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 Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 3:58 pm
STARDUST!!! WHEN. WILL. YOU. NEXT. POST???!!!!???
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Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 4:00 pm
Maybe I needed to be more specific, under Fairytale Appearance, the second word is Jazmin rather than Jasmine. After this, you wait for Elainee to take a look herself and see if there's anything more to add. If she doesn't post in two days time, then a mod (which is either me or Shauna) will give you the go ahead.
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Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 4:04 pm
I thought you meant the top name part. Sorry. I fixed it.
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Posted: Thu Jan 06, 2011 1:20 pm
dragonhealer STARDUST!!! WHEN. WILL. YOU. NEXT. POST???!!!!??? I'm working on it. Promise! Things have just been really hectic and I don't want to post anything that's crap. I promise that I'll have stuff up by tonight, tomorrow at the latest. *Edit 5:20 pm EST* Dragonhealer, you will be highly pleased to find that I posted. Again, sorry it's taken so long. Oh! And I did use some fencing terms in my post. I'm not sure if you're familiar with them, so here's a link that has all the terms that I used and then some. Fencing terms
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Posted: Thu Jan 06, 2011 5:45 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 06, 2011 7:22 pm
Three things I must mention:
1) I am sorry for my relatively short post for Sierra. There wasn't much to do for Sierra except say "come in."
2) I talked to Jokerman earlier and what was written in my post was agreed upon by the both of us. I got his permission to make Schraeder sound a little off and get him in the room.
3) School is about to begin for me on Monday so my posts will be a bit slower. I apologize for that. sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Jan 06, 2011 7:32 pm
What about the post for MARTY?
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Posted: Thu Jan 06, 2011 8:46 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 06, 2011 8:50 pm
YES! You are the best ISA!
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2011 2:56 pm
You know, I have to wonder how Sierra gained Marcel's trust. Because as Marcel grows into a more and more reclusive personality...it seems as though their friendship would have to be based on more than similar circumstances. Or at least on Marcel's part.
I mean, I would think that he knows that no one has the 'perfect' childhood. And because of that he would be somewhat immune to it. Somewhat empathic, but still immune considering things just happens sometimes. I don't know.
Sometimes when I'm typing for Marcel...stuff just seems to fly right out from under my fingers. And before I know it I'm making long involved paragraphs from something as simple as the feeling he gets from spilling a cup of coffee. Something must be wrong with me! sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2011 3:07 pm
No! Nothing is wrong with you! That just means that you are a good writer who understands her characters!
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2011 3:46 pm
Really? That's good at least. Because I was getting worried about such a deep involvement in a Character that was just disconnected pieces of emotion shoved into a somewhat human shell. I mean, when I first thought of his personality....I don't think that I completely imagined him as he is right now. He kinda...grew that way. And quickly too.
I guess I just started to really think that maybe somebody who goes through things like that....just wouldn't be completely okay. Even if that person is stable, there's still a potential for that person to break. If only slightly. There's certain things that they wouldn't be able to do as easily. Things that most people wouldn't even think of in the run of a day. And even putting deeper thought into that, makes me consider how he would react to something as simple as spilling a cup of coffee. Would be remember something deeper? Try to cover up his disappointment in a stoic facade? Or just burst in anger?
If this is what being a writer is about, I don't think I could completely handle it. There's just too many questions.
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2011 8:05 pm
Hey, so... Am I accepted? I've been waiting for a few days and no one got back to me on that one.
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Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2011 8:16 am
OMG, I'M SO SORRY.
Here's my list of reasons I didn’t check Gaia.
Wends, I was dying of tiredness. Not a very good one, but I even missed Church because it was so bad, and I never miss a Wends service (sun, that’s another story)
I'm also in a huge religious event called Youth Quake Live, so Thursday I had rehearsal and after rehearsal, I had to go to a dance concert because I go to an art school and I have to go to a show outside and inside the school every nine weeks.
And Friday, i performed in Youth Quake.
Now, Mango;
I LOVED THE BIO! loved loved loved loved, I mean, the flow was perfect. The story was entertaining, and she's developed. Thank you for doing such a great job.
The appearance section was rough, but that is the hardest part to make flow. Therefore, you are accepted.
edit;
Elliptic, seriously, being a writer can be hard. Characters just grow into their own beings. I mean, when I write for my baby Mitsukai, I am so attached to her. I mean, I’ve even cried while writing for her. And, you can’t even control them really, even if you work your but off to form a plot, it still bends and shapes as it wishes. But, isn’t that the best part of being a writer?
Isa, I love you, I mean love love love love love. Thank you for being an awesome mod and helping make the profiles better. I mean, thanks a ton.
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Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2011 9:39 am
Elliptic, you are an amazing writer and your insecurities about it makes it even more obvious that you are. I never have your problems because I have a difficult time making my characters come to life. (Jealous writer is jealous)
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