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Conservative Exhibitionist
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Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 10:39 am
"Hey Reaper. What's up buddy?" he said, looking up at the boy.
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Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 10:44 am
"Nothing really, how about you?" *looks over at Cody, then back to the t.v then combusken runs up the stairs and jumps off them and on the couch.........again* "Somethings never change." Crawdaunt: "Yeah like this." *crawdaunt hits reaper in the head causing a fight cloud to activate, then bayleef, floatzel, zangoose, kadabra, and combusken get into the fight too* "Your gonna get now." ((wow 7 hours since anyone has been here, a new record))
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Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 6:25 pm
Little Master Reaper MD2 *finishes up his mission and posts his mission report on board* MISSION - That's the Spirit! Any Team Aqua member is asked to go to Mt. Pyre and catch a ghost pokemon Pokemon: Duskull Shuppet Funds upon completion: 300 ____________________________________________________________ *Reaper after being gone for a long time decided to try for a mission* "Man it has been a long time since Ive tried doing a mission, I should do one now." *looks at TADS to see the mission description* "Sounds like a good mission for me to try out, who should I take with me though?" Crawdaunt: "Oh me, pick me, I want to go on the mission." "OK you can come then." *Reaper returns crawdaunt to pokeball and grabs his dusty bike and head out to Mt. Pyre* "I will need Kadabra though, to get there, I should go get him." *turns around back to HQ to get Kadabra*"Kadabra come with me to Mt.Pyre." Kadabra: "OK its party time." *Kadabra teleported them to hoenn region and the gang start going on their bike to Mt.Pyre* Reaper: "Well this will be fun, it says to catch a ghost type pokemon." *after 1 hour, they arrive at their destination* "OK we are here lets go." *lets Crawdaunt and Kadabra out and they head inside* Kadabra and Crawdaunt: "This place is scary looking." Reaper: "It is OK just face your fears and we can overcome this and hopefully pass an actual mission." *they start to face their fears and they go up the mountain to find a ghost pokemon* Reaper: "Wow there is an awful lot of Shuppet but I don't see a Duskull anywhere." Crawdaunt: "Me either, I will keep looking." Kadabra: "Me too, all I see is Shuppet." Reaper: "OK lets split up, Crawdaunt, you and Kadabra go that way, and I will go this way, if you see a Duskull then yell." Crawdaunt: "OK will do." Kadabra: "Yeah, what he said." *they split up to look for the Duskull* Reaper: "I still don't see one, its like all of the Duskull were caught." *just as Reaper was about to give up he hears Crawdaunt and Kadabra yelling for him* Crawdaunt and Kadabra: "Reaper! We found a Duskull! Come now!" *Reaper rushes over to his pokemon and sees a Duskull* "Yes good job guys, OK Crawdaunt you go and prepare for battle. Kadabra, you just watch because your weakness is ghost OK?" Kadabra: "OK go ahead Reaper and catch that pokemon." Reaper: "OK, Crawdaunt use Water Pulse." *a ball of water appears from Crawdaunt and hits the pokemon but health still in green for Duskull and then the wild Duskull used Charge Beam and hits Crawdaunt reducing him to yellow and increasing Duskull's sp.atk up by 1 point* "OK Crawdaunt use Night Slash." *Crawdaunt rushes over to the Duskull and you can see the darkness of the slash and hits causing Duskull to go to yellow and the Duskull used Ominous Wind and hits Crawdaunt but still at yellow* "OK Crawdaunt use Water Pulse once more."*a ball of water appears from Crawdaunt and hits the pokemon and goes to red health and Duskull uses Psychic but fails* "OK this is it, pokeball go!" *pokeball starts to shake then after 5 seconds the ball stops shaking and the Duskull was caught* "Good job Crawdaunt, rest up buddy." *returns Crawdaunt* Kadabra: "Yes you did it Reaper. lets go back." Reaper: "Yeah we should, OK Kadabra teleport us back home." *they were teleported back to HQ and Reaper posts mission on the board* MISSION COMPLETE Ike walks in with a graded mission. Sorry, Reaper. Going to have to fail this. As an Aqua Scout Alpha looking to get a rank up to the Tier 3 ranks, you'll have to put in more effort. Your battles need to be more descriptive. I appreciate your style of trying to replicate the games (describing the pokemon's health in HP bars.) but there is really no way you can see HP bars. They don't appear automatically over the pokemon, so you should find other ways to describe the stamina of pokemon. (Try reading other member's battles to get ideas.) As for a side note, your dialogue is very synthetic. It doesn't sound normal. Instead of typing "OK we are here lets go.", make it more natural like this: "OK, we're here! Let's go!" (A good exercise might be to try and say it out loud first and see if it sounds good.)
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Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 6:28 pm
"Oh well I will try better next time then." *looks over at ike then goes back to the fight cloud he was having*
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Conservative Exhibitionist
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Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 11:06 pm
c1lyfe "Yes!" Cody shouted in joy as he jumped up from the couch, quickly posting his mission on the board. He turned to Sammy and replied, "I've been fine. You?" The morning seemed to come faster than expected. Ike had told them to stay in Oreburg, just in case something happened to the museum or that creep came back with Jasmine, but Cody wasn’t sure how much more of this stakeout he could take without going completely insane. Suddenly, his TADS vibrated. His heart raced as he opened the device, hoping to get word of an escape plan from the city or something exciting happening that would force them to leave. Alas, it was but a simple text message from a withheld number.
MISSION- Slateport Beach Brawl A pack of Crawdaunt and Sharpedo are fighting over whos territory Slateport beach is. They are starting to fight and disrupt the happy beachers. Both sides will attack humans on sight and now a Wailord has joined in the fray because one of the sharpedos injured her baby Wailmer. You must stop them from destroying Slateport city! (You will fight 2 Sharpedo and 2 Crawdaunt and one Wailord)
Pokemon: Corphish Carvanha Wailmer (not the baby wailmer)
Funds: 2500
“Territorial little bastards,” Cody said, sending out Flygon. “To Slateport Beach, I guess,” he told the pokemon as they took off into the morning sky. He watched all the fish jump in the ocean below him as they passed over, soon landing on the shores of the hustling city. Just as the text said, Wailmer, Carvannah, Sharpedo, Crawdaunt, and Corphish were fighting all over the place. “Plusle, Peaches, split this thing up! Thunder in the middle of it all!” Both Electric Types sprinted to what seemed to be the middle of the conflict and both erupted with a massive explosion of electrical energy, startling the pokmeon involved. “Good job guys. Come on back,” Cody called, but they were quickly confronted by Water Types.
A Sharpedo launched itself at Pichu, hitting her with Aqua Jet, not doing very much damage. The tiny mouse pokemon shot back another intense Thunder attack, paralyzing her foe. Peaches returned with Charge Beam, this time raising her Special Attack as Sharpedo tucked its head in preparation for its next attack. A final Shock Wave KOed the shark and a Crawdaunt stepped up.
Plusle, facing his first opponent of the day, a Crawdaunt, attacked first with Thunderwave, automatically paralyzing his opponent. Crawdaunt went for the One-Hit KO right off the bat with a Guillotine attack, missing by inches. Plusle devised a Nasy Plot, raising its Special Attack stat by two stages. Crawdaunt went for a Bubblebeam, hitting Plusle but not hard. A returned Thunderpunch was enough to knock the sense out of Crawdaunt as he tried to attack, only to epically fail due to paralysis. A Thunder KOed the pokemon, bringing forth the mouse’s next opponent. Peaches found herself face to face with a towering Crawdaunt. The pokmeon stared her down, but was quickly knocked away by a devastating Iron Tail, lowering Crawdaunt’s defense. The Water Type shot off a Swift attack, hitting Pichu in a large explosion of stars. A Thunderbolt was almost enough to knock out the large crab, but it still came back strong with a Vicegrip. Pichu came back for a final Swift, KOing her final opponent.
Plusle stood mano y mano with a terrifying Sharpedo. A Quick Attack got her back into the battling mood, only to be knocked back by a strong Bite from the Sharpedo. She also took the due Rough Skin damage. Shock Wave sent Sharpedo flying back into the water, but it came back yet again with Rage. A deadly Thunder was almost enough to knock Sharpedo out for good, but another Rage hit Plusle even harder than the last time. Spark took care of Sharpedo’s remaining HP as the two Electric Types journeyed back across the crowed beach to rejoin their trainer. Cody pulled out two Super Potions, one for each of them, healing them instantly.
Suddenly, a huge geyser of water flew out of the ocean, spraying the nearby beach. A larger than normal Wailord emerged from the ocean, firing a Hydro Pump at the beachgoers. Plusle and Pichu both ran up to where the sand met the receding water line and shot Electric attacks at the giant pokemon. Another Hydro Pump fired at Plusle, but the small pokemon managed to dodge it. Both Plusle and Pichu used Magnet Rise, using their electrical energy to help them levitate right before Wailord let off an enormous Earthquake. Peaches shot off a Grass Knot, doing serious damage to one of the heaviest pokemon known to man. Plusle attacked with Thunder but missed, only to have Wailord dive under the water, sending both mouse pokemon into total confusion for the time being. The giant emerged from the water with intense speed, causing another geyser to form, this time hitting Pichu with a wall of water, but paralyzing the Wailord due to Pichu’s Static ability. Plusle sent off a weak Spark attack, hoping to gain the Wailord’s attention while Peaches prepared her special attack. The tiny mouse backed up as far as she could, hoping to gain just enough momentum for her jump. She sprinted forward, launching herself at the Wailord as she reached the waterline, her body covered in electricity. She hit the insanely large whale with an intense force, causing it to shriek in pain. The attack led to both pokemon fainting in the middle of the ocean.
Witnessing the attack, Cody sent out Feraligatr, both trainer and pokemon charging into the ocean as Plusle watched in fear of his companion’s life. The boy grabbed ahold of Feraligatr’s back as the two swam out to where Pichu had fallen. The crocodile pokemon dived deep into the water, hoping to find the Electric Type before it was too late. Cody soon saw the yellow and black of his Pichu and made his way over to her, quickly being picked up and brought to shore by Feraligatr, followed quickly by Plusle. He laid Pichu out on the sand, pushing on her chest repeatedly. Soon, Officer Jennys and Nurse Joys were flooding the scene, trying to peel Cody away for questioning. He brought out his PPD, laying it on the sand for all of them to see. He, of all people, knew how to take care of a pokemon. Suddenly, a small coughing was heard and Pichu’s lungs gave in, releasing all the water she had taken in to make room for oxygen. Cody just smiled, a tear rolling down his eye as he hugged the tiny mouse to his chest, picking his second companion up in his other arm. The police officers and medical officials were still at his throat, but it was ok. Pichu was ok. Everyone… was ok.
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Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 11:13 pm
*furniture start to get torn up by the fight cloud, the couch has ripped holes in it now amd after 2 hours of fighting they get tired and head outside for some fresh air and fun*
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Conservative Exhibitionist
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Posted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 3:28 pm
Cody came strolling into HQ, noticing his mission hadn't been graded yet. "I hope someone hops on that..." he told himself.
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Posted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 3:31 pm
*jumps in the water with floatzel* "Surfs up dude."
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Posted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 3:58 pm
Sammy sauntered in with Donner and Squirt, who now seemed to be having a rivalry for her affection. "Hey, everyone~" Sammy called, grinning like a toddler.
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Posted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 4:30 pm
"Hey sissy. What ya doin?" Cody smiled at her, waiting for a grade.
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Conservative Exhibitionist
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Posted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 4:40 pm
"Nothin' much, lil' bro," Sammy replied. "And you? Are you and Adie going on a date soon? Any babehs?" She teased, punching him playfully on the arm.
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Posted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 4:40 pm
"I wonder what came in the mail today." *opens up mailbox to find an Aqua acceptance letter* "Yes! Team Aqua here I come!" *grabs pokeball containing Piplup and tells him to use surf and head to Aquos Island and after 20 minutes we arrive at the Island of Aquos but don't see the HQ of Aqua* "OK! Piplup we are here at Aquos Island, do you see the HQ?" *Piplup nods basically saying no* "Oh, well then lets keep looking til we find it OK?" *Piplup nods saying yes* "OK! Lets go!" *they walk into a forest in search of the HQ, then suddenly a Mankey pops out of nowhere and attacks the 2* "Whats this Mankey's problem? Piplup, lets teach him never to mess with Piplup and ." *Piplup gets into battle position and awaits orders* "OK! Piplup use Peck!" *Piplups beak starts to glow and pecks at the Mankey and then the Mankey used Focus Blast, but missed* "OK! Piplup use Peck once more!" *Piplups beak starts to glow and pecks at the Mankey and then Mankey used Brick Break and hits* "OK! Pokeball go!" *throws the pokeball at the Mankey and rolls three times then stops* "Yes! We did it, we got Mankey." *grabs the pokeball and keeps going through the forest and after 1 hour we find the HQ* "We found it, lets go inside." *runs inside HQ*
Piplup: 50hp-13=38hp
Mankey: 50-18=32hp-17=15hp (captured)
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Posted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 4:43 pm
Sammy watched as a new face appeared in HQ. She gave him a welcoming smile, saying, "Hiya! I'm Sammy Valentine... and I assume you're a new recruit?" She asked, turning her head sideways.
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Posted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 5:12 pm
"I gotta find her first. I don't know where she's been," Cody replied to her. "And no babies... Yet," he chuckled and smiled brightly.
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Conservative Exhibitionist
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Posted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 5:16 pm
"Yay! I'm gonna be an Auntie, I'm gonna be an Auntie~" Sammy chanted, a big grin on her face. "Of course, one is going to be Sammy Jr. , right?"
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