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Thard_Verad
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PostPosted: Wed May 06, 2009 3:08 pm


X--Matthias--X
Thard_Verad
X--Matthias--X
Mission: A planner for a scanner

(go here, get this)
(you can catch one of these)
(stuff you can get if you pass)

First off, welcome to Team Aqua! I'm sorry it took so long for someone to grade your mission.

In the future, please include the entire mission brief at the top of your report, not just the title. Since this is your first mission I won't hold it against you.

As far as your command of the English Language goes, well done! Your spelling and grammar are excellent, which makes a good impression on whoever grades your mission. You also seem fond of dialogue, which is never a bad thing. (Okay, it can be bad if it's poorly written, but you did just fine)

I would like to see more narrative in the future. Don't just say "Matthias went to Mr. Briney's house." That kind of narration is boring. For example, you could instead say "Matthias jogged down to Mr. Briney's seaside house." In other words, be more descriptive. It'll help make a good mission into an outstanding one.

The other important area of [most] missions is the battles. Yes you can use battles to train your pokemon, but you can also catch one of the wild pokemon listed in the mission brief. Rhyhorn's battle was short but passable, however I can't give Corphish credit for a fight you didn't describe. You say your pokemon had a hard time with Wailmer, but all I see is a single attack that pushes the foe back into the water.

So, here's what happens. I can pass the mission right now, but only Rhyhorn gets an Evo Point, and I only award P$350. OR, you can add in Corphish's battle (and possibly catch either Barboach or Wailmer) and go for the full P$400. I'll leave the choice up to you.



Ok!! I'm surprised that I didn't make any mistakes in my grammar, cause English is only my 4th languige I should know here in Belgium. I'll post the battle from Corphish here.

*Wailmer used Water Gun*
Matthias cried: "Now he didn't do a lot of damage, did he? Ok Corphish, use Vicegrip!*
*Wailmer evaded the attack and used a powerfull Headbutt*
"Don't give up, Corphish!" Matthias cried.
"Use Vicegrip again!"
*The Wailmer fell into the water now*
"Very nicely done! I am proud of you, Corphish!!"


Good like this?

Fourth language??! Now I'm really impressed!

Okay then, that's not a bad battle. Passable for a first mission, but there's room for improvement. As far as making edits go, however, it's usually preferred to repost the entire mission including the changes. Again, I'll let it slide since it's your first one, but keep it in mind for the second. wink

Pass, you get an evo point for both pokemon, and you get P$400.
PostPosted: Wed May 06, 2009 10:42 pm


"Thank you so much!" Matthias cried out. He was very happy that he passed the mission.

X--Matthias--X


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PostPosted: Thu May 07, 2009 3:01 pm


MISSION- Clone Clearout
Must complete Fearow of Water

The word in Lavender Town is that Team Aqua has been moving large amounts of equipment out of the Power Plant. But we don't have an installation there, so it can't be our doing.

I've looked over the leg band recovered from the Fearow, and it looks like the work of Team Clone.

Your mission is to get inside the plant and find whatever is left of their operation. Bring back any documents you can get your hands on. Try to go unseen, but you might have to fight anyway. (Fight 0-3 guards with 1-3 Pokemon each)

Pokemon: Any basic stage Electric or Ghost type Pokemon.

Funds: 1000-1800

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Arekku sat alone in HQ when his TADS had went off for only the second time in around a month now, he jumped up causing Roddy to fall off his shoulder. “Mari-Marill!!” the Aquamouse Pokémon cried angrily. “Sorry~!” Arekku apologized before pulling the Small machine up for him to see the screen clearly, he read it slowly so as not to miss any important details.

After a moment of reading, Arekku headed toward the teleporter, getting himself outside.. He held up Kenter's pokéball and in a flash of bright light the large Pokemon landed gracefully on top of the water. “Man- Mantine!” cried the newly caught Kite Pokemon. He sped underwater, almost as if gliding. He popped up one last time before ending his playtime. “Hey Mantine! Do you remember where you took us before?” Kenter nodded and splashed some, “Do you think we could go there again? Only a little further south. I think the Power Plant is a few minutes south of that.” He walked into the water and climbed on top of Kenter's back.. Roddy hopped onto Arekku's shoulder.

After about an hour or so they passed the docks just below Lavender town. A few people stopped what they were doing to look and a few even glared! Just passed Lavender town and near the spot they landed last time Arekku noticed that the sky was still light but just dark enough for him to sneak towards the Plant without being seen. Once he was ashore, he withdrew Kenter and began walking into the small amount of trees that hid the Power Plant. Roddy stood on his shoulder being a lookout for him, his ears moving slowly to try and pick up any hidden danger approaching

Soon Arekku came upon a fairly large rock formation that was a little unsettling. He stared at it for a second, it looked like it had eyes. He shook off the eerie feeling that it gave him and began around it. While walking passed Roddy froze up, any and all hairs standing up on end. Arekku froze too not knowing why Roddy had. “Roddy?” Arekku's breathing began to quicken. After a long ten seconds, Roddy seemed to come back too, dismissing whatever had caused him to stop like that. Arekku turned his head to look at him but all Roddy did was shake his head. Arekku shrugged and continued on toward the lights that he hoped were being produced by the Plant.

Luckily they were, and there was no one in sight to stop him, but he figured there would be many inside and he could count a large number of cameras on the wall closest to him. “Gee, think they're being a little much?” Roddy nodded and hopped off, knowing what Arekku was going to do. He pulled up Roddy's pokéball and withdrew him so there'd be less to notice of the team. Arekku sighed and slowly slunk from tree to tree getting closer to the Plant. Suddenly he had an idea what about Trey!? He lifted the pokéball and out came the Little bird who seemed to freeze up for a second before responding to Arekku. “Trey?. Are you okay?” the Pokemon looked up at him, slightly dazed but nodded, “Okay, do you think that you could fly over head and attack the cameras so we aren't seen?” Trey nodded and got a running start before taking off into the now deep purple sky.

High above the trees, Trey prepared a swift Peck attack that he would try to swoop right across the wall and take out all the cameras. Once ready, he began his decent but noticed the door on this side start open but couldn't stop in time to run face first into the ground, the guard looked slightly surprised as Trey fell less than three feet away, after a second he spoke, “Hey, you there! Spearow! Leave now!” The guard began to walk towards Arekku, he had to have seen the flash from Treys pokéball in the camera. If Arekku tried to move at all he'd be seen!

The guard walked off the Cement that bordered the Power Plant and onto the soft grass around that. Trey hadn't moved and inch as the guard, who had come closer to Arekku than he thought, turned around and walked back to him. Another guard came outside, “Hey what's taking you so long!?” He yelled at the first guard. Arekku managed to peek around the tree he had slunk down behind. “This stubborn little thing won't leave!” He complained. The second guard mulled it over and chuckled darkly, I guess we'll have to move him by force.” He pulled up a pokéball and released a rather mean looking Geodude onto the field, The first guard pulled up a pokéball as well but instead of a Geodude he released an irritated Snover.

Trey glanced in Arekku's direction but didn't back down, and from behind the tree Arekku announced, before storming in,” Oh no you don't guys! That'd be unfair!” He ran up behind Trey, holding out Roddy's pokéball. The Guards both took in a sharp breath and looked at the building, then each other. The first Shrugged and said, “I guess it's a good thing these cameras don't work or we'd be in trouble.” The second guard replied, “Yeah, seeing as though we're not supposed to battle anyone.” Arekku displayed a huge sweat drop. The guards called out to their Pokémon, “Get'em guys...” Arekku, slightly nervous because it'd be his first battle on Team Aqua and it was also a double battle at that, threw up Roddy's pokéball, the little Aquamouse Pokémon came out next to Trey. “Alright guys, let's try to end this quickly!” They nodded in unison.

Snover started with an Ice Shard attack aimed at Trey but luckily, Roddy was thinking with his feet and stepped in front with a Rollout, yes he absorbed the damage but in turn he was able to strike The opponents Snover, causing a significant amount of damage. The Snover fell back. Geodude had snuck around and was ready to attack Trey with a powerful looking Rock Throw, but since the opponent only threw one, it was easy to dodge, and then was countered by a blinding Aerial Ace Which hit dead on, but didn't do much damage. Roddy had turned around and came back at Snover, whom seemed dazed by the first Rollout strike, but was able to counter with a Razor Leaf attack, which hit and knocked Roddy back, he still turned in his Rollout attack. Roddy hit his mark and knocked it out, but sustained a fairly large amount of damage from the Razor Leaf.

The guard withdrew The fainted Pokémon and threw another pokéball out, a Gulpin flopped out of the pokéball onto the ground. Roddy panted lightly, trying not to show any amount of weakness. Meanwhile, Geodude drew it's fist back ready to attack with a horrifying Focus Punch, Arekku though that wasn't natural so it must've been taught by TM. Trey climbed higher and higher, turned around and used Mirror Move. He balled up one of his feet and it began to glow. Geodude on the other hand jumped and he climbed higher. just in time, Trey released his Focus Punch attack. The two collided. Geodude taking more damage because of his being half rock type. Trey was damaged but not near as much as Geodude, who fainted as it landed. The fight was on between Gulpin and Roddy, Gulpin shot a slew of Sludge Bombs, which hit their mark and made Roddy pass out. Arekku withdrew and thought about Kenter, but reconsidered and threw out Torque's pokéball. With Trey still fairly unharmed, and Torque on the field Arekku felt this battle was a wrap.

The guard withdrew Geodude pulled another pokéball and tossed it, out came an Oddish. The small Pokémon assessed the situation quickly and ran towards Torque ready to sap some HP with Mega Drain. But Torque retaliated with a Scary Face which caused the Oddish to slow down a lot. The enemy Gulpin began sweeping up some extra things on the ground, including the leftover sludge, in a Stockpile technique, That could go either way, it could Swallow and gain HP or Spit Up and do a lot of damage. Trey sped around the field trying to find a weak point on the Gulpin. Suddenly, as Trey passed over head of it, the Oddish launched a large cloud of Sleep Powder. Trey fell asleep and crashed into the ground. “No!” The Gulpin took Torque by surprise and hit him with the Spit Up attack, it didn't do much damage, but Torque was then after hit with a powerful Mega Drain from Oddish.

Torque bounced backward landing near Arekku. Trey was still under the effects of the Sleep Powder so Arekku withdrew him and pulled up Ven's pokéball. He threw and she came down onto the field. Gulpin took the first move and tried a Sludge Bomb aimed at Ven, she prepared a Psybeam but quicker than the eye could see, Torque used Aqua Jet right passed Ven, leaving the thin water stream behind him. The sludge pellets slowed way down in the water and fell to the ground on the other side. Ven had finally launched the Psybeam just as the water trail fell away. Hitting the enemy Gulpin, and causing it to faint, 'Must have been a critical hit' Arekku thought. The guard, finally defeated, ran off into the woods, while the other guard grunted. Arekku made it a fair fight, withdrawing Torque and leaving Ven on the field.

“Odd-Odd” The little opponent taunted Ven, but Ven ignored it and quickly shot a Supersonic at it, confusing it. The Oddish started dancing, smacking itself in the face with it's leaves. Ven seemed to giggle and used a Psybeam to try and finish the battle. It hit, knocking the Little opponent out and causing the guard to run off behind the other one. “Yeah!!” Arekku cheered. “You you guys did great!” he said as he withdrew Ven.

“Alright, now to see what's going on in here...” He slowly pulled the door open to see if it would make any kind of sound. After inside, door closed, he hunched over and snuck down the hallway, looking into a few rooms with windows to the hallway, the place looked deserted. That is until he heard a voice come coming from around the corner. “Yeah, she said that we weren't supposed to battle!... I know I couldn't believe it myself... Yeah what are we supposed to do if there is an intruder... Yeah okay, bye.” and the guard closed to phone. Arekku couldn't believe the nerve of this guy! Talking on the phone while on duty, that was unacceptable, even for an enemy.

The guard glanced down the hallway, and for a moment Arekku thought he had been caught, until the guard continued walking down that same hallway. Arekku heard a beeping sound and the guard answered the phone and began talking again. Arekku snuck around the corner behind the guards back and in through what he thought was a supply closet until he had already closed the door and noticed that a light was on in the center of the room. No one was there, but there were a lot of file cabinets. “Gold mine!” Arekku exclaimed quietly. He sniffed around, riffling through short, unimportant documents. He lifted up his head to see a sign that said 'RESTRICED FILES' in red a couple cabinets down. He put the folder back and stepped over the restricted cabinet. He opened it and saw three rather stuffed filing folders. His backpack was just big enough to fit them all in. He slowly pushed it shut and half sprinted to the door he came in through and placed his ear against it to listen. The guard was still talking. There was no way Arekku could avoid a fight, he'd just have to be quiet and see if the guard was still facing away. He slowly pushed it open and peeked around the corner to see that that same guard was a while down the hallway and faced away. Arekku closed the door without a sound sprinted down the hallway and outside, back into the wooded area. He remembered taking this exact trail but where the large rock formation was, there was now just a large open area. Nothing was there. Arekku shook it off running back to the beach and releasing Kenter into the waters, Climbing onto his back and jetting all the way back to the island. Once on land, he withdrew Kenter. And walked to the teleporter, and once again into HQ.
PostPosted: Thu May 07, 2009 4:16 pm


Cody walked into HQ humming his favorite tune. Looking around, he realized that yet again, no one was there. "What's up with that?" he asked the emptiness, realizing that no one had been there at all the last few times he had come in.

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PostPosted: Thu May 07, 2009 4:30 pm


Kai walked into the HQ, extremely tired. He pulled out a bag of cheetos, and started to eat some while sitting on the couch.
PostPosted: Thu May 07, 2009 5:39 pm


"Hello everyone!" Arekku was getting used to coming into the room and seeing the usual almost completely abandoned room.

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Thard_Verad
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PostPosted: Thu May 07, 2009 7:13 pm


Ice_Wolf_Demon
MISSION- Clone Clearout
Must complete Fearow of Water

The word in Lavender Town is that Team Aqua has been moving large amounts of equipment out of the Power Plant. But we don't have an installation there, so it can't be our doing.

I've looked over the leg band recovered from the Fearow, and it looks like the work of Team Clone.

Your mission is to get inside the plant and find whatever is left of their operation. Bring back any documents you can get your hands on. Try to go unseen, but you might have to fight anyway. (Fight 0-3 guards with 1-3 Pokemon each)

Pokemon: Any basic stage Electric or Ghost type Pokemon.

Funds: 1000-1800

Excellent work! I didn't notice anything that would prompt an auto-fail, which is always good. Your story was enjoyable, and that battle was well done. (I have yet to see anyone pull off a total stealth mission. They always find a guard to battle)

I notice you chose not to catch any new pokemon. It's hard to build a team if you ignore catching opportunities.

Anyway, this mission is a clear pass. P$1800 and rank up. You're almost out of Tier 5! I noticed your info in the Aqua Ranks is out-of-date. Please PM an admin with the current information. (Yeah, that includes me if you want to go that way with it)
PostPosted: Fri May 08, 2009 8:20 pm


Ikarizu sat at the desk in his room, his chin resting on it and his arms dangling down to the floor. Ever since the team fought Maxie atop the volcano here on the island, his head would randomly start to throb in pain. He did recieve a hard blow to the head when he was thrown up against a cliff, and he could still feel where he got slammed. Ike sighed and leaned back in his chair.

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PostPosted: Sat May 09, 2009 3:04 pm


"Hey everyone!" Arekku said as he stepped in HQ through the teleporter, he noticed that his mission had been graded and stepped over to read it. Once again he was happy enough with just the first couple words. He nodded as he read on. "Uh-huh..." He picked up his PD and as soon as he saw the words 'rank up' he half flipped, "Yeah!!" He cheered for everyone to hear him. Even Roddy came out of his pokeball to see what was going on.
PostPosted: Sun May 10, 2009 8:34 am


"Happy Mother's day Aqua!" Ginji said with a smile as he awoke on the couch. It wasn't exactly the happiest of holidays for him, but it was for everyone else. "I wonder what that RP is going to be today..."

Ginji of Thunder


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PostPosted: Sun May 10, 2009 9:11 am


Ike walked in the common room with a piece of toast sticking out of his mouth. His arms were slumped and there were bags under his eyes. He walked over to the couch and slumped down on it, taking hold of his toast and taking a bite out of it. He yawned.
"Yeah, forgot it was mother's day." he said in a low, drowsy voice.
PostPosted: Sun May 10, 2009 11:10 am


"Hey, mom? Happy...." He stopped, "Oh... answering machine. Gotcha.." Arekku hung up. "I love a disfunctional family life."

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PostPosted: Sun May 10, 2009 11:40 am


Ginji sighed. "So...I guess we're going to do something fun? I unno...my mother's dead as far as I know." the boy laughed darkly as the sun shone in from the skylight, casting a nice shadow on the floor.
PostPosted: Sun May 10, 2009 11:48 am


Kai walked into the common room with some cheetos. "WHo needs family when you got Cheetos?" He asked out loud.

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PostPosted: Sun May 10, 2009 11:50 am


Arekku looked over to Ginji raising one eyebrow. "Um.... if you say so..." Trey came out of his pokeball to see what was going on.
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