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 Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 9:06 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 9:08 pm
OMG! Yush no tweaks or anything *Victory Dances*
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 1:04 pm
Death Soldier
You are DECLINED 1. I need more explanation of your knowledge over the Nara Clan, "They use Shadows to control people" is barely twenty percent of you showing knowledge over the Clan. 2. A clone DOES NOT dispel after a Nara has made contact with its/their shadows, that does also involve in your knowledge. 3. I also need a better fight scene using the Clan. Actually you used three techniques while the fight, and yet it is nothing to make me know that you can RP as a Nara. It doesn't have to be long. Better quality than quantity.
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Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 8:54 pm
Name: _Manpish_
RPC's name: Faith "Greed" Tsukikage
Bloodline Applying for: Oragami no Dara
Why do you want it: I simply love this bloodline because it is awesome to be able to control paper! Also i have liked Konan since she first entered the Anime so i thought it would be fun to have the Kekkei-Genkai!
What will you do with it: Ill use this Kekkei genkai to mess with my opponents by flinging paper weapons and maybe even paper flowers and such at them for the fun of it! xP
What you know about it: I know that the paper is very vulnerable to water unless coated in chakra and that it is vulnerable to fire (no matter what). I also know that the paper can fold into any shape and can even be used as weapons. Oragami no Dara is the Kekkei genkai (bloodline) of the Anime character Konan in Naruto (everyone knows this).
RP Sample:
Faith sat there in the class room wishing that he could just leave and be over with school. The teacher simply loved to talk and waste his time, which really pissed him off. Faith smiled as he suddenly made a hand sign under his desk and focused his chakra, he made his homework fold into a paper shuriken and fly at the Teachers back. The Teacher reflexively caught the shuriken and looked around the room to see who it had come from. Faith quickly made some more hand signs using the Paper clone jutsu to make a clone of himself out of paper. The paper clone floated up to the front of the room and tapped the teacher on the shoulder, whenever the teacher would look to see who it was the clone would float up to the roof so that the teacher didn't see it. Faith covered his mouth trying not to laugh at the teachers own stupidity. After a while Faith smiled as the paper clone dispersed itself and the Teacher turned his back to them again leaving himself wide open, suddenly Faith made some hand signs and focused his chakra around everyones papers, he simply folded them all into paper shuriken. Faith aimed carefully and flung them all at the teacher who didnt have a clue what was going on. When the teacher turned to greet the class he had an expression of anger seeing as he had about ten paper shuriken jabbed into his back. "ok class dissmissed..." the Teacher finally told the class and watched as everyone left the room. As Faith ran out he stuck his tounge out at the teacher teasing him.
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Posted: Mon May 31, 2010 10:09 pm
Name: kuro-uchi
RPC's name: Rei Kaguya
Bloodline Applying for: ...Kaguya
Why do you want it: I know what the hell I'm doing with it
What will you do with it: I'll use it to be a sadistic MOFO
What you know about it: ok short version, clan attacked mist, mist won, few clan survivors, Kimimaro though to be only survivor, blood thirsty, bone manipulation, badassness
RP Sample:
Rei standing in a field with dead bodies everywhere points a child's 'hand' gun at the man and twitches his hand upwards. He turns and walks calmly away from the limp mans tortured body. He sees his squad members dragging an unconscious beat-up enemy shinobi towards him. Rei walks to them, "Who do we have here?" A female of the age of 16 responds, " We found this one with a bone spike sticking all the way through his leg, He seems to be a Jounin." Rei smiles guides the two to a table. He shoves the dead mans body off and they lay him on it. Rei straps him in with chakra powered clamps. Rei back-slaps the man across the face to wake him up and stares Mercilessly into his eyes, "You seem competent enough to realize you won't gain anything from being killed. So why don't you tell us you villages battle plans." The man spits in Rei's face, "F**k you." Rei smiles sinisterly, "Good, then I get to have some fun." Rei places his hand on the mans right chest and slowly extends a bone spike from his palm. The man archs his back in pain only driving it in more, "I will kill you in the slowest and most painful way if you don't tell us what we want." The man stares at Rei, You mon..." The spike broke through the muscle, "monster, I... I'll nev...never tal... talk." Rei frowns, "Your no fun, al routine lines, fine I'm done with you."Rei shoots the blade the rest of the distance puncturing through both side of the man's left lung. Rei pulls out the bone spike and stabs the man right below the heart. He takes a step from the table and looks at the male in his squad, "Extract what you need from him." The male looks at Rei confused, "Why do you alway torture them if you end up killing them before you get any information and I can get all of it from their dead body?" Rei smiles, "simple, this way is more fun." Rei walks past the male and heads to the village for debrief.
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Posted: Tue Jun 01, 2010 9:20 am
Kuro-uchi, denied.
We don't need a shortened explanation, we want to know everything that you know about the clan. Plus, not all Kaguya members are blood thirsty, that would be strange.
Now for the RP sample. The only things you did that showed you were a Kaguya member was the finger bullet at the beginning, and the killing hand spike. That's really not enough. You need to use some of the techniques from the clan, other than manipulating your bone structure. Last note, your 'badassery' does not impress me. xP
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Posted: Tue Jun 01, 2010 10:15 am
lol gotta agree with meta Kimimaru was anything but bloodthirsty, even as a child he was docile.
Also so the what you know about the clan isn't so much about its history its more about the Clan abilitys...
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Posted: Tue Jun 01, 2010 3:11 pm
Most Kaguya clan members were blood thirsty, Kimimaro is an exception, The reason I know that is because It was the clans love of fighting that led them to attack mist, so you would think most of them were blood thirsty, I figured I didn't need to write the entire history of the clan, and I'll redo the RP
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Posted: Tue Jun 01, 2010 3:43 pm
Name: kuro-uchi
RPC's name: Rei Kaguya
Bloodline Applying for: ...Kaguya
Why do you want it: I know what the hell I'm doing with it
What will you do with it: I'll use it to be a sadistic MOFO
What you know about it: The Kaguya clan have the Kekkei Genkai Corpse Bone Pathways, which allows the member to manipulate bone. They can change the bone density by will and they are hard than steel, the bloodline focuses on working with special taijutsus and techniques to be quick, accurate, and deadly. Any injuries caused by the growth of the bones heal almost instantly. Now for the history, The Kaguya clan foolishly attacked their home village, mist, out of shear blood lust, not ALL Kaguya members are bloodthirsty, Kimimaro was said to have been the only one to escape but for the sake of the RP a few others escaped as well
RP Sample:
Rei lay on the damp morning dew in a daze, he had been hit in the back of the neck hard and only survived because of his history. Rei hears a crunch of a trig and a slap. Then 5 shinobi walk from the shadows of the trees. Rei recognizes one as the man who had hit him. He also noticed one had a red hand mark on his face, "Must have been the one who snapped the twig." He thought to himself. He slowly rises and takes a step to keep his balance. The entire group take a step back in response. Rei shoots to bone spikes from his palms and stares blankly at the men, "I gave a terrible headache so if you would be so kind as to step aside. The one on the far left takes a step forward. He looks to be 15, a new addition it would seem. The boy points at Rei and declares, "I'm gonna chop you up and eat the pieces on a platter. Rei raises a brow to the strange statement and sighs. He sprints forward and the men dash to the sides. He keeps running, jumps, kicks of a tree and flies landing on the man who had been slapped. He stands and a crimson red glow reflects of his bone blades. Rei falls against a tree wishing he hadn't been so fancy about it. The youngest shinobi sprints at Rei as the others yell for him to stop. The shinobi gets 7 feet away when he swings his sword. Rei notices tears in his eyes. He waits for the blade to be a foot from his head before he drops to a crouch, and spins knocking the boy of his feet. The boy falls back and slams onto the ground hard. Two more run towards Rei yelling. Rei points both hands out and fire to bone bullets, one into each mans chest. Rei plops down and closes his eyes. He hears the mens breathing slow and abruptly stop. Rei opens his eyes to see the 15 year old punch him in the face. Rei doesn't flinch and the boy yells out in agony from breaking his knuckles. Rei notices the other man is gone and jumps up right as he comes flying from the trees. Rei is stabbed in the shoulder, right on the kink of his bone membrane. Rei shoots 5 bone spikes from his body impaling the man. He looks at the boy who had by then stood himself up and stared at Rei with fear in his eyes. Rei turns to him with the sword still stabbed through his shoulder. Rei kneels and places his hand on the ground still looking at the boy, "Aren't you wondering why i haven't killed you yet? Its because you seem like the funnest to play with. Five bone spikes shoot from the ground and trap the boy. The boy uselessly struggles to get free. A bone spike a hald inch thick stabs into the boy's gut. Then it rapidly extends until it exits on the other side. Rei stands and truns right as a ball of flames hit him in the face. Rei falls back in shock and sees a man preforming a set of hand seals. Rei stands but falls and curses his head injury. The man jumps into the air and fires down a great fireball jutsu. Rei kicks of the ground to just barely dodge the fireball. Rei sick of fighting stands and reaches back ripping out his spine. Right as the man lands Rei whips the spinwe whip around him stabbing him with a dozen of tiny spikes on the vertebra. Rei pulls on the whip sending the man flying towards him. He extends 6 bone spikes from his chest impaling the man. He withdraws the bones and stumbles to a tree. He works his way from the forest and back to his village hoping that their weren't to many injured at the hospital.
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Posted: Tue Jun 01, 2010 4:26 pm
I'm going to approve this, since I'm nit picking at little details.
A punch to the face would still hurt you, since your face isn't cast in bone, and your nose is still made of cartilage, regardless of the clan. You need to learn how to space you sentences properly as well, since a giant wall of confusing text isn't appetizing, and lead to problems while I was reading. There is no "kink of his bone membrane" by the way...
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Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 4:31 pm
Name: SinnerXion
RPC's name: Kaiji Kuragari
Bloodline Applying for:
Why do you want it: I can't find a Kekkei Genkai that fits my RPC's style other than this one.
What will you do with it: Whatever I want either killing ot protecting
What you know about it: I have extra mouths that spit out explosive clay that can be molded into whatever I need.
RP Sample:
Kaiji walked into the small town, his hands clinched together, with the sound of chewing coming from them, as he walked towards the town lord’s household. Kaiji’s mission was simple: the lord of this town was hiring shinobi and was planning to attack the nearby hidden village for supremacy. Kaiji’s orders were simple either peacefully stop the lords plans or stop him by force. As Kaiji reached the lords home he entered and was lead by one of the lords servants to his chambers. As he looked around he saw the many shinobi hired by the lord, all of which were from his rival village Kaiji dropped small spiders made of clay as he walked by. When he entered the Lords chambers he bowed to the lord “I am here on behalf of the Kage of my village.” Kaiji said politely to the lord, quickly glancing at the 4 bodyguards around the room. “I see so the Kage has sent someone to beg me not to attack, hmm.” The lord said with a laugh. “No, I am ere either to settle this peacefully or by force, it’s really your call on how it goes.” Kaiji said glaring at the lord. “How dare you!” the lord yelled. Kaiji sighed “I guess that means option 2 then….” Kaiji said making a handsign as several loud explosions could be heard in the household. “W-what was that….” the lord said as the 4 bodyguards drew their swords. “That was every shinobi in your household dying.” Kaiji said showing his hands to the bodyguards as 2 long snakes as they wrapped around them. Kaiji made the same handsign as the snakes exploded, killing the lord’s bodyguards. ”Now it your turn….” Kaiji said as the mouths in his hands chewed more clay as he placed them down on the ground as the clay moved around like vines and wrapped around the lord as he tried to escape. ”Please...spare me. I can make you rich.” the lord begged as he vines wrapped around him and bloomed clay roses. Kaiji just looked at the lord as he walked out. Kaiji exited the village as he made his signature handsign and a large explosion is heard, as the lord and his household is burned to cinders in the explosion.
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Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 7:57 pm
I like the blossoming of the clay roses, that was pretty cool.
And you are approved Good luck using this to pwn
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Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 8:02 pm
Thanks I have alot of different ideas both based on Deidara's ideas as well as my own. So I will see what I can do. mrgreen
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Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 11:41 pm
Name: havikthecold
RPC's name:Hiruma "Ice walker" Mokachiha
Bloodline Applying for: Hyouton Clan
Why do you want it: I dont see it used much, plus ya know its awsome!
What will you do with it: Be chilling lol
What you know about it: I know my RpC will need the water and wind element, also I understand it gives me acesse to ice jutsu as well as the ability to make jutsu seals with one hand.
RP Sample:
Hiruma was running threw the trees under the cover of night, he was on route to his village done with the mission on gatering info on a nearby village that was said to be harbouring ill will the the Leaf Village.
Then suddenly two kunai were slung from the shadows aim right for him, his grasp the hilt of his sword and with a small flash the kunai were knocked away and Hiruma landed on a tree branch re sheathing his sword. Closing his eyes Hiruma felt out for others chakra and counld't feel anyone else around. Then more kunai flew toward him, he leaped higher into the trees. Making handseals with onre and and grasping the hilt of his swords Hiruma used his Snow storm swallows, white ice started swirling around Hiruma, When his feet meet the thrunk above him three birds were formed from the ice and they darterd towad his attacker. To avoid the birds the ninja jumped from the leafs of a tree and Hiruma pushed off tree limb using his chakra to improve his speed he left feet marks on the limb. He moved fast slashing outward with his sword, the man tryied to flip over him but his leg was cut into, he then fell threw the trees onto the ground.
Hiruma landed next to the man took out his sword and sliced for his throat, but befor he could several ninja burst from the shade with dagger dipped in posion, as the lunged forward and sliced thre Hiruma they said "The Leaf village WILL fall!" Then suddedly Hiruma burst throwing water around the ninja who attacked him. Them the tres Hiruma made a hand seal only he ever used, then from the water shot slabs of ice surrounding the ninjas. Hiruma fell from the tree he was in and seemed to melt into one of the slabs, once inside images of Hiruma spread across all the slabs as if they were all mirros. Hiruma then spoke and said "The Leaf wont fall to the likes of you." The ninja tryed to run and get out of the shell of mirros but wern't fast enough to Hiruma they were moving in slow motion and then he moved, he moved fast, faster than anyof them could even see, and in one swoop they were all dead, splats of blood were on his sword as he steped out of one of the mirrors. Realesing the jutsu Hiruma made his way back to the Leaf
Also I dont plain to have a serouise battle to unlock my power... Haku's just kinda came to him in age so it dosn't really make sense.
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Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 7:49 am
havik, you're declined.
I know the jutsu you used in the beginning is custom, but we want to see you use the jutsu as it is, now how you're going to craft it in the future. Take what you get. Anyway, you only used one jutsu from the clan, and displayed the one-handed jutsu, but that's not enough! The reason why its easier to make a battle post, is because it shows your RPC under tension, and it brings forth the other jutsu. Such as Demon Ice Mirrors.
I'd also like to note that when a sword hits ice, it either stops dead, or goes through into the water without a problem. What you just described was a large BLUNT object striking the ice. Swords can't do that kind of things.
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