Considering a few recent updates, my original design for this character is no longer feasible.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Tetsuya Kaede Shichiro Nickname: None Earned
Age: 18 Birthdate: March 20 Gender: Male
Height: 5' 10" Weight: 179 lbs.
Nindo: "I am but a leaf on the wind." Personality: Tetsuya is initially hesitant to connect to others, being orphaned and forced to go the way alone. Though as he makes connections and loyalties set their course he finds himself ever the stalwart companion and forever willing to shield those who cannot shield themselves.
Village: Kirigakure Rank: Genin First Class: Ninjutsu Second Class: Ninjutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Senju
Chakra Pool: 225+225+80+10+50+50+100+20 = 760 Stamina Pool: 25+25+50+50 = 150 Chakra Element: Doton, Suiton, and Katon Chakra Color: Amaranthine Chakra Materialization: Nondescript Aura of Amaranthine (Purple) Colour
Strengths: • Ninjutsu • Battlefield Denial Weaknesses: • Taijutsu Combat • Swordplay Fears: • Leaving nothing to be remembered by. • Being Alone, once he's made friends.
• All Mokuton users have Doton [ Earth ] and Suiton [ Water ] as chakra elements. • All Mokuton users are able to learn Doton [ Earth ] and Suiton [ Water ] ninjutsu one [1] post faster. • All Mokuton have incredibly deep chakra pools. [ Chakra pool maximum +80/Rank Up to A Rank ] • All Mokuton techniques have a weakness to Katon [ Fire ], & grow uncontrollably when around the Nine-Tails Chakra. • The Senju Clan is highly susceptible to the Moulding Mushroom and its effects. • No handsigns are needed for Eiseijutsu usage if of that class.
Personal Attributes: • Practiced Hands: Can Cast Jutsu utilizing a Single Hand. • Elemental Battery: Tetsuya Gains an Extra Elemental Affinity. • Santa's Knowledge: Gains -2 Reduction to Ninjutsu Training. • Regular Thursday: Gains -2 Reduction to Ninjutsu Training
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 0両 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Longbow Weapon Range: 300 Yards Weapon Weight: 1.5 lbs Weapon Location: Quiver Grip on Back
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Arrows x 15 • Santa's Library - Good for either 10 ninjutsu/genjutsu, 1 buki/tai-style, or 2 custom jutsu. [ Unopened ] • 'Experience Potion' - Worth 10 Free Training/Mission Posts. • 4 mid-tier or lower Variable Marbles. • 1 high-tier Variable Marble.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Doton:
• Tsuchi Tou Tou [ Swift Earth ] X Rank: E • Doton Bunshin no Jutsu [ Earth Clone Skill ]X Rank: E • Iwa Tounyuu no Jutsu [ Rock Throw Technique ]X Rank: E • Doroku Gaeshi [ Rock Shield ] X Rank: D • Arijigoku [ Inescapable Hell ]X Rank: (Null) Minimum C • Bakuyaku Iwa Kawarimi [ Explosive Stone Body Replacement ] X Rank: C • Jihibiki Kansei no Jutsu [ Earth Tremor Sense Technique ] X Rank: C
Suiton:
• Suimenka no Kisoku [ Breathing Underwater Technique ] X Rank: D • Mizutamari no Jutsu [ Water Puddle Technique ] X Rank: D • Takitsubo no Jutsu [ Waterfall Basin Technique ] X Rank: C • Mizu no Tatsumaki [ Tornado of Water ] X Rank: C • Suirou no Jutsu [ Water Prison Technique ] X Rank: C • Mizutamari Yusuo no Jutsu [ Water Puddle Transportation Technique ] X Rank: C • Doriru Suiyari no Jutsu [ Drilling Water Spears ] X Rank: B • Goshokuzame [ Five Sharks Eating ] X Rank: B
Katon
• Tanebi no Jutsu [ Cinder Technique ] X Rank: D • Gōkakyū no Jutsu [ Great Fireball Technique ] X Rank: C • Taika no Jutsu [ Fireproof Technique ] X Rank: C • Horou no Jutsu [ Fire Prison Technique ] X Rank: B • Gouka Senpuu no Jutsu [ Hellfire Whirlwind Skill ] X Rank: B • Karyuu Endan [ Fire Dragon Flame Projectile ] X Rank: B • Haisekishou [ Burning Ash Accumulation ] X Rank: B • Myaku Hitofuki no Jutsu [ Pulse Blast Technique ] X Rank: B
Mokuton
• Mokuton: Henge [ Wood Release: Transformation ] X • Mokuton: Daijurin no Jutsu [ Wood Release: Great Forest Technique ] X Rank C
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▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u None:
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Hard Physical: Hand to Hand
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Orphaned as a child Tetsuya never knew much of his parents personally. He grew knowing they gave their lives in sacrifice to the village, in noble service, the only end befitting any shinobi of the Mist, much less of any other village. Though never knowing of either familial Kekkei Genkai, he was left to begin his training at the Academy with many other students, and while prone to occasional fits of rage he did pass through the course with valiantly flying colours. He was never much of a trouble maker, growing, as he had to much to do in making his own household and keeping it kept. He did not spend much time with others while in his youth because many believed him to be living in a cursed home, product of ghostly beings. While for a time this depressed the boy, he again as always realized, the greater portion of his life was still ahead of himself.
[ [ His story is a work in progress, to grow with his continuing storyline. ] ]
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Kariatsu Ikazuya Nickname: Kari
Age: 13 Birthdate: March 20th Gender: Male
Height: 5'7 Weight: 120 lbs
Nindo: "Protect the ones I care about!" Personality: Tranquil, Brave, Lionhearted, Polite
Village: Konohagakure Title: Genin Rank: Rank D First Class: Taijutsu Class Second Class: Senor Class
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: +25 Chakra/Stamina
Chakra Pool: 325/325 Stamina Pool: 225/225 Chakra Element: Katon, Fuuton Chakra Color: Black Chakra Materialization: Bulbs of chakra orbit around his body in an unorthodox fashion.
Strengths: • Good at hand to hand • Other senses are stronger than most Weaknesses: • He can't see at all • Transformation can catch him off guard Fears: • Losing other senses • Being a burden to other people because of disability
Class Disciplines : • Brawler • Oracle Reductions: • Can learn Taijutsu +1 Post Faster While In Dojo • Personal Attributes: • Physical Strength Slightly Increased • Slightly Increased Sense of Feel
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0 Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Heavy Metal Training Gauntlets Weapon Range: Arms Length Weapon Weight: 50 lbs each Weapon Location: On his hands • Gauntlets
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 15 Needles • ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Katon •
Fuuton •
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • {If none, remove section} ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Kariatsu isn't the most for fortunate child in his time. His sense of sight was taken away by an illness he had at birth, it could have taken his life but luckily he survived. When he was young his blindness never seemed to bother him though, it was just regular life for him. He figured something was wrong with him though; he heard stories of color and things associated with that but he had never seen things like that, so the concept confused him. No one was ever able to explain color to him, the only things they could say about things like red was that it was a hot "color" and that blue was a colder "color". Kari listened to stories about shinobi, and there pride and security of ones nation and this really touched his heart because he loved the ones that cared for him. Caring for a nation you love is just like caring for the people you love. So he made it his mission to become a great shinobi one day, despite his disability. His parents were very wealthy and when he was four he asked his father to enroll him in the Academy, and like any concerned parent that just wasn't in his fathers agenda. But this kid was determined to become one, everyday training his senses since his optical ability wasn't something he could depend on. He never really noticed it because he thought it was normal for everyone, but he could sense chakra around him. Knowing that different chakra was from different people, he came to the conclusion that if he wanted to fight, he would have to attack chakra. Everyday since he was 6 he has been training with his hired sensei in the art of Taijutsu. Getting better and better at it, one day he finally convinced his mother and father to enroll him in the Academy. No one really noticed he was blind until he brought it up, and everyone was shocked. He read by feeling the small differences in the ink on the paper, people wondering how he could read without even looking down at the words. Nowadays, he trains harder than anyone in his class, trying to be one of the first blind shinobi in all of the land. He is destined for greatness.
Posted: Mon Jan 25, 2016 4:51 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Karite Hyuuga Nickname: Kar
Age: 27 Birthdate: August 20, XXXX Gender: Male
Height: 6'1 / 185.42 Weight: 175Lb's / 84Kg
Nindo: "Fight for what you love, an Love what you fight to protect." Personality: Relaxed, Laid Back, Calm, Easy Going Village: Hidden Mist Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank First Class: Bukijutsu Second Class: Taijutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Hyuuga
Chakra Pool: 125+75=200 Stamina Pool: 125+175=300 Chakra Element: Raiton, Suiton Chakra Color: Black Chakra Materialization: Flicker's like a soft flame, turning an rising into Black Skull's
Strengths: • Hand to Hand • Swordsmanship Weaknesses: • Ninjutsu • Genjutsu Fears: • Killing • Mass murder
Class Disciplines : • Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below. • Berserker: Your external training and devotion to taijutsu has allowed your attacks to have great strength, speed, and power behind them, making them overwhelm physical taijutsu techniques of the same rank or lower. Additionally, your hardened body allows you to defend against ninjutsu attacks 2 ranks lower than a physical taijutsu defensive technique, taking little to no damage from it, and defend against ninjutsu attacks 1 rank below a complex taijutsu defensive technique unharmed. Reductions: • • Personal Attributes: • Slightly Enhanced Speed an Strength • Can wield Two Handed Swords with one Hand
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 04 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 00 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Weapon Range: Weapon Weight: Weapon Location: • {When you create your profile, you may have any one basic weapon.)
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
{Your first element's name} Raiton •
{Your second element's name} Suiton •
{Other jutsu type's name} {Bloodline, Kugutsu, Eiseijutsu, etc.} {If none, remove section} • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • {If none, remove section} ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Growing up in the Hidden Mist Village, Karite was a drifter in words. He drifted around the Village, watching an helping those around him. Along the ways from his childhood an teen years, he was interested in Taijutsu an Bukijutsu. Having seen the members of the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist, Karite wanted to grow up to be like them. Strong in his own ways, but powerful enough to protect what he wanted. But along the ways of his growing up, Karite found himself facing a slight problem. Under his belt already, was five kills, murders in the sense. But the five people that he had killed, where bandits, thieves, or other killers. But to Karite, that was a problem, being the fact his Father used to be someone of that Status, which now he was following in the steps of.
After a few years, Karite had trained, an had gotten rid of the mind set he used to have, changing who he was in a way. Still training to get his hands on a spot an rank of the Seven Swordsmen Karite will do anything he can to obtain the power to protect the Hidden Mist Village, his dream of wielding the Seven Great Swords of the Mist, even possessing a few of them would make his dream come true.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Rina Maebara Nickname: Kurokarite / Ri-ri (Satoshi Only) ↬ "Black Reaper" a name given to Rina by her classmates due to her isolated nature and extremely fearsome aura. Rina's manipulation of her tendrils coupled with the incredible physical prowess from the bloodline bestowed upon her give off a very scary presence, hence the title. Age: 18 Birthdate: 04/16 Gender: Female
Nindo: "Don't judge those who sin differently from you" Personality:“Colder by the hour, more dead with every breath.” Rina is a very quiet individual and is noted as being overly serious to the point of aggression, many of her peers find her intimidating because of this. The young shinobi also has a distinct lack of trust in everyone including those titled as her allies, her trust is incredibly tough to gain and even then there will always remain some air of doubt about her person, this never seems to change. Despite her initially cold exterior she is still a capable shinobi and will work well with others if they learn to follow her lead, she is a lone wolf otherwise and will not take orders from those she deems unfit to be directing her. Many of her fellow genin classify her as an unknown and are not sure why she has become a shinobi or what she gets out of it causing them to doubt and fear her in some cases. In reality she is a young girl with a lot of baggage and perhaps the only ones who can truly realize this are the adults, she has lost everything and struggles with herself internally, wanting to eradicate the empty feeling inside of her heart but not understanding how to go about doing something so difficult.
Village: Kumogakure Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank First Class: Sensor Second Class: Medical
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Jiongu
Chakra Pool: 465 Stamina Pool: 75 Chakra Element: Suiton & Fuuton Chakra Color: Blue Chakra Materialization: Thin Aura
Strengths: • Raw Strength • Flexibility Weaknesses: • Bukijutsu • Her Brother Fears: • Heights • Betrayal
Class Disciplines : • Resolution: The user is more determined to get fine details from his sensory techniques, but in order to get this type of clarity the user's range of the technique is reduced by half. The user is able to discover type of technique that is about to be active (fuuin, genjutsu, ninjutsu, custom jutsu, complex tai and buki), even specifics such as Bloodline type and rank. Additionally, the user can gain similar information about any chakra source in their sensory technique's range, including what bloodline the person possesses, and how large their chakra pool is. • Specialist: The user, choosing to specialize in either healing or harmful medical techniques, gains a great boost to their chakra control in that area. At Chunnin, they gain a -5 chakra reduction to perform techniques in their specialty. at Jounin, -10, at Konin -15 at Sannin -20. To clarify, they they gain a -5 chakra reduction every rank, to a maximum of -20 at sannin. All medical jutsu are still learnable by both sides, but the chakra control only applies to the chosen side. Reductions: • Learn genjutsu one [1] post faster. • Learn medical techniques one [1] post faster. • Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster. • Jiongu users learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster. Personal Attributes: • Shadowdrive: Thanks to her prodigal sensory capabilities and her advanced knowledge in the controlling and manipulation of chakra Rina after much difficult and grueling training is able to suppress her chakra to the point that she is completely untraceable by all. The only ones with a chance of pinpointing her location or even realizing her existence being sensory specialists or dojutsu users with sensory capabilities. The scope of her masking abilities going as far as keeping high ranking shinobi unawares. • Surgical Weaving: In depth knowledge of both her bloodline and medical procedures has granted Rina the ability to successfully implant ocular bloodlines into patients without the use of an ability. The process itself is arduous and drains half of her maximum chakra from her reserves. The surgery itself takes a total of [2] posts explaining in detail the transplant. Rina is unable to use this medical procedure on herself and instead it can only be successfully implanted onto others through her steady hand and skill.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Tanto Weapon Range: 6 " Weapon Weight: 0.3 lbs Weapon Location: Back Waist
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Kunai [15] • Explosive Tags [8] • Steel Wire
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Suiton •
Fuuton •
Eiseijutsu •
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • UNAVAILABLE ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u None • ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u None •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ "A tragic bleeding heart before me, and I'm starving." Born into a small village within the Lightning Country the young Rina alongside the rest of her family was born a monster. Living tendrils, hidden cozily inside a suit made of meat in order to better blend in. Attempting to grow up as an average human being was an increasingly difficult task for the young girl who saw no point in hiding away what she really was, being inhuman and attempting to integrate into their society made little sense to her. A couple of years after her birth she was blessed with a younger brother, also carrying the same bloodline as the rest of her family. Satoshi, her little brother clung to her for dear life in his younger years- admiring his elder sister greatly and mimicking her every action. The two of them were inseparable and were often found together even in their free time playing around. This continued on for many years until they were both around seven and nine years old. The simple village life they had grown up in was threatened by the increasing aggressive behavior of neighboring bandits and rogue shinobi. Mock protection fees needing to be paid by the village in order to keep it from being attacked were just barely being paid each month until finally the funds came in short and the assaults began. First it was the outer most houses of the village, pillaged, razed, household members left for dead if they hadn't already been slaughtered. The payments became weekly to keep them from harming the citizens, each week they fell short another family died. Until finally the small village had enough of being attacked and given no aid from Kumogakure, the farmers and families found whatever weapons they could and acted in retaliation. Rina's mother and father were among the militia that went out to face the threat head on, however these were simple people with no knowledge of combat or the ninja art. Even the mother and father of both Satoshi and Rina were no match for their opponent despite the bloodline advantage they carried. Soon all that was left of the village was the passive citizens and the children of the deceased. This was when the enemy took their final step and launched a full on assault on what was left of the people living there.
When the final assault began Satoshi and Rina were both frightened but the latter knew what needed to be done, coaxing her younger brother into following her lead the two of them left their home and ran for the road, attempting to leave the village and find safe haven within the sanctuary of Kumogakure a place much better fortified. However their little legs could only carry them so far before the much older and more skilled rogues were upon them. They had just reached the outskirts of the village when Rina heard voices calling after them and a flurry of kunai and shuriken buizzing by their heads and body. A few of them found their way into the bodies of both Satoshi and Rina, she urged her brother to stand and fight, but take the fall once a normal human being would have succumbed to the injuries received. She did the same, dislodging a kunai from her thigh and using it to defend and attack against the rogues. Before being overwhelmed by the enemy forces Rina was able to moderately injure a few of them, Satoshi even managing to kill one of their attackers. The two of them after being given "fatal" stab wounds fell to the enemy. They stayed quiet and played dead until they felt them to rot, and when the rogues cleared out Rina led her younger brother down the road toward Kumogakure where she hoped they could find somewhere safe for awhile. Making sure to patch up any slashes, cuts, and holes within their human vessels with tendrils while they moved on.
When the two children finally stumbled upon Kumogakure they were instantly identified as children of the Lightning Country and labeled not a threat allowing them within the city walls, under watch for the time being. They were cleaned up, and sent to the current Raikage in order to be debriefed and give an account on what had happened, Rina taking the lead in these discussions and explaining their circumstances. After the village was happy with what information they had been given they took the two children in as wards of Kumogakure and helped them find work and board in order to live without much worry. This worked for some years as they got themselves situated in the village and really began to understand what they were and what their place in the world was. However the siblings disregarded most of this and Rina instead enlisted into the academy some months later picking up on everything rather quickly despite having no prior knowledge when it came to shinobi. Her younger brother Satoshi followed in her footsteps as she progressed through the years and eventually graduated. She was a genin for some years after graduation, still retaining the rank due to not understanding what her role should be on the battlefield. More recently she had discovered her keen ability to distinguish chakra, and her steady hands (or tendrils) when it came to medical practice. Finally getting a foothold, a starting place on her shinobi career she was able to allow her brother to catch up to her so now the two might progress together and become a more powerful and detrimental part of the village.
Posted: Mon Jan 25, 2016 5:22 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Satoshi Maebara Nickname: Fang
Age: 16 Birthdate: 12/25 Gender: Male
Height: 5'10'' Weight: 227lbs
Nindo: "When someone else has something you want, take it." Personality: A rambunctious young man, Satoshi has always lived by his own rules. The idea of people being defined by high society and laws really turns him off. He does what he wants, when he wants, as he wants. No one can tell him how to live his life and they won't - and if they do they'll end up in bits. For the right amount of ryo, he'll be your best friend or your worst enemy. Other: Fang has extreme siscon. He finds his sister next to ryo to be the only other important/noteworthy thing in the world at this time. Only Fang is allowed to call her Ri-Ri.
Village: Kumogakure Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank First Class: Taijutsu Second Class: Taijutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Jiongu Method
Chakra Pool: 190 Stamina Pool: 350 Chakra Element: Fire Chakra Color: Dark Blue Chakra Materialization: Monstrous shape; thick aura
Strengths: • Exceptional close combat. • Vast variety of elemental combinations. Weaknesses: • Genjutsu • Ryo + Ri-Ri Fears: • Being abandoned by loved ones. • Rejection by the opposite sex.
Class Disciplines : • Berserker: Your external training and devotion to taijutsu has allowed your attacks to have great strength, speed, and power behind them, making them overwhelm physical taijutsu techniques of the same rank or lower. Additionally, your hardened body allows you to defend against ninjutsu attacks 2 ranks lower than a physical taijutsu defensive technique, taking little to no damage from it, and defend against ninjutsu attacks 1 rank below a complex taijutsu defensive technique unharmed. • Brawler: Your taijutsu is just one side of your skill, as you are also versed in utilizing ninjutsu as well. Your taijutsu body greatly increases your flexibility and reflexes, while at the same time granting you an additional 2 ninjutsu techniques per level, then an extra 4 ninjutsu per rank after jounin. Reductions: • Learn Taijutsu [2] post faster. • Jiongu users learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster. Personal Attributes: • Way of the Body: Learn Taijutsu [2] posts faster. • Way of the Soul: Learn Ninjutsu [2] posts faster.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Bladed Tonfa Weapon Range: 20 inches long base, with 6 inch blades Weapon Weight: 1.5 lb Weapon Location: Tuck into pockets inside robes Summoning Type: N/A Summon Sage: N/A Pacts: N/A
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 10x Kunai • 5x Shuriken
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: 0/4 • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) • Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Technique) • Bushin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) • Suimen Hokou no Waza (Act of Water Surface Walking) • Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing) • Kai (Release) • [x]
Katon - Fire Style: 0/4 {Main Element} • [x]
Raiton - Lightning Style: 0/8 {1st Heart} • [x]
Jiongu Method - Tendril Threading: • [x] ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u The Hachimon (The Eight Celestial Gates) • Stage 1: Gate of Opening (開門, Kaimon) [x]
▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e Locked: Hard Physical • {D-rank} [x]
{D-rank Slots} • Technique name [x] • Technique name [x] ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Born into a small outlying village within the Land of Lightning a few years after Rina Maebara (Ri-Ri), his beloved sister. Their family was hardworking as they supplied agricultural products throughout Kumogakure. Fang, 7 years old, was known for his shark-like vicious temper. It was the bandits who made him angry the most, however. Due to the village's supply of food, bandits would come to raid the village often forcing the villagers to pay heavy taxes for their "protection". Often requests for aid from Kumogakure had been sent with no answer which eventually lead to the village itself going to war against the bandits. Anyone who was an adult was mobilized to fight. The battle occurred in the outlying village resulting in its destruction as Satoshi and Rina ran for the main road.
While normally, they would have died from the wounds they sustained, Satoshi and Rina were the only members of the outlying village gifted with the Jiongu Method kekkai genkai, a secret their parents never disclosed to anyone else. Chased to the brink of annihilation, they fought bravely and eluded the bandits by pretending to be mortally wounded and dead. They later joined the heart of the Lightning Country - Kumogakure. Following his sister's influence, Fang as he had now adorned the name proudly as more than a nickname, joined the academy at 10, graduating at 16, having failed the graduation exam 6 years in a row. He accredited his failure to his sister's lack of teaching since she did not want him to be a shinobi.
First off, I apologize to all of you. The rest of the mods who normally handle approvals seem to have gone missing.
Razzy Reloaded
Denied
The first issue I see with your profile is the presence of the +25 Chakra/Stamina under your Bloodline section. If you do not have a Bloodline, you get one of the following packages:
Given that you have the +25, I assume you have the 'Power' package, which means you also get two (2) additional Personal Attributes, on top of the standard two, totaling four (4). I'd hate for you to miss out on that.
Next up, I noticed you didn't list your reduction from the Sensor class. You get a one (1) post reduction to both Ninjutsu and Genjutsu from it. Also the Taijutsu reduction doesn't just apply to the Dojo. Those reductions occur anywhere. You get additional reduction from the Dojo/Academy that stack with those reductions.
Your Limitations for your Ninjutsu are slightly off. You get four (4) from the Sensor class, and two (2) from the Taijutsu class, but your Brawler discipline gives you an additional two (2) Ninjutsu slots per rank, totaling, for now eight (8 ) slots.
Given that your character weighs only 120 lbs, I'm going to have to say no to having 50 lb gauntlets. Canon or not, in order to keep them, you would have to bump up your character's weight, reduce their weight, or buy them in character from Takumi and change your starting weapon.
I do applaud you for playing a blind character though! Just fix the above problems, and repost your profile when you're done. =)
Gateway Bunny
Denied
A twenty-seven year old genin? Some character may view that not so well.
Your first Personal Attribute is denied for trying to increase two 'stats' with one. Choose speed or strength, but not both. You can get only two if there is a cost, such as taking a hit in jutsu slots, or giving both in a very limited situation. Such as against one opponent, just as an example.
The second Personal Attribute is also denied. The ability to wield a two-handed sword with one hand is a stage six (S-rank) Bukijutsu skill, so I can't accept it.
Also, I noticed that your Reductions section is empty. You get a one (1) post reduction to Bukijutsu and a one (1) post reduction to Taijutsu from your classes
"Under his belt already, was five kills, murders in the sense. But the five people that he had killed, where bandits, thieves, or other killers." This statement in your history concerns me, considering one of his Fears is killing. And yet, he doesn't seem to have any sort of qualms with having killed these people? Fears are real and can be crippling. Along with this, it implies that your character already has battle experience. That number of kills would put you close to, if not at C-rank, which is impossible in this guild. I would recommend looking into this, either by expanding on those kills and how it affected him, or changing your fear.
Fix these issues, and repost your profile. =)
illusorry
Denied
Your second Personal Attribute [Surgical Weaving] is denied. Anything that consumes chakra is considered a technique and must be approved in the custom jutsu thread located here. You will not be able to start with this ability, but you can learn it once the technique is approved.
As a Jiongu, you may only start with one element. Any other elements come from obtained hearts, and are only temporary until that heart is destroyed.
Likewise under Limitations, your Genjutsu are crossed out. You can still use Genjutsu, you just can't be of the class.
Your starting inventory, as far as weapons go, may only have fifteen (15) of any combination of the following: kunai, senbon, and shuriken. Anything else must be acquired in character, meaning the tags and wire must be removed.
Fix these, and resubmit your profile. =)
Lincentious Master
Denied
Ryo has control over him? But your personality says that his sister is the only noteworthy thing in the world.
Both of your Personal Attribute are denied. I'll explain below.
[Beyond the Gates] is denied for the sheer fact that we have not allowed this in the past. I personally don't have a problem with it, but the higher-ups refuse to budge.
[Jiongu Phoenix] is denied. Upon ending the 8th Gate, the body is disintegrated because it is cooked literally from the inside out. Although the gate is on the heart, it doesn't have anything to do with the heart. All of the Jiongu hearts would be cooked as well as the body. This is not canon, but it was a decision made to balance out the godlike strength achieved by this gate.
Your Ninjutsu limitations would actually be 14. You get two (2) for each repeat of the class, plus an additional two (2) per rank from one of your disciplines. Plus the 8 from your extra heart, that would total 14.
Also, you are allowed to start with any one basic weapon, if you desire.
Fix these and resubmit your profile. =)
Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2016 8:00 pm
Resubmitted.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Satoshi Maebara Nickname: Fang
Age: 16 Birthdate: 12/25 Gender: Male
Height: 5'10'' Weight: 227lbs
Nindo: "When someone else has something you want, take it." Personality: A rambunctious young man, Satoshi has always lived by his own rules. The idea of people being defined by high society and laws really turns him off. He does what he wants, when he wants, as he wants. No one can tell him how to live his life and they won't - and if they do they'll end up in bits. For the right amount of ryo, he'll be your best friend or your worst enemy. Other: Fang has extreme siscon. He finds his sister next to ryo to be the only other important/noteworthy thing in the world at this time. Only Fang is allowed to call her Ri-Ri.
Village: Kumogakure Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank First Class: Taijutsu Second Class: Taijutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Jiongu Method
Chakra Pool: 190 Stamina Pool: 350 Chakra Element: Fire Chakra Color: Dark Blue Chakra Materialization: Monstrous shape; thick aura
Strengths: • Exceptional close combat. • Vast variety of elemental combinations. Weaknesses: • Genjutsu • Ryo + Ri-Ri Fears: • Being abandoned by loved ones. • Rejection by the opposite sex.
Class Disciplines : • Berserker: Your external training and devotion to taijutsu has allowed your attacks to have great strength, speed, and power behind them, making them overwhelm physical taijutsu techniques of the same rank or lower. Additionally, your hardened body allows you to defend against ninjutsu attacks 2 ranks lower than a physical taijutsu defensive technique, taking little to no damage from it, and defend against ninjutsu attacks 1 rank below a complex taijutsu defensive technique unharmed. • Brawler: Your taijutsu is just one side of your skill, as you are also versed in utilizing ninjutsu as well. Your taijutsu body greatly increases your flexibility and reflexes, while at the same time granting you an additional 2 ninjutsu techniques per level, then an extra 4 ninjutsu per rank after jounin. Reductions: • Learn Taijutsu [2] post faster. • Jiongu users learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster. Personal Attributes: • Way of the Mind: Learn ninjutsu [1] post faster. • Mad Money: Ryo rewards increased by 1.5x.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Bladed Tonfa Weapon Range: 20 inches long base, with 6 inch blades Weapon Weight: 1.5 lb Weapon Location: Tuck into pockets inside robes Summoning Type: N/A Summon Sage: N/A Pacts: N/A
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 10x Kunai • 5x Shuriken
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: 0/4 • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) • Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Technique) • Bushin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) • Suimen Hokou no Waza (Act of Water Surface Walking) • Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing) • Kai (Release) • [x]
Katon - Fire Style: 0/4 {Main Element} • [x]
Raiton - Lightning Style: 0/8 {1st Heart} • [x]
Jiongu Method - Tendril Threading: • [x] ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u The Hachimon (The Eight Celestial Gates) • Stage 1: Gate of Opening (開門, Kaimon) [x]
▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e Locked: Hard Physical • {D-rank} [x]
{D-rank Slots} • Technique name [x] • Technique name [x] ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Born into a small outlying village within the Land of Lightning a few years after Rina Maebara (Ri-Ri), his beloved sister. Their family was hardworking as they supplied agricultural products throughout Kumogakure. Fang, 7 years old, was known for his shark-like vicious temper. It was the bandits who made him angry the most, however. Due to the village's supply of food, bandits would come to raid the village often forcing the villagers to pay heavy taxes for their "protection". Often requests for aid from Kumogakure had been sent with no answer which eventually lead to the village itself going to war against the bandits. Anyone who was an adult was mobilized to fight. The battle occurred in the outlying village resulting in its destruction as Satoshi and Rina ran for the main road.
While normally, they would have died from the wounds they sustained, Satoshi and Rina were the only members of the outlying village gifted with the Jiongu Method kekkai genkai, a secret their parents never disclosed to anyone else. Chased to the brink of annihilation, they fought bravely and eluded the bandits by pretending to be mortally wounded and dead. They later joined the heart of the Lightning Country - Kumogakure. Following his sister's influence, Fang as he had now adorned the name proudly as more than a nickname, joined the academy at 10, graduating at 16, having failed the graduation exam 6 years in a row. He accredited his failure to his sister's lack of teaching since she did not want him to be a shinobi.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Rina Maebara Nickname: Kurokarite / Ri-ri (Satoshi Only) ↬ "Black Reaper" a name given to Rina by her classmates due to her isolated nature and extremely fearsome aura. Rina's manipulation of her tendrils coupled with the incredible physical prowess from the bloodline bestowed upon her give off a very scary presence, hence the title. Age: 18 Birthdate: 04/16 Gender: Female
Nindo: "Don't judge those who sin differently from you" Personality:“Colder by the hour, more dead with every breath.” Rina is a very quiet individual and is noted as being overly serious to the point of aggression, many of her peers find her intimidating because of this. The young shinobi also has a distinct lack of trust in everyone including those titled as her allies, her trust is incredibly tough to gain and even then there will always remain some air of doubt about her person, this never seems to change. Despite her initially cold exterior she is still a capable shinobi and will work well with others if they learn to follow her lead, she is a lone wolf otherwise and will not take orders from those she deems unfit to be directing her. Many of her fellow genin classify her as an unknown and are not sure why she has become a shinobi or what she gets out of it causing them to doubt and fear her in some cases. In reality she is a young girl with a lot of baggage and perhaps the only ones who can truly realize this are the adults, she has lost everything and struggles with herself internally, wanting to eradicate the empty feeling inside of her heart but not understanding how to go about doing something so difficult.
Village: Kumogakure Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank First Class: Sensor Second Class: Medical
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Jiongu
Chakra Pool: 465 Stamina Pool: 75 Chakra Element: Suiton Chakra Color: Blue Chakra Materialization: Thin Aura
Strengths: • Raw Strength • Flexibility Weaknesses: • Bukijutsu • Her Brother Fears: • Heights • Betrayal
Class Disciplines : • Resolution: The user is more determined to get fine details from his sensory techniques, but in order to get this type of clarity the user's range of the technique is reduced by half. The user is able to discover type of technique that is about to be active (fuuin, genjutsu, ninjutsu, custom jutsu, complex tai and buki), even specifics such as Bloodline type and rank. Additionally, the user can gain similar information about any chakra source in their sensory technique's range, including what bloodline the person possesses, and how large their chakra pool is. • Specialist: The user, choosing to specialize in either healing or harmful medical techniques, gains a great boost to their chakra control in that area. At Chunnin, they gain a -5 chakra reduction to perform techniques in their specialty. at Jounin, -10, at Konin -15 at Sannin -20. To clarify, they they gain a -5 chakra reduction every rank, to a maximum of -20 at sannin. All medical jutsu are still learnable by both sides, but the chakra control only applies to the chosen side. Reductions: • Learn genjutsu one [1] post faster. • Learn medical techniques one [1] post faster. • Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster. • Jiongu users learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster. Personal Attributes: • Shadowdrive: Thanks to her prodigal sensory capabilities and her advanced knowledge in the controlling and manipulation of chakra Rina after much difficult and grueling training is able to suppress her chakra to the point that she is completely untraceable by all. The only ones with a chance of pinpointing her location or even realizing her existence being sensory specialists or dojutsu users with sensory capabilities. The scope of her masking abilities going as far as keeping high ranking shinobi unawares. • Angel of Death: Using her tendrils Rina is able to sprout wing-like appendages threaded together and protruding from the stitches on her back granting the ability to glide (not fly) short distances through the air. Speed being slightly increased during the time her mock wings are in use. As an added bonus the wings can also be used to negate any serious falling danger from heights, making for a much softer and safer landing process.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Tanto Weapon Range: 6 " Weapon Weight: 0.3 lbs Weapon Location: Back Waist
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Kunai [15]
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Suiton •
Fuuton [Heart Element] •
Eiseijutsu •
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u None • ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u None •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ "A tragic bleeding heart before me, and I'm starving." Born into a small village within the Lightning Country the young Rina alongside the rest of her family was born a monster. Living tendrils, hidden cozily inside a suit made of meat in order to better blend in. Attempting to grow up as an average human being was an increasingly difficult task for the young girl who saw no point in hiding away what she really was, being inhuman and attempting to integrate into their society made little sense to her. A couple of years after her birth she was blessed with a younger brother, also carrying the same bloodline as the rest of her family. Satoshi, her little brother clung to her for dear life in his younger years- admiring his elder sister greatly and mimicking her every action. The two of them were inseparable and were often found together even in their free time playing around. This continued on for many years until they were both around seven and nine years old. The simple village life they had grown up in was threatened by the increasing aggressive behavior of neighboring bandits and rogue shinobi. Mock protection fees needing to be paid by the village in order to keep it from being attacked were just barely being paid each month until finally the funds came in short and the assaults began. First it was the outer most houses of the village, pillaged, razed, household members left for dead if they hadn't already been slaughtered. The payments became weekly to keep them from harming the citizens, each week they fell short another family died. Until finally the small village had enough of being attacked and given no aid from Kumogakure, the farmers and families found whatever weapons they could and acted in retaliation. Rina's mother and father were among the militia that went out to face the threat head on, however these were simple people with no knowledge of combat or the ninja art. Even the mother and father of both Satoshi and Rina were no match for their opponent despite the bloodline advantage they carried. Soon all that was left of the village was the passive citizens and the children of the deceased. This was when the enemy took their final step and launched a full on assault on what was left of the people living there.
When the final assault began Satoshi and Rina were both frightened but the latter knew what needed to be done, coaxing her younger brother into following her lead the two of them left their home and ran for the road, attempting to leave the village and find safe haven within the sanctuary of Kumogakure a place much better fortified. However their little legs could only carry them so far before the much older and more skilled rogues were upon them. They had just reached the outskirts of the village when Rina heard voices calling after them and a flurry of kunai and shuriken buizzing by their heads and body. A few of them found their way into the bodies of both Satoshi and Rina, she urged her brother to stand and fight, but take the fall once a normal human being would have succumbed to the injuries received. She did the same, dislodging a kunai from her thigh and using it to defend and attack against the rogues. Before being overwhelmed by the enemy forces Rina was able to moderately injure a few of them, Satoshi even managing to kill one of their attackers. The two of them after being given "fatal" stab wounds fell to the enemy. They stayed quiet and played dead until they felt them to rot, and when the rogues cleared out Rina led her younger brother down the road toward Kumogakure where she hoped they could find somewhere safe for awhile. Making sure to patch up any slashes, cuts, and holes within their human vessels with tendrils while they moved on.
When the two children finally stumbled upon Kumogakure they were instantly identified as children of the Lightning Country and labeled not a threat allowing them within the city walls, under watch for the time being. They were cleaned up, and sent to the current Raikage in order to be debriefed and give an account on what had happened, Rina taking the lead in these discussions and explaining their circumstances. After the village was happy with what information they had been given they took the two children in as wards of Kumogakure and helped them find work and board in order to live without much worry. This worked for some years as they got themselves situated in the village and really began to understand what they were and what their place in the world was. However the siblings disregarded most of this and Rina instead enlisted into the academy some months later picking up on everything rather quickly despite having no prior knowledge when it came to shinobi. Her younger brother Satoshi followed in her footsteps as she progressed through the years and eventually graduated. She was a genin for some years after graduation, still retaining the rank due to not understanding what her role should be on the battlefield. More recently she had discovered her keen ability to distinguish chakra, and her steady hands (or tendrils) when it came to medical practice. Finally getting a foothold, a starting place on her shinobi career she was able to allow her brother to catch up to her so now the two might progress together and become a more powerful and detrimental part of the village.
Tao-Benshin
Last time I'm going to pester you! ^^; Otherwise, sorry if I wasn't supposed to quote. OTL
Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2016 8:36 pm
illusorry
You don't have to apologize. xD Approved
Licentious Master
Approved. Kumo has a Skype chat. If you'd like to join the chaos or just have a quicker way to contact me, my username is jihenberry. =)
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Karite Hyuuga Nickname: Kar
Age: 18 Birthdate: August 20, XXXX Gender: Male
Height: 6'1 / 185.42 Weight: 175Lb's / 84Kg
Nindo: "Fight for what you love, an Love what you fight to protect." Personality: Relaxed, Laid Back, Calm, Easy Going Village: Hidden Mist Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank First Class: Bukijutsu Second Class: Taijutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Hyuuga
Chakra Pool: 125+75=200 Stamina Pool: 125+175=300 Chakra Element: Raiton, Suiton Chakra Color: Black Chakra Materialization: Flicker's like a soft flame, turning an rising into Black Skull's
Strengths: • Hand to Hand • Swordsmanship Weaknesses: • Ninjutsu • Genjutsu Fears: • Being Alone • Being Loved
Class Disciplines : • Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below. • Berserker: Your external training and devotion to taijutsu has allowed your attacks to have great strength, speed, and power behind them, making them overwhelm physical taijutsu techniques of the same rank or lower. Additionally, your hardened body allows you to defend against ninjutsu attacks 2 ranks lower than a physical taijutsu defensive technique, taking little to no damage from it, and defend against ninjutsu attacks 1 rank below a complex taijutsu defensive technique unharmed. Reductions: • -1 Post when leaning Bukijutsu in a Dojo • -1 Post when leaning Tiajutsu in a Dojo Personal Attributes: • Adrenaline Rush: Reaction Boost - Grants Karite a faster reaction time. • Damaged Body: Savage Cut's - Grant's Karite the ability to stop any cuts from bleeding.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 04 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 00 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Weapon Range: Weapon Weight: Weapon Location: • {When you create your profile, you may have any one basic weapon.)
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
{Your first element's name} Raiton •
{Your second element's name} Suiton •
{Other jutsu type's name} {Bloodline, Kugutsu, Eiseijutsu, etc.} {If none, remove section} • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • {If none, remove section} ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Like most kids who grew up with loving parents, Karite grew up on the streets of the Hidden Mist. When he was roughly around the age of eight, Karite watched his parents get killed right in front of his eyes. Blood an bones scattered around his cold unconscious body from the tragic horrific sighting. Days the young boy spent watching an staring at the remains of what used to be his parents, his family, his reason to smile. From that night onwards, Karite has felt Alone an unloved, losing the only important people in his life. After a few years of endlessly wondering around Hidden Mist, Karite found himself amazed when he noticed some Jounin practicing Taijutsu, an Bukijutsu. Amazed an interested in the sight he saw, he ran over to get a better view, only to interrupt a attack, which left part of his right arm scarred an cut. But he didn't shed tears, he just was pale in the face. But from that day on, he spent it training with those Jounin training to be a fine Taijutsu an Bukijutsu user. Years went by, an Karite was now seventeen an ready to live on his life, by his own means..
Tao-Benshin
I fixed an changed stuff around, I hope it works for the time being, I will be making changes an adding stuff through the Journey he makes.
Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2016 4:23 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Kariatsu Ikazuya Nickname: Kari
Age: 13 Birthdate: March 20th Gender: Male
Height: 5'7 Weight: 150 lbs
Nindo: "Protect the ones I care about!" Personality: Tranquil, Brave, Lionhearted, Polite
Village: Konohagakure Title: Genin Rank: Rank D First Class: Taijutsu Class Second Class: Senor Class
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: +2 PA, +25 Chakra/Stamina a rank
Chakra Pool: 325/325 Stamina Pool: 225/225 Chakra Element: Katon, Fuuton Chakra Color: Black Chakra Materialization: Bulbs of chakra orbit around his body in an unorthodox fashion.
Strengths: • Good at hand to hand • Other senses are stronger than most Weaknesses: • He can't see at all • Transformation can catch him off guard Fears: • Losing other senses • Being a burden to other people because of disability
Class Disciplines : • Brawler • Oracle Reductions: • Can learn Taijutsu and Genjutsu +1 Post Faster • Personal Attributes: Physical Strength Slightly Increased Slightly Increased Sense of Feel Slightly Increased Speed Visual Genjutsu have less of an effect
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0 Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Heavy Metal Training Gauntlets Weapon Range: Arms Length Weapon Weight: 20 lbs each Weapon Location: On his hands • Gauntlets
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 15 Needles • ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Katon •
Fuuton •
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • {If none, remove section} ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Kariatsu isn't the most for fortunate child in his time. His sense of sight was taken away by an illness he had at birth, it could have taken his life but luckily he survived. When he was young his blindness never seemed to bother him though, it was just regular life for him. He figured something was wrong with him though; he heard stories of color and things associated with that but he had never seen things like that, so the concept confused him. No one was ever able to explain color to him, the only things they could say about things like red was that it was a hot "color" and that blue was a colder "color". Kari listened to stories about shinobi, and there pride and security of ones nation and this really touched his heart because he loved the ones that cared for him. Caring for a nation you love is just like caring for the people you love. So he made it his mission to become a great shinobi one day, despite his disability. His parents were very wealthy and when he was four he asked his father to enroll him in the Academy, and like any concerned parent that just wasn't in his fathers agenda. But this kid was determined to become one, everyday training his senses since his optical ability wasn't something he could depend on. He never really noticed it because he thought it was normal for everyone, but he could sense chakra around him. Knowing that different chakra was from different people, he came to the conclusion that if he wanted to fight, he would have to attack chakra. Everyday since he was 6 he has been training with his hired sensei in the art of Taijutsu. Getting better and better at it, one day he finally convinced his mother and father to enroll him in the Academy. No one really noticed he was blind until he brought it up, and everyone was shocked. He read by feeling the small differences in the ink on the paper, people wondering how he could read without even looking down at the words. Nowadays, he trains harder than anyone in his class, trying to be one of the first blind shinobi in all of the land. He is destined for greatness.
(Decided to revamp/rework existing character, resubmitting changes) ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Osamu Sasori Aburame Nickname:
Age: 16 Birthdate: 3/25 Gender: Male
Height: 5’8” Weight: 175lbs
Nindo: "To be a fly on the wall, and sting like a hornet’s nest." Personality: Like most Aburame, he’s a very quiet, reserved child, tending to stay on the sidelines and observe everyone else. What the others don’t realize is that he’s actually very friendly if they took the time to get to know him. He’s also incredibly intelligent, enjoying experimenting with different mechanical things as well as poisons and other chemicals that he can get from his insects. He may be young, but Osamu takes the honor and reputation of his clan very seriously and trains tirelessly to be as skilled as he can be. Village: Kumogakure Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank First Class: Medical Second Class: Taijutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Aburame Clan Approved
Chakra Pool: 400 Stamina Pool: 325 Chakra Element: Katon, Doton Chakra Color: Dark Green Chakra Materialization: Beetle’s Carapace around his body
Strengths: • Close Range Combat • Stealth Weaknesses: • Fire (Because of bugs) • Long Range Combat Fears: • Insecticides/ Pesticides • Drowning (isn’t sure why he’s afraid of it)
Class Disciplines : • Medical License • Brawler Reductions: • Learns Eiseijutsu one [1] post faster • Learns Taijutsu one [1] post faster • Learns Ninjutsu two [2] posts faster Personal Attributes: • Hands-Free Jutsu: Osamu is able to perform seals with his eyes, freeing up his hands to maintain his offense/ defense while readying jutsu. • Densely-packed hive: The kikaichu took a great liking to the boy’s body when he was offered to them, crowding tightly into him and making a much more densely packed hive than usual. As such, Osamu’s body holds twice as many insects as the average Aburame. • PA: Mashed Ninja-tatoes: +1 bukijutsu style, +50 chakra and stamina • PA: Santa's Knowledge #2: Learns Ninjutsu 2 posts faster • PA - Good Cheer :: Thanks to the good spirits around the village, +0.1x AC and Ryo are permanently rewarded from missions. [This does NOT apply to Holiday Event rewards.]
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両2900 AC: 1250
Missions Complete: (4/20 free posts remaining, from thanksgiving and xmas) D Rank :: 3 C Rank :: 1 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Kusarigama Weapon Range: 9” blade, 10ft chain Weapon Weight: 4lbs Weapon Location: Chain coiled and hooked to his right thigh.
Summoning Type: Summon Sage: Pacts:
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Shuriken x 7 • Kunai x 8 • Special Glass Gourd - Hive Created ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ] • X - Kumonenkin [ Spider Sticky Gold ] -
Katon • C - Taika no Jutsu [ Fireproof Technique ] - • C - Gōkakyū no Jutsu [ Great Fireball Technique ] - • B - Endan [ Fireball ] -
Doton • C - Sabaku Kyuu [ Desert Coffin ] - • C - Sabaku Sousou [ Desert Funeral ] - • D-S - Sekkai Saka [ Rock Hill Creation ] -
Eiseijutsu • E - Shindan [ Diagnosis ] - • E - Itami Gekka [ Pain Intensification ] +3 • E - Suji dageki [ Muscle Shock ] +3 • D - Jokyo Dokubutsu [ Poison Removal ] - • C - Chiyute No Jutsu: Karui [ Healing Hands Technique: Minor ] - • C - Kigusuri Souzou [ Medicine Creation ] - • C - Rentogen [ X-Ray ] +1 • B - Chiyute no Jutsu [ Healing Hands Technique ] - • B - Chakra no Mesu [ Chakra Scalpel ] - • B - Kinniku Saichousei [ Muscle Realignment ] - • B - Souzou Dokubutsu [ Poison Creation ] - • B - Zesshi Nensan [ Fanged Tongue Acid ] -
Aburame Clan • B - Kikaichū no Jutsu [ Destruction Bug Host Technique ] - • E - Human Cocoon Technique - • E - Mushi Sekkou no Jutsu [ Insect Spying Technique ] - • D - Hijutsu: Mushiyose [ Secret Technique: Insect Gathering ] - • D - Mushi Bunshin no Jutsu [ Insect Clone Technique ] - • D - Mushi Jamingu no Jutsu [ Insect Jamming Technique ] - • C - Mushi Kabe no Jutsu [ Insect Wall Technique ] - • C - Hijutsu: Mushimayu [ Secret Technique: Insect Cocoon ] - • C - Mushi Kame no Jutsu [ Insect Jar Technique ] - • C - Bōsui no Jin [ Spindle Formation ] - • B - Kikaichū Drill (Destruction Bug Drill) - • • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e Kusarigama • {D-rank} + [Gained at Genin] • {C-rank} + [Pre-trained] • {B-rank} + {Training Link} • {A-rank} + {Training Link} • {S-rank} + {Training Link} • {S+rank} + {Training Link} ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Osamu was born into a fairly normal shinobi family in Kumogakure, well, as normal as a family in the Aburame clan can be. As a young child, he grew up watching his parents tend to their hives of insects, breeding new types for their missions and extracting different poisons from some species to use for medicines and antidotes, as well as for weapons. This led young Osamu to be very interested in science and medicine. When he was finally allowed to join the academy, he dove into everything he could find on medicine, poisons, as well as since his clan tended to be stealthy people, puppetry to help him wor from a distance. He had some of the highest grades in his classes, graduating fairly young compared to many of the other students in his group at only twelve years old; and can’t wait to see what he is able to do and how strong he can become.
