Grypesagon
Final Product.
I could use some opinions. This is the first installment in a long series of images. This style will set the pace for the rest. I dunno how I feel about it. Give me some feedback please. Be cruel. Be honest. Act like your me for a second and reply with no regard for my feelings. Be cruel if you must. it's important.
when it comes to art, Gunny always has something to say...
so here we go
sweatdrop First off, the upper half of the girl looks great... but the lower half needs some work. Something looks off with her legs, but I just haven't been able to pick out that it is yet.
Her hand is a mess though. The fingers aren't that bad, but you've made her palm-heel much too large. You need to smooth that line leading from her wrist into her hand, get rid of that bulbous lump.
Her facial expression may need a little work too. I'm not really sure what type of mood you were trying to set with her face, but it's making me think of a snotty teenager rolling her eyes and saying, "whatever"
that attitude doesn't seem like it fits with the rest of the picture.
you also need to fix her feet, her left foot should be turned out a bit more, she seems a bit off balance at the moment. her feet also seem to be a bit too close together.
now for some nice comments n_n
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love the moon!! I think it looks great.
3nodding The sun is very nice too. I also really like that tree, especially it's shape and the way the light of the moon and the sun are reflecting off the leaves.
very nice.
the water is nice too, but there's something about the sky I don't quite like. I like the contrast, but it might be a bit too much of a contrast... maybe try a shade deeper for the sky with the sun.
now for my biggest complaint...
the cat.
it seems so out of place. especially with that rock in front of it.
it looks like you just threw the rock because you didn't feel like drawing the cat's legs. I think if the cat was maybe lounging on the rock it would look better. The cat seems too alert compared to the girls posture. If that's the contrast you're going for than you should have him sitting up, poised very stiffly with a much harder look on his face.
If you're not going for that contrast then you really need to loosen him up a little. Make him more liquid and flowing (if that makes any sense
whee ).
Sprawled over the rock looking indifferently off in the opposite direction of the girl will keep the relaxed "whatever" type feel that the girl is portraying.
k, that's all I've got for now...
I hope that helped a little
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