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 Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 5:40 pm
(Well Gengar if there's anything more you want me to edit or if you want me to add more let me know. Im going to be Afk for a bit. )
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 5:59 pm
Heirii- hanachan ((Well, I believe I've edited it a bit...I'm not sure if it'll work...I'm so nervous...)) dont be nervous, he can smell fear lol
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 6:03 pm
Remedy: I'm sorry, but I cant take jobs away from other crew. Jade began the judging, Jade will end the judging. @Mage: You kind of just left the story without a conclusion. It makes me wonder "What does he do next?" Try finishing the fight, and I will most likely approve. Maybe even use White chakra enhancement on a weapon based jutsu. @Heirii: You seem to have a good understanding of the Hyuuga clan and the Jyuuken.  Be sure to go to the Jutsu list and look at the Jyuuken taijutsu style made by our own Guild Captain.
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 6:18 pm
MageTech Rpc Name: Ray Hatake Village: Mist Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Hatake bloodline What you know about the clan/bl: The Hatake clan emits white chakra as a reserve which is mostly used for theatrics but commonly is used for weapons to extend there cutting length and efficiency. In some owners of this bloodline are blessed with having a huge chakra reserve, though every member of this bloodline is blessed with white or silverish hard and increased speed. Rp Sample: Ray also known as White Lightning for his extreme speed and lightning jutsus was on a simple scouting mission, one that was ordered by the kage himself. The mission was simple, obtain information about a enemy caravan without being seen. This seemed easy enough when he took on the mission but when he arrived at a cliff that hung over a corner of the caravan he quickly noticed that every shinobi in the caravan was twice as big as him. He quickly shook off that detail and began analyzing the caravan searching for weakness's, how much weaponry and shinobi and other important things. After a few minutes Ray slowly began to inch backwards to get off of the cliff but stopped when he bumped into something he knew wasn't there when he got there. "Look what we have here! A little spy trying to figure us out!" Ray instantly got up and turned around to see 4 large guys with huge blunt weapons standing there. "Crud..." As soon as he spoke the large shinobi in the front swung a large maul at Ray. Ray quickly ducked around of the way and moved to the side of the group before jumping back a few feet to get some room. "you sure like big weapons.. Is that to make up for something else?" Ray said with a grin and readied his next move. All four of the other shinobi instantly became enraged by this comment and charge at Ray, when clsoe enough the all swung their weapons down at him. Ray had thought quickly about what would happen after the comment and he was right. He had quickly used his Shiro Chakra Kouyou jutsu to apply white chakra to his sword when he readied himself. Now that the 4 shinobi had begun their attack he took his speed as a advantage and dashed forward as they were swinging down at him, when he got close enough he did a horizontal slice at the first one's stomach. The blade went deep into the mans stomach causeing him to drop his maul from the sudden burst of agonizing pain. Ray quickly avoided the falling maul by runing through a blind spot under each of the shinobi's arms. "One down.." He muttered to himself as he slid to a stop a few feet on the now right side of the 3 remaining shinobi. The forth one had dubbled over and then collaped from the sudden lose of blood. Useing his Water Manipulation technique and by proforming Suiton: Mizu Shuriken no Jutsu he was able to create 3 shuriken made of water. He as turned around her quickly used his Shiro Chakra Kouyou jutsu to apply white chakra to shuriken causeing them to glow white, once he had turned around he used the momentum he buildt up from turning to lauch the shuriken at the three remaining shinobi. Two of th shuriken were blocked by the shinobi's massive weapons but the last one happened hit hit the middle shinobi right between the eyes. The middle shinobi fell to his knees suddenly, and right when he did Jay shot off towards him and jumped ovr him slightly. When he did he placed her right foot on the upper back near the shoulder and pushed off. At the same time the remaining shinobi swung their large axes down at ray as he passed them but missed and instead hit their friend ending his life immediatly. Once Jay hit the ground her rolled slightly then stood up and turned around to look at the mess. "Two down.." He then spun his sword around in his hand for a second before launching it with all of his strength at the shinobi on the right. The sword still being infused with white chakra shot through the shinobi's back untill it was stuck at the hilt. The shinobi's eyes beganto roll back into his head while his friend stood there terrified. "H-how... could.. a K-kid do..." The shinobi's sentance was cut short with out warning. Jay had rushed to his sword and turned it while inside the shinobi before slicing towards the shinobi on the left. The sword tore through the helpless man and cut right into his friends face and through the guys skull and got stuck half way through the brain. "Thats three..." He pulled back the sword quickly then did a 180 aiming the sword for the cuts neck. The sword cut cleaning through causing blood to stray out covering jay and his surroundings in blood. "and thats four.." want me to continue?
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 6:33 pm
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 6:35 pm
Thank you, i do like the ending to that little story, though in the real rp ill make it more intense and gory. mrgreen
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 8:19 pm
Rpc Name: Ryota Roronoa // Rye
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Roronoa Clan
What you know about the clan/bloodline: Basically they utilize an elevated or peak form of taijutsu through their fists and katanas - up to three katanas used at the same time; if three are being used, one is held horizontally mouth and the other two are held one in each of the user's hands. This clan has very quick reaction time, inhuman strength, etc. Their reflexes rival Sharingan users since the user's movements are pretty damn hard to follow.
Rp Sample: The village was clearly under seige. Enemies flooded Konoha's streets and raided every house along the way to the Hokage's office. Meanwhile, a young man who went by the name of Ryota Roronoa traversed the hallways of Konoha's academy; Rye was heading back to his classroom at a nice, calm pace. He wasn't late or anything so he took his time. However, something didn't feel quite right. The cooridors were much too quiet, too empty, too... eerie. Rye's eyes narrowed and both his hands clasped around the katanas that were sheathed neatly at the left and right sides of his hip. "Oh shi-" he muttered a swear to himself when his hands grasped at thin air. Rye recalled leaving his precious katanas back at the orphanage because they rarely allowed him to carry his weaponary around, especially not at school. Too much in shock that his weapons were missing, Ryota didn't realize he was unconsiously heading straight back towards his classroom. "Take one more step and she dies!" a rough voice called out apparently to Rye. Rye raised his head only to find a kunai headed straight for his throat. If it weren't for his quick reflexes, the kunai would've ended his life right then; Rye however tilted his head, his neck followed, at an angle which allowed the projectile to miss the whole of his throat, but its blade still skimmed the lightly tanned skin of Rye's neck - this created something like a papercut. Now that he saved his own skin, what about the girl his enemy threatened to kill? Surely, she'd die soon as that kunai that passed by Rye thudded against the wall behind him. Did Rye simply dodge the enemy's surprise attack or was there something more behind it? In an amazingly quick motion, Rye's hand shot up even before the thrown kunai neared his neck and when he tilted his head to the left, his right hand shot up and caught the kunai by its tail just as it grazed his skin. "Tornado!" he exclaimed. Rye kept the kunai in motion as he spun around with his hands held into fists - the right hand loosely held the enemy's thrown kunai - then finally released it with many more times its original speed when it was headed towards Rye himself. The counterattack was aimed towards the cloaked enemy's hidden face and struck the man directly in the eye. Taking the damsel in distress by the hand, Ryota headed for a safer location.
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 9:11 pm
Kaito: I would have kind of liked to see an example of the unique use of 3-swords, but judging from the application, you've proved that you understand the benefits and concept behind the clan's abilities. Sooo....
Despite what this picture may seem to represent...
COBRA APPROVES!!!
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 9:21 pm
@Cobra: Oh sweet, I hope Rye lives up to the standards represented in your pic ;3 // tyvm for accepting! ha // oh, yeah I was hoping to work my way up the clan stages and learn the proper use of three blades instead of randomly posting some stuff about it and making myself look like a fool ^^;;
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 9:14 am
Rem: I think you've waited long enough fro an approval from Jade, so I'm taking it over for her. She said your RP Sample was good, and I agree. Seeing as you added in specifics about the bloodline's weaknesses, which is what you were asked to do, I'd say you're all set. Sooo....
Despite what this picture may seem to represent...
COBRA APPROVES!!!
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 1:48 pm
Oh, they said you could approve to Cobra?
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 6:49 pm
Rpc Name:Kojika Hyuuga
Village:leaf village
Rank:genin
Bloodline or Clan applied for:hyuuga
What you know about the clan/bl: I know that they use the bakugan and specialize in the art of chakra points. i also know that they have a battle inside their clan over the branch and main family. The branch family members get a mark on their foreheads called a curse seal. it forces the branch family into submission to the maain branch family. their bloodline limit is the byakugan. this kekki genkei gives the hyuugas the ability to see their enemy's chakra points.
Rp Sample: Kojika ran as fast as her legs would carry her. she had bloody wounds on her legs and had a deep stab in her gut. as she ra, her vision was getting blurry. She didn' know if she could make it back to the gates. three sound ninja poofed in front of her and landed a few good punches, but she countered using her hevenly spin and slammed her palms into each one of them, killing them. she cotinued running and stumbled. she activated her byakugan and searched for more of the enemy. No o,as far as she ould see. but she forgot her blindspot, and, painfully, that's where the kunai hit. she scremed in pain and fell forwrd, her vision and muscles fading. she turned around as fast as her body would allow, and threw her own kunai, nailing the enemy in the head. she lad down on her back and panted, her energy fding quickly. "please...this..can't be...the en..." sh whispered
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 6:51 pm
Jade: Yes, you are both the bloodline acceptors. Try not to get too competitive 3nodding
Calypso: Your description of what you know doesnt really go into too much detail, and your RP sample is 4 lines long and uses NO Hyuuga techniques. Revise it.
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 6:58 pm
Oh PUH-LEEZ! I love Cobra! *Huggles Cobra*
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 7:08 pm
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