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PostPosted: Tue May 03, 2011 6:29 pm


Suigin Clan

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Description:
Originally, the Suigin Clan was only a small family of smiths, crafting weapons for the shinobi of Cloud. Over time, they began experimenting with the properties of mercury, crafting some beautiful ceremonial daggers that caught the attention of a local Daimyo's wife. She commissioned the clan to make her ornate hair pieces and combs from the finest mercury and precious stone. This set off the clan's orientation around the precious metal, crafting weapons and ornaments of the most exquisite quality. It wasn't long until the family began to gather a large amount of wealth and prestige, crafting special jutsu kept secret within the family that ensured only the most pure mercury would be used in their works. As time went on, naturally, jealousy began to become apparent from other clans and wealthy families. They soon started sending hired shinobi to sabotage the Suigin Clan's works and methods, forcing the clan to start using the craft for offensive means.



Requirements:
o Mercury as an element.
o Silver Piercings and/or Jewelry.
oFor jutsu requiring another source of metal, the user must have an actual raw source available. It can not be drawn from the ground or the human body.



Strengths:
o Can generate large amounts of mercury from their body.
o Strengthens Doton Ninjutsu by one rank.
o Can extend range of Raiton Ninjutsu through conductivity.


Weaknesses:
o Cannot learn Taijutsu (but may learn to master a weapon).
o Mercury jutsu are weak to Taijutsu and Kenjutsu (mercury is treated as elementally inferior.
o Weak to Raiton.



Ability:
Mercury considered an element separate from others but can be combined to other metals, making it stronger. The user can also sense the presence of mercury nearby.

Can craft items with mercury and repair items you've made [Crafting items with mercury takes one less post and repair an item that you made only takes one post must be pure mercury for these to count other metals in the mercury makes it hard to work and takes up normal time and post]



Clan Jutsus:
Genin:

Matatabi - Mercury Vine
{Originally used as ornamentation, Matatabi uses pure mercury from the user to create a vine able to trap and ensnare opponents or objects. However, its length is determined by the amount of mercury and it isn't very strong.}

Suigin: Kodate - Mercury: Small Shield
{A small shield of pure mercury infused with chakra. Weak and no bigger than the user's forearm but is good for deflecting small projectiles.}

Suigin: Tokage - mercury : Lizard
{Comprised of pure mercury, the lizard is soft and malleable - easy to injure and break. It stands no bigger than the user's forearm and is mainly used for retrieving objects that the user otherwise could not reach. It could also be used to transfer messages. The lizard is only able to hold objects up to its own weight before breaking.}

Suigin: Niwakamekura - Mercury: One Suddenly Blinded
{The user uses pure mercury to mold into a perfectly round, reflective disc. The reflective properties are enhanced by the user's chakra who uses the disc to reflect light into blinding beam straight at the opponent's eyes. Blinds for 2 posts.}

Suigin: Tsubomi - mercury : Flower Bud
{This jutsu can form as many small flower buds out of mercury as the user's chakra and amount of mercury can allow. The mercury flower buds look completely realistic but when the user lets out a small chakra burst towards them, they open, flowering into beautiful flowers. With this, they slowly begin to rotate for a moment before suddenly spinning at a full out frenzy, shedding their petals like razors everywhere around them.}


Chuunin:

Suigin: Ekusupuro-Jonshotto - Mercury: Explosion Shot
{The user molds a small ball of mercury no bigger than their palm. When they add a certain amount of chakra at high speed into the ball, it explodes into tiny, piercing needles able to penetrate nothing stronger than leather.}

Suigin: Tansen - mercury : Solid Wire
{Similar to the Matatabi Justu, Suigin: Tansen uses a stronger, more condensed thread of mercury to trap the user's enemies. Can also be used as a trip wire and hang objects no heavier than a cat}

Yuukai Hikinzoku: Unshin - Fusion Metal: Handling the Needle
{One of the first jutsu the clan members learn after perfecting the art of using pure mercury is where they combine mercury with other metals to make it stronger. This jutsu allows the user to combine mercury and another metal such as iron to increase the strength and durability. The metal is then crafted in a long needle, the size of the user's leg.}

Suigin: Kakumau - Mercury : To Shield
{Similar to the Suigin: Kodate, the Suigin Kakumau creates a larger shield of mercury that extends and contracts around the user, catching thrown weapons and deflecting water and fire attacks (any chunnin and lower). {Also able to take a few hits before being broken.}

Suigin: Teishuuha - Mercury : Low Wave
{A small wave of mercury needles are expelled from the user's supply or from a pocket of it in the ground towards the target with enough force to pierce through a tree.}


Jounin:

Suigin: Horimono - Mercury: Tattooing
{At reaching the stage of Jounin, the user is now capable of completely integrating mercury into their skin. That is to say; tattoo the skin with mercury which can be extracted and implanted back in at the user's will once the skill has been learned.}


Yuukai: Tachi - Fusion: Sword
{Fusing mercury with other metals, the user can craft a sword to be used in battle.}

Yuukai Hikinzoku: Shousangin - Fusion Metal: Mercury Nitrate
{By combining mercury with a volatile metal such as magnesium, the user carefully creates a small ball, no bigger than their thumb. They can either throw it and the force of its impact will cause a fairly large explosion. Or, the user can set it down and throw something at it to cause it to explode. Chakra can also be used to trigger the explosion.}

Yuukai: Gingitsune - Fusion: Mercury Fox
{Similar to that of Suigin: Tokage, the user creates a mercury Fox. The size is pendent on chakra and mercury available. Also, this one can also have other metals comprise its structure, increasing strength and dexterity.}


Anbu:

Suigin: Shokushu - Mercury: Tentacle
{Using pure mercury, the user manipulates the metal into tentacles which can be used like limbs; grasping or moving objects as well as throwing and catching.}

Suigin Yajuu - Mercury Beast
{Going by the same principles as the Suigin: Tokage and the Yuukai: Gingitsune, SuiginYajuu crafts both large amounts of mercury , chakra and other metals to form a beast of great strength and proportions to aid the user in battle. It takes on the appearance of both lizard and fox combined. Hence the name 'Beast'.}


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This is an edit of an existing clan that currently contains no users. I wish to use this edit for my RPC

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PostPosted: Fri May 06, 2011 7:15 am


A little preface here:

This Bloodline concept was originally created by Soren, but it lacked any concept of balance or cohesion and was only vaguely ninja. However, it was a good concept, so I picked up on it and revamped the bloodline, trying hard to keep the essence of the awesome that is the Senbonzakura from Bleach, but balance somewhat and make it ninja.

Lance requested that I finish the work and re-post it here in POTS since he had interest in making a character with this bloodline. I would however limit the number of users to about 2-3, considering it probably popularity. Also, the bloodline requires a strict background linking the user to royalty... which needless to say, does not appear very often in the Ninja World.


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Ato Sakura No Ki No (Art of the Cherry Tree)
Beautiful, Unique, Deadly

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Bloodline History: Senbonzakura is one of the most unique and specialized kekkai genkai to ever present itself. The bloodline itself only occurred within a very specific royal family in Japan, and even then, only few members of each generation could wield the power in it's truest form. The royal family bred these adepts as warriors and it was quickly regarded as one of the most power kekkai genkai of the Rice Country, which is where the bloodline was born (where the cherry blossoms grow in the greatest quantities). At birth, members of this clan are presented with a weapon that is marked with the insignia of the royal household. Once the wielders of this bloodline the weapon itself begin to bind itself to the user's soul, allowing them to unlock and utilize it's powers as their abilities grow. True adepts of the clan can even forge their own personal clan insignias which they can use their own chakra to temporarily etch into weapons, allowing them to change the cold steel into thousands of small blades which take the shape and form of cherry blossoms. The clan user can then control these blades, which are sharp enough to rip through skin and clothing, with the will of his mind, directing their movement for both offensive and defensive maneuvers.

Clan Rules:
[!] Your character must have some kind of tie to the royal family in Japan from which this bloodline was born.
[!] Do not godmod and block every attack thrown at you or you will lose the bloodline
[!] Stage One is available at Genin, Stage Two is Chunnin and Stage Three is Jounin and higher.
[!] You must have an approved custom weapon to attain Stage 1, and 2 custom weapons to attain Stage 2.
[!] Do not over use the stage three since it drains your life force as well as your chakra and leaves you incredibly weakened afterward.
[!] All bloodline techniques which last beyond the initial 'scatter' command's 5 post limit still require the additional chakra/post cost to maintain the petals.
[!] Though you have increasingly large amounts of petals, you cannot control every petal individually... at best, you can coordinate your petals as a group to strike/defend from two different angles, or attack/defend two separate targets simultaneously. This will increase as you progress through the stages however... increasing by one for each stage.


Stage 1 – Senbonzakura (Thousand Cherry Blossoms)

This is the initial stage of the bloodline, where the user has just begun to understand his Insignia Sword and commune with it. At this stage, the sword is normally given a name by the user, and will respond to an activation command to "scatter" into the cherry blossom blades. the user is not yet able to maintain the blade's scattered form for long, but with practice, they will be able to keep it out for much longer. the user is also able to use the 'Etch' ability to augment kunai and shuriken to act as scattered blades when their chakra reserves have begun to run low. [The user must spend 5 posts communing with his blade to awaken it.]

Stage One : Abilities granted

Upon speaking the activation word and forming a single, unique hand seal, the user's Insignia blade 'scatters' and forms into the cherry blossoms. For every post the blossoms are out, it drains 2 chakra points from the user on top of everything else they do in the round, and can only be held for a maximum of 3 posts per activation before the blade reforms.

Will Power: The user’s mind is used to direct where the Senbonzakura will move and attack from. The speed of the movement is that of an average Genin's speed. The number of petals created is about as much as would be required to fill a 5 ft. diameter sphere.

Shield: Senbonzakura has the power to form around you and create a shield which can block and deflect taijutsu attacks up to a C-rank and neutralize most D-rank jutsu, and some C-rank jutsu of the (energy type).

Etch: The clan member is able to etch their personal clan insignia into shuriken and kunai. These are temporary brands, which when activated with a series of one handed hand seals, will "scatter' into cherry blossoms as the user's insignia weapon does for 2 posts. (though on a much smaller scale) Once the 2 posts have passed, the cherry blossoms fade and the kunai/shuriken is destroyed. (Activation requires very minimal chakra and the number of petals created is about as much as would be required to fill a 1 ft. diameter sphere.)

[Etching the insignia requires an hour of work (2 posts) and a C-rank amount of chakra - It requires an incredible amount of detail and concentration, so if the user is interrupted, the etching fails. You may only have a store of 5 etched shuriken/kunai total. (Note: It must be specifically posted that you have etched a weapon... you cannot simply say that you have done it previously.)]



Bloodline Jutsu: (All Senbonzakura jutsu techniques require only one-handed seals)

Senbonzakura Hotaru no jutsu (Thousand Cherry Blossoms Firefly technique) - After tossing a kunai/shuriken and 'scattering' the petals, this jutsu can be used to manipulate those petals to cloud the opponent's vision and serve as a distraction. Once the jutsu is initiated, the petals seek out the directed opponent's eyes and continually floats in front of/around them for 2 posts, emitting a bright light as they do so. These petals cannot be recalled or reused for combat purposes and disappear after the 2 posts are up. (Requires an amount of petals = 1 etched shuriken/kunai)

Senbozakura Kagami bunshin (Thousand Cherry Blossoms Mirror Clone) - After executing the proper hand seals, petals from the user's main sword begin to split off and flow in front of the user or an ally. The petals group up, taking on the size/shape of the target before the entire array of petals begins to glow, giving off a sudden flash of light, which then dims, revealing an exact replica of the target. The clone cannot use any ninjutsu or bloodline techniques, but can wield/utilize any of the weapons on the replicated target as if they were the real thing (in terms of size, weight, force, and sharpness).

When the clone is hit, it explodes, sending the petals which make up the replicated clone in a spread pattern across the one who destroyed it delivering multiple cuts and slices across the opponent's body before returning to it's master. (Requires half of the petals from the user's Primary Weapons to be scattered/used)



Stage 2 – Senbonzakura Kageyoshi (Vibrant Display of a Thousand Cherry Blossoms)

This is the second stage of the bloodline, where the user has grown more familiar with his blade and has even developed the ability to commune with a second blade. Well acquainted with etching, the user may make one special etching on a secondary blade, allowing them to effectively double the amount of cherry blossom petals they can create and control. Also, with this new mastery comes a greater ability to control the speed and movement of the petals, as the use of a user's hands will accelerate the petals by nearly two fold their previous speed.[The user must be at least Chuunin rank and is required to spend 7 posts communing with his blades to awaken this stage.]

Stage Two : Abilities granted

Upon speaking the activation word and forming a single, unique hand seal, the user's Insignia blade 'scatters' and forms into the cherry blossoms. For every post the blossoms are out, it drains 3 chakra points from the use on top of everything else they do in the round, and can only be held for a maximum of 5 posts per activation before the blade reforms.

Directed Attack: Through the user’s will and the direction of the petals by way of the hand, the user is able to direct where the Senbonzakura will move and attack from. The speed of the movement is about 2 times that of an average Chuunin. The number of petals created is about as much as would be required to fill a 10 ft. diameter sphere.

Shield II: Senbonzakura Kageyoshi has the power to form around you and create a shield which can block and deflect taijutsu attacks up to a B-rank and neutralize most C-rank jutsu, and some B-rank jutsu of the (energy type).

Etch II: At this level, etched kunai/shuriken which are 'scattered' last for 3 posts before disintegrating (taking the weapon with it). Additionally, the user may etch a temporary seal into larger weapons around the size of a Katana in much the same way as before. (The number of petals created is about as much as would be required to fill a 5 ft. diameter sphere. [Amount created for Kunai/Shuriken remains the same as before])

[Etching kunai/shuriken insignia still requires 2 posts and a C-rank of chakra, with all the same requirements as in Etch I. Etching a larger weapon requires 2 posts and a B-rank amount of chakra and follows the same concentration requirements as the kunai/shuriken. You may only have a store of 10 etched kunai/shuriken, and 2 etched katana (or equally large weapon) total.]



Bloodline Jutsu: (All Senbonzakura jutsu techniques require only one-handed seals)

Senbonzakura KouKou Ori (Thousand Cherry Blossoms Light Cage) - After performing the required hand seals, all of the user's petals are instantly recalled in a defensive fashion, forming a latticed dome of petals which fully surrounds up to three individual targets. Once the petals are in place, though shine brilliantly and will completely repel any C-ranked ninjutsu technique or B-rank taijutsu assault used against any of the users. The structures will last as long as the user wishes... (maximum 10 posts), or until they are otherwise directed. (Requires all of the petals from both the Primary and Secondary Weapons to be scattered/used)

[Regardless of whether or not you choose to defend three targets or less... use of this technique requires use of all of the Primary and Secondary weapon's petals. The cages can last beyond the petal's normal duration, but if the cages are dispelled after the 5th post since the petals were originally scattered, they disperse and reform back into the user's swords.]

Senbonzakura Yajirushi Wa (Thousand Cherry Blossoms Ring of Arrows) - After the proper hand seals, a large number of petals form in a ring around the user and begin to spin rapidly at high speeds. As they spin, the petals slowly form into 8 highly compressed arrowed shapes which then launch out from the user in all eight of the cardinal directions. The arrows can then individually seek out and destroy their own target, all of them simultaneously controlled by the user. [These arrows count as purely chakra-based weapons, giving them incredible piercing strength which cannot be deflected by simple steel weapons]
(Requires all of the petals from the Primary or Secondary Weapon to be scattered/used)



Stage 3 – Senkei Senbonzakura Kageyoshi (Vibrant Display of a Thousand Cherry Blossoms: Massacre Scene)

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This is the final stage of the bloodline, but only the most dedicated and skilled warriors of the royal bloodline are capable of achieving this. This stage does not grant an extra personal etching, but etching now takes half as long as it did before and can be applied to nearly anything. The speeds of the petals are now deadly and blindingly fast, move at about the speed of a Sannin or faster when directed by the hands.[To achieve this level user must be at least Jounin rank and is required to spend 15 posts communing with his blades to awaken this stage.]

Stage Three : Abilities granted

Upon speaking the activation word and forming a single, unique hand seal, the user's Insignia blade 'scatters' and forms into the cherry blossoms. For every post the blossoms are out, it drains 5 chakra points from the use on top of everything else they do in the round, and can only be held for a maximum of 5 posts per activation before the blade reforms.

Directed Attack: The speed of directed attacks is about double that of your average Jounin, making offense and defense using the petals nearly instantaneous, easily transitioning from one to the other. Also, the amount of petals which form from the scatter is increased by a magnitude of about 10... enabling the user to create massive walls for both offensive and defensive use at the same time, the different forces being directed with both hands. (The number of petals created is about as much as would be required to fill a 25 ft. diameter sphere.)

Shield III: Senbonzakura Kageyoshi has the power to form around you and create a shield which can block and deflect taijutsu attacks up to a A-rank and neutralize most A-rank ninjutsu.

Etch III: At this level, etched kunai/shuriken which are 'scattered' last for 3 posts before disintegrating (taking the weapon with it). Additionally, the user may etch a temporary seal into larger weapons of any size, so long as it is something that can be held in their hands and wielded as a weapon. (The number of petals created is about as much as would be required to fill a 10 ft. diameter sphere. [Amount created for Katana and Kunai/Shuriken remains the same as before])

[Etching kunai/shuriken insignia now only requires 1 post and a C-rank of chakra, with all the same requirements as in Etch I. Etching a larger weapon requires 2 posts and a B-rank amount of chakra and follows the same concentration requirements as the kunai/shuriken. Etching a larger weapon takes 3 posts. You may carry as many etched kunai/shuriken as you wish, up to 5 katana-sized weapons, and 2-larger weapons.]



Bloodline Jutsu: (All Senbonzakura jutsu techniques require only one-handed seals)

Senkei (Massacre Scene) - [Work in progress] Defensive sphere, also used to force single combat --> Repels all A-rank jutsu and even S-ranked energy types, protecting all those inside, up to 10 targets in an area.

Gokei (Pivotal Scene) - [Work in progress] All swords descend on an opponent from all angles [Water this down to make it A-rank. Simply have it launched a ton of swords, not from all angles inescapably.)

Shuukei (Final Scene) - [Work in progress] All swords condense to one sword of vibrant energy, user grows wings for one final attack. [S-rank... typically taken as the S-rank technique allowed for Jounin]


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PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2011 6:00 am


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Name: Renjā (レンジャー “Ranger”)
Description:
The rangers are an ancient clan, their techniques are said to be as old as the first jutsus that were ever made. However, in the past they have been an isolationistic clan, preferring their homes in the dense forests and avoiding contact with the outside world as much as possible. During times of war, the factions would oftentimes turn to the rangers and seek to employ them as mercenaries, only to be sorely turned down and chased out of their territory. The rangers cared only for their own clan members, and sought only to defend their homes from outsiders, whether or not they meant them any harm. Suddenly, however, they disappeared. It had been a year since any one had seen them. And when scouts were sent into their homes, they found them to be in ruins. Rumors say they were attacked by those they have chased out of their homes. But some say that a civil war broke out among them, and soon lead to their own destruction. Regardless of the cause, the rangers were gone.

Recently however, there have been sightings baring a close resemblance to the rangers of old. But, they were not seen in the shrouds of the trees, or in between the shadows of their beloved forests. Instead, they were seen on the roads, on the mountainsides, and even amongst the crowds in several shinobi villages. No one is certain where they came from, or what their intentions are. But one thing is certain, they are certainly more open to outsiders than they were in the past, some have even enrolled in shinobi academies. And though those that still remember them are wary of their newfound friendliness, others view them as they would everyone else.

Strengths:
  • Excellent marksmanship
  • Wide number of skills

Weaknesses:
  • Low durability
  • Poor melee combatant

Ability:
The Rangers possess abilities that augment their long range capabilities. They are capable of enhancing their eyesight to reach godlike accuracy and are fully capable of transferring their chakra into their arrows, imbuing them with outstanding capabilities, capable of rivaling most ninjutsus in terms of power.


Clan Jutsus:

Academy Student
  • Karyūdo no Me (狩人 “Hunter’s Eyes”)
    The ranger is trained to enhance his eyesight, allowing him to double his range of sight from 100 yards to 150 yards. Initially this technique takes as long to activate as a Byakugan or a Sharingan, but as training progresses, this can be activated in the blink of an eye, if not faster.
  • Tsukitomeru (突き止める “Pinpoint”)
    Further enhancing his range of vision, the ranger overloads his eyesight with chakra, allowing him to see as far as 200 yards. The drawback however is that the excessive amount of chakra in the nerves causes temporary tunnel vision, meaning that the ranger can only see what is directly in the center of his vision, and nowhere else.


Genin
  • Ya Kōgei (矢工芸 “Arrow Craft”)
    To a ranger, his arrows are as important as his blood in the battlefield. As such, they have developed techniques to ensure they do not run out. As long as the ranger can grasp any object that is even remotely similar to an arrow, a blade of grass, a needle, a feather, etc. they can use their chakra to fill in the gaps and produce an arrow. However, the nature of the base material has a significant effect on the strength of the arrow; grass will produce flimsy arrows for example, while feathers will produce more aerodynamic ones.
  • Sō Satsuei (双撮影 “Twin Shot”)
    Simply put, this technique allows the ranger to fire off two arrows in perfect unison, allowing them to strike the target as if they were one. This requires absolutely no chakra and is based purely on skill and stamina.
  • Hanpatsu Satsuei (反発撮影 “Repelling Shot”)
    Sometimes the ranger finds themselves becoming the hunted instead of the hunter. This is acceptable as some targets are simply much more resilient than others, which is why they have developed a technique capable of pushing them back. This technique sacrifices killing power for pushing power, covering the entire tip of the arrow with layers of chakra and compressed air. Upon impact, the force generated is strong enough to push most targets a good 5 yards away, at the same time causing minimal, or oftentimes no damage at all.


Chuunin
  • Taka no Me (鷹の目 “Falcon’s Eyes”)
    Adrenaline is capable of slowing down one’s perception of time, a ranger is taught to mimic this and possibly heighten it to greater levels. Flooding their visual nerves with chakra, a ranger is capable of slowing down their perception of time, making it seem as if the world is in slow motion. But, do note that this does not, in any way, slow down time itself. It merely slows down the perception of it, thus, although the ranger’s senses are moving faster than the real world, their body cannot and does not respond nearly as fast enough.
  • Don Satsuei (鈍撮影 “Blunt Shot”)
    Not all targets are merely flesh and fur on the outside, some possess dense hide, far too thick for an arrow to pierce. Thus, to counter-act these sorts of foes, this specific technique was developed. The ranger coats the tip of the arrow in enough chakra to produce a blunt striking end. Once this specially made end strikes a hard surface, it generates a concussive force instead of a piercing force that travels through the dense armor and damages whatever is directly behind it. And though it is not fatal, it is still quite powerful.
  • Haretsu Satsuei (破裂撮影 “Burst Shot”)
    Despite the need rangers cannot overload their eyes with chakra as they will destroy themselves, but this is not the case with arrows. Fully aware of this a ranger can overload their arrow with chakra, to the point where it begins to spark out of the frame. The arrow unloads all of its energy upon impact, and the blast is dependent on the ranger’s elemental chakra. Fire produces a standard explosion, wind creates a powerful burst cyclone, lightning unleashes an electrocuting shockwave, earth is dense enough to crater the ground, and water generates a flash flood in the area. However, the area is always fixed, spanning 30 yards in diameter.
  • Ta Satsuei (多撮影 “Multi Shot”)
    Striking one target is not enough on the battlefield, and more often than not the odds are usually 5 to 1. Thus, it was to be expected that the rangers would develop a technique to aid them in these kinds of warfare. Cradling three arrows from their index fingers to their last one is quite a feat of dexterity, even more so is the capability to fire all of them without sacrificing precision and power, relying not on chakra but on skill.


Jounin
  • Kasetsu Ya (仮設矢 “Makeshift Arrow”)
    When there isn’t anything nearby that can be used as base material for an arrow, a ranger can solidify their chakra to create an impromptu arrow. This arrow is just as powerful as a regular one, however, it cannot be imbued with additional chakra as it will become unstable and dissipate, or worse explode in the ranger’s hands.
  • Rei Ya (霊矢 “Ghost Arrow”)
    This is a technique that can only be performed with a chakra arrow. Because of its nature, the arrow will strike only those objects that possess chakra. Thus, it can be fired through rocks and walls and other inanimate objects, whereupon the arrow will phase through it before striking a target with chakra.
  • Wana Ya (罠矢 “Trap Arrow”)
    Normally once an arrow has been infused with chakra for a burst shot the effects are readily visible. But here the arrow fired looks the same as any other, seemingly normal. Until it is disturbed, then the stored chakra is violently released, generating the same amount of force but with an added, often lethal amount of surprise.
  • Fusshoku Satsuei (払拭撮影 “Dispelling Shot”)
    This technique is a weak, but rather effective technique that sends out a brief chakra surge upon impact, which oftentimes breaks the concentration of a person, deactivating or interrupting any ongoing jutsu. It works by forcing the chakra on the arrow into the person, but since the rangers do not possess the capability to pinpoint a target’s tenketsu, the chakra merely sparks inside the Chakra Pathway System before dissipating. It can be compared to a brief static shock, certainly capable of breaking your concentration, but not that damaging.
  • Bunretsu Satsuei (分裂撮影 “Splintering Shot”)
    Structurally complex, this technique involves creating eight shafts of chakra around the arrow which separate cleanly upon impact, sending the shafts flying into separate directions. Though the shafts are not nearly as powerful as the arrow itself, it serves as an added means of attack which can come in handy.


Kage/Sannin
  • Inazuma (稲妻 “Lightning”)
    Blitz is the foremost emphasis of this technique. Combining their agile bodies and chakra, the rangers are capable of creating a surge of chakra within them, giving them godlike agility. Though this does not allow them to move at supersonic speeds, it boosts their hand-eye coordination and dexterity well beyond human limits. The downside however is that they cannot perform any jutsu while in this form as the chakra is much too unstable to effectively mold. But this setback is easily compensated by this technique’s boost. Besides that, this form also unlocks the final tier of techniques that the rangers possess, which can only be performed using Inazuma.
  • Ya no Kaze (矢の風 “Arrow Wind”)
    Utilizing the immense chakra build-up in their hands, the ranger lets loose an arrow that leaves a ferocious gale in its wake, ripping apart those that are too fragile to defend themselves, and blowing away almost everything else that is left. The force is so great that even the range is sometimes caught in the gale.
  • Ya no Ame (矢の雨 “Arrow Rain”)
    Utilizing the speed at which their chakra is running, the ranger coats their arrow in several layers of chakra and fires it, releasing the multitude of layers around the original one and creating a storm of arrows. Needless to say the chakra arrows are not as powerful as the real one, but at such numbers it might as well be.
  • Ya Yari (矢槍 “Arrow Spear”)
    Once more, the chakra build-up in the ranger’s hands allows them to perform feats of deadly marksmanship. But this time instead of a ferocious roar of wind, the entirety of the force is condensed into the arrow, turning it into a powerful spear that is capable of cutting through virtually anything in its path.
  • Satsugai Satsuei (殺害撮影 “Killing Shot”)
    The single most powerful single target attack the rangers are capable of. It makes use of godlike aiming, chakra enhancement that gives the arrow a razor sharp edge, and dexterity to let loose a fatal strike. When it strikes, the arrow is capable of lacerating flesh, bone, even steel, before erupting into numerous barbs inside the target, causing additional damage as well as inflicting grievous internal injuries after the shot.
  • Kimera (キメラ “Chimera”)
    Versatility is just as important as speed and power, and this technique personifies it. It allows the ranger to impart a maximum of three separate enhancements on an arrow, giving it an added edge it striking down targets.
PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2011 10:23 am


Everyone, no more submissions until these ones have been looked over.

Gregar828
Vice Captain


BluewolfofMibu

PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2011 7:58 pm


X_Oxy_X

Suigin: Tokage - mercury : Lizard
{Comprised of pure mercury, the lizard is soft and malleable - easy to injure and break. It stands no bigger than the user's forearm and is mainly used for retrieving objects that the user otherwise could not reach. It could also be used to transfer messages. The lizard is only able to hold objects up to its own weight before breaking.}

I hope you know that the lizard can not transfer messages outside the village/country. Put that in there

Suigin: Kakumau - Mercury : To Shield
{Similar to the Suigin: Kodate, the Suigin Kakumau creates a larger shield of mercury that extends and contracts around the user, catching thrown weapons and deflecting water and fire attacks (any chunnin and lower). {Also able to take a few hits before being broken.}

how many hits can it take. I think three hits before its broken, two hits from a taijutsu specialist

Yuukai Hikinzoku: Shousangin - Fusion Metal: Mercury Nitrate
{By combining mercury with a volatile metal such as magnesium, the user carefully creates a small ball, no bigger than their thumb. They can either throw it and the force of its impact will cause a fairly large explosion. Or, the user can set it down and throw something at it to cause it to explode. Chakra can also be used to trigger the explosion.}

How large of an explosion?


On another note, we don't have an ANBU rank here. However after reading the jutsus, the 'jounin' rank could actually be considered Special Jounin or B rank while the 'Anbu' rank can be Jounin rank or A rank
PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2011 8:12 pm


Cobra_X


First of all, I'd like to call dibs on one of the spots, which there will be three if this bloodline gets approved.

Other than that, lets get to the issues at hand:

From what I've seen its a fairly balanced bloodline except the shield techniques at stage 1 and 2. It just seems a bit unfair that a genin (a D rank shinobi) can block and deflect C rank Taijutsu and some C rank Jutsu, and from what I understand with no cost at all. The way I'm looking at it, is like an Aburame. An Aburame can use his bugs as a shield to protect him from say, fire attacks. However the Aburame would loose bugs in the process.

On that note, I would think that just like the Aburame bugs are considered an element, I would think it would be fair to say since the bloodline has no defined weakness that one elemental slot should be taken away in place of the bloodline abilities.

Also, the final techniques need to be finished XP. Other than those issues I definitley want to approve this.

BluewolfofMibu


X_Oxy_X

Invisible Hunter

PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2011 12:48 am


Suigin Clan

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Description:
Originally, the Suigin Clan was only a small family of smiths, crafting weapons for the shinobi of Cloud. Over time, they began experimenting with the properties of mercury, crafting some beautiful ceremonial daggers that caught the attention of a local Daimyo's wife. She commissioned the clan to make her ornate hair pieces and combs from the finest mercury and precious stone. This set off the clan's orientation around the precious metal, crafting weapons and ornaments of the most exquisite quality. It wasn't long until the family began to gather a large amount of wealth and prestige, crafting special jutsu kept secret within the family that ensured only the most pure mercury would be used in their works. As time went on, naturally, jealousy began to become apparent from other clans and wealthy families. They soon started sending hired shinobi to sabotage the Suigin Clan's works and methods, forcing the clan to start using the craft for offensive means.



Requirements:
o Mercury as an element.
o Silver Piercings and/or Jewelry.
oFor jutsu requiring another source of metal, the user must have an actual raw source available. It can not be drawn from the ground or the human body.



Strengths:
o Can generate large amounts of mercury from their body.
o Strengthens Doton Ninjutsu by one rank.
o Can extend range of Raiton Ninjutsu through conductivity.


Weaknesses:
o Cannot learn Taijutsu (but may learn to master a weapon).
o Mercury jutsu are weak to Taijutsu and Kenjutsu (mercury is treated as elementally inferior.
o Weak to Raiton.



Ability:
Mercury considered an element separate from others but can be combined to other metals, making it stronger. The user can also sense the presence of mercury nearby.

Can craft items with mercury and repair items you've made [Crafting items with mercury takes one less post and repair an item that you made only takes one post must be pure mercury for these to count other metals in the mercury makes it hard to work and takes up normal time and post]



Clan Jutsus:
Genin:

Matatabi - Mercury Vine
{Originally used as ornamentation, Matatabi uses pure mercury from the user to create a vine able to trap and ensnare opponents or objects. However, its length is determined by the amount of mercury and it isn't very strong.}

Suigin: Kodate - Mercury: Small Shield
{A small shield of pure mercury infused with chakra. Weak and no bigger than the user's forearm but is good for deflecting small projectiles.}

Suigin: Tokage - mercury : Lizard
{Comprised of pure mercury, the lizard is soft and malleable - easy to injure and break. It stands no bigger than the user's forearm and is mainly used for retrieving objects that the user otherwise could not reach. It could also be used to transfer messages. The lizard is only able to hold objects up to its own weight before breaking . Limited to the same village or country. }

Suigin: Niwakamekura - Mercury: One Suddenly Blinded
{The user uses pure mercury to mold into a perfectly round, reflective disc. The reflective properties are enhanced by the user's chakra who uses the disc to reflect light into blinding beam straight at the opponent's eyes. Blinds for 2 posts.}

Suigin: Tsubomi - mercury : Flower Bud
{This jutsu can form as many small flower buds out of mercury as the user's chakra and amount of mercury can allow. The mercury flower buds look completely realistic but when the user lets out a small chakra burst towards them, they open, flowering into beautiful flowers. With this, they slowly begin to rotate for a moment before suddenly spinning at a full out frenzy, shedding their petals like razors everywhere around them.}


Chuunin:

Suigin: Ekusupuro-Jonshotto - Mercury: Explosion Shot
{The user molds a small ball of mercury no bigger than their palm. When they add a certain amount of chakra at high speed into the ball, it explodes into tiny, piercing needles able to penetrate nothing stronger than leather.}

Suigin: Tansen - mercury : Solid Wire
{Similar to the Matatabi Justu, Suigin: Tansen uses a stronger, more condensed thread of mercury to trap the user's enemies. Can also be used as a trip wire and hang objects no heavier than a cat}

Yuukai Hikinzoku: Unshin - Fusion Metal: Handling the Needle
{One of the first jutsu the clan members learn after perfecting the art of using pure mercury is where they combine mercury with other metals to make it stronger. This jutsu allows the user to combine mercury and another metal such as iron to increase the strength and durability. The metal is then crafted in a long needle, the size of the user's leg.}

Suigin: Kakumau - Mercury : To Shield
{Similar to the Suigin: Kodate, the Suigin Kakumau creates a larger shield of mercury that extends and contracts around the user, catching thrown weapons and deflecting water and fire attacks (any chunnin and lower). {Also able to take a three hits before being broken two from a taijutsu class.}

Suigin: Teishuuha - Mercury : Low Wave
{A small wave of mercury needles are expelled from the user's supply or from a pocket of it in the ground towards the target with enough force to pierce through a tree.}


Special Jounin:

Suigin: Horimono - Mercury: Tattooing
{At reaching the stage of Jounin, the user is now capable of completely integrating mercury into their skin. That is to say; tattoo the skin with mercury which can be extracted and implanted back in at the user's will once the skill has been learned.}


Yuukai: Tachi - Fusion: Sword
{Fusing mercury with other metals, the user can craft a sword to be used in battle.}

Yuukai Hikinzoku: Shousangin - Fusion Metal: Mercury Nitrate
{By combining mercury with a volatile metal such as magnesium, the user carefully creates a small ball, no bigger than their thumb. They can either throw it and the force of its impact will cause a fairly large explosion. Or, the user can set it down and throw something at it to cause it to explode. Chakra can also be used to trigger the explosion roughly the force of three paper bombs.}

Yuukai: Gingitsune - Fusion: Mercury Fox
{Similar to that of Suigin: Tokage, the user creates a mercury Fox. The size is pendent on chakra and mercury available. Also, this one can also have other metals comprise its structure, increasing strength and dexterity.}


Jonin:

Suigin: Shokushu - Mercury: Tentacle
{Using pure mercury, the user manipulates the metal into tentacles which can be used like limbs; grasping or moving objects as well as throwing and catching.}

Suigin Yajuu - Mercury Beast
{Going by the same principles as the Suigin: Tokage and the Yuukai: Gingitsune, SuiginYajuu crafts both large amounts of mercury , chakra and other metals to form a beast of great strength and proportions to aid the user in battle. It takes on the appearance of both lizard and fox combined. Hence the name 'Beast'.}


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PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2011 12:49 am


BluewolfofMibu
X_Oxy_X

Suigin: Tokage - mercury : Lizard
{Comprised of pure mercury, the lizard is soft and malleable - easy to injure and break. It stands no bigger than the user's forearm and is mainly used for retrieving objects that the user otherwise could not reach. It could also be used to transfer messages. The lizard is only able to hold objects up to its own weight before breaking.}

I hope you know that the lizard can not transfer messages outside the village/country. Put that in there

Suigin: Kakumau - Mercury : To Shield
{Similar to the Suigin: Kodate, the Suigin Kakumau creates a larger shield of mercury that extends and contracts around the user, catching thrown weapons and deflecting water and fire attacks (any chunnin and lower). {Also able to take a few hits before being broken.}

how many hits can it take. I think three hits before its broken, two hits from a taijutsu specialist

Yuukai Hikinzoku: Shousangin - Fusion Metal: Mercury Nitrate
{By combining mercury with a volatile metal such as magnesium, the user carefully creates a small ball, no bigger than their thumb. They can either throw it and the force of its impact will cause a fairly large explosion. Or, the user can set it down and throw something at it to cause it to explode. Chakra can also be used to trigger the explosion.}

How large of an explosion?


On another note, we don't have an ANBU rank here. However after reading the jutsus, the 'jounin' rank could actually be considered Special Jounin or B rank while the 'Anbu' rank can be Jounin rank or A rank


I just kept the ranks the same as the original. I also reposted it with the changes added in to be rejudged.

X_Oxy_X

Invisible Hunter


Gregar828
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2011 1:25 pm


If I may interject on Cobra's bloodline: Luo's RPC, Luo Ushio, already uses the equivalent of the Sanbonzakura as his custom weapon. This bloodline is the equivalent of the Senbonzakura as well. Should we allow both?
PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2011 5:34 pm


Oxy: The ranks wasn't a suggestion. We do not use ANBU rank. People who join the guild and see the bloodline will think that there is one. Change the Jounin rank to Special Jounin and change the Anbu rank to Jounin.

Greg: His is extremely different though. For starters his sword is actually senbons, not petals. The way the bloodline manipulates their petals is through chakra and their mind, the way Luo manipulates his senbons is through wind element and chakra strings. If anything one could even say that those of this bloodline created the sword for him, but nevertheless the two are still are different enough that they can both exist.

BluewolfofMibu


X_Oxy_X

Invisible Hunter

PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2011 4:02 am


Edited it
PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2011 7:39 am


BluewolfofMibu
First of all, I'd like to call dibs on one of the spots, which there will be three if this bloodline gets approved.

Well, I 'finished' this due to Lance's request, so he gets first dibs. After that, it's up to you guys. Not my jurisdiction there...

BluewolfofMibu
From what I've seen its a fairly balanced bloodline except the shield techniques at stage 1 and 2. It just seems a bit unfair that a genin (a D rank shinobi) can block and deflect C rank Taijutsu and some C rank Jutsu, and from what I understand with no cost at all.

A reasonable request... though I would argue with the 'no cost' you mentioned. Considering even having the petals out drains chakra every round, I would consider that a very real cost.

I can remove the C-rank jutsu block for Genin, but I think that the C-rank Taijutsu should be allowed... it makes sense given the nature of the defense.

- If you like, we can even add that blocking a C-rank taijutsu attack REDUCES the number of posts the petals last by 1.

- OR we can double nerf it by both REDUCING the number of posts the petals can last AND costs extra chakra.

- AND if you want... I meant for the shield to only work against Raiton and Katon. If you want, we can just scrap that... or we can institute a similar change to the suggestions above.


BluewolfofMibu
On that note, I would think that just like the Aburame bugs are considered an element, I would think it would be fair to say since the bloodline has no defined weakness that one elemental slot should be taken away in place of the bloodline abilities.

I would disagree with this. this isn't like the Aburame, since with that clan, the bugs ARE the substitute for chakra use and the formation of everything the clan uses. they don't use fire, they don't use water... all of their techniques involve the bugs... that's the whole point.

With this, you ACTIVATE the ability like many other bloodlines, and it only lasts for 5 posts. it's not a substitute for anything. You're utilizing your chakra continually to create an affect... and eventually it can't be used anymore. Removing elements of control would weaken them severly when they are in between the times when they can utilize their petals.

(Is realizing I never put a cooldown between 'scatter' activations....)

In the end, I'll leave the final call up to you in this regard, if you think it's needed for balance. But I don't think it compares to Aburame.


BluewolfofMibu
Also, the final techniques need to be finished XP. Other than those issues I definitley want to approve this.

Yeah, I kind of had to hastily submit it to get it in before the deadline. I really just wanted to see how the bloodline would be received here.

Those jutsu are already mapped in my head. I just need to write them out. They will be very similar to Byakuya's own techniques, but balanced and made more 'ninja-like'.

Glad you like the bloodline though!

Cobra_X
Crew

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BluewolfofMibu

PostPosted: Fri May 13, 2011 10:21 pm


Cobra_X

-Remove the C Rank jutsu block for genin (Up to D rank for energy based jutsu), C rank taijutsu can stay

-If you put a cooldown that would actually balance the bloodline even more so there's no need to take up an elemental slot

-Please finish the jutsus and the edits and quote me when you're done.

Thanks Cobra! ^_^
PostPosted: Fri May 13, 2011 10:26 pm


Oxy, your clan has been edited in the clan list:

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