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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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 Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 6:41 pm
Rho9 oh boy... name's Ukana Kiko, hoping to be in Kirigakure. RP sample: Kiko opened her eyes at the sound of a bird chirping. She groaned and rolled over, only to find herself falling out of the tree she had taken a nap in. With a loud "thump" she landed on the ground. With a moan, she stood up, brushing the leaves off herself. "Why can't I ever sleep at home, but always fall asleep in trees?" She muttered to herself. It's OK I guess, but a bit short. However it is adequate. Pass ^^ But try to make things longer xD
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Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 6:50 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 6:59 pm
kouri-chan_xx Chibi Fox Fire Hello My Character (yes I decided with a new idea and such) is Aikoku Akabara, I think I want her to live in Kirigakure. Rp example "Hey Sori where are you?" Aikoku whispered, "Sori come here." Aikoku crawled along the forest floor. 'Where could that cat be?'. "Mew," a kitten said while popping it's puny head out of a bush. "Sori, where have you been?" Aikoku snatched her kitten out of the bush holding him close to her heart. "I thought I lost you," Aikoku said in a woe filled voice. "Don't ever do that again!" she snarled, "EVER!" Sori just blinked at her companion in confusion. Her exetremly large ears twitched. "Meeeeeeeeew," the little kitten meowed in high pitch. "Ok you got me. Now let's go." Aikoku sighed. The two friends; Aikoku, and her cat Sori, leaped into a tree. Together again. Passu desu. ^^ But meh... the story is cheesy xD Yeah I know. I guess crappy writing happens when you only have like a minute to type. Well sorry I'll work on that.
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Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 1:20 pm
kouri-chan_xx Yoshmi Mizu gazed at the ocean from the roof of her home; as her hair waved in the breeze she began to grow restless. "I should be training....I can see myself getting behind", she said as she rested her head in her lap. "Okay", she said as rose from her spot. Mizu quickly leaped from the roof of her home to the ground nearly falling in her landing. She beat herself up inside "If I can’t even jump from that height how can I leap from trees without killing myself.” Filled with disappointment she approached her practice doll and readied herself for battle. She quickly charged in attacking with a forceful left punch. The doll swung up and spun as it rapidly swung down; “To the left” she dogged to the left “Right”, she punched with her and spun off to a left kick “Back”, She tumbled back and rolled to the right. She continued her training for hours. “HAA!” She yelled out as she finished with a tired high kick. She paused to catch her breath. “How did that happen?” Mizu said as she noticed to small cuts on her right arm; she shrugged it off and began walking toward the door to her home. Nice, but when training you will have to roll for each action (flurry of punches, one kick, etc.) to see the result for your training ^_^ Pass! Yes ma'am >_
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Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 4:48 pm
Name: Suzushii Shimo (Last name first)
Village: None yet
Roleplaying Example:
Frosty winds blew through the snow white strains of Shimo's hair as he stood on the river bank. He watched as the sun slowly fell behind the horizon and the sky turned dark. Turning with a spin of his long white cape, Shimo only muttered, "I will make them recognize my strength." In a cold monotone voice as he trudged back to his village.
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Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 3:24 am
Okey, here is my Rp example,
Name: Kohagaru, Maik. Maik is the first name.
Village: None yet.
Roleplaying example:
Maik waked up after sleeping like 6 hours. "Today is the day" Maik thought. He jumped out of his bed, still feeling sleepy. He stretched his arms and feels his muscles in his back making a little snap. Maik then makes a long yawn. He slowly walks up to his shower, putting it on 38 degrees, unstripping him out of his sleeping clothes. He stands under the shower. Maik feels the water covering his face and washes himself. Maik then stopped the shower and dry's himself. He then puts on his special kimono he only wears on special days. Maik walked to the front door and smiles his just awakened mother goodbye. He opens the door and feels the sun blinding his eyes. He then makes his way outside with a good feeling.
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Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 7:55 am
[[mike, we use the past forms, not the present, doesn't matter though, for the majority it's a very nice example]]
[[just change "he yawns" into "he yawned" and "he waked up" into "he woke up" etc... and your done i guess. try to re-do it in past form and show me again]]
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Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 12:26 pm
Wanted to know if my RP example was alright. Not sure if I was over looked. smile
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 12:24 pm
Shimo-dono Name: Suzushii Shimo (Last name first) Village: None yet Roleplaying Example: Frosty winds blew through the snow white strains of Shimo's hair as he stood on the river bank. He watched as the sun slowly fell behind the horizon and the sky turned dark. Turning with a spin of his long white cape, Shimo only muttered, "I will make them recognize my strength." In a cold monotone voice as he trudged back to his village.
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 2:18 pm
Name: Sakuto Nara
here we go:
Sakuto woke up with a yawn. His eyes remained half upon as he trudged out of bed and got dressed. Why does our mission have to start so early? he thought to himself. He staggered down the stairs clumsily and pulled out a box of cereal in a zombie-like state. He made himself a neat breakfast and sat down to eat it in silence. He happened to glance at the clock. "6:30!!!! Crap! I'm gonna be late!!!" he shouted jumping up from the table spilling his cereal.
He arrived at the meeting place. "Nice outfit" his teammate told him. "Huh?" he looked down. He was still wearing his pajamas. Oh man...
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 4:05 pm
Hello! My character's name is RoseMinamoto144, i have not joined a village yet. I'll try after I do this.
RP Sample:
It was midday and a girl by the name of Rose was lounging about on the roof of her home. It had been pretty quiet all day and she was beginning to get fustrated because she had nothing to do. Rose sat there for a few more minutes then decided to go train before the big day tomorrow. The day when she would begin her first day at the academy.
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 3:42 am
Name: Yutaka Shinwha
Village: None yet.
Roleplaying Example:
He wanders through a deserted forest. The moonlight reflects on his face through the green leaves of the high tree's that shelter him. A cold breeze comes up out of nowhere and the leaves start to blow off the trees slowly, falling on the ground. He shivers as the breeze blows against his back, making him realize that he is determined to find a way out of the forest. He takes out an old, golden watch that is hanging beneath his t-shirt and opens it. Staring at the picture of his mother and father.
'Why did you send me here? What is the purpose? You could've atleast gave me some food or something to drink....' He mumbles in himself. He puts the golden watch beneath his t-shirt again and continues walking.
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 11:22 am
Name: Kohagaru, Maik. Maik is the first name.
Village: None yet.
Roleplaying example:
Maik wakes up after sleeping like 6 hours. "Today is the day" Maik thinks. He jumps out of his bed, still feeling sleepy. He stretches his arms and feels his muscles in his back making a little snap. Maik yawned. He slowly walks up to his shower, putting it on 38 degrees, unstripping him out of his sleeping clothes. He walked in to the shower. Maik feels the water covering his face and washes himself. Maik then stops the shower and dry's himself. He then put on his special kimono he only wears on special days. Maik walks to the front door and smiles his just awakened mother goodbye. He opens the door and feels the sun blinding his eyes. He then make his way outside with a good feeling.
I redid it. I hope it is good this time smile
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 1:05 pm
Sakuto Uchiha Name: Sakuto Nara here we go: Sakuto woke up with a yawn. His eyes remained half upon as he trudged out of bed and got dressed. Why does our mission have to start so early? he thought to himself. He staggered down the stairs clumsily and pulled out a box of cereal in a zombie-like state. He made himself a neat breakfast and sat down to eat it in silence. He happened to glance at the clock. "6:30!!!! Crap! I'm gonna be late!!!" he shouted jumping up from the table spilling his cereal. He arrived at the meeting place. "Nice outfit" his teammate told him. "Huh?" he looked down. He was still wearing his pajamas. Oh man...Even though the time skip to the meeting place is a little random and lacking in detail, the rest of it shows that you're a perfectly adequate rper. ^^ Pass.
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 1:07 pm
RoseMinamoto144 Hello! My character's name is RoseMinamoto144, i have not joined a village yet. I'll try after I do this. RP Sample: It was midday and a girl by the name of Rose was lounging about on the roof of her home. It had been pretty quiet all day and she was beginning to get fustrated because she had nothing to do. Rose sat there for a few more minutes then decided to go train before the big day tomorrow. The day when she would begin her first day at the academy. Little short, but this is supposed to be a sample...So pass.
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