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 Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 4:15 pm
Aliyssa zach61092 Anyways, heres what I think. It was a litttle long and kind of got boring. You should of made it shorter. Also, you should of had it where we could hear what the two were saying. It would of made it more enjoyable. If I had never watched smallville, then I would probably think the video was sweet and that it was a nice couple. Also, in the end..You should of cut out the part where her smile turns to a frown and when she looks back. I don't think you quite got the point. I was giving suggestions on what you should do next time which have nothing to do with the couple. Like, Hearing character speak would be good and making it shorter would also be good.
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 4:25 pm
zach61092 Aliyssa zach61092 Anyways, heres what I think. It was a litttle long and kind of got boring. You should of made it shorter. Also, you should of had it where we could hear what the two were saying. It would of made it more enjoyable. If I had never watched smallville, then I would probably think the video was sweet and that it was a nice couple. Also, in the end..You should of cut out the part where her smile turns to a frown and when she looks back. I don't think you quite got the point. I was giving suggestions on what you should do next time which have nothing to do with the couple. Like, Hearing character speak would be good and making it shorter would also be good.
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 4:53 pm
Aliyssa zach61092 Aliyssa zach61092 Anyways, heres what I think. It was a litttle long and kind of got boring. You should of made it shorter. Also, you should of had it where we could hear what the two were saying. It would of made it more enjoyable. If I had never watched smallville, then I would probably think the video was sweet and that it was a nice couple. Also, in the end..You should of cut out the part where her smile turns to a frown and when she looks back. I don't think you quite got the point. I was giving suggestions on what you should do next time which have nothing to do with the couple. Like, Hearing character speak would be good and making it shorter would also be good. Alright, but a** sound of the characters speaking.
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 5:08 pm
zach61092 Aliyssa zach61092 Aliyssa zach61092 Anyways, heres what I think. It was a litttle long and kind of got boring. You should of made it shorter. Also, you should of had it where we could hear what the two were saying. It would of made it more enjoyable. If I had never watched smallville, then I would probably think the video was sweet and that it was a nice couple. Also, in the end..You should of cut out the part where her smile turns to a frown and when she looks back. I don't think you quite got the point. I was giving suggestions on what you should do next time which have nothing to do with the couple. Like, Hearing character speak would be good and making it shorter would also be good. Alright, but add sound of the characters speaking.
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 5:11 pm
Just have a less quiet song, I mean if you have a song where they sing more then it wouldn't be like a silent movie. Adding in scenes when they talk at the beginning is fine, I recommend it actually. My new favorite song for Lexana is Wait For You by Elliot Yamin. It is mainly Lex though.
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 6:08 pm
SaberFireTiger Just have a less quiet song, I mean if you have a song where they sing more then it wouldn't be like a silent movie. Adding in scenes when they talk at the beginning is fine, I recommend it actually. My new favorite song for Lexana is Wait For You by Elliot Yamin. It is mainly Lex though.
I think it's fine the way it is. I'm really picky with the music I listen to anymore. But trust me my video making on these two is not done.
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 6:24 pm
I think Lex should get sucked into another frequency, then Lana wil remember how she once felt about him. Or let him get shot again!
How about a Nicodemus flower?
Lana: Actually, I'm a little nervous. I might need some guidance. [she touches his ear] You know, from someone with a little more experience. [she whispers in his ear] What do you say, boss?
Or more black kryptonite!
Lex: [he turns to face her] What I think, Lana, is you deserve better. You deserve to be with someone who recognizes how extraordinary you are. [He walks over to her and touches her shoulder. She is uncomfortable and confused. He caresses her face with his hand, but she pulls away]
Lana: Lex, what are you doing?
Lex: What I’ve always wanted to. [He leans in and kissed her. She pushes him away and slaps him. She walks away]
Lex: Well, I do like them feisty.
Everything is more fun that way.... now it is all fake smiles and unloving hugs.
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 6:50 pm
SaberFireTiger I think Lex should get sucked into another frequency, then Lana wil remember how she once felt about him. Or let him get shot again! How about a Nicodemus flower? Lana: Actually, I'm a little nervous. I might need some guidance. [she touches his ear] You know, from someone with a little more experience. [she whispers in his ear] What do you say, boss? Or more black kryptonite! Lex: [he turns to face her] What I think, Lana, is you deserve better. You deserve to be with someone who recognizes how extraordinary you are. [He walks over to her and touches her shoulder. She is uncomfortable and confused. He caresses her face with his hand, but she pulls away] Lana: Lex, what are you doing? Lex: What I’ve always wanted to. [He leans in and kissed her. She pushes him away and slaps him. She walks away] Lex: Well, I do like them feisty. Everything is more fun that way.... now it is all fake smiles and unloving hugs.
Okay let me ask everyone this who was there for Lana when the talon was gonna get shut down?
Who was there for Lana to teach her how to defend herself?
Who was there for Lana when Clark was on Red K? LEX!!!!
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 10:58 am
Aliyssa Ohhhhhhhh I love those scenes!!!! Yeah they need to do something like that definatly.
Okay let me ask everyone this who was there for Lana when the talon was gonna get shut down?
Who was there for Lana to teach her how to defend herself?
Who was there for Lana when Clark was on Red K? LEX!!!! Well actually, the three times that the Talon was getting shut down, it was because Lex was "not himself" and wanted to close it. The other time, Lana was moving to Paris, but even then, Lex didn't close it because he wanted to hold on to it.
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 12:37 pm
SaberFireTiger Well actually, the three times that the Talon was getting shut down, it was because Lex was "not himself" and wanted to close it. The other time, Lana was moving to Paris, but even then, Lex didn't close it because he wanted to hold on to it.
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 2:44 pm
Very true. But she wont remember. *tear* Makes me wish someone would strangle him again or want another zoner to make him fly into glass or have another spaceship fall out of the sky.
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 8:02 pm
SaberFireTiger Very true. But she wont remember. *tear* Makes me wish someone would strangle him again or want another zoner to make him fly into glass or have another spaceship fall out of the sky.
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 3:06 pm
I really think we need more spaceships. I wish Clark didn't blow up his. A lot of the Lexana moments were about the spaceship. The thing brang them together. *tear* But then, the stupid thing had to turn into a little black box and jack everything up. Clark however is the main thing that has caused them to drift apart. xp
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 9:26 pm
Also don't forget Lana's in ability to trust people.
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 2:30 pm
She trusts Lex though. He is honest with her... about himself.... just not the things he does on a daily basis.
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