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I'm willing to say it can at the very least deal moderate damage to A rank barriers and severly damage B ranked barriers.

In some cases this technique cannot break bones, I'll try to look up Bloodlines that grant extra durability as a trait and write up the damage they would receive from it's use such as the Kaguya.

B ranked techniques are apart of a Jounin's arsenal of the jutsu. I'd exspect an offensive jutsu used by Jounin to do more than just 'knock people over'. I'd exspect some visible damage after being hit by a B-rank Jutsu such as broken bones, deep cuts, ect. I mean some C ranked jutsu do more than 'knock people over' why can't a B rank jutsu do the same?

I tried to implement a time frame for it's usage based on the Anime/Manga which stated it could only be used within five second intervals (which is pretty short). Instead I can't use it every post there must be at least one post between it's uses. If you think I should extend it then sure.

Also this is a Bloodline jutsu by the way belonging to the Rinnegan, I'm just trying to add some mechanics into it. In the Anime/Manga it's strong enough to dissipate a Rasenshruiken, which is, at the very least, an S+ jutsu. It IS a pretty powerful jutsu and I know there is going to be alot of work trying to legalize it. However I don't believe it should be an A rank technique, but I do have an A rank version that I may design in the future.

I can lessen the range to 20-25 meters but if so the closer an enemy is to the attacks origin the more damage it will deal. So if somebody gets hit by this point blank I don't really think they should be able to get up after getting hit by this, especially since it could potentially cave in their chest at such a range. This is supposed to be a pretty destructive jutsu so I believe most structures should be obliterated or at least critically damaged after getting hit by this unless it's made of metal or something.... But even metal would get dented by it at the very least.

sweatdrop I think my description may have confused you, i must have worded it wrong. Shinra Tense is an arced wave, pretty much like a half circle traveling outwards. The width extends as it gets farther away but the damage lessens.

Alright here is a range system, let's see how it works;

1-3 Meters (Severe)- Strong enough to pulverize a large boulder or any heavy stone structure and deal severe damage to a victims skeletal structure and serious bruising. A ranked barriers receive substantial damage, B ranked barriers seriously damaged.

4-10 meters(Serious)-Strong enough to crush medium sized structures the size of a horse into smaller rocks. A victim will often suffer from broken bones and moderate bruising and will be pushed back 30 meters unless stopped by an outside force. Wooden structures will be destroyed at this range but A ranked structures receive little damage while B ranked barriers receive moderate damage.

11-16 meters-Stone structures receive minimal damage while wooden structures begin to fall apart and collapse. Victims suffer from moderate bruising and will be pushed by 20 meters. A ranked structures are unharmed and B ranked structures receive minimal damage.

16-25 meters-Wooden structures will still start to collaspe and suffer from some strain. Victims receive light bruising and wil be pushed 10 meters away. C ranked structures receive heavy damage only, B & A ranked structures receive no damage.

Well I don't know too much about physics so how would you describe the 'firing of a wave that doesn't rebound against me;'.

I thought that I understood the 'exciting of molecules' well enough to use it here but I was unaware it had a rebound affect. Woud saying the 'violent acceleration of molecules in a certain direction' be more appropriate in describing the jutsu?

I'm still not seeing how the technique is THAT powerful when I've already agreed to lessen it's force to the range it is encountered, especially since some other B ranked techniques can deal more damage that it can with some unspecified ranges.

I'm ready to deal with anyone I have to in order to approve this jutsu. It's already a promised bloodline technique for the Rinnegan but the description is less than a sentence long, so I think that actually approving THIS jutsu to be better than:


The parts of the jutsu I DONT plan on compromising on (but if a good point is made I may relent):
Current Attack Strength: I've already limited it's damage to range, what more can you want in terms of strength?

'Prep Time': In the manga/anime this move is initiated without any handseals but can only be used every five seconds. In order to comply with rules I've already said that it can only be used every other post but IS STILL a B-rank technique for a Chuunin level character so it won't be used too often. For preparation I still don't want to initiate handseals into the jutsu but the user must at least MENTION channeling chakra for the technique one post prior to it's usage.

Parts that I can try to compromise on;
Range: I'm willing to reduce the range to a minimum of 15 meters BUT the attack damage but increase if this is done. The farther away a victim is from the origin the less damage they receive.

Enemy Modifiers: If you can give me a proper plan on Shinra Tense's effects against modifiers then I will try to write up a better description of it's effects. You brought up the Kaguya earlier and it's effect on metal but I plan on Shinra Tensei being strong enough to damage both structures at a close range. If you know enough about force mabye you can tell me how much pressure in pounds is nessecary to break/damage wood,metal, bones, and other structures Shinra Tensei may encounter.

Hahaha >.>

Deil Shinra Tensei is 'Almighty Push'! Bansho Ten'nin the opposite effect of the jutsu >.<. And nobody is a qualified expert on the Rinnegan, it has one of the least mechanics for all the canon kekkei genkai.

RPC Name: Kaiji Kuragari
Jutsu Name: Clay Creation
Rank: D-rank, Kekkei Genkai (Exploding Clay)
Description: By using the mouths in the users hands, they eat a handful of dirt. By kneading chakra and saliva into the dirt over time it can be turned into clay. (3 posts)

Jutsu Name: Exploding Clay C1 Bubble
Rank: D-rank, Kekkei Genkai (Exploding Clay)
Description: By eating a piece of clay the user can blow a large bubble of exploding clay, similar to chewing gum. This bubble will stick to anything it touches and can be detonated like normal clay. The only drawback at it can not be guided, so it is best used at close range.

RPC Name:Kingu Shisui
RPC Rank:Chuunin

Name of Jutsu: Shinra Tense & Bansho Ten'nin
Type of Jutsu:Ninjutsu
Element: Yin-Yang
Chakra Cost: C-B
Range of Jutsu: 15 meters
Description:
Shinra Tensei negates the mass of all objects caught within a subtle alteration of gravitational forces. Shinra Tensei is also hard to detect, unless a victim is capable of sensing gravitational forces and the manipulations of said forces. Otherwise an enemy would have to judge the attack by the trademark gesture required to initiate the invisible explosion of kinetic energies.

The repulsor like function of Shinra Tensei classifies it as a higher tier technique, thanks to it's ability to fracture or break bone, stone, wood, or brick. The strength of the technique is determined by it's chakra output. The most common chakra output is equivalent to a C rank jutsu and while still capable of throwing opponents a few yards away, only bruises opponents. The most damage received by a C rank Shinra Tensei will probably cause a minor fracture and throw the opponent away at high speeds. C rank Shinra Tensei can only be used every other post.

The B rank Shinra Tensei is the lethal version, capable of breaking stone, bone, cement, or brick with ease. Most Earth Release defences of equal rank will be destroyed and victims will most likely break a few bones after being hit. B rank Shinra Tensei is visible as a ripple through the air, allowing only the smallest of time frame to perceive a threat and react. Moving in a set direction and noticing a B rank Shinra Tensei incoming will make the technique nearly impossible to dodge if they are moving at high speeds. This is because most ninja cannot move at high speeds and notice a fast technique appear right in front of them and still be able to notice the ripple in the air and redirect themselves. At least without the Sharingan or near perfect reflexes. B rank Shinra Tensei can only be used once every two posts. With the ability to manipulate gravity most users of this technique are incredibly hard to fight.

The closer an enemy is to the origin of the attack, the more damage received. Shinra Tensei can take the shape of an omnidirectional blast, directional pulses, or explosion of air within the range of the technique [15 meters].

Clans with enhanced durability such as the Kaguya only receiving minor bruising from the C rank level, and minor fractures from the B rank. However this is only when they have enough chakra to reinforce their bones. If the Kaguya has less chakra than the user they receive damage as if they were a normal ninja. With equal chakra they receive minor brusing and minor fractures. Kaguya's with higher chakra levels receive only bruising.

In other cases Shinra Tensei can only dent metal, but if metal receives the blast point blank the dent may be bigger. Shinobi with durability as a modifier receive equal benefits to a Kaguya if their durability modifier is a primary strength.

Bansho Ten'nin drags enemies or objects from 15 meters away towards the user. The strength of Bansho Ten'nin is great enough to lift objects over three hundred pounds and bringing them towards the user. If the victim has a strengh modifier that is great than the user they aren't lifted off their feet and dragged like a chess piece towards the user. Instead they are slowly dragged along the ground, giving them enough time to tether themselves down.