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Try toning it down? I don't have any knowledge on the matter, but generally customs get denied when people try for toooooooo much. how do i tone this down with out having to destroy the base concept of it?
crying b]Character: Manfread (Hyuuga)
Technique Name: Thunder step
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu/ complex
Element: None
Description: (What it does) A complex taijutsu foot step technique, by weaving chakra in a complex pattern at the sole of the foot one can gain optimal footing to attack. From there by quickly hammering the foot into the ground Manny will speed forwards in a linear fashion, at speeds where the eyes of even the best may loose sight of him momentarily. The technique can be used in two ways, in the offencive way it will always set Manfread to set up for a well placed attack (if in range of target) no matter the position he is standing in. The Evasive method allows him to swiftly escape attack by moving in any one direction (linear pattern) to GTFO.
The technique can use up to 3 steps per chakra release (ie 20 chakra= up to 3 steps). Or 3 times over the next 2 posts (before the technique 'wears off' and has to be used again) in any sort of succession. If used in succession it requires a 1 post cool down, to to strain on the legs. The cool down can be by passed but the user risks breaking his legs. Although it is called thunder step it does not use lightning the reason it is thunder step is because of the sound of his foot to ground.
Distance Travelled per movement: Max distance travelled in one 'step' 50 feet, min that must be travelled in one 'step' 5 feet.
Although i do sort of understand where they coming from Q.Q
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