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"Yes!" Cody shouted in joy as he jumped up from the couch, quickly posting his mission on the board. He turned to Sammy and replied, "I've been fine. You?"
The morning seemed to come faster than expected. Ike had told them to stay in Oreburg, just in case something happened to the museum or that creep came back with Jasmine, but Cody wasn’t sure how much more of this stakeout he could take without going completely insane. Suddenly, his TADS vibrated. His heart raced as he opened the device, hoping to get word of an escape plan from the city or something exciting happening that would force them to leave. Alas, it was but a simple text message from a withheld number.
MISSION- Slateport Beach Brawl
A pack of Crawdaunt and Sharpedo are fighting over whos territory Slateport beach is. They are starting to fight and disrupt the happy beachers. Both sides will attack humans on sight and now a Wailord has joined in the fray because one of the sharpedos injured her baby Wailmer. You must stop them from destroying Slateport city! (You will fight 2 Sharpedo and 2 Crawdaunt and one Wailord)
Pokemon:
Corphish
Carvanha
Wailmer (not the baby wailmer)
Funds:
2500
“Territorial little bastards,” Cody said, sending out Flygon. “To Slateport Beach, I guess,” he told the pokemon as they took off into the morning sky. He watched all the fish jump in the ocean below him as they passed over, soon landing on the shores of the hustling city. Just as the text said, Wailmer, Carvannah, Sharpedo, Crawdaunt, and Corphish were fighting all over the place. “Plusle, Peaches, split this thing up! Thunder in the middle of it all!” Both Electric Types sprinted to what seemed to be the middle of the conflict and both erupted with a massive explosion of electrical energy, startling the pokmeon involved. “Good job guys. Come on back,” Cody called, but they were quickly confronted by Water Types.
A Sharpedo launched itself at Pichu, hitting her with Aqua Jet, not doing very much damage. The tiny mouse pokemon shot back another intense Thunder attack, paralyzing her foe. Peaches returned with Charge Beam, this time raising her Special Attack as Sharpedo tucked its head in preparation for its next attack. A final Shock Wave KOed the shark and a Crawdaunt stepped up.
Plusle, facing his first opponent of the day, a Crawdaunt, attacked first with Thunderwave, automatically paralyzing his opponent. Crawdaunt went for the One-Hit KO right off the bat with a Guillotine attack, missing by inches. Plusle devised a Nasy Plot, raising its Special Attack stat by two stages. Crawdaunt went for a Bubblebeam, hitting Plusle but not hard. A returned Thunderpunch was enough to knock the sense out of Crawdaunt as he tried to attack, only to epically fail due to paralysis. A Thunder KOed the pokemon, bringing forth the mouse’s next opponent.
Peaches found herself face to face with a towering Crawdaunt. The pokmeon stared her down, but was quickly knocked away by a devastating Iron Tail, lowering Crawdaunt’s defense. The Water Type shot off a Swift attack, hitting Pichu in a large explosion of stars. A Thunderbolt was almost enough to knock out the large crab, but it still came back strong with a Vicegrip. Pichu came back for a final Swift, KOing her final opponent.
Plusle stood mano y mano with a terrifying Sharpedo. A Quick Attack got her back into the battling mood, only to be knocked back by a strong Bite from the Sharpedo. She also took the due Rough Skin damage. Shock Wave sent Sharpedo flying back into the water, but it came back yet again with Rage. A deadly Thunder was almost enough to knock Sharpedo out for good, but another Rage hit Plusle even harder than the last time. Spark took care of Sharpedo’s remaining HP as the two Electric Types journeyed back across the crowed beach to rejoin their trainer. Cody pulled out two Super Potions, one for each of them, healing them instantly.
Suddenly, a huge geyser of water flew out of the ocean, spraying the nearby beach. A larger than normal Wailord emerged from the ocean, firing a Hydro Pump at the beachgoers. Plusle and Pichu both ran up to where the sand met the receding water line and shot Electric attacks at the giant pokemon. Another Hydro Pump fired at Plusle, but the small pokemon managed to dodge it. Both Plusle and Pichu used Magnet Rise, using their electrical energy to help them levitate right before Wailord let off an enormous Earthquake. Peaches shot off a Grass Knot, doing serious damage to one of the heaviest pokemon known to man. Plusle attacked with Thunder but missed, only to have Wailord dive under the water, sending both mouse pokemon into total confusion for the time being. The giant emerged from the water with intense speed, causing another geyser to form, this time hitting Pichu with a wall of water, but paralyzing the Wailord due to Pichu’s Static ability. Plusle sent off a weak Spark attack, hoping to gain the Wailord’s attention while Peaches prepared her special attack. The tiny mouse backed up as far as she could, hoping to gain just enough momentum for her jump. She sprinted forward, launching herself at the Wailord as she reached the waterline, her body covered in electricity. She hit the insanely large whale with an intense force, causing it to shriek in pain. The attack led to both pokemon fainting in the middle of the ocean.
Witnessing the attack, Cody sent out Feraligatr, both trainer and pokemon charging into the ocean as Plusle watched in fear of his companion’s life. The boy grabbed ahold of Feraligatr’s back as the two swam out to where Pichu had fallen. The crocodile pokemon dived deep into the water, hoping to find the Electric Type before it was too late. Cody soon saw the yellow and black of his Pichu and made his way over to her, quickly being picked up and brought to shore by Feraligatr, followed quickly by Plusle. He laid Pichu out on the sand, pushing on her chest repeatedly. Soon, Officer Jennys and Nurse Joys were flooding the scene, trying to peel Cody away for questioning. He brought out his PPD, laying it on the sand for all of them to see. He, of all people, knew how to take care of a pokemon. Suddenly, a small coughing was heard and Pichu’s lungs gave in, releasing all the water she had taken in to make room for oxygen. Cody just smiled, a tear rolling down his eye as he hugged the tiny mouse to his chest, picking his second companion up in his other arm. The police officers and medical officials were still at his throat, but it was ok. Pichu was ok. Everyone… was ok.
The morning seemed to come faster than expected. Ike had told them to stay in Oreburg, just in case something happened to the museum or that creep came back with Jasmine, but Cody wasn’t sure how much more of this stakeout he could take without going completely insane. Suddenly, his TADS vibrated. His heart raced as he opened the device, hoping to get word of an escape plan from the city or something exciting happening that would force them to leave. Alas, it was but a simple text message from a withheld number.
MISSION- Slateport Beach Brawl
A pack of Crawdaunt and Sharpedo are fighting over whos territory Slateport beach is. They are starting to fight and disrupt the happy beachers. Both sides will attack humans on sight and now a Wailord has joined in the fray because one of the sharpedos injured her baby Wailmer. You must stop them from destroying Slateport city! (You will fight 2 Sharpedo and 2 Crawdaunt and one Wailord)
Pokemon:
Corphish
Carvanha
Wailmer (not the baby wailmer)
Funds:
2500
“Territorial little bastards,” Cody said, sending out Flygon. “To Slateport Beach, I guess,” he told the pokemon as they took off into the morning sky. He watched all the fish jump in the ocean below him as they passed over, soon landing on the shores of the hustling city. Just as the text said, Wailmer, Carvannah, Sharpedo, Crawdaunt, and Corphish were fighting all over the place. “Plusle, Peaches, split this thing up! Thunder in the middle of it all!” Both Electric Types sprinted to what seemed to be the middle of the conflict and both erupted with a massive explosion of electrical energy, startling the pokmeon involved. “Good job guys. Come on back,” Cody called, but they were quickly confronted by Water Types.
A Sharpedo launched itself at Pichu, hitting her with Aqua Jet, not doing very much damage. The tiny mouse pokemon shot back another intense Thunder attack, paralyzing her foe. Peaches returned with Charge Beam, this time raising her Special Attack as Sharpedo tucked its head in preparation for its next attack. A final Shock Wave KOed the shark and a Crawdaunt stepped up.
Plusle, facing his first opponent of the day, a Crawdaunt, attacked first with Thunderwave, automatically paralyzing his opponent. Crawdaunt went for the One-Hit KO right off the bat with a Guillotine attack, missing by inches. Plusle devised a Nasy Plot, raising its Special Attack stat by two stages. Crawdaunt went for a Bubblebeam, hitting Plusle but not hard. A returned Thunderpunch was enough to knock the sense out of Crawdaunt as he tried to attack, only to epically fail due to paralysis. A Thunder KOed the pokemon, bringing forth the mouse’s next opponent.
Peaches found herself face to face with a towering Crawdaunt. The pokmeon stared her down, but was quickly knocked away by a devastating Iron Tail, lowering Crawdaunt’s defense. The Water Type shot off a Swift attack, hitting Pichu in a large explosion of stars. A Thunderbolt was almost enough to knock out the large crab, but it still came back strong with a Vicegrip. Pichu came back for a final Swift, KOing her final opponent.
Plusle stood mano y mano with a terrifying Sharpedo. A Quick Attack got her back into the battling mood, only to be knocked back by a strong Bite from the Sharpedo. She also took the due Rough Skin damage. Shock Wave sent Sharpedo flying back into the water, but it came back yet again with Rage. A deadly Thunder was almost enough to knock Sharpedo out for good, but another Rage hit Plusle even harder than the last time. Spark took care of Sharpedo’s remaining HP as the two Electric Types journeyed back across the crowed beach to rejoin their trainer. Cody pulled out two Super Potions, one for each of them, healing them instantly.
Suddenly, a huge geyser of water flew out of the ocean, spraying the nearby beach. A larger than normal Wailord emerged from the ocean, firing a Hydro Pump at the beachgoers. Plusle and Pichu both ran up to where the sand met the receding water line and shot Electric attacks at the giant pokemon. Another Hydro Pump fired at Plusle, but the small pokemon managed to dodge it. Both Plusle and Pichu used Magnet Rise, using their electrical energy to help them levitate right before Wailord let off an enormous Earthquake. Peaches shot off a Grass Knot, doing serious damage to one of the heaviest pokemon known to man. Plusle attacked with Thunder but missed, only to have Wailord dive under the water, sending both mouse pokemon into total confusion for the time being. The giant emerged from the water with intense speed, causing another geyser to form, this time hitting Pichu with a wall of water, but paralyzing the Wailord due to Pichu’s Static ability. Plusle sent off a weak Spark attack, hoping to gain the Wailord’s attention while Peaches prepared her special attack. The tiny mouse backed up as far as she could, hoping to gain just enough momentum for her jump. She sprinted forward, launching herself at the Wailord as she reached the waterline, her body covered in electricity. She hit the insanely large whale with an intense force, causing it to shriek in pain. The attack led to both pokemon fainting in the middle of the ocean.
Witnessing the attack, Cody sent out Feraligatr, both trainer and pokemon charging into the ocean as Plusle watched in fear of his companion’s life. The boy grabbed ahold of Feraligatr’s back as the two swam out to where Pichu had fallen. The crocodile pokemon dived deep into the water, hoping to find the Electric Type before it was too late. Cody soon saw the yellow and black of his Pichu and made his way over to her, quickly being picked up and brought to shore by Feraligatr, followed quickly by Plusle. He laid Pichu out on the sand, pushing on her chest repeatedly. Soon, Officer Jennys and Nurse Joys were flooding the scene, trying to peel Cody away for questioning. He brought out his PPD, laying it on the sand for all of them to see. He, of all people, knew how to take care of a pokemon. Suddenly, a small coughing was heard and Pichu’s lungs gave in, releasing all the water she had taken in to make room for oxygen. Cody just smiled, a tear rolling down his eye as he hugged the tiny mouse to his chest, picking his second companion up in his other arm. The police officers and medical officials were still at his throat, but it was ok. Pichu was ok. Everyone… was ok.
Maddy walked in and curtly placed a grade on Cody's mission.
For the most part, this is a pass. Last I checked, Thunder wasn't a highly accurate attac and I think it only missed once or twice out of the several times you used it. There are items that could make that possible, but still, watch out for that. Personally, I'd choose Thunderbolt over Thunder anyday, unless Rain Dance was in effect xD
Now where was I? Oh, yes. The mission was also fairly short. A person of your rank is expected to write much more than that ;P
But anyways, keep 2000 PD and keep writing good missions >.<
