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Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2015 8:35 am
Guys, You skipped this dude! prince sage ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Hirohito Takisumo Nickname: Hito
Age: 14 Birthdate: January 13th Gender: Male
Height: 5'4 Weight: 124 lbs
Nindo: "Do what makes you happy. Do what makes you laugh." Personality: Immature and risky, he gets alone with the children of the village more than any other demographic. He instinctively wants to help people. Sloth describes him pretty well, too. Hito is also mellow, kind, and doesn't have much of a temper. He prefers to follow over lead, but can be stubborn when he's not getting enough attention or just wants to act like a hcild.
Village: Kirigakure Rank: Genin First Class: Medical Second Class: Medical ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Shinsetsu
Chakra Pool: 400 Stamina Pool: 100 Chakra Element: Water, Wind, Snow Chakra Color: Pale blue Chakra Materialization: Starts at the gut and crawls around the body like snakes
Strengths: • Chakra control • Calming down people Weaknesses: • Complicated bukijutsu • Working non-stop Fears: • Letting a patient die • Suffocating
Class Disciplines: • Specialist: The user, choosing to specialize in either healing or harmful medical techniques, gains a great boost to their chakra control in that area. At Chunnin, they gain a -5 chakra reduction to perform techniques in their specialty. at Jounin, -10, at Konin -15 at Sannin -20. To clarify, they they gain a -5 chakra reduction every rank, to a maximum of -20 at sannin. All medical jutsu are still learnable by both sides, but the chakra control only applies to the chosen side. • Efficiency Expert: For every rank the user increases, they can choose 1 medical technique and perform it at half the cost, to a minimum of 5 chakra. Gennin can only choose techniques D rank and lower, Chuunin C rank and lower, Jounin B rank and lower, and Konin is A rank and lower. You may only at one time, only have 1 half cost technique per rank. To clarify, you may only have 1 D, 1 C, 1 B, 1 A. Can retrain into a different (or the same) jutsu if desired.
Learning Reductions: • Learns ninjutsu [1] post faster • Same reductions for ninjutsu apply to eiseijutsu Personal Attributes: • Gains a Taijutsu slot • Learns healing medical techniques [2] posts faster anywhere home village [Kirigakure] ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 10 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 10 • Eiseijutsu : : 00 / 20 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Chain Sickles Weapon Range: 4' Weapon Weight: 10 lbs Weapon Location: each sickle is in a holster on either side of his belt
Summoning Type: {Ex. Dogs, Bears, Slugs, etc.} {If none, remove summon section} Summon Sage: {Yes or No} Pacts: {Ex. Dogs: Pakkun, etc. Sages do not need to list pacts}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • x10 Shuriken • x5 Kunai
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Suiton •
Eiseijutsu • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Born to two mothers, Hirohito has always been in a loving, open environment. They encouraged him to do lots of things, which gave him incredible confidence and even a sense of humor later on. Originally, the only child dreamed of being a medic like his non-birth mother, but then he discovered he had an affinity for snow jutsu. Then all three of them realized that his birth mom was a Shinsetsu, a fact ignored for generations due to a lack of ninja in the family. Both his moms eventually decided he could go to the academy, and Hiro's been learning jutsu ever since.
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Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2015 8:52 am
I apologize for the wait. Our usual approval mods seem to have vanished. I hope the wait hasn't chased you off. T.T
Anyway, it looks fine to me, except your second personal attribute. In order to have a -2 reduction to learning techniques, you must give up something in another category. Otherwise, -1 is the limit.
Once that's fixed, let me know. Also make sure your bloodline application is approved, and you'll be good to go. I look forward to roleplaying with you in Kiri. smile
Likewise, I apologize for your wait. I don't see anything wrong with it, so unless otherwise stated, and as long as your bloodline application is approved, so is your profile. I look forward to roleplaying with you in Kumo. smile
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XAyame_HatakeX Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2015 1:20 pm
Didn't vanish Tao just waiting on some things to get cleared up with bloodline app. AandOE was handling it. I checked it before I looked everything over Sunday.....I think. Which is when I did the things on the other profiles.
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Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2015 2:08 pm
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XAyame_HatakeX Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2015 3:09 pm
I didn't hun. I already told you what needed to be changed. If you've made those changes I'll look it over again just let me know when you've done so smile
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2015 5:25 pm
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XAyame_HatakeX Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2015 1:54 am
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2015 9:33 am
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Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2015 1:26 pm
Quote: I'm sorry if there is any issues. I'm quite new to the system still. ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Kohana Tami Miyamoto Nickname: Tammy
Age: Sixteen Birthdate: May 25th Gender: Female
Height: 165 cm Weight: 130 lbs
Nindo: "Blood is the result of hard work, pain is the antidote to the blood" Personality: Kohana is a very competitive girl. She likes to take challenges, especially intellectual based challenges and prefers to avoid a debate or fight whenever possible. Due to how intellectual she is, Kohana is extremely good with tactics and from time to time, can help lead a team. Her intellectual capabilities is limited due to her quiet and timid nature. Often, Kohana will close herself off from companions to strangers, in order to protect and avoid feisty situations. Her calm and collected behaviour often makes her appear almost emotionless, although she can be found releasing her emotions alone, at night.
Village: Hidden Sand Village; Sunagakure Rank: Genin First Class: Bloodline subclass Second Class: Medical ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Miyamoto clan - Seirei no Hogosha
Traits: • All members of this bloodline come from a branch of the Miyamoto clan. ( It does not mean you are from the same family, however. ) • Most techniques of the Miyamoto clan are known as konton [ soul release. ] • Miyamoto clan members have somewhat fragile bodies. ( Moderate physical defense. )
Benefits: • Miyamoto clan members have deep chakra pools. ( Chakra pool maximum +40. ) • Miyamoto clan members can perform eiseijutsu ( medical techniques ) with one hand.
Restrictions: • It is impossible for a Miyamoto clan member to link to his/herself. • Miyamoto clan members cannot learn Rigorous taijutsu or bukijutsu styles. • Up to two [2] ability increasing techniques can be active on a single target at once. • The same ability increasing technique cannot be active multiple times on a single target. • Please keep in mind the modifier of increases ( in ascending order ): Slight increase, moderate increase, sharp increase, great increase, and significant increase.
Chakra Pool: 330 Stamina Pool: 170 Chakra Element: {Pick only two. Suiton (Water) and Katon (Fire) Chakra Color: {Any color you desire) Chakra Materialization: Aura
Strengths: • Supporting team members (buffs, healing etc.) • Tactics Weaknesses: • Quiet and doesn't interact much • Long range combat Fears: • Being alone • Death
Class Disciplines : • Blood Knight: Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank. • Efficiency Expert: For every rank the user increases, they can choose 1 medical technique and perform it at half the cost, to a minimum of 5 chakra. Gennin can only choose techniques D rank and lower, Chuunin C rank and lower, Jounin B rank and lower, and Konin is A rank and lower. You may only at one time, only have 1 half cost technique per rank. To clarify, you may only have 1 D, 1 C, 1 B, 1 A. Can retrain into a different (or the same) jutsu if desired. Reductions: • Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster. • Learn Medical techniques one (1) post faster. Personal Attributes: • Increased health tank (can take more damage) • Bloodline techniques cost half, but remain at the same rank ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両{Money} 0 AC: {Advancement credit} 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 09 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 07 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Dual Large Fans Weapon Range: 70-80 feet max. Weapon Weight: 10 lbs Weapon Location: Back
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Kunai x5 • Shuriken x10
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
{Your first element's name} Suiton [ Water ] •
{Your second element's name} Katon [ Fire ] •
{Other jutsu type's name} Bloodline and Eiseijutsu • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • n/a ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {style} • n/a ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {style} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ The youngest of three daughters, Kohana is one of the daughters of a high ranking ninja, whom severs under the hokage. She is one of the smallest girls within the village and is well known for her petite figure. She carries usually large weapons, her signature fans and can be seen in a red patterned kimono. Her intellectual tactics have led to her to impress theorists and have made her known to tacticians within the sand village. Until recently, Kohana had no knowledge of battle and learnt the arts of jutsu at the age of fourteen. Kohana had also learnt various battle techniques, but was only limited to the fighting techniques of fans.
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Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2015 2:48 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Yuto Hakate Nickname: The White Wolf
Age: 17 Birthdate: May 30 Gender: Male
Height: 5' 11" Weight: 175lbs
Nindo: "Obey Orders Fully and Without Question." Personality: Yuto is the type of person to laugh, smile and joke around with those he calls friends or teammates, but deep inside he is a perfectionist. He is always striving to be the best at everything he does, thanks to his older brother, and always wants to show that he is capable of handling any mission given to him. He is extremely loyal to his Village and the Raikage as he is driven with the urge to protect his home with his life. He enjoys reading and training to his fullest extent as well as learning new things about the people he teams up with. He is the type of person to always think someone is an enemy but would never act upon that instinct unless threatened in any way. Mentioning his brother around him is taboo unleash you have information on him as he wishes to make his brother pay for killing their mother and bringing dishonor to the Village with his shamefull actions.
Village: Kumogakure Rank: Genin First Class: Bloodline Second Class: Bloodline ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Hakate
Chakra Pool: 260 Stamina Pool: 240 Chakra Element: Raiton, Katon Chakra Color: White Chakra Materialization: When he releases his chakra it arcs off him like lightining.
Strengths: • Ninjutsu • Close Combat Weaknesses: • Speaking about his Brother (tends to make him angry and anger leads to mistakes) • Genjutsu (if they know his back story about his mother and brother this can truly wreak his mind) Fears: • Spiders • Dishonoring his Kage
Class Disciplines : • Blood Bender: User receives and additional 3 custom bloodline techniques. To clarify, these are custom techniques that must involve and utilize the characters bloodline. • Blood Knight: Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank. Reductions: • Learns Bloodline Jutsu [ 2 ] posts faster • Learns Raiton Jutsu [ 1 ] post faster • Learns Ninjutsu [ 1 ] post faster Personal Attributes: • Lightning Speed: Due to his ability with Raiton Ninjutsu his cells have become use to the speed of electricity and such his speed is slightly increased. • Learns Ninjutsu [ 1 ] post faster ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 04 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Standard Issue Katana Weapon Range: 5ft Weapon Weight: 2lbs Weapon Location: Sheathed upon his back
Summoning Type: Summon Sage: Pacts:
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Kenai x5 • Shuriken x10
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Raiton •
Katon •
The Hakate Clan • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • {If none, remove section} ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ The childhood of Yuto
Yuto grew up in Kumogakure with his Father, Takeru Uchiha, his mother, Asa Hakate, and his older brother, Kenshin Uchiha. He took on the last name of his mother for the simple fact that he took after her when it came to bloodlines, hence why his last name was Hakate. While growing up he tried desperately to keep up with his brother in everything whether it be helping their father with the crops or helping his mother with the house, it didn't matter to him all that mattered was beating his brother. Then one day when Yuto was five his brother Kenshin now ten joined the Academy to take after their father and become a Shinobi of the Cloud. Trying desperately to keep up, Yuto began to practice techniques like shuriken training or stealth on his own but sadly failing. His brother wasn't in the academy for a month before his father was getting praise about him being a genius and prodigy of the Uchiha Clan. This news brought Yuto down slightly but, it was his mother that always kept his spirits up by tell him that his time to show his brother up was coming soon.
A year after his brother joined the academy he had graduated with honors as his teachers said he was ready to become a shinobi when he first walked in. Yuto's anger grew each and every day as his brother began taking on missions with a squad and even leading a few small ones here and there. On Yuto's eighth birthday his brother never showed as he was competing in the Chunnin exams and his father being so proud of his oldest left to watch him. His mother did her best to cheer him up but nothing worked as Yuto simply locked himself in his room and cried. About a year later his brother became a Jounin and an Anbu all at the sametime and this was when Yuto had enough. Gathering his things he left his home and ventured into the woods to find a place to train swearing he wouldn't return until he was better than his brother. It was here that he learned the truth.
Secrets Reveled
While wandering a path he heard a conversation going on in the distance as he noticed his mother and brother talking. She seemed distressed or angered he couldn't really tell until she drew a kunai and attacked her son. Kenshin easily dodged her attacks and disarmed her before grabbing her head and snapping her neck. Unable to contain what he just saw he screamed and ran back towards his home but his brother was indeed better as he caught his brother in the back with a kunai creating so much pain in Yuto he passed out on the ground. That night Kenshin vanished from the Village leaving Yuto and his mother dead or so he thought.
The next morning Yuto awoke in the hospital with his father outside the room. Two members of the Anbu were speaking with him about his brother and asked if he knew his whereabouts. Takeru simply shook his head before the two Anbu vanished and he returned to his younger sons room. He then informed him that his brother had gone rouge and what he saw last night was no lie his mother was dead. Yuto sat there in shock not moving, speaking, or even crying as he knew himself it was the truth he watched it happen. Later that evening, he decided he was going to get revenge upon his brother and without the approval of the nurses or his father he left the hospital and went home to gather some things and rest in his own bed. The moment day break came he was at the academy signing up and joining to learn how to become a strong shinobi.
Life in the Academy
Yuto quickly learned what he was doing wrong when it came to his shuriken training and quickly picked up on it. Like his brother he was a quick learner but his teachers knew better than to tell him that. He put his focus purely on training and getting stronger and as such developed faster than his brother or even his father had. His teachers however, kept stressing that he focused on the ethic of a shinobi and what the responsibilitiesof one entailed. Not wanting to turn out like his brother he agreed and took an extra class about shinobi ethics. It was here that he developed his nindo of "Obey Orders Fully and Without Question" which was something he began practicing more and more as he grew. He spent three years in the academy before he graduated at the age of twelve but he wasn't ready to become a full blown ninja yet. Declining the graduation for now he went to his father and asked him to take him into the forest and leave him there for five years so he can train in silence and to see if he could survive on his own with what he learned. His father reluctantly agreed and took his son deep into the woods and mountains before leaving him there.
On the day of his seventeenth birthday his father returned to the site where he left his son, only to find a cottage with a fire roaring inside. Knocking on the door, Yuto answered and nodded to his father as he knew it was time for him to join the ranks of Kumogakure and followed his father home leaving the fire to destroy his cottage behind them. Completing the graduation exam from the academy again without any error he graduated and took his papers. It was time for him to show his Village he is better than his brother.
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Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2015 5:40 pm
Your first PA needs slight modification to express how much it can be increased. A "slight" increase is free, but I believe you have to give up something for any more than that.
Also I think you can only start with one weapon.
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Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2015 5:48 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2015 7:03 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Damien James Brande Nickname: Damien // DJ
Age: Fourteen Birthdate: June Sixteenth Gender: Male
Height: 5 ' 11 Weight: 170
Nindo: " I have to give what i have taken... " Personality: Damien is a stoic and independent individual; though he is a really calm and collected boy his is trustworthy and reliable. He is determined to be different then his family... enough that he is willing to place himself in danger to place himself outside of the norm.
Village: Konohagakure Rank: Genin First Class: Sensory Class Second Class: Sensory Sub-Class ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: - Courage: +2 PA, 5 jutsu slots
Chakra Pool: 225 Stamina Pool: 25 Chakra Element: Wind Style (( Fuuton no Jutsu! )) Chakra Color: Colorless Chakra Materialization: Damiens chakra manifests like heat waves off hot pavement
Strengths: • Sensory Techniques • Wind Style Ninjutsu • Mid - Long Range Fighting Weaknesses: • Taijutsu ( Extreme Techniques ) • Elemental Opposites Fears: • Bugs • Losing more of his eyesight
Class Disciplines : • Resolution : - The user is more determined to get fine details from his sensory techniques, but in order to get this type of clarity the user's range of the technique is reduced by half. The user is able to discover type of technique that is about to be active(fuuin, genjutsu, ninjutsu, custom jutsu, complex tai and buki), even specifics such as Bloodline type and rank. Additionally, the user can gain similar information about any chakra source in their sensory technique's range, including what bloodline the person possesses, and how large their chakra pool is. • Zoom : - The user has a vast eye, able to quadruple the range of a given sensory technique, often allowing them to sense things even outside of the given area (across threads). This vast range, however, makes it difficult to detect fine details. The user is only able to know that chakra is there, or that chakra is being activated. Things like type of technique, rank, element, ect, are unknown to the user.
Reductions: • • Learn Ninjutsu one (1) post faster. • • Learn Genjutsu one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes: • High Resolution Picture(s) : - Damien though training with sensory techniques is able to use them with on hand sign, this gives him the ability to use them quickly to get important information. • Learns Sensory Techniques one (1) post faster • Learns Wind Style Ninjutsu One (1) post faster • With is speciality in Sensory Techniques, The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split with the sensory techniques. (( Currently 9 Ninjutsu with the PA: 9 Ninjutsu // 9 strictly Sensory Techniques ))
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両{Money} AC: {Advancement credit}
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: • Ninjutsu : : 00 // 09 • Sensory :: 00 // 09 • Genjutsu : : 00 // 03 (( +5 Jutsu Slots )) ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Weapon Range: Weapon Weight: Weapon Location:
Summoning Type: Summon Sage: Pacts:
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 1 Demon Windmill Shuriken • 10 Standard Shuriken
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
The Hurricane :: Fuuton no Jutsu :: Wind Release
The Sight :: Sensory :: • • • • • •
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u [[ Sound Genjutsu ]] •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
[[ Chapter One: "Brand-ed" ]]
Damien grew up in a family of Sensory Specialists, with their ability to track just about anything... this made the family proficient hunters and huntresses. They prided themselves on the fact that nothing really escaped them. When Damien was old enough they enrolled him into the Academy; as they never got a chance to live the shinobi lifestyle. He excelled and he knew that the legacy of his family as trackers would live on within him. He sought out to be the best in the class...
Now it was time that he go out into the world, loaded with knowledge and hungry for more.
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Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2015 9:11 am
I can tell you that the second Personal Attribute wouldn't be approved, but I'm not sure about the first one. In this guild we use certain modifiers to determine increases. They come in increments on 1/6 (I don't remember what they all are off hand, but they're in rules for PAs). The smallest increment is "slightly", and I believe that's the only one you can have for free. Anything more requires giving something up in exchange. Also, you can only start with one weapon.
Also, you didn't provide a chakra color. I don't see anything else though, so I'll tag Ayame as well. Just fix the aforementioned things. =)
Unless someone else says otherwise, you're good to go. Approved.
You're leaving me? T.T
Anyway, I'm not sure about your last attribute, so I will also leave you to Ayame.
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Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2015 1:27 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Kohana Tami Miyamoto Nickname: Tammy
Age: Sixteen Birthdate: May 25th Gender: Female
Height: 165 cm Weight: 130 lbs
Nindo: "Blood is the result of hard work, pain is the antidote to the blood" Personality: Kohana is a very competitive girl. She likes to take challenges, especially intellectual based challenges and prefers to avoid a debate or fight whenever possible. Due to how intellectual she is, Kohana is extremely good with tactics and from time to time, can help lead a team. Her intellectual capabilities is limited due to her quiet and timid nature. Often, Kohana will close herself off from companions to strangers, in order to protect and avoid feisty situations. Her calm and collected behaviour often makes her appear almost emotionless, although she can be found releasing her emotions alone, at night.
Village: Hidden Sand Village; Sunagakure Rank: Genin First Class: Bloodline subclass Second Class: Medical ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Miyamoto clan - Seirei no Hogosha
Traits: • All members of this bloodline come from a branch of the Miyamoto clan. ( It does not mean you are from the same family, however. ) • Most techniques of the Miyamoto clan are known as konton [ soul release. ] • Miyamoto clan members have somewhat fragile bodies. ( Moderate physical defense. )
Benefits: • Miyamoto clan members have deep chakra pools. ( Chakra pool maximum +40. ) • Miyamoto clan members can perform eiseijutsu ( medical techniques ) with one hand.
Restrictions: • It is impossible for a Miyamoto clan member to link to his/herself. • Miyamoto clan members cannot learn Rigorous taijutsu or bukijutsu styles. • Up to two [2] ability increasing techniques can be active on a single target at once. • The same ability increasing technique cannot be active multiple times on a single target. • Please keep in mind the modifier of increases ( in ascending order ): Slight increase, moderate increase, sharp increase, great increase, and significant increase.
Chakra Pool: 330 Stamina Pool: 170 Chakra Element: Suiton (Water) and Katon (Fire) Chakra Color: Red Chakra Materialization: Aura
Strengths: • Supporting team members (buffs, healing etc.) • Tactics Weaknesses: • Quiet and doesn't interact much • Long range combat Fears: • Being alone • Death
Class Disciplines : • Blood Knight: Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank. • Efficiency Expert: For every rank the user increases, they can choose 1 medical technique and perform it at half the cost, to a minimum of 5 chakra. Gennin can only choose techniques D rank and lower, Chuunin C rank and lower, Jounin B rank and lower, and Konin is A rank and lower. You may only at one time, only have 1 half cost technique per rank. To clarify, you may only have 1 D, 1 C, 1 B, 1 A. Can retrain into a different (or the same) jutsu if desired. Reductions: • Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster. • Learn Medical techniques one (1) post faster. Personal Attributes: • Increased health tank (can take more damage) • Increased speed so she can deliver more attacks (damage per attack is lower due to this) ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両{Money} 0 AC: {Advancement credit} 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 09 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 07 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Large Fan Weapon Range: 70-80 feet max. Weapon Weight: 10 lbs Weapon Location: Back
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Kunai x5 • Shuriken x10
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
{Your first element's name} Suiton [ Water ] •
{Your second element's name} Katon [ Fire ] •
{Other jutsu type's name} Bloodline and Eiseijutsu • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • n/a ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {style} • n/a ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {style} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ The youngest of three daughters, Kohana is one of the daughters of a high ranking ninja, whom severs under the hokage. She is one of the smallest girls within the village and is well known for her petite figure. She carries usually large weapons, her signature fans and can be seen in a red patterned kimono. Her intellectual tactics have led to her to impress theorists and have made her known to tacticians within the sand village. Until recently, Kohana had no knowledge of battle and learnt the arts of jutsu at the age of fourteen. Kohana had also learnt various battle techniques, but was only limited to the fighting techniques of fans.
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