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 Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 8:58 am
Quote: Character: Miyamoto Bastet
Technique Name: Aruki no Jutsu (Walking Technique)
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Description: A Taijutsu technique using the ankles as the axis of movement. This change from the typical method of movement increases footwork speed to rival that of Shunshin. I think he meant this one.
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Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 1:51 pm
Shinsua [ Finger: } Approved.
[ Desin: }_____
[ Reduced Earth: } What exactly is the point of this then?
[ Barrier: } Approved.
[ Armor: } I'd really rather you not have this technique. As it is we're having complications with the Kaiser Fist style at this time.
[ Fall: }_____
[ Explosive Tendrils: } Mmm... the restriction ( last warning ) seems a bit wonky, but I suppose it works. Approved.
[ Mind Bending Performance: } If you shrink the recovery time to two days, I think it'll do. With that change, approved.
[ Regi: }_____
[ Mirror otW: } Element should just be "Bloodline." Approved.
[ House of Mirrors: } Should probably clarify or add into the description that they have to see their reflection in the mirror. With that change, approved.
[ Mirror World: } Aaaah... I think I have to deny this. Aside it being ridiculously powerful, you said in the description itself that it was based on another anime.
[ Reflection Glass: } You should note that it could still be used as a barrier to protect against taijutsu or bukijutsu- the attack will simply cause the mirror to shatter on top of them. Approved.
[ Perfect Prism: } The actual purpose of the technique needs clarification. Make it apparent what the attack part of it is.
[ Anbu: }_____
[ Bound with Shadows: } If you make it so he's immune to physical techniques, but can still be knocked out by elemental ninjutsu, it's fine. Though, you should also make sure you clarify how long you're in shadow form, and how long the opponent can be trapped. I'd probably say 5 for you, and 2 for the trap.
[ FtSoD: } If I'm not mistaken, this attack is redundant as the clan can already make shadow blades.
[ Creation of Shadows: } Change the duration to eight posts, and it's fine.
[ Licky: } W-what are you doing in here? You're a crew member girly. > . < yea after readin it myself, i dont like perfect prism or mirror world anyway so i got rid of them but i edited the other three so it should be good
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Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 2:07 pm
[ Desin: } Footwork and actual speed are two different things, though. I don't believe his technique actually increases his speed, just his maneuverability.
[ Regi: } I think you accidentally put "any rank A technique" on Reflection Glass. Mmm... aside that, I think I'd prefer it if it read "and amplify its power moderately." That prevents it from having a rank cap, only slightly reduces its power, and keeps it more balanced. To be honest, I think you could probably have the technique B ranked, if you wanted.
*Shakes head*
S-so... yeah... the other two are approved. If you want to edit Reflection Glass more, just repost it. > _ <
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 3:51 am
Oath : This one too too. Ergo War
Character: Miyamoto Bastet
Technique Name: Ugoki no Jutsu (Movement Technique)
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Description: A Taijutsu technique using the wrists as the axis of movement. This change from the typical method of movement increases the speed of the hands and arms to rival that of Shunshin.
Shin : Hmm, I've never though of it that way. Then my technique is indeed a bit different, basically it allows my entire body to move at shunshin speeds. Not just maneuverability.
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 6:20 pm
Boop boop... well, approved. P:
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Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 3:36 pm
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Are's Son
Rank: X
Type: Eisejutsu
Element:
Description: James uses his knowlege of eisejutsu and genjutsu to unlease a chakra infused battle cry. This battle cry channels Chakra over the paths of Genjutsu to the most primal fear center of the targets brains. Creating the same effect as a lone man hearing a wolfpack in the woods. The fear that drives animals over cliffs, or a deer to freeze in headlights. In Converse allies in sight of James are bolstered by the sight of James wrathful form. And will be shaken from doubt
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Sliding Side Kick from Hell
Rank: X (A mabye)
Type: Taijutsu, simple and complex.
Element:
Description: James slides on one foot towards the target anything from an Inch to five feet, and chambers a knee as high and tight to his chest as possible. Unleashing a powerful and fast straight kick. Arguably the most powerful kick in real martial arts this maneuver uses all of James impressive strength and knowledge of martial arts. The impact is horrendous, able to launch a man for yards and rupture organs. The blow delivered by this kick is a shockwave a "soft energy" causing hydrostatic shock through the target, shattering any hard surface and in a single blow. (This strength description is for James at Jounin level which is technically Konin strength I would like to increase power as speed and strength increases)
When chakra is added to the mix this technique has the power to blow through almost anything under indestructible status. Smashing holes in concrete bunkers and tearing men in half.
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Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 4:29 pm
Winterwolf78
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Are's Son
Rank: X
Type: Eisejutsu
Element:
Description: James uses his knowlege of eisejutsu and genjutsu to unlease a chakra infused battle cry. This battle cry channels Chakra over the paths of Genjutsu to the most primal fear center of the targets brains. Creating the same effect as a lone man hearing a wolfpack in the woods. The fear that drives animals over cliffs, or a deer to freeze in headlights. In Converse allies in sight of James are bolstered by the sight of James wrathful form. And will be shaken from doubt
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Sliding Side Kick from Hell
Rank: X (A mabye)
Type: Taijutsu, simple and complex.
Element:
Description: James slides on one foot towards the target anything from an Inch to five feet, and chambers a knee as high and tight to his chest as possible. Unleashing a powerful and fast straight kick. Arguably the most powerful kick in real martial arts this maneuver uses all of James impressive strength and knowledge of martial arts. The impact is horrendous, able to launch a man for yards and rupture organs. The blow delivered by this kick is a shockwave a "soft energy" causing hydrostatic shock through the target, shattering any hard surface and in a single blow. (This strength description is for James at Jounin level which is technically Konin strength I would like to increase power as speed and strength increases)
When chakra is added to the mix this technique has the power to blow through almost anything under indestructible status. Smashing holes in concrete bunkers and tearing men in half.
Both are denied because they are WAY to OP
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Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 7:07 pm
Azeiel The Fallen Winterwolf78
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Are's Son
Rank: X(not sure)
Type: Eisejutsu
Element:
Description: James uses his knowlege of eisejutsu and genjutsu to unlease a chakra infused battle cry. This battle cry channels Chakra over the paths of Genjutsu to the most primal fear center of the targets brains. Creating the same effect as a lone man hearing a wolfpack in the woods. The fear that drives animals over cliffs, or a deer to freeze in headlights. In Converse allies in sight of James are bolstered by the sight of James wrathful form. And will be shaken from doubt. both effects last four post and vary by rank
Gennin-Crap there pants and cower in fear
Chinnin-freeze up
Jounin- Shaken
Konin-shaken one post
Sannin-Ignore
As James rank increases the jounin scale moves up. meaning eventually when James is a Sannin then sannin will be shaken for 4 post
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Sliding Side Kick from Hell
Rank: X (A mabye)
Type: Taijutsu, simple and complex.
Element:
Description: James slides on one foot towards the target anything from an Inch to five feet, and chambers a knee as high and tight to his chest as possible. Unleashing a powerful and fast straight kick. Arguably the most powerful kick in real martial arts this maneuver uses all of James impressive strength and knowledge of martial arts. The impact is horrendous, able to launch a man for yards and rupture organs. The blow delivered by this kick is a shockwave a "soft energy" causing hydrostatic shock through the target, shattering any hard surface and in a single blow. (This strength description is for James at Jounin level I would like to increase power for the simple version as speed and strength increases)
When chakra is added to the mix this technique has the power to blow through almost anything under indestructible status. Smashing holes in concrete bunkers and tearing men in half. similar in power to a kaiser cannon.
This is a one move jutsu not a continuing effect
This any better. Considering I can knock a 240 pound man three yards in real life with a side kick.
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Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 7:26 pm
Winterwolf78 Azeiel The Fallen Winterwolf78
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Are's Son
Rank: X(not sure)
Type: Eisejutsu
Element:
Description: James uses his knowlege of eisejutsu and genjutsu to unlease a chakra infused battle cry. This battle cry channels Chakra over the paths of Genjutsu to the most primal fear center of the targets brains. Creating the same effect as a lone man hearing a wolfpack in the woods. The fear that drives animals over cliffs, or a deer to freeze in headlights. In Converse allies in sight of James are bolstered by the sight of James wrathful form. And will be shaken from doubt. both effects last four post and vary by rank
Gennin-Crap there pants and cower in fear
Chinnin-freeze up
Jounin- Shaken
Konin-shaken one post
Sannin-Ignore
As James rank increases the jounin scale moves up. meaning eventually when James is a Sannin then sannin will be shaken for 4 post
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Sliding Side Kick from Hell
Rank: X (A mabye)
Type: Taijutsu, simple and complex.
Element:
Description: James slides on one foot towards the target anything from an Inch to five feet, and chambers a knee as high and tight to his chest as possible. Unleashing a powerful and fast straight kick. Arguably the most powerful kick in real martial arts this maneuver uses all of James impressive strength and knowledge of martial arts. The impact is horrendous, able to launch a man for yards and rupture organs. The blow delivered by this kick is a shockwave a "soft energy" causing hydrostatic shock through the target, shattering any hard surface and in a single blow. (This strength description is for James at Jounin level I would like to increase power for the simple version as speed and strength increases)
When chakra is added to the mix this technique has the power to blow through almost anything under indestructible status. Smashing holes in concrete bunkers and tearing men in half. similar in power to a kaiser cannon.
This is a one move jutsu not a continuing effect
This any better. Considering I can knock a 240 pound man three yards in real life with a side kick.All custom jutsus are on hold for now pending a discussion in the admin chat about this sort of thing
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 12:37 pm
Character: Aki
Technique Name: tendril reconfiguration
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: maruton or bloodline
Description: going off the same bases as His growth jutsu aki without handsign tells his body to take the shape of these different animals.
Hawk. ability flying able to breath fire for a c amount of chakra. also more chakra added hotter fire.
Snake. ability mobility increased along with the obvious dodge ability. a bite that has no poison but is imbued with lightning so it causes paralysis to the affected limb. C rank amount of chakra.
Cheetah. ability is that it increases Aki speed exponentially and also has a fury swipe that is imbued with wind so it has an advantage with cutting and range. if the attacks miss they keep going for 6 feet. the attack is a C amount of chakra each swing.
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 12:49 pm
Character: Zetsu Uchiha
Technique Name: Hounds Of Horror
Rank: B if no element is used, A if and element is used
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton normally, Katon or Raiton when upgraded
Description: The User after focusing his chakra [1 post] would summon a pack of four wolves. These wolves are not necessarily strong as they are annoying. Each wolf is about the speed of a Jounin but the strength of chunnin. They would ruthlessly hunt down the opponent the user is fighting or opponents in chance he is out numbered. These wolves only last for a total of five post and can be summoned three times per battle. If ungraded the become immune to that chakra nature and ones that would help it [ex. fire becomes immune to wind and fire but is weak to earth and water while lightning does half.]
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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2011 2:12 pm
Character: Akane Haruka
Technique Name: Hātosutorēji [Heart Storage]
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu Bloodline
Element: N/A
Description: This skill involves the hiding of one of the five hearts at his disposal. By taking a limp off and implanting a heart within the limb, he can then leave the limb and heart in an area away from him. This removes a limb from the user but grows vital to the life of a Joingu. If all of the hearts within the main body are destroyed, this heart will activate and keep them alive. Of course their main body will not be able to survive long due to lose of hearts, it will die off. But with the use of walking limb the user can literally pull the Heart that's in storage to a host, or body and remake themselves. The limbs that are taken with this skill can be replaced with fakes. If the Heart in Storage is destroyed, the limb will lose life and the Jiongu will know of the destroyed heart away from him. This technique can only be used twice within the whole life of the character. Anymore times and the heart will cease to beat, no matter if it's a new heart or old.
Character: Akane Haruka
Technique Name: Aisuru Ningyō [Loved Puppet Technique]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu, Kujutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The skill is quite simple, int the times of a heart leaving the body of a user, Joingu user, it may implant itself in a Puppet and make the tendrils spread through the inside of the puppet, creating a puppet body for themselves. This can be used in unison with Hātosutorēji [Heart Storage Technique] or the Jouju no Omoi [ Realization of the Heart Technique] to produce a weapon or a life vessel.
Character: Akane Haruka
Technique Name: Elemental Thread
Rank: C, B
Type: Ninjutsu, Bloodline
Element: Various
Description: The technique is a basic mixture between the elements and the basic Thread created from the Jiongu's body. Making a current of an element run through the thread and can effect anything it touches. If Fire is put into the thread it can create light and may burn victims. Lightning can shock or immobilize weak enemies. Wind could speed up the movement of the thread and make it much more devastating. Earth could make the Thread tougher and more durable and harder to cut. Water element can create an extra extension on the thread creating a massive amounts of branches off the single thread. You could also build up the various elements but things such as Wind and Earth, or Fire and Water cannot mix.
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Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2011 1:35 pm
Crew have agreed to these limitations, if you're still interested:
Are's Son: S-ranked to prevent spamming, & no scaling up with rank increases.
Sliding Side Kick from Hell: B-ranked Oukashou, but with a foot instead of a hand.
Tendril reconfiguration: Requirement that at least the corresponding mask-element be attached to the specific animal. (i.e. Katon mask to the Hawk, etc) The word 'exponentially' is not regarded as applicable anymore, so it shall have to be removed.
Hounds Of Horror: There is a non-agreement in the elemental immunity, but the 1/2 damage seems fine. Summoning them thrice per battle is also a bit much, so an 8 post cooldown must be added. (from time of summoning)
Azzurro Inferni, I'm presenting your jutsus to the crew right now, so it'll be atleast a day or two for discussion.
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Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 8:11 am
AandOE Crew have agreed to these limitations, if you're still interested:
Are's Son: S-ranked to prevent spamming, & no scaling up with rank increases.
Sliding Side Kick from Hell: B-ranked Oukashou, but with a foot instead of a hand.
Tendril reconfiguration: Requirement that at least the corresponding mask-element be attached to the specific animal. (i.e. Katon mask to the Hawk, etc) The word 'exponentially' is not regarded as applicable anymore, so it shall have to be removed.
Hounds Of Horror: There is a non-agreement in the elemental immunity, but the 1/2 damage seems fine. Summoning them thrice per battle is also a bit much, so an 8 post cooldown must be added. (from time of summoning)
Azzurro Inferni, I'm presenting your jutsus to the crew right now, so it'll be atleast a day or two for discussion. If you guys are still speaking about my jutsu's, I could add in that in Heart Storage [I'm guessing tha'ts the one with issues] it takes, 75 or more chakra with it that the main body cannot produce again until it is reunited with the heart or the body is destroyed?
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Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 10:38 pm
Well, the Heart Storage is getting conflicting reviews. Some want to know how a heart & limb are going to be 'fed' during storage so as to not wilt & die, some want to know a time and/or distance limit, & still others want to know if the usage of 'twice' is per heart or overall.
With the Loved Puppet, many seem to think that this is a way to control many, many puppets all at once, including those who Hitokugutsu themselves. If you limit it to just 1 non-hitokugutsu puppet per heart, & the puppet's special abilities are nulled (due to the hearts not knowing Kugutsu), then it'll be approved.
With the Elemental Thread, they'd like it so that the threads can only have the element(s) to which they are attached. ex. Katon mask = Katon thread effect. A maximum of 2 elements per thread, irregardless of combination, would be enough. Lastly, they'd like for a time limit to be applied, for effect duration.
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