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 Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:01 am
I Suck I have been RPing for about 5 years >.> I know I fail Lol
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:06 am
Omega_Krogan @Snuff - Why is your scared @Tenshi - Well good luck she is offline UGH TENSHI = MEANY JK >.> Shruikan..... 4laugh and i'm scared cause i'm going up against an Uber-RP vet for the same demon....
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:07 am
Lol >.> Good luck I fail As Tenshi said. >.>
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:08 am
Omega_Krogan Lol >.> Good luck I fail As Tenshi said. >.> :O, no one fails, they just fall short, never forget that.
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:10 am
Kashensu Omega_Krogan Lol >.> Good luck I fail As Tenshi said. >.> :O, no one fails, they just fall short, never forget that. thats not what my math tests say stare
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:10 am
Well the I always fall short on Detail and Grammar mainly with commas
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:11 am
@Cody: Gotta wait for Incubus's post. But If I were you, redo your post. make it more about how you use the demon. Its goood to know you won't god mod, but you need to know how to properly use it. Of course that comes with training, but you need to understand the basics.
All that means is you are not using the demon to its fullest potential. go back and look at its abilities, then look back at naruto when he first started using his demon. he would enter an uncontrollable frenzy, and his body would act of its own accord, his mind was not part of it. Til your body gets use to a demon, your mind is captive inside of your own body, so all the movements that you do with the demon's chakra should be fluid and liquid, with no thought to them.
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:15 am
>.> Yeah I failed at making the post good enough But it might also be I have a cold. I have stayed home sick from school the last two days Today and yesterday
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:17 am
my posts are good, how i do it, is i look at the demon's sheet while typing it, each time i start a new scene or something, i refference another one of it's abilities. sometimes it works, sometimes it doesnt, i'm hoping mine works...
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:18 am
Just spruce it up a little, and you have plenty of time, Shane is offline, adn I can tell Shruikan to hold off on the kyuubi till you both have good RPs. Just pretend that this is a school essay. Brainstorm>rough draft>editing and revision>final copy. And if you need help with the grammar, type it in word, it will tell you most of your mistakes right off the bat. And as far the the demon's powers, I say once again, go watch some of naruto's earliest experiences with it, like the Zabuza fight.
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:20 am
Kashensu Just spruce it up a little, and you have plenty of time, Shane is offline, adn I can tell Shruikan to hold off on the kyuubi till you both have good RPs. Just pretend that this is a school essay. Brainstorm>rough draft>editing and revision>final copy. And if you need help with the grammar, type it in word, it will tell you most of your mistakes right off the bat. And as far the the demon's powers, I say once again, go watch some of naruto's earliest experiences with it, like the Zabuza fight. NO! MY SWEET HAKU! WHY crying
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:20 am
Haku hurt sasuke, and we all know naruto had the hots for him, he was pissed.
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:21 am
He already accepted it. After he posted telling me to do better Shane posted his and Tenshi said That I should wait and maybe later in another guild or later in this one I could get a demon. Hmmm Maybe once Curse marks open I will go for one of those.
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:22 am
Yep, those will be soon too, and we can prolly be a lil more lenient with them.
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:23 am
Kashensu Haku hurt sasuke, and we all know naruto had the hots for him, he was pissed. pfft, sasuke is a whiney little brat...Haku was a bad a**...Naruto should have raged over Haku being chidori'd
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