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PostPosted: Fri Dec 11, 2015 10:25 am
Profile link for Kaileer because I don't feel like piecing it together.

I'm adding a PA, awarded back from the Monster contest. Finally came up with something I liked.

Dual Wielder :: Kaileer can apply almost any technique to two weapons without additional cost, but in exchange, since the chakra and/or stamina is divided between the two weapons, the attack is one rank weaker . It doesn't take any extra activations, and allows him to attack twice or defend two attacks up to that rank. This can be done once per post.

If this isn't allowed as a PA, I'll go back to the drawing board.


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PostPosted: Fri Dec 11, 2015 10:37 am
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Unfortunately extra AC is never allowed. That's the only one that needs to change.  

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 11, 2015 10:38 am
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 11, 2015 12:22 pm
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I changed that one already.  

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 11, 2015 7:08 pm
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Fine by me. Approved.  
PostPosted: Fri Dec 11, 2015 11:29 pm
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Full Name: Candice Noel O'Kelly
Nickname: Candi, The Crimson Bombshell

Age: Eighteen
Birthdate: 03/17
Gender: Female

Height: 5'4" (162.5 cm)
Weight: 125 lbs (56.6 kg)

Nindo: "You only live once, so make every moment count."
Personality: Someone call the authorities, there's a redheaded rebel on the loose! Candice is, in short, a spunky, live-in-the-moment type of gal with a fiery presence and a bada** attitude to match. Never has she been one to purposely hog the spotlight, but she sure doesn't act like it at times. She's a social butterfly, making friends pretty easily as her upbeat and cheerful personality tends to attract others to her. Others are drawn to her individuality and attitude, that seems to really set her apart from those surrounding her. She has an overwhelming sense of confidence in herself, appearing egotistical at times, while still managing to look out for others and be a team player if need be. A mix of a little sweet and sour, Candice can be your closest friend, or your worst enemy, and once you're under one of those two categories, it's hard to crossover to the other. Her friends almost become like apart of her immediate family, and those people can see the caring, more gentle side of her personality. While enemies... well, it's best you keep your distance. When she's angered, she can become the most lethal individual you could ever encounter, and is widely known for her wrath being comparable to that of a rampant Bijuu.

Candice is very curious of enigmatic individuals and new discoveries in general. Tending to dig deep into such subjects until she can find absolutely everything there is to know about it - and that includes 'bugging' the living hell out of other people. Introverts, beware! She has taken a interest in all things about chakra, and looks forward to learning all that she can about it. While not so surprising, Candice can be a massive flirt, and is not above doing so just to get reactions out of others for own amusement. It's the same with pulling harmless pranks and jokes. At heart, she's a bit of a trickster. Ironically, she can be found reading adult romance novels, and tends to get flustered when the tables are turned, and she is the one being flirted with. She's not really 'boy crazy' so to speak, but on the inside, is looking for something kind of romantic, much like the stories she reads.

Despite all of that, there is one thing everyone can count on, and that's her determination. It goes both ways, so its both a blessing and a curse. She's fiercely devoted to any of her pursuits as a craftswoman or shinobi, and possesses an amazing work ethic. There's no giving up with this one, and that's especially true when it comes to her own beliefs. Punishment of any kind won't cause her determination to waver, and she'll stick to whatever she believes in until the very end. Her determination is a form of diligence and courage, just as it is stubbornness. She likes being able to do her own thing, and doesn't take being ordered around too kindly. She's not afraid to outright ignore them in favor of her own ideas or thoughts, and this is especially so when she's in a bad mood. Though naturally, she gets a thrill out being rebelious. Candice is extremely intelligent; mischievously so, possessing keen perception and a sharp wit to match. Occasionally, she'll drop a quip or two depending on the situation, most times, its almost automatic.
Theme Song: Confident - Demi Lovato

Village: Kumogakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D
First Class: Ninjutsu
Second Class: Worker

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Bloodline: N/A
Power: +2 PA, +25 chakra/stamina a rank.

Chakra Pool: 335
Stamina Pool: 125
Chakra Element: Fuuton / Doton
Chakra Color: Cyan
Chakra Materialization: Candice's chakra materializes as numerous Kanji symbols floating behind her, constantly changing form as if trying to create a message.

Strengths:
• Ninjutsu
• Smithing
Weaknesses:
• Fighting in general, especially physical combat.
• Is extremely stubborn, and can be a bit defiant.
Fears:
• Being despised by people close to her.
• Being abducted, probed, and experimented on.

Class Disciplines :
Elemental Dual Wielder
    Your maximum chakra pool is increased by ten points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split among both of your chosen elements.

Legendary Smith
    The user is able to gain a fifth title rank from every applicable smithing tree. 'Training' for Legendary takes ten posts of crafting work, provides an additional one post off of crafting times, and gives a Grandmaster NPC (of the same area) for usage. In addition, any item solo crafted (without an npc helper) is non-reproducible by non-Legendary titled smiths.

Reductions:
• Learns Ninjutsu one post faster.
• Learns Ninjutsu two posts faster (personal attribute).
• Learns Crafting two posts faster (personal attribute).

Personal Attributes:
Shakin' Dat Money Maker: Ryo rewards from missions and jobs are increased by 1.5x
Workin' It: Learns all crafting jobs two posts faster, while learning Genjutsu one post slower.
Nerdalous: Learns Ninjutsu two posts faster, while learning Taijutsu one post slower.
Universal Goddess: Receives ten additional jutsu slots that can be distributed between Maruton or Fuuinjutsu.

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 26 [ 00/06 Fuuton - 00/06 Doton - 00/06 Fuuinjutsu/Maruton - 00/02 Other - 00/10 PA ]
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: N/A
Weapon Range: -
Weapon Weight: -
Weapon Location: -

Summoning Type: N/A
Summon Sage: -
Pacts: -

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• 15 Kunai
• [ Cross-Shoulder Bag ] Three romance/adult novels, five pieces of candy, one comb, and one expired Takumi Shops Coupon.

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Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Fuuton


Doton


Fuuinjutsu


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Candice was born into a family of Artisans who owned their own shop within the Takumi Shopping District. She was raised here, learning the ways of craftsmanship, so in the future she could support them by contributing to their shop. She took up tailoring at a young age, helping her older sister make various types of clothing and light armors that she sold to buying customers - most of which were shinobi. Candice grew more curious of their lifestyle as she continued to grow, for the things they could do with the use of this 'chakra' intrigued her. Often she'd spend her free time after work in the libraries, learning about this spiritual energy shinobi possessed, later discovering that everyone had chakra within their system, but only few could use it to perform special skills such as Ninjutsu and Genjutsu. Accomplishing such feats required training, and it was something Candice was looking forward to. Traveling to the village hidden in the clouds, she enrolled in the Academy, honing her innate chakra abilities enough to be proficient in Ninjutsu, but not much else. With her new found skills as a shinobi and innate talents as a artisan, Candice graduated from the academy, with the desire to become a Shinobi and live the best of both worlds. Time to show the world what Candice Noel O'Kelly is made of!
 

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 12, 2015 8:39 am
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Two quick things. The division of elements for Elemental Dual Wielder no longer applies to Maruton and Fuuinjutsu separately. They are lumped into one category, so you would have 6 of element one, 6 of element two, and 6 of Maruton/Fuuinjutsu. The only way to get another element is to learn Kuchiyose (C-rank Kaifu required), which gives you slots for specifically the summoning techniques (not Fuuinjutsu)

Also, what specifically does the 'slightly' modifier apply to? You would have to choose one.

After your profile is approved, Kumogakure will be closed to any new members.
 
PostPosted: Sat Dec 12, 2015 9:18 am
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Sorry for the wait. You're good to go.

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Given that I would probably say no to your PA, I can't in good graces approve it. I'll have Ayame look at it.

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It's on the previous page.
 

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 13, 2015 10:55 pm
((Everything Modified Accordingly as of the Skype Chat))
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Full Name:Kumotake Saisho (Peak Spider, Deathbug/Teacher)
Nickname: Peak Spider

Age: 16
Birthdate: March 21'st
Gender: Male

Height: 6'7
Weight: 141 lbs

Nindo: "Even the weak insects can have a poisonous bite."
Combat Nindo: "Those that flaunt their power over others should eat s**t and die."

Personality: Kumotake much like the spider breed of insect contained within him is incredibly reclusive. As such he prefers to remain in the dark. Typically he is a night owl but begrudgingly proceeds through day to day life cursing the sun. His capability to converse is inept at best often filled with lisps, lack of eye contact, and stuttering. When none of the other three it's usually long pauses between his speech. When he becomes surprised this is accentuated incredibly as if a dying fish were trying to gasp for breath trying to find an accurate response. Such surprise encounters usually involve him making empty threats but his threats lack the confidence to be taken seriously. Kumotake finds comfort in the terrifying and grotesque while he finds effervescent personalities and extreme optimism frightening. As a result the man is usually incredibly pessimistic but despite any stacked odds realizes there is strength in the saying 'small but mighty'. Some of his quirks involve staring at a woman's exposed legs or feet and deriving pleasure from being verbally put down or physically assaulted it's to be determined whether or not this is a hormonal or caused by psychological trauma. Kumotake is a terror in himself due to his reclusive nature producing an ominous aura of mystery.

Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Tamer
Second Class: Genjutsu


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Full Name: Sukoso Shi (To Welcome Death)
Nickname: Shi Shi, Su, Kokonut

Age: 16
Birthdate:May 1st
Gender: Male

Height: Parasitic Beetle Size>3 ft > 18 ft
Weight: Parasitic Beetle Weight>6 lbs > 330 lbs

Chakra Pool:410
Stamina Pool: 190
Chakra Element: Lightening, Wind
Chakra Color: Dark Red
Chakra Materialization: A shadow of himself but showing vengeance within it's fangs and a reddening of the multiple eyes.

Strengths:
• When enlarged not only is he terrifying but is also significantly stronger. While Kumotake is more of the brainy type his partner in crime compensates by being the brawn.
• Being a spider carries the benefits of being able to climb surfaces without requirement of chakra and producing webbing naturally for tactical purposes. His strong legs allow for impressively large and distant jumps.
Weaknesses:
• When enlarged he is not particularly difficult to hit. While faster and stronger he is a much larger target and his reflexes leave a lot to be desired.
• When small his usefulness is severely diminished lowering every offensive ninjustu he casts by one rank. When minuscule can't do anything.
Fears:
• Excessive amounts of Fire
• Being cannibalized by a future bride

Limitations:

• Ninjutsu : : 05 / 11
• Taijutsu : : 00 / 00

Raiton
• Seidenki Ito no Jutsu [ Static Strings Technique ]
Rank: E
• Teikou no Kuntou [ Electrical Resistance Training ]
Rank: E
Fuuton
• Tobidougu Soujuu no Jutsu [ Projectile Control Technique ]
Rank: E
• Toridashi Kaze no Jutsu [ Retrieving Wind Technique ]
Rank: E
• Shinkūken [ Vacuum Sword ]
Rank: E

Animal Traits
• Venomous Union: Kumotake and Sukoso share the inherent ability with each other to produce venom from fangs. Their bond has granted Kumotake with a set of poison glands to accompany them. His poison is weak in comparison to Sukoso's and isn't lethal...truth be told he prefer not to use it unless absolutely necessary.

Kumotake:
1 Posts Discomfort,
3 Posts Irritation,
5 Posts Shortness of Breath,
7 Posts Increased Sensitivity ,
9 Posts Ecstasy.

Sukoso:
1 Posts: Irritation,
3 Posts Arrhythmia,
5 Posts Skyrocketing Blood Pressure Potential Fainting,
7 Posts Heart Attack,
9 Posts Death

• One Among Many: Sukoso and Kumotake had shared a bond so close that Sukoso sought a way to stand out from the other spiders and demonstrate it's strength to compensate for Kumotake's weak demeanor in the face of danger and abuse. The result was Sukoso freely able to manipulate it's size among three categories. Minuscule enough to retreat into Kumotake's body which was it's original form, slightly larger as a normal spider, and finally large enough to be ridden. It takes a full post to change in size, There's a cooldown of at least 1 full post, must be in physical contact.



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Bloodline: Aburame

Chakra Pool:410
Stamina Pool: 190
Chakra Affinity: Earth , Water
Chakra Materialization: Eight Spider Legs Erupt from the mans back for the most part they appear real and grotesque, they then dig themselves into the ground before the fully formed spider body made of chakra erupts from his back as if he was harboring a monster inside of him

Strengths:
• Spiders Blessing: Kumotake is skilled in concealing his breath and movements and sticking closely to areas where little light propagates.
• Inherited Ambush: Kumotake particularly favors using trees and high places to his advantage as a result stealth is one of his strong suits.
• Silk and Wire: Kumotake is particularly skilled with using wire and implements it often into combat. This is similarly true for chains, string, or other lashing type/ binding type weaponry.
• Arachnophobia: Kumotake harbors a special breed of parasitic beetle that has been uniquely cross breed with spiders. They still function as the normal parasitic beetles but aesthetically resemble spiders on close inspection. Spiders with wings to be exact. As a result individuals with the common fear of spiders are typically frightened.
Weaknesses:
• Aversion To Light: Both him and his pet are sensitive to light a large instance of it can induce a few turns of blindness where most would be stunned briefly.
• Bitter Obligation: The man has to defend the weak. Male or female if for some reason an individual shows a moment of weakness he'll intervene. Albeit begrudgingly afterwards informing them they need to get stronger.
• Apprehension: Kumotake often hates the need for physical confrontation even though he will commit to a battle until it's done he can never deal a finishing blow himself and when it becomes necessary to kill someone he'll often bite back the tears and have Sukoso do it.
Fears:
• Betrayal: In both aspects Kumotake fears injuring another individual he has developed close relations with or the vise of versa.
• Sunshine Happy Sugar s**t: There is no such thing as a normal situation that involves excessively cute things singing happy songs spouting empty optimistic statements about rainbows and lovely weather. Not only do such instances sicken him but it causes a mental fetal position.

Class Disciplines :
• Eternal Partners: The user is able to nurture, grow, and bond with a single animal, almost becoming an animal themselves with traits, characteristics, and natural weaponry. This single animal will be exactly the same at the user's level in chakra and stamina pool, and able to manipulate any two elements, and perform 3 activations a post (max of 2 offensive) For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character.

•Inception: The user's genjutsu prowess has increased the sheer power of the genjutsu, making them act a rank higher then they are (up to S rank). This increases the Kai cost for an opponent.

•Mashed Ninja-tatoes: +1 Tai, +50 Chakra and Stamina
Reductions:
• -1 Gen
• -1 Tai
• Gobblemonster Parade: 10 free training/missions posts: All 10 Used: After Reduction B:4 C:3 C:3 =10
Personal Attributes:
• Masochistic Affinity: Kumotake has a naturally high pain tolerance because of the masochistic nature he developed over years of abuse. When not in combat(Treated as Recovering) the insects living inside of Kumotake have grown accustomed to the sheer amount of physical abuse the teen has taken as such they've developed necessary counter measures to keep their host alive, stitching minor an major wounds from the inside out and draining the blood from bruises. Occurs outside of combat only. Healing duration is determinant on the wound. E.1 D.3 C.5. Anything above is too complex for the insects to handle at genin. The rate increases with Rank to B.7 A.9 at Chunnin. S.12 At Jounin. At Konin the recovery becomes almost instant reducing duration requirements by 2.

•Threaded Tenketsu: Kumotake's Tenkestu has been rearranged to look more coordinated and web shaped which can be seen via Byakugan. As a result Chakra flows to key points faster lowering the Ninjutsu learning requirement by 2 however this weakens the flow of chakra to the muscles increasing the duration to learn Taijutsu by 1.



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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 04 / 20
• Genjutsu : : 04 / 12
• Taijutsu Styles: : 02 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00/ 00

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Weapon Name:

Weapon Type: Meteor Hammer
Weapon Location: Rolled Up Within Clothes
Weapon Height: 10 Meters In Length
Weapon Weight: 5 lbs weight

Description: Despite it's name the Meteor Hammer is not a hammer. It is a weight attached to a long rope that uses momentum as a driving force with the potential to crush skulls when used properly. Kumotake uses this weapon ideally for supplementary purposed and is used more so as a grappling hook than a weapon, although he has shown to be very skilled in utilizing it's potential.

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• Black Sclera Contacts: Keeps eyes hidden, worn to deter conversation.
• Pack of 16 Medical Masks
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Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]


Doton
• Tsuchi Gunjikoudou no Jutsu [ Earth Military Movement Technique ]
Rank: E
• Daisan no Me [ The Third Eye ]
Rank: E

Suiton
• Mizu Kagami no Jutsu [ Water Mirror Technique ]
Rank: E
• Mizu no Yaiba [ Water Sword ]
Rank: E

Genjutsu
• Hada no Kamereon [ Chameleon Skin ]
Rank: E — Sight
• Henka no Kumoyuki [ Change of Weather ] X
Rank: D — Sight
• Kugurinukeru Meikyou [ Through the Looking Glass ] X
Rank: D — Sight
• Magen: Kokuni Arazu no Jutsu [ Demonic Illusion: False Surrounding Technique ] X
Rank: D — Sight
• Dokuji no Onsei [ Voice of the Peculiar ] X
Rank: D — Sound
• Sei Kyuuten no Jutsu [ Gender Sudden Change Technique ] X
Rank: D - Visual
• Hitoshirenu Shikaku no Jutsu [ Hidden Assassin Technique ] ( Training Posts Used 3 )
Rank: C — Sound
• Inago no Akushumi [ Taste of Locusts ] X
Rank: C — Taste
• Magen: Nijū Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu [ Demonic Illusion: Double False Surroundings Technique ] X
Rank: C — Sight
• Nikuyouyuu no Jutsu [ Melting Flesh Technique ] ( Training Posts Used 3 )
Rank: C — Sight
• Doku Kumo no Jutsu [ Poison Cloud Technique ] X
Rank: B — Sight
• Nemuri [ Sleep ] ( Training Posts Used 4 )
Rank: B — Touch

Bloodline
• Kikaichū no Jutsu [ Destruction Bug Host Technique ]
Rank: B {Inherent}
• Human Cocoon Technique
Rank: E [ 50 Insects ]
•Mushi Sekkou no Jutsu [ Insect Spying Technique ]
Rank: E [ 1 Insect ]







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• Locked Formless: Soft Physical: Rank B

~Heavens Riches~
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▼Half Step
Rank: X :: Simple
Description: A fast step to one side, typically used as an evasive maneuver, that grants a boost in speed to any one attack that immediately follows it. Higher stamina consumption results in a greater boost to the next technique’s speed and increases the speed of the step itself.

▼Redirection
Rank: X :: Simple
Description: Allows the user to redirect physical attacks by paying a stamina cost one rank less than the rank of the incoming technique. This does not end the attack or enhance the user’s speed, but can be used to redirect Chakra-based attacks as well if the user has a way to physically touch them. Is treated as one rank higher in strength if the user has mastered the Soft Physical Formless Style up to the rank used.

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Kumotake was born into the Aburame clan from a relationship that lacked communication. His father was a member of the clan while his mother was from another clan that originated outside the main villages. Having been attracted to the mans aura of mystery the two conceived a child. When the child was to be offered to become a hive his wife was firmly horrified at the thought. Kumotake's father had never really communicated about how his clan functioned and seeing as hers was half way across the continent he would see nothing of his child being indoctrinated into hers. The arguing continued until the time came where Kumotake's father did the ritual in secret thus sparring his wife bearing witness to the process of which she was firmly against. Kumotake was given the Aburame's secret Jutsu and was told to keep it a secret from his mother to prevent misunderstandings and further fits of opposition.

Needless to say she eventually found out and was aptly frightened by just what kind of insects where inside of Kumotake. She firmly insisted the insects be removed from her child but Kumotake's father said that it was already too late and impossible seeing as the two had already formed a symbiosis of reliance on each other. This caused excessive tension to build within the household and it was finally released in a form of daily domestic abuse. Kumotake's father was then beaten on a regular basis by his wife. His pride however, would not let him admit this to the clan. The infighting had eventually become so severe that it was no longer even about Kumotake anymore and it had become just anger and mistrust among the husband and wife. Kumotake as a result was then shunned by his mother and forbidden to see his father and labeled a mistake. Kumotake during the fights would cower in the darkest corners holding his hands against his ears in attempts to drown out his father shouts and grunts of pain.

Out of cowardice Kumotake's father fled the clan abandoning his son in the process this would make Kumotake's next few years a living hell. Kumotake became his mothers new punching bag as she beat him in alcoholic stupors and then providing apologetic affection only to continue the vicious circle. Kumotake eventually had grown use to the daily beatings and the students at the academy would eventually stop pointing it out. When confronted with his sensei about his constant injuries he simply explained them to be 'mishaps' of a clumsy child. His pride and what little love he still had for his mother kept him from telling the truth.

So the beatings continued again and again and Kumotake would grow more and more used to them but still something was missing. He didn't have many friends and the one friend he did have as most children do moved toward a more popular group of individuals. When that happened Kumotake's beating was an empty one. He wouldn't flinch nor flail as the remnants of a glass bottle from a bored 'mother' lodged a piece of glass in his cheek that laid upon the floor. That's when one of the spiders came out of sleeve. It removed the glass from his cheek and the two began to speak with each other. It wasn't a verbal connection between the two but a spiritual one. Eventually it grew into an inseparable bond. The two began to talk as the spider comforted Kumotake. The spider eventually was able to communicate on another level with Kumotake and was given a name Sukoso Shi.

Sukoso Shi after forming a bond with his host began to become significantly more protective of him. Coming out of Kumotake's body during his beatings and making them last just a little less than normal with a little bite here and there. Sukoso had eventually come to a realization of how powerless it was and unlike it's host and friend did something about it. Feeding on his hosts chakra in specific ways and bartering with his fellow insects Sukoso had become larger and had gained the ability to alter this size of his. Kumotake was like a boy with a puppy at his size Sukoso could finally play with Kumotake and keep his mother at bay.

Then the dreaded night came. Kumotake's mother entered his room seeing him playing with his god damned freak of nature again, but this time something was different. His mothers belly was a lot larger than he remembered. Yes, his mother had gotten pregnant again and the condition of her mental state while she was sober was still incredibly volatile. Shouting at Kumotake that she would not have her newborn daughter be in the presence of such 'things' she made an attempt on her sons life. It ended with Kumotake's mother in a rage and tears bound in spider silk with a large arachnid having conveyed a message through his eyes reflecting the woman's self destruction. She would apologize, weeping, and afterwards tell Kumotake to leave. Not angrily but piteously saying she loved him dearly but it was not safe to continue living with her, not in the mental state she was in. She could not make up all the years of torment she afflicted on her son so the best she could do was to give him a new start. After getting the necessary permissions Kumotake left for Kirigakure, leaving his home of Konoha behind.
 
PostPosted: Sun Dec 13, 2015 10:57 pm
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 17, 2015 1:14 pm
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Advanced Studies: Candice's devotion to learning about Ninjutsu allows her to learn one S+ rank technique (once having obtained required rank to learn said technique) without it overwriting any other S or S+ ranked techniques in her arsenal.

After discussing it with two other members of the Mod team and knowing that the overwrite rules for several S-S+ Ranked jutsu exists as a balance measure, against perceivable abuses and prior abuse, we cannot find in good favour to allow that Personal Attribute.

Otherwise the profile is looking good so far.  
PostPosted: Sat Dec 19, 2015 1:21 pm
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 22, 2015 2:22 am
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Full Name:SarKhan "Kay" Kolaghan
Nickname: Kay

Age: 15
Birthdate:5/11
Gender: Male

Height: 6'2
Weight: 225

Nindo: "No matter how far it is to the top, I'll just keep climbing!"
Personality: He's quite driven in his want to grow in strength, but it doesn't distract him from being nice, for the most part. He is perhaps, simplest explainde by making a not-so-obscure reference in the form of something he once said. "Who, me? I'm just a guy who's a ninja for fun!"

Village: Kiri
Title: Genin
Rank: D
First Class:Bloodline
Second Class: Kugutsu

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Bloodline: Senju

Chakra Pool: 670
Stamina Pool: 145
Chakra Element: Earth&Water
Chakra Color: Green
Chakra Materialization: It looks strong but wild like life itself.

Strengths:
• Tactical Combat
• Mid-Long Range
Weaknesses:
• Close Range combat
• Fire
Fears:
• Afraid of being weak
• Dying Alone

Class Disciplines :
•Blood Knight: Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank. Can cast bloodline techniques through one-handed seals.
• Architect: The user has a fantastic creative mind, able to make more custom puppets (+2) as well as construct them and prepare them easier. For each rank the user increases, they gain a [-1] bonus to preparation time. . Additionally, the user is so good at creating and planning, that human puppets only cost 1 custom puppet slot.

Reductions:
• Bloodline learned in -1
• Kugutsu learned in -1
Personal Attributes:
• The Show Begins: Puppet Strings are invisible to the naked eye.
• Earns 1.5 ryo per mission.

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Ryo: 両{0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
•Kugutsu : : 00 / 07
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01

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Weapon Type:Tanto
Weapon Range: 18inches
Weapon Weight: Like five pounds lol
Weapon Location:
• Lower Back

Summoning Type: None yet
Summon Sage: no
Pacts:

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•10 Senbon
• 5 Shuriken

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Doton


Suiton


Kugutsu


Senjutsu



▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

• {If none, remove section}

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There were once places in the world, hundreds of years ago, where the scariest things in the world were not the people. Those places, scattered through what are now known as the land of fire, waves, and cloud among others were home to fearsome, flying beasts. They ruled the skies, calling flames down from their bellies like demons and terrorizing the men and women of old times. Decades passed like this, with the savagery going unchecked until somewhere along the lines people began banding together, brave men taking the name Khans who would step up to fight against those who had oppressed them for so long. It took a long time but eventually the dragons were killed off entirely and the world forgot of them.

All but a few in the land of fire, who in secret worshipped the beasts as gods. Enter Sarkhan Kay. A senju was born to a women in the lands of fire, bearing the power to give life to desolate lands, to create whole forests with his chakra alone. The woman named him for the men who had saved them from god's wrath, preceeding the word Kahn with Sar, the Great Khan. She had hoped he would take after their great strength, and that he would be a wonderful warrior. She decided that he would be better off living without her and the other worshipers of old times, and so one night she took him and left him in an orphanage. She claimed to have found him in the country and didn't know what to do with him, and so they took him in with open arms. Give a few years, some ups and downs and in the present day all Sarkhan Kay cares about is making a name for himself and getting stronger day by day.

 
PostPosted: Tue Dec 22, 2015 6:14 pm
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Alrighty! A few things here.

1. Unfortunately, Kumo is closed at this time. It may open up again in a couple of months, but until then, no new profiles will be accepted.

2. What do you mean by x1.5 ryo per level? Did you mean per mission? Change that wording, and that'll be fine.

3. I can approve your profile once you add your history. I believe your bloodline app was approved earlier. ^^

4. Windmill shuriken are not permitted as starting projectiles.
 

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 22, 2015 11:01 pm
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Alrighty! A few things here.

1. Unfortunately, Kumo is closed at this time. It may open up again in a couple of months, but until then, no new profiles will be accepted.

2. What do you mean by x1.5 ryo per level? Did you mean per mission? Change that wording, and that'll be fine.

3. I can approve your profile once you add your history. I believe your bloodline app was approved earlier. ^^

4. Windmill shuriken are not permitted as starting projectiles.


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