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 Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 12:28 pm
ForsakenSwordsman -Will the two groups meet back up ? Yes. -What is the meaning of the scripture? Give me a second. -Will Fisher get laid? XD Depends on if your kinky while you are typing. -Will Ty Keene get killed by a girl? Indeed.
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 1:05 pm
Chapter 24 online. The answer to the scripture thing that I promised is partly in this one, but will be fully revealed next time we meet Forian and co.
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 1:14 pm
Ah, I think I see where that scripture is going now... ninja
Shame to see Klaus die like that, but it kinda is his own fault there...
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 1:21 pm
Well Masamune welcome to Hades, Great chapter FS very captivating
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 1:24 pm
So, did everyone get that last chapter? It wasn't as well written as it could have been, but I think I got what I needed out of it.
As for Klaus, I hope I brought a little more sympathy to his character with his history etc.
Also, I should mention (Just in case) that Klaus is not supposed to be a representative of Masamunes personality, I mean Mas isn't a sexist crazy guy after all. I kind of just took varying amounts of your personalities and mixed them up a bit with this story (In Amicitia I tried to match what you acted like in the forums etc)
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 1:27 pm
ForsakenSwordsman So, did everyone get that last chapter? It wasn't as well written as it could have been, but I think I got what I needed out of it. As for Klaus, I hope I brought a little more sympathy to his character with his history etc. Also, I should mention (Just in case) that Klaus is not supposed to be a representative of Masamunes personality, I mean Mas isn't a sexist crazy guy after all. I kind of just took varying amounts of your personalities and mixed them up a bit with this story (In Amicitia I tried to match what you acted like in the forums etc) I think it was, pretty well written, as for the personalities, I didnt think that we were truly represented by our actions. I am not a thief (as far as you know ninja ), Masamune isnt mr. Sexist, egomaniacle moron and Draken is far from what Drakam has been classified as
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 1:32 pm
Sauvie ForsakenSwordsman So, did everyone get that last chapter? It wasn't as well written as it could have been, but I think I got what I needed out of it. As for Klaus, I hope I brought a little more sympathy to his character with his history etc. Also, I should mention (Just in case) that Klaus is not supposed to be a representative of Masamunes personality, I mean Mas isn't a sexist crazy guy after all. I kind of just took varying amounts of your personalities and mixed them up a bit with this story (In Amicitia I tried to match what you acted like in the forums etc) I think it was, pretty well written, as for the personalities, I didnt think that we were truly represented by our actions. I am not a thief (as far as you know ninja ), Masamune isnt mr. Sexist, egomaniacle moron and Draken is far from what Drakam has been classified as Cool. So what did you think of the sub plots within this chapter? -Klaus and his childhood -Klaus and the poisoning of Justina -Luo starts to be a little more arrogant in how she acts -Forian loves Luo, but she doesn't love him (according to Klaus) On a side note, it's very rare for me to put myself into my own story.
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 1:36 pm
-Klaus and his childhood made a lot sense, showing how he was molded into what he was
-Klaus's poisoning Justina made for an interesting twist and a good explanation on just how he knew the poison was in there
-Luo's arrogance fits with her position of knowledge. Knowledge=power and power corrupts
-Forian can do better than her wink
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 1:39 pm
Allwing -Klaus and his childhood made a lot sense, showing how he was molded into what he was -Klaus's poisoning Justina made for an interesting twist and a good explanation on just how he knew the poison was in there -Luo's arrogance fits with her position of knowledge. Knowledge=power and power corrupts -Forian can do better than her wink Lols, Forian needs to ask Keene and Silverman for help when it comes to girls. After all, they are the experts xd
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 1:41 pm
ForsakenSwordsman Allwing -Klaus and his childhood made a lot sense, showing how he was molded into what he was -Klaus's poisoning Justina made for an interesting twist and a good explanation on just how he knew the poison was in there -Luo's arrogance fits with her position of knowledge. Knowledge=power and power corrupts -Forian can do better than her wink Lols, Forian needs to ask Keene and Silverman for help when it comes to girls. After all, they are the experts xd One little word Mate; cooking. Dames dig a man who can cook 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 1:45 pm
Allwing ForsakenSwordsman Allwing -Klaus and his childhood made a lot sense, showing how he was molded into what he was -Klaus's poisoning Justina made for an interesting twist and a good explanation on just how he knew the poison was in there -Luo's arrogance fits with her position of knowledge. Knowledge=power and power corrupts -Forian can do better than her wink Lols, Forian needs to ask Keene and Silverman for help when it comes to girls. After all, they are the experts xd One little word Mate; cooking. Dames dig a man who can cook 3nodding Rofl, I'm going to write that into the story, as an explanation of why Keene became a cook in the first place. (Actually, Keene is one of the characters who needs some development, but there's time left yet)
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 2:15 pm
I died. xp
All I know is that I'm not last. I outlived one other person. blaugh
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 2:19 pm
Masamune 5.0 I died. xp All I know is that I'm not last. I outlived one other person. blaugh May your death serve as a grim reminder of the dangers of poorly placed mirrors. 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 2:23 pm
ForsakenSwordsman Masamune 5.0 I died. xp All I know is that I'm not last. I outlived one other person. blaugh May your death serve as a grim reminder of the dangers of poorly placed mirrors. 3nodding Poorly placed mirrors, huh? Hmm... ninja
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 2:26 pm
ForsakenSwordsman -Will Fisher get laid? I actually had a sex scene planned for two characters, but I think I will probably either remove it or tone it down xd . Oh man. I wonder what two characters you had planned. xd If you do take it out, I still want to read it, just for y'know. Records.
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