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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 9:24 am
Hey, your clan sounds epic especially considering the amount of work put into it that you mentioned! What village is it aimed for out of curiosity? [I'm guessing Kiri?] Also I realise this is really bad timing especially considering the amount of work you've put into it so far but we just introduced the rule that you have to be an academy graduate and level 5 to get a clan passed... I mean, flavour guidelines are okay (clan dress, customs, maybe a clan household), but actual system-related bonuses, penalties, custom jutsus etc. fall under the approvals section and so also to this new rule. I recommend to just make a student and start RPing wherever, and if you need to refer to the clan, just do so flavour-wise. Until he/she becomes a genin and then you can go wild XD Cos shinobi usually start learning their clan skills when they reach genin, right? I was gonna suggest making the character the first of his/her clan but you mentioned you had multiple generations so yea... hahaha. But yea, can't wait to see your character(s)! edit: Dang, Proto beat me to it... I realise that this announcement may be quite a blow if you've been working hard on it >.< She kinda does have a point about the Mizukage thing though though I wouldn't see a problem with it if it fits. Also, really unrelated but has anyone here heard of Dangan Ronpa?
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 9:25 am
Reservoir of Memory Qyp Reservoir of Memory Qyp Reservoir of Memory Qyp Should point out... bijuu are banned. The story also has the Kyuubi... the Fox... Kurama... in... Kiri? That doesn't work at all in this guild yah know... or in canon even... I was told the demons were destroyed over 600 years ago, but not that they were destroyed directly after canon, I was assuming some intervening time had passed between Naruto and the demons being destroyed. The bio allows for approximately 700 years worth of time. Doesn't really matter... Unless Kouri says otherwise... I do not think anyone will want you to have Bijuu as the means to your clan's power... if I read it correctly. Banned stuff means banned. Even if they were around for a certain time in our guild's canon... doesn't mean you can warp it to your own means. If they were their in our main timeline... in our stories... then I would say you can't do that. People will be pulling your clan apart, just do not get angry, mmmk? It's how we get it done and dusted. Make sure it can fit. But the bijuu... yeah... you won't get much positive feedback with that... Speaking of warping stories... I haven't read it thoroughly... but I was told you put down some members had been Mizukage? I do not think you can put that in there... Like... me and Naru Tai made a clan called Sandaa... I came up with the story mainly, he did the stats. But what I did is... the clan's Kekkei Genkai went dorement since the time of the Rikudo Sennin, it appeared once n his time, and then just poofed... and then suddenly the current Raikage, when he was younger, discovered by accident he could do it. So didn't interfere with anything already done... this clan was just in the background until the current Raikage became a powerful hero figure. So yeah... also... some new rules... are posted too... No, the bloodline has nothing to do with the demons, it was just a bit of the back ground on the characters themselves who are a part of the bloodline. I didn't think one Mizukage from over 600 years ago for a span of less then 50 years would disturb anyone. And pardon me but I find you manner extremely condescending and abrasive, and I would appreciate a touch of civility since I, to the extent of my knowledge have done nothing to offend you since this is our first time speaking. I will continue working on it and when I am done I will submit it to the will of the one who does approvals, but as it stand I would appreciate if you would not stand there offering nothing constructive only negative censure. Eh? I am just trying to help... EDIT: The Guild Veterans are the Approvals Board. They are the "experts" on the system and all that. They will... pick your clan apart and critique it piece by piece. I appreciate that changes may have to be made but what I don't appreciate is you continuing to say that what I have made will be torn apart, as if there are no redeeming traits to it. I am sorry but you do not seem to have read it thoroughly if you thought it was based on the power of the demons, and if you would kindly stop judging it until you have read it well enough to understand it I would appreciate it. Apologies... I mean they will quote you, and then in sections, tell you what they think needs changing. That is what I mean by picking it a part. But under the new rules that we have been making since before you joined... this isn't some personal attack... you need to have a single character graduate the Academy and be level 5+ to submit anything for approval. And that character can be clanless, or use an existing clan that has it own thread in the Master Clan Directory forum.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 9:27 am
kouri-chan_xx Hey, your clan sounds epic especially considering the amount of work put into it that you mentioned! What village is it aimed for out of curiosity? [I'm guessing Kiri?] Also I realise this is really bad timing especially considering the amount of work you've put into it so far but we just introduced the rule that you have to be an academy graduate and level 5 to get a clan passed... I mean, flavour guidelines are okay (clan dress, customs, maybe a clan household), but actual system-related bonuses, penalties, custom jutsus etc. fall under the approvals section and so also to this new rule. I recommend to just make a student and start RPing wherever, and if you need to refer to the clan, just do so flavour-wise. Until he/she becomes a genin and then you can go wild XD Cos shinobi usually start learning their clan skills when they reach genin, right? I was gonna suggest making the character the first of his/her clan but you mentioned you had multiple generations so yea... hahaha. But yea, can't wait to see your character(s)! edit: Dang, Proto beat me to it... I realise that this announcement may be quite a blow if you've been working hard on it >.< She kinda does have a point about the Mizukage thing though though I wouldn't see a problem with it if it fits. Also, really unrelated but has anyone here heard of Dangan Ronpa? I would be more then happy to start on a Genin, and I already spoke to Oto's Kage.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 9:28 am
Reservoir of Memory kouri-chan_xx Hey, your clan sounds epic especially considering the amount of work put into it that you mentioned! What village is it aimed for out of curiosity? [I'm guessing Kiri?] Also I realise this is really bad timing especially considering the amount of work you've put into it so far but we just introduced the rule that you have to be an academy graduate and level 5 to get a clan passed... I mean, flavour guidelines are okay (clan dress, customs, maybe a clan household), but actual system-related bonuses, penalties, custom jutsus etc. fall under the approvals section and so also to this new rule. I recommend to just make a student and start RPing wherever, and if you need to refer to the clan, just do so flavour-wise. Until he/she becomes a genin and then you can go wild XD Cos shinobi usually start learning their clan skills when they reach genin, right? I was gonna suggest making the character the first of his/her clan but you mentioned you had multiple generations so yea... hahaha. But yea, can't wait to see your character(s)! edit: Dang, Proto beat me to it... I realise that this announcement may be quite a blow if you've been working hard on it >.< She kinda does have a point about the Mizukage thing though though I wouldn't see a problem with it if it fits. Also, really unrelated but has anyone here heard of Dangan Ronpa? I would be more then happy to start on a Genin, and I already spoke to Oto's Kage. Academy first... not RP Academy... but like... your character learning Bushin, Henge, etc.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 9:29 am
Qyp Academy first... not RP Academy... but like... your character learning Bushin, Henge, etc. Not a problem. I am more then happy to start at the beginning.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 9:30 am
Reservoir of Memory Qyp Academy first... not RP Academy... but like... your character learning Bushin, Henge, etc. Not a problem. I am more then happy to start at the beginning. Thats the spirit ;D
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 9:30 am
Reservoir of Memory kouri-chan_xx Hey, your clan sounds epic especially considering the amount of work put into it that you mentioned! What village is it aimed for out of curiosity? [I'm guessing Kiri?] Also I realise this is really bad timing especially considering the amount of work you've put into it so far but we just introduced the rule that you have to be an academy graduate and level 5 to get a clan passed... I mean, flavour guidelines are okay (clan dress, customs, maybe a clan household), but actual system-related bonuses, penalties, custom jutsus etc. fall under the approvals section and so also to this new rule. I recommend to just make a student and start RPing wherever, and if you need to refer to the clan, just do so flavour-wise. Until he/she becomes a genin and then you can go wild XD Cos shinobi usually start learning their clan skills when they reach genin, right? I was gonna suggest making the character the first of his/her clan but you mentioned you had multiple generations so yea... hahaha. But yea, can't wait to see your character(s)! edit: Dang, Proto beat me to it... I realise that this announcement may be quite a blow if you've been working hard on it >.< She kinda does have a point about the Mizukage thing though though I wouldn't see a problem with it if it fits. Also, really unrelated but has anyone here heard of Dangan Ronpa? I would be more then happy to start on a Genin, and I already spoke to Oto's Kage. If the clan is based in Oto, then idk how there being a Mizukage, even in its past, would work :S I know migration is the obvious option... Having said that I'm not gonna speak too much about a story I haven't read. I'll wait for it. ^^ Haha did Xmas give you permission to start out as a genin though? :O This Chatterbox is going so quickly hahahaaha.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 9:33 am
kouri-chan_xx Reservoir of Memory kouri-chan_xx Hey, your clan sounds epic especially considering the amount of work put into it that you mentioned! What village is it aimed for out of curiosity? [I'm guessing Kiri?] Also I realise this is really bad timing especially considering the amount of work you've put into it so far but we just introduced the rule that you have to be an academy graduate and level 5 to get a clan passed... I mean, flavour guidelines are okay (clan dress, customs, maybe a clan household), but actual system-related bonuses, penalties, custom jutsus etc. fall under the approvals section and so also to this new rule. I recommend to just make a student and start RPing wherever, and if you need to refer to the clan, just do so flavour-wise. Until he/she becomes a genin and then you can go wild XD Cos shinobi usually start learning their clan skills when they reach genin, right? I was gonna suggest making the character the first of his/her clan but you mentioned you had multiple generations so yea... hahaha. But yea, can't wait to see your character(s)! edit: Dang, Proto beat me to it... I realise that this announcement may be quite a blow if you've been working hard on it >.< She kinda does have a point about the Mizukage thing though though I wouldn't see a problem with it if it fits. Also, really unrelated but has anyone here heard of Dangan Ronpa? I would be more then happy to start on a Genin, and I already spoke to Oto's Kage. If the clan is based in Oto, then idk how there being a Mizukage, even in its past, would work :S I know migration is the obvious option... Having said that I'm not gonna speak too much about a story I haven't read. I'll wait for it. ^^ Haha did Xmas give you permission to start out as a genin though? :O Sera's daughter Airi, went to live with the Samurai, and her granddaughter married a ruroni, so the Ketsueki bloodline is not exactly tied to any village at least not until I finish writing the intervening generations, but I think they will be more wandered then anything. And no, I meant to say Academy Student >.>;; My apologies I am used to that rank being skipped.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 9:37 am
Qyp Reservoir of Memory Qyp Academy first... not RP Academy... but like... your character learning Bushin, Henge, etc. Not a problem. I am more then happy to start at the beginning. Thats the spirit ;D I don't know who does this, but there are three of us in the RP Academy who are still waiting to be approved.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 9:39 am
Reservoir of Memory Sera's daughter Airi, went to live with the Samurai, and her granddaughter married a ruroni, so the Ketsueki bloodline is not exactly tied to any village at least not until I finish writing the intervening generations, but I think they will be more wandered then anything. And no, I meant to say Academy Student >.>;; My apologies I am used to that rank being skipped. I see! and no worries smile
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 9:53 am
Reservoir of Memory Qyp Reservoir of Memory Qyp Academy first... not RP Academy... but like... your character learning Bushin, Henge, etc. Not a problem. I am more then happy to start at the beginning. Thats the spirit ;D I don't know who does this, but there are three of us in the RP Academy who are still waiting to be approved. Sometimes it happens... when we crew are totally oblivious to people actually posting there... /fail I sometimes do it, Tai... Gid... we all get around to doing our part. Oh and clan techniques... 5 per clan, + 1 per user who joins clan... number of characters doesn't matter.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 9:55 am
Qyp Reservoir of Memory Qyp Reservoir of Memory Qyp Academy first... not RP Academy... but like... your character learning Bushin, Henge, etc. Not a problem. I am more then happy to start at the beginning. Thats the spirit ;D I don't know who does this, but there are three of us in the RP Academy who are still waiting to be approved. Sometimes it happens... when we crew are totally oblivious to people actually posting there... /fail I sometimes do it, Tai... Gid... we all get around to doing our part. Oh and clan techniques... 5 per clan, + 1 per user who joins clan... number of characters doesn't matter. @.@ Gotcha. Damn. Okies. Oh, there is a barriers and seals set if you want it. XP
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 10:00 am
Qyp Reservoir of Memory Qyp Reservoir of Memory Qyp Academy first... not RP Academy... but like... your character learning Bushin, Henge, etc. Not a problem. I am more then happy to start at the beginning. Thats the spirit ;D I don't know who does this, but there are three of us in the RP Academy who are still waiting to be approved. Sometimes it happens... when we crew are totally oblivious to people actually posting there... /fail I sometimes do it, Tai... Gid... we all get around to doing our part. Oh and clan techniques... 5 per clan, + 1 per user who joins clan... number of characters doesn't matter. Daenerys Targaryen
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 10:03 am
Reservoir of Memory Qyp Reservoir of Memory Qyp Reservoir of Memory Qyp Academy first... not RP Academy... but like... your character learning Bushin, Henge, etc. Not a problem. I am more then happy to start at the beginning. Thats the spirit ;D I don't know who does this, but there are three of us in the RP Academy who are still waiting to be approved. Sometimes it happens... when we crew are totally oblivious to people actually posting there... /fail I sometimes do it, Tai... Gid... we all get around to doing our part. Oh and clan techniques... 5 per clan, + 1 per user who joins clan... number of characters doesn't matter. Daenerys Targaryen Yes yes DRAGONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111 And... I r Dragon irl... Chinese Zodiac...
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 10:05 am
Qyp Reservoir of Memory Qyp Reservoir of Memory I don't know who does this, but there are three of us in the RP Academy who are still waiting to be approved. Sometimes it happens... when we crew are totally oblivious to people actually posting there... /fail I sometimes do it, Tai... Gid... we all get around to doing our part. Oh and clan techniques... 5 per clan, + 1 per user who joins clan... number of characters doesn't matter. Daenerys Targaryen Yes yes DRAGONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111 And... I r Dragon irl... Chinese Zodiac... I am a Horse-Sheep x.x
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