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 Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:19 am
[[By the way... Are we all waiting for people? -Oh, and thanks Rekinore for letting me know! biggrin Good Luck with school!]]
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:21 am
((Me and Pen are waiting on 3 people :/
Bayer, Sauron and Sage. ))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:24 am
Onamisaki [[I'm guessing he's a really angry neutral person.]] ((i guess youc an say hes borderline neutral ))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:25 am
(( Well I'm here, but I'm waiting on a response to me threatening to kill one of the guys.. The um.. Cyborg dude *-* anyways I can't post until that person posts a response to me holding my sword, and claws on him.))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:27 am
((I'm finally done!! Yay!! brb, time for me to get something to eat.))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:31 am
((ok, I'm back. Oh and, would anyone object if I made an update post every five pages?))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:33 am
((I wouldn't object at all.
And yeah Sauron, I caught onto that. So the three of us are just kind of stuck :/))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:36 am
[[*sigh* Many of us are. crying AND, that is an awesome idea, Pen. KUDOS!]]
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:43 am
[[You think I should make an OOC thread? We're taking up a ridiculous amount of space OOCing. ^_^
I have no Idea what you mean by borderline... would it be borderline Purifier or borderline defender? eek ]]
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:46 am
((I think an OOC thread would be a great idea.))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:46 am
((ooc thread= good idea from page eleven till this page, most of it is ooc's i learned that from going back and forth numerous times. 3nodding ))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:48 am
[[Then it shall be CREATED!!!! *poof* sweatdrop ...uh, gimme a second.]]
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 12:09 pm
((is there, like absolutly no way to keep the rp going?))
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SirBayer rolled 1 10-sided dice:
4
Total: 4 (1-10)
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 12:20 pm
((Three things:
1: MOTHER OF ALL THAT IS GOOD AND HOLY! HOW DID SO MUCH HAPPEN?! There were about 8 pages I hadn't read. @.@
2: Sorry for missing and making you folks wait.
3: Note that, although he is a cyborg, he's a cyborg; that means he's still alive, still thinking, still a being with a soul and all that good stuff. 3nodding ))
Mark reacted rather quickly to the threat of both being sliced at and being strangled. His knees gave way, his body slumped, then went rigid as he changed the surprise tactic into a roll under his opponent's outstretched arms and wings. ((I think this is possible, right?)) Clear of the attacker, he raised his arm again, firing the same stream of yellow-orange energy teardrops.
60/60
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 12:26 pm
(( YAY I can post!))
36/40
Ryn gasped at being shot in the back, and felt his scales crackle from the odd singeing weapon, before spinning and jumping back. He glanced first at Nendir and Izzy, then the car, and then the being before him.
"Dangit. Izzy's injured, and the car is useless for fleeing in now. Only one way out.", Ryn leapt past the Cyborg, landing next to Izzy and Nendir.
"Exit, Stage up!", Ryn shouted grabbing them both by the scruff of their necks, and beating his wings once, pulling them into the air.
Once he was fifty feet up, he said," So. Either of you know where we should go now... Oh yah, and grab hold of my arms and hold on tight. I don't wanna drop you by accident."
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