held his side as he got up. He was nearing his limit. He looked his opponent up and down. "Th- This cant be how it ends" He said with a grimace. "Maybe I'm just not strong enough." Blood continued to seep out from his wound. "It cant end this way. It just cant" Suddenly his expression stiffened. He put his headphones back on his head. "I wont let it end this way. I wont die, I wont lose!" He yelled as took his hand from his side and started making hand signs. He looked up with a determined expression.
"I cannot Lose!" He growled. "Katon: Hosenka no Jutsu!"
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 11:19 pm
Character name: Sukira, Etsei
(No village decided)
RP Example:
Sukira had cracked his knuckles diabolically, the sound seemed to pierce into the forest beyond him. He yearned to lose his conscious in the heat of battle. He smiled brightly, tilted his head and said calmly: "Thank you." The discontent of that verse echoed in his own mind, yet slowly dissolved into the abyss of his own mind...
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 8:15 am
Pedromac Alls well that ends well. Hurino got up from his chair, a devilish smile stroke across his face, his sharp teeth fitting in leaving no gap. A skalpol in hand he walkes across the hall he ignored the moans and groans from the various rooms branching from his very path. He got the teh final door, the kind of door one would find in a morgue. He opens the door, chuckling with an insane look on his face. He looks at his victim and un-verbaly defines to her than he has a skalpon and she wont be of the living world any longer. "Lets have a blood bath." He practicaly jumped forward, and she screams. She sudenly woke from her sleep, sweating, breathing heavily and her pupils tiny. "Damn, that is the fifth one this week." A tear streemed down her face as she reflects on the past week, a few of her friends had been murdered in the same way, everyone knew that anyone could be next.
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 8:16 am
Level_one RP Example: Nashi held his side as he got up. He was nearing his limit. He looked his opponent up and down. "Th- This cant be how it ends" He said with a grimace. "Maybe I'm just not strong enough." Blood continued to seep out from his wound. "It cant end this way. It just cant" Suddenly his expression stiffened. He put his headphones back on his head. "I wont let it end this way. I wont die, I wont lose!" He yelled as took his hand from his side and started making hand signs. He looked up with a determined expression. "I cannot Lose!" He growled. "Katon: Hosenka no Jutsu!"
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 8:17 am
Erratic_Explosion Character name: Sukira, Etsei (No village decided) RP Example: Sukira had cracked his knuckles diabolically, the sound seemed to pierce into the forest beyond him. He yearned to lose his conscious in the heat of battle. He smiled brightly, tilted his head and said calmly: "Thank you." The discontent of that verse echoed in his own mind, yet slowly dissolved into the abyss of his own mind...
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 2:07 pm
ivory_vamp Erratic_Explosion Character name: Sukira, Etsei (No village decided) RP Example: Sukira had cracked his knuckles diabolically, the sound seemed to pierce into the forest beyond him. He yearned to lose his conscious in the heat of battle. He smiled brightly, tilted his head and said calmly: "Thank you." The discontent of that verse echoed in his own mind, yet slowly dissolved into the abyss of his own mind... Sukira had sighed, "This is more important than I had originally hoped." He reached into his pocket for the small envelope, and viewed the text written inside more carefully. His tighted his soft hands into a fist, wrinkling the margins along the outskirts of the paper. "If I were to fail this mission, there is no return back to my village." With a gloomy expression which seemed to fall prey to every written work, he sunk into the moist ground and leaned against the tree he had grown up with. "What should I do..." He stopped himself as a tear scrolled down his face and smiled. He seemed to share adverse reactions and doublethink standards freely, and proportionally to the context of the current situation. After a few more minutes he had let go of the wrinkled paper and looked up into the sky. "What should I do.....Mother?"
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 8:13 pm
well, here goes nothing.
Ark walked toward the academy, his last day looming up ahead of him like a rain cloud over recess. You know it'll end, just not when. He looked over at the new students, getting ready to go to school after the break. "Well," He sighed, "I guess this is goodbye." He grabbed his stuff, and ran for the door, and arriving on-time for once in his life.
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Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 12:19 pm
ivory_vamp Pedromac Alls well that ends well. Hurino got up from his chair, a devilish smile stroke across his face, his sharp teeth fitting in leaving no gap. A skalpol in hand he walkes across the hall he ignored the moans and groans from the various rooms branching from his very path. He got the teh final door, the kind of door one would find in a morgue. He opens the door, chuckling with an insane look on his face. He looks at his victim and un-verbaly defines to her than he has a skalpon and she wont be of the living world any longer. "Lets have a blood bath." He practicaly jumped forward, and she screams. She sudenly woke from her sleep, sweating, breathing heavily and her pupils tiny. "Damn, that is the fifth one this week." A tear streemed down her face as she reflects on the past week, a few of her friends had been murdered in the same way, everyone knew that anyone could be next. whoot now just need to remember the battle instructions :p
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 7:39 am
sigma hunter well, here goes nothing. Ark walked toward the academy, his last day looming up ahead of him like a rain cloud over recess. You know it'll end, just not when. He looked over at the new students, getting ready to go to school after the break. "Well," He sighed, "I guess this is goodbye." He grabbed his stuff, and ran for the door, and arriving on-time for once in his life. Mmm...I like it. ^^ Pass.
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