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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2018 9:01 pm
Weeamoo Thanks for the submission! There are just a few things I wanna mention/ask: 1. Can someone have a preference as ace? o.o 2. If you plan on casting any sort of spells/magic with this character, then a magus profile needs to be filled out. Civilian profiles are for "normies". One isn't forced into combat simply for being a Knight or Mage. Better? Oh, I made him a bookseller as well.
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2018 10:46 am
DragonMistress07 Better? Oh, I made him a bookseller as well. Accepted.
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High-functioning Trickster
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2018 1:17 pm

Username: Kurai_18 Name: Carter Kuromizu Nickname: Kuro, Codex, The Minx Race: Half Elf Ethnicity: Irish/Japanese Gender: Female Orientation: Lesbian Alignment: Chaotic Neutral Affinity: Wind Occupation: Ranger Age: 18 Birthday: June 21st Height: 5'3" Weapon: Ranger's Bow Mage: Niraya
Natural Abilities: [Name and Rank]
Magus Abilities: (Name and Rank) ❖ Sonic Shot: Arrow flies like a bullet. Rank C ❖ Light Feet: Agility is boosted, making the user faster. Rank E
Unison Abilities: (Include Description and Rank) ❖ Lightning Storm: Carter and Niraya envelope foes or themselves in an offensive or defensive cyclone of wind fused with lightning. Rank B ❖ Lightning Blade: A bolt of lightning is held in place by wind to create a sword that lasts an hour unless disspelled sooner by the user. Rank C+ ❖ Flash Point: Both disappear in a flash of lightning and can reappear in other locations within 100 miles. Requires time to recharge and only Carter and Niraya can zip around with said ability. Rank B+ ❖ Railgun: Niraya's Railgun ability mixes with Carter's Sonic Shot ability to make a really powerful attack. Rank B
Relationships: ❖ Enelly (pronounced "Annally") Kuromizu (Mother; Deceased) ❖ Cari Kuromizu (Twin Brother; Deceased)
Strengths: ✔ Self Defense ✔ Intuitive ✔ Well Mannered
Weaknesses: ✘ Impulsive ✘ Hyperactive ✘ Lazy
Likes: ✔ Hiking ✔ Music ✔ Swimming ✔ Bowhunting
Dislikes: ✘ Sport Hunting ✘ Spicy Foods ✘ Kiwis (the fruit) ✘ Guns
Personality: ❖ Hyperactive ❖ Socially Awkward ❖ Smart
History: ❖ Carter lived most of her life in the forests. She rarely made ventures to towns, except to exchange her hunts for necessities. She later became skilled at pickpocketing and runs a small group of Rangers.
Outfits: ❖ (Always Carries her bow) ❖ Spring: A skort with a brown sweater; quiver around waist ❖ Summer: Skort with quiver around waist; White tank top ❖ Fall: Skirt with fleece stockings; quiver on back; Wool lined cloak and brown/grey sweater over long black shirt ❖ Winter: Skirt with fleece stockings; quiver on back; Wool lined cloak and light grey sweater over long black shirt
Items: ❖ Bow and quiver with 20 arrows ❖ Medicines ❖ Bowie Knife
Other: ❖ [any other information not covered by the stuff above]
Themes: ❖ Main Theme: Nemesis~Alice Nine ❖ Battle Theme: Hammerhead~The Offspring ❖ Emotional Theme: Clair de Lune~Claude Debussy
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2018 1:52 pm
 Username: stardust73 Name: Jade Lotus Nickname: {Currently None} Race: human Ethnicity:american Gender: Female Orientation:staraight Alignment: LG Affinity: water Age:25 Birthday:april 1st Height:5'7" Knight(s): {Currently None} Weapon: Old Tome: A special book that she uses for casting spells, as she must use her voice to cast spells. It also has a place where its blank pages were cut in for the cards she uses in divination. Magic:School: divination ❖ ice manipuation - she creates the ice from water and uses it to hurt her enemies ❖ ice sword - she freezes her sword with ice and uses it as a weapon(Rank B) ❖ rain storm - she causes the sky to rain hard and blinds her enemies ( Rank c) Relationships: ❖ none at this time Strengths: ✔ Loyal: ✔ Kind: ✔ Polite: Weaknesses: ✘ love ✘ flowers ✘ the cold weather Likes: ✔ Books ✔ sunshine ✔ Sweets ✔ cats ✔ Helping People Dislikes: ✘ fighting amoung the ranks ✘ dishonest people ✘ Bloodshed ✘ Heights ✘ Being Weak/Useless Personality: ❖ Jade is a easy going , friendly person who sometimes like to flirt with others when she is happy History: ❖ Jade was raised in an orfanage and ever since she could remember she wanted to be in the military and so she signed up to be a knight. Outfits: ❖ Everyday: Jade is wearing mythril armor and mythril gloves and sturdy leather boots ❖ Funeral: she would like to be burried in her mythril gear and sturdy boots ❖ Formal: she likes to wear her emerald ball gown and matching heels Items: ❖ mythril sword ❖ her teddy bear that she had from the orphange ❖ a gold pocket watch Other: ❖ She has a pet snow leopard kitten Themes: ❖ Main Theme: warrior - disturbed ❖ Battle Theme: rainbow in the dark- dio ❖ Emotional Theme: diamond girl - seals and croft
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2018 3:49 pm
Thanks for the submission! We'd really appreciate it if you could put it into the coding we provided for everyone, though! If that's possible, that'd be great. There are a couple things that I would like to mention: It's great that her school is Divination, but she needs SPELLS! If you could list out and rank her spells, I'd be able to review the profile accurately.
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2018 4:02 pm
Nice resubmission! Alright, there are a couple things I'd like to address: Affinity: A character cannot have two opposing Affinities, so Fire and Wind are not possible. If you'd like to have two Affinities, that's fine, but they can't be weak or strong against each other. You can read more about Affinities here. Natural Abilities: Unless she gained these through some other means, making a contract with a magus does not grant Natural Abilities. I'd suggest placing what you've made here into your Magus Abilities. Light Feet: Unless this is something that needs to be activated, increased agility would just be placed in Strengths.
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High-functioning Trickster
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2018 4:07 pm
Weeamoo Nice resubmission! Alright, there are a couple things I'd like to address: Affinity: A character cannot have two opposing Affinities, so Fire and Wind are not possible. If you'd like to have two Affinities, that's fine, but they can't be weak or strong against each other. Natural Abilities: Unless she gained these through some other means, making a contract with a magus does not grant Natural Abilities. I'd suggest placing what you've made here into your Magus Abilities. Light Feet: Unless this is something that needs to be activated, increased agility would just be placed in Strengths. I fixed the affinity. The Light Feet one needs to be activated. I tweaked the abilities since she has no natural ones. It's been resubmitted.
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2018 4:11 pm
Kurai_18 I fixed the affinity. The Light Feet one needs to be activated. I tweaked the abilities since she has no natural ones. It's been resubmitted. Y'all are too fast for me! xD Alright, my only thing is since you got rid of fire, I would change Fire Arrow to something else, either get rid of it or have it match her single Affinity.
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High-functioning Trickster
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2018 4:18 pm
Weeamoo Kurai_18 I fixed the affinity. The Light Feet one needs to be activated. I tweaked the abilities since she has no natural ones. It's been resubmitted. Y'all are too fast for me! xD Alright, my only thing is since you got rid of fire, I would change Fire Arrow to something else, either get rid of it or have it match her single Affinity. Done.
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2018 5:08 pm
All set! Feel free to update her profile.
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2018 5:21 pm
Post here first...got it. Does everything have to be done? Like the songs for instance...I usually take FOREVER on those. haha
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2018 6:28 pm
Weeamoo Thanks for the submission! We'd really appreciate it if you could put it into the coding we provided for everyone, though! If that's possible, that'd be great. There are a couple things that I would like to mention: It's great that her school is Divination, but she needs SPELLS! If you could list out and rank her spells, I'd be able to review the profile accurately. how do you rank the spells ? i have no idea what you are taking about , sorry
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2018 9:28 pm
U/C 
Username: Killer-wolf-kun Name: Magus Belladona Nickname: Maggy,Mag, Arcanus the Black Mage Race: Human? Ethnicity: Welsh Gender: Male Orientation: Bisexual Alignment: Chaotic Affinity: Earth Age: 19 Birthday: 4/4 Height: 5'5 Weapon: The Book of Vile Darkness / A set of poison tipped needles Magic: [first name your character's school then make a list of their spells, ranking each]
Relationships: ❖ [Who your RPC is related to]
Strengths: ✔ A Prodigal Genius in the sense of Worldly and Arcane Knowledge ✔ An Abundance of Arcane Energy ✔ A perpetual positive and jovial disposition
Weaknesses: ✘ Not often Serious and makes light of even tight situations ✘ Not physically Powerful or Dexterous ✘ Usually Fumbling with Honey on his fingertips due to his addiction to sweets
Likes: ✔ Honey sweetened tea and pastries ✔ Hugs and kisses ✔ Magical Tomes ✔ Xirtos the dark lord
Dislikes: ✘ Unneeded hostility [Such as bullies and war] ✘ Swimming alone ✘Bitter Coffee ✘Sad music
Personality: ○Usually has a soft smile on his face ○Enjoys happiness, either being happy or creating happiness ○Often tries to make other people comfortable, even if outside of his own home ○Strives for greatness in himself and others ○Plays coy often to people who he feels comfortable around, and pokes fun at them lightly ○Hardly shows his discomforts or embarrassments ○Likes to feel other people around him [Enjoys hand holding, hugs and such] ○Tries his best to be innocent
History: ❖ The young man hailed from a land far off and forgotten in it's own rite. The place of little people and less commodities as he was raised an orphan along side a cleric who headed over the children. The young man's eyes were opened to the great world of magic from a young age, showing that he had a high aptitude for it for an odd reason. The boy, even against some of the other's better judgement, was tutored in the Arcane arts by the head of the children and taught how to produce magic and use spells to enhance his allies, and heal the weak. It was rather weak and complexed for the young man at first, though after his mind began to develop more, and his body was more use to outputting magic, at the age of 10, he was able to preform a multitude of spells, basing most of them around his favorite thing in the world. Honey. The young man's Arcane curiosity took him further than the orphanage could hold. He would wander at his early teen years and travel to the forestry around to try out new spells, and study the life that made the village prosper in it's own. Though as he explored the lake that separated the village from the mainlands, the young man fell from a steep cliff, into the waters below. His body sucked in by the aquatic depth and his life seemed to fade as he was pulled to the bottom.
It was a whole week he was missing as he washed up upon the shores of the mainlands, with nothing more than the clothing on his back, and a book that held several strange markings, and dozens of torn pages. The young man would slowly rise up to a seated position as he would feel the great movement in his spirit. The young man, though confused , was overjoyed that he was alive, and headed back to the small village where he was met with open arms once more. Though as he grew still, the magic inside of him darkened. His studies were more into the lore of gods than the folly of magic, and his powers were overwhelming for a human his age in their location. The young man,
Outfits: ❖ The Cloak of the Wood Temple
Items: ❖ Book of Xirtos ❖A jar with Honey and his name carved on it
Other: ❖ [any other information not covered by the stuff above]
Themes: ❖ Main Theme: Song Name ❖ Battle Theme: Song Name ❖ Emotional Theme: Song Name
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Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2018 12:48 am
Username: Neryem Name: ???? Nickname: N/A Race: Homunculi (Fused from Ooze, Human, and Succubi) Ethnicity: Dark Purple Gender: "Female" Orientation: ??? Alignment: Chaotic Neutral Affinity: Earth Age: 9 (creation-wise) Birthday: September 10th Height: 5'8" Weapon: Her Body Mage: N/A
Natural Abilities: ❖ Unstable Mass - Her body is an amalgamation of several different races into one being. Her "feet" are merely a set of tentacles with mouths and tongues all leading towards her stomach. Eyes peer out along set lines, always twitching and searching for new subjects to focus upon. By attacking or using skills, she can build up "mana", a resource that she uses to empower her own abilities. Once reaching a full amount of it (100), her body will burst, causing an A-Rank amount of damage around her and throwing her slime in a wide radius around her. This also reduces her form to a single blob, unable to use an abilities until she spends a post regathering enough slime to reform her body.
xxx↳ Slime Manipulation (Rank E) - Harkening to her slime nature, she's able to reshape body parts at her whim. They can become another shape, take the form of a weapon, body part or any other sort of practical methods. She's limited only by how much of her slime she has to work with. Full form changes drastically alter her body shape. When taking the form of weaponry, she cannot copy the properties of a weapon, instead opting to be physical or blunt damage unless her form is directly altered.
xxx↳ Transformation (Rank D) - Using this style of transformation, she may copy the appearance of another person, but must consume a portion of their DNA first. Once in the form of another person, she will be unable to use any of her abilities without breaking the illusion of being a perfect copy. This will remain until she sustains damage or cancels the effect herself.
xxx↳ Involuntary Digestion (Rank E+) - If there's one thing Oozes are good at, it's eating. Any unfortunate material, be it organic or inorganic, will begin to be digested the moment it makes contact with her body. Thankfully after some training, she seems to have grown an ability to control this feature of her, able to use it for battle or when consuming food for energy. Coming into contact of any slime part of her when this ability is active will result in a large amount of pain as her slime begins to slowly eat away at organic material for consumption. Any damage caused this way will grant her a heal based on the strength of the attack.
At E-Rank, the barely any damage is done, though will outright dissolve most small inorganic matter such as scraps of paper or meat. C-Rank damage is akin to a bad first or second degree burn, and is able to burn through most substances and materials at a medium pace. At it's strongest effect, A-Rank, her slime becomes devastating but costly. The damage down is equal to sticking a part of one's body into scalding hot water. If limbs or organic parts remain affected by this technique in this rank, severe damage, such as the loss of a limb or intense burning will occur. The downside to this technique is that it costs quite the amount of energy, and thus causes her appetite to become enough to devour anything she can as her body expends all of its energy to focus on digestion.
❖ Mana Drain (Rank D) - Like a spider tending to prey caught in its web, so to does the homunculus have a way to some fast food and energy. Once caught within her grasp, she can drain mana from a source of the energy by sucking it out through one of her many mouths on her form. This not only regain lost mana from her abilities, but also provides a heal as it mends any minor damage done.
❖ Swallowing Shadows (Rank E+) - The homunculi plunges its arms and mouths into the ground, using its many maws to such the magic out of air and into its stomach. By performing this, it removes all illusions with ten feet of her as well as characters that are stealthed or hidden by means of magic. She gains mana whenever an illusion or shadow is eaten this way.
Magus Abilities: (Name and Rank) ❖ [abilities the Knight gains through the addition of mana] ❖ ❖
Unison Abilities: (Include Description and Rank) ❖ [abilities the Knight gains through the addition of mana that act as a representation of their bond] ❖ ❖
Relationships: ❖ Wilhelm Averson - Creator (Deceased) ❖ Edette Averson - Daughter Surrogate (Deceased) ❖ Verunis - Rogue Succubi (Fused With) ❖ Joanne Afton - Caretaker (Fused With) ❖ Jel - "Sibling" (Fused With [Catalyst])
Strengths: ✔ Gelatinous Mass: Not having a solid body tends to be handy in a dangerous world! She is immune to any effects/magics/items that induce bodily functions and sleep. In addition, physical attacks don't cause her any pain. They can, however, disable her ways of attacking. She can reform her body by absorbing bits and pieces of her slime. ✔ Hyperactive Metabolism: When low on energy, she's willing to just just about anything and everything, her body able to break down and consume properties of things normally not edible ✔ Loyal: When coming across someone friendly, she acts just like a pet would, always happy and content with being by their side. Her homunculi nature prevents her from attacking her allies. ✔ Mana Conduit: Her body consists of mostly magic intensifying material, causing all magic effects cast on her to double in potency. ✔ Living Container: Thanks to having part of her body be slime based, she can store items in one of her many maws for future use.
Weaknesses: ✘ Gibberish: Lacks any kind of concept of common language, her sentences wild in in some sort of unknown or dead tongue ✘ Body Horror: Her looks can cause some unwanted looks of shock and terror. Not that she'll recognize that though ✘ Chaotic: Leaving her to her own devices can be a horrible choice, as she's very likely to get herself into trouble ✘ Ravenous Maw: Always hungering, her abilities take a great deal of energy which she must find someway to replenish. ✘ Magic Bane: Being attacked by magic damages her more than it would a normal person
Likes: ✔ Food ✔ Affection ✔ Mana ✔ Treasure
Dislikes: ✘ Intense Cold ✘ Tight Spaces ✘ Water ✘ Crickets
Personality: ❖ Ever the curious monstrosity, she remains curious and naive of the world she's been born into. Once bound to her creator and now free, the monster hopes to explore and discover the secrets of this world, and probably eat them too. When encountering another human, she becomes curious of their form, wondering exactly how they work, what their features are for, and if she can touch them. This is all passively done. Any aggression towards her will be treated with aggression in response.
History: ❖ There lived an alchemist named Wilhelm, and his daughter, Edette, in Vrensia, the young woman aspiring to travel the world. After packing up her things, she traveled to the outskirts of the country before contact was lost. It wasn't until a month later did word reach the alchemist that his beloved daughter's body had been found in the woods, drained of her life and mana. She was placed back at his home in a comatose state, unable to be awakened. A fire was ignited in the soul of Wilhelm. Sitting in her workshop day and night, he worked endlessly on a way to bring his daughter back from an untimely demise. Toiling away, years would pass until he had finally hit a discovery, a way of bringing her back, though at a bloody cost. During this, he hired Joanne Afton, a maid looking for work, to care for his daughter as she rested. Jel, her pet slime, would observe the doctor with a curious glance, bouncing along as he mindlessly followed along.
The acquisition of materials was long and hard, with exotic ingredients from around the world being ordered as fast as they could. The eyes of beholders, demons, and other dark additions would be added to his cauldron. The caretaker that he had hired for his daughter would be one of many materials he would harvest for his creation Yet, there was one final ingredient that eluded him. He would need the blood of her murderer. Traveling around the kingdom, he searched high and low before coming across the succubus that had slew his daughter. Once she had met with a blood end, her body was dropped into the cauldron alongside Edette's.
Mixing the concoction together, all would be perfect as magic and mana mixed together in a bright shower of lights. The cauldron boiled and shook for a minute before growing still, its contents becoming an unnatural purple water. Looking over his notes, Jel would peer inside before seeing the reflection of Joanne, and would see her eyes twitch. Joyful at the movement, the slime would jump into the cauldron before the fusion would begin. The slime bubbled and spilled onto the ground, the fire below turning a dark lavender color. The viscous material inside would grow upwards, a hand reaching upwards and clawing its way out of the cauldron and spilling its contents onto the floor. From this sticky and fluid substance would come a series of eyes that stared at their creator as a figure would form out of the gooey material. A fusion of all three bodies, with the succubi's body along with Joanne's clothing, and Jel's Ooze body, the amalgamation would cheerfully console her creator as he mourned his failure.
Taking into her new role with as much heart and pride as Joanne, Wihelm would soon grow old, past the years of strenuous activity. Although many would be questionable of his newest hommunculi, he remained locked into a senile and bitter nature at his failure. The creature had yet to receive a name, and would remain that way when she awoke to see her master lying motionless in his chair the next day. They took him away with her in tow, forcing her way in order to be by his side. Upon his burial, she would stay for many years. Travelers would call it a most confusing sight as they would see a servant-like figure standing atop a forgotten grave for hours on end. Time would pass the monstrous being by, eventually her bond had been broken and she was free to roam a world she had no place in. She now wanders, in search of a new purpose and things to meet (and eat).
Outfits: ❖ Nothing at all. ❖ No seriously, nothing
Items: ❖ N/A ❖
Other: ❖ Those fluent in the tongue of a Succubi will be able to partially understand her, her tale a mixture of their own language interspersed with nonsense babbling. ❖ Also makes a good servant. Just keep her away from any valuables.
Themes: ❖ Main Theme: Song Name ❖ Battle Theme: Song Name ❖ Emotional Theme: Song Name
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Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2018 9:51 am
i fixed the profile but still dont know how to rank the spells though
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